FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Story nalla podhudhu Sweety
atleast sir unga story la yaachum no sonnare..
gud one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Appada susan'ku no sollitan karthik.. Dress trial scene was good... Raji'ya edhuku vichu kooptrukaru???? Story is getting interesting... Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

paravaalaye indha karthik first attempt la ye susan nukku no sollitaane...!!!!!

i like him very much...

flow of the story is very nice sweety...

keep up the great work...👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Nice story line. 👏
Susan karthik kita sonna dialogueum Susan ah pathi karthik raji kita pesuna dialogue um correcta match panni Susan character ah damage pannama irukinga.
Raji ok sollita karthik Susan ku no sollitan appo twist iruntha athu yarala varum.
Vichu rajiya kuptatu ethuvum periya problem illaye?
Liked the dress selection scene. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
It's going so well Sweety, update soon please!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
story moving so nicely as we all wanted it to be.👏
Aptly added original dialogues from office..very interesting sweety...keep going ...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey when is the next update????? Waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 9

AT THE CUBICLES:

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi are standing beside the cubicles.

Karthik looks tensed. Vishnu and Lakshmi look at each other.

Vishnu: deii ... machan .. susan ennadaa sonnanga?

Karthik: mmm ... love panren nu sonnaanga.

Lakshmi: nee enna sonne Karthik?

Karthik: naan avangalai nalla friend aa than ninaikkiren nu sonnen.

Vishnu: appo direct aa NO sollaliyaa?

Karthik: enna daa venum unakku?

Lakshmi: en karthik... tension aa irukke?

Karthik: Rajii enge Lakshmi? One hour aaguthu naan vanthu innum kaanom?

Lakshmi: adaan sonnene .. Viswanathan kooppittarunnu poyirukkaa

Karthik: avar thittinaalum , meeting naalum 10 nimishathukku mela time waste panna maattaare... one hour achu Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: amaa ... wait panlaam... ava vandha than theriyum...

VISWANATHAN'S CABIN:

Raji is standing in front of Viswanathan.. he is seriously working in his laptop...

Raji: Sir...

Viswanathan: enna?

Raji: neenga busy yaa irundaa ... unga vela mudinjadhum kooppidunga sir naan varen...

Viswanathan: en? nee avasaramaa poyi enna vela seyya pore?

Raji: puriyalai sir... vara sonnengannu vanden... romba neramaa wait panren... neenga busy yaa ve irukkeenga...

Viswanthan stops working and sees her. Leans backwards and asks her to sit.

Viswanathan: oru mani neram ninna enna korainjaa poyiduve?

Raji: sir?

Viswanathan: nee edhukku inge vela seyyare?

Raji: puriyalai sir...

Viswanathan: ille en kelvi thappu .. nee innum ethanai naal inga vela seyya pore? Unga appa America maappillai pathu kalyaanam panra varaikkumaa?

Raji: adhu vandhu sir...

Viswanathan: athukku badhilaa veetla amma kitta samayal kathukka vendiyadhu dhaane?

Raji: sir...

Viswanathan: indha velai vera yaarukkavadhu kidaichirundaa uruppadiyaa edhaavadhu seidiruppaanga... Adhaiyum innorutharukku kidaikka vidaama pannittu nee inga jolly yaa time pass pannittu irukke...

Raji: illai sir... padicha padippu veenaagama irukkanum nu than sir naan velaikku vanden..

Viswanathan: appo adhai ozhungaa seyyanum... illaiyaa?

Raji: yes sir...

Viswanathan: munnukku varanum nu illainnaalum... uruppadiyaa edhai yaavadhu seyyanum nu ninaikkiriyaa?

Raji: aamaa sir...

Viswanathan: pudhu project pathi sonnen ille... adhukku POC mathavanga seyyattum... Nee oru powerpoint presentation pannu..

Raji: sir...

Viswanathan: naan ellaame detail aa unakku mail panren... seiviyaa?

Raji: yes sir...

Viswanathan: naan velaiyaattukku panren nu yosikkade... last time unnoda presentation ... brilliant... aana unnoda dress sothappal naale naan adha use pannale... Adhaan unakku prove panna innoru chance tharen...

Raji: OK sir...

Viswanathan: enge kaalaile kalyanathukku poyittu variyaa?

Raji: sir...

Viswanathan: neeyum.. un dressum.. un hair stylum...

Raji: sir...

Viswanathan: nee polaam... Kodutha velaiyaa ozhungaa sei

Raji: yes sir...

She comes out of his cabin. She feels extremely strained and goes to canteen thinking of having some tea. In the meantime she doesn't notice that she surpassed her friends who were waiting for her at the reception. Seeing her walking away as if she was in a trance, the other three follow her. She sits at a table holding her head in both her hands.

In the canteen:

Karthik:Rajii ...

Raji: mmm ...

Lakshmi: ennachu Raji? Enna sonnaru Viswanathan?

Raji: vazhakkam pola than... Konjam thittinaaru... appuram advice ... appuram oru presentation ready pannu details mail anupparen nu solli kilamba sollittaaru...

Vishnu: idhukkaa oru mani neram aachu?

Raji: ille Vishnu ... Oru mani neram summa than ninnittu irunden ... avar busy yaa irundaaru... Kadaisiya idellaam 5 nimishathula sollittu poyi velaiya paaru nnu sollittaaru.

Lakshmi: idhai modhalliye solli anuppa vendiyadhu thane...

Raji: adha kaekka poyi than... oru mani neram ninnaa kurainjaa poyiduve nnu ketaaru... Karthik tea, coffee edhavadhu vaangittu vaayen enakku kannellaam iruttittu varudhu... Please ...

Karthik gets her coffee and she drinks it.

Karthik: edhaavadhu sappidariyaa?

Raji: mm hmm venaa Karthik... neenga saappidunga

Raji's phone rings...

Raji: sollunga athai... illai athai meeting ippo dhaan mudinjudhu... saringa athai... Naan vaangikkaren...

Lakshmi: ennachu?

Raji: enga maama velaiyaa mahabalipuram porangannu athai samachi enakku kodukka solli irukkaanga... meeting le irukken nu reception le sonnadhu naale saappadu security kitta kuduthuttu poyirukkaaraam. Vaangikka sonnaanga.

Vishnu: Super!!!!! Karthik unnoda birthday ku maamanaar veettile irundu special saappaadu daa...

All of them laugh...

Raji: naan vaangittu varen...

Vishnu: raji venaam irunga... he calls his security friend and asks him to bring the lunch given to raji... The security comes and gives them lunch bag.

Raji: enakku pasikkala neenga ellaam saappidunga..

Lakshmi: hey.. naanga gaali panniduvom..

Raji: paravaa illai...

Karthik: konjam aavadhu sappidu Raji...

Raji: illai karthik... bayangaramaa thalai valikkuthu... adhoda saapta vayaru upset aagum, vali kurainjadhukku appuram pasichaa saappidaren.

Karthik: andha nerathukku canteen la dosai kooda irukkadhu..

Raji: illennaa.. veliye poyi vaangittu vandhu kodu .. sariyaa..

Karthik: OK...

Karthik , Vishnu and Lakshmi start eating... Raji remembers how she happened to hear Kaushik and Viswanathan speaking about her...

Raji goes to viswanathan's cabin as he asked her to come. She opens the door, sees Kaushik sitting and stops at the door itself. She is shocked to hear them speaking about her.

Viswanathan: Kaushik... are you sure Raji can do this?

Kaushik: yes sir, I'm pretty sure. In fact avangala train pannade naan dhaan. I know where she lacks and where her strength lies... she has subject knowledge to the core but doesn't know to apply it practically..

Viswanathan: that's b'coz she is not fluent with English..

Kaushik: yes sir.. aanaa oru thadavai solli koduthuttaa... as they say karpooram appadiye pathikkuvaa..

Viswanathan: that I know... last month oru powerpoint presentation panna solli irunden. She did a brilliant job but avaloda foolishness naala naa atha use pannalai..

Kaushik: so neenga...

Viswanathan: inga paaru kaushik... bench la irukka employee ya venum naa indha team la requirement irukku maathunga nnu naan sollalaam... aanaa yerkanave oru team la irukkuravangala innoru team ku maatha solla enakku rights kidaiyaadhu... neenga HR la dhaan move pannanum...

Kaushik: adhu naan panren ... neengalum konjam recommend pannengannaa nalla irukkum..

Viswanthan: adhukku neenga Raji kitte directaa kelunga... ava OK sonna... HR le easy yaa maathiduvaanga...

Kaushik: kaettachu sir... ava friends vittu vara maattennu solraa..

Viswanathan: andha uruppadaadha team ku friendship vera... ok .. neenga kilambunga... naan David ku mail panren..

Kaushik gets up saying...thank you sir.

Raji quickly exits from there and hides behind a cubicle.

Kaushik comes out and goes to his cabin.

Raji feels relieved as he didn't see her and enters viswanathan's cabin.

Karthik: Rajiii..

She gets out of her thoughts and looks at him.

Raji: enna Karthik?

Karthik: enna yosanai?

Raji: inneram viswanathan sir mail anuppi irupparu... naan kilambaren..

Lakshmi: iru Raji... ellarum serndhe polaam...

Raji: illai Lakshmi... mail parthu doubts irunda mail pannu nnu sonnaru.. late aana marubadiyum thittu vizhum... innaikku idhukku mele avar kitta poyi thittu vaanga ennaala mudiyadhu... Naan varen...

She leaves...

Lakshmi: ennaachu ivalukku?

Vishnu: ellaam karthik susan kitta enna solli iruppaan nu yosichikitte irundiruppanga... ivan vera adha pathiye avanga kitta pesale... adhaan kaduppu aagittaanga nnu ninaikkiren..

Karthik: mm hmmm... illai daa ... ava vera yedho yosikkiraa ... adhu enakku theriya koodaadhu nnu ninaikkiraa...

Lakshmi and Vishnu look at each other.


Chapter 10 ... coming soon



Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Sweety, sema interesting-a podhu..
i like your way of story telling and the way the dialogues are written..
keep it up.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
very nice sweety...🤗
kousik enna evil plan podraannu theriyalayae...

story moves interestingly...keep going...

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