MY JUNGLE GIRL THREAD2 UPDATED PART 31 @ pg 84/9th Jan - Page 32

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Waiting For an update...😳
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My Jungle Girl

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If any scene seems similar please report to me before directly going out to bash,cause i WON't INTENTIONALLY COPY other's work,even if i do,i will ask permission first.

Part 29

All the world infront him vanished as he indulged himself in his lover's lips. He didn't care if pari or someone other noticing him kissing her,he wouldn't care even if the whole world sees them. All he cared for at that moment was her.

She didn't seem a person of this world...carefree,yet caring,wild yet innocent.Actually she never was a person of this world to begin with....

He didn't care who saw them kissing,but he didn't want others to see geet. He wanted to lock to himself forever.Yet ,he couldn't,she was woman of wild...she wasn't someone to be bound...every time he thought about this,he will feel suffocated...the very reason why he has kept aloof from her ,showed as if he was not that interested...because he knew,the more he came closer to her,the more his madness will increase,the more he would want to hide her from this world...even if it meant DESTROYING HER...



All his thought seemed to be dissolved in the intense wave of love that his heart couldn't seem to bear.It was so painfull. Yet ,he never knew that pain can give so much happiness.

He carried her to his room & locked the door behind.


"koi use maat dekho,please,koi mat dekhna...wo meri geet hai,sirf meri..."


**************

Geet,baccha what are you doing?

Paiting...geet said lifting her head from her colour book.

You mean painting?

Ha dadi pain..painting.

Dadi smiled seeing her.

Now with whole family together,she was missing her son & daughter-in-law.

She sat there smiling when she remembered something.

Dadi,app has kyun rahi hai? Meera asked...

Wo kuch batein yaad aa gayi.

Hume vi to batayien na dadi. Dev said.

Maan was there too,he was smiling,but noone could tell that this person,who was so casually sitting infront of them,had already crossed the level of madness. No one seemed to notice what a dangerous person he was turning into...without anyone knowing...


Are maan,meera ko yaad nahi hai,par appko to yaad hoga na.

kya dadi?

kaise apke papa geet se pehli baar mile the...

How could he forget!!!

************

Cute little two year old geet was sitting on the steps outside khurana mansion with her hands on her cheeks lips pouting.She was wearing a very cute little yellow dress with a pony on top of her head...the site itself was so cute that it made the hearts of the onlookers all gooey & fuzzy


IN CASE,u have forgot the litttle geet of this ff)



Mr Khurana was always a hot tempered & strict person.he always talked in a rough tone,t even with his little son maan,always with a poker face,he was known as hitler,both in office & home..,it was like his habbit so noone actually felt bad,bt yes,the fear was there

But of course geet ke samne kisiki chalti hai kya!!?

Mr Khurana returned from office,as usual with a bad mood.

When he came out of the car & saw geet...sitting on the middle of the stairs.

Ai ladki ,kaun ho tum,aur kya kar rahi ho yaha?

Geet looked at him & scrunched her nose.

Main geet hu,ye GEET ka duchla (2nd) ghal (home) hai. Main Maal (maan 😆) ka wait kar rahi hu. App kaun ho?

He didn't reply,just went inside.

***

As he was changing dress,he asked his wife,wo bahar,wo ladki kya maan ki dost hai?

Ha,maine appko bataya tha na,GEEt,badi pyari ladki hai.

Hmm.

he went to dining table to have his meal,but there,he saw geet sitting on HIS chair.

No one,even maan never dared to sit on that chair,& this little ANT!!!! How dare she!! he thought as he rushed to her side to give her a piece of mind.

Ai ladki.

...

AI LADKI utho mere chair se

...

Wo,uska naam geet hai,rehne dijiye na. wo wah par thodi der baithi hai to...Mrs khurana said.

Rehne du! Tum janti ho na bacchon ko bigadna nahi chahiye! Yahi to umar hoti discipline sikhane ki,warna wo bigad jayenge. Jaise ise dekho,main bula raha hu,jawab hi nahi de rahi hai. Iske mamma-papa ne kuch sikhaya nahi?..

CHUP!!!!

He followed the voice only to look at the little owner glaring at him with big adorable doe eyes.

Someone actually ordered HIM!!!! Said him "CHUP"!!!

AI LADKI...he glared at her

Geet stood up on the chair & returned the glare with same intensity,but hers looked only more adorable than ever

Kya "ai lalki" "ai lalki" laga lakha hai? Mela naam geet hai. Bataya tha na?

He could only gape at her,someone actually talked back to him even after giving his famous glare!!

Aul koi lalki che aiche baat kalta hai? Tabche distup (disturb) kal lahe ho! UFF!! Geet to palechan ho gayi!! She said with her hand on her head,shaking her little head ...

Mrs khurana & dadi & maan,who came there were trying to stop themselves from laughing out loud looking at geet's antics. Though maan was concerned for her too...

Pata hai na,koi jab kam kal laha hai,to pehle bolo eccuje me (excuse me😆) ,aul PHIL batao kya kaam hai. chaamaj gaye?

DEKHO...mr khurana tried once more to be intimidating. Par geet to geet hai.

CHUP!!

Mr Khurana actually shut his mouth instantly,though it was out of shock.

Koi jab baat kal laha hota hai,to uche pula cchunna chahiye (one should hear out what the other is saying)

Aul kya mele chail che (chair se) utho laga rakha hai? Koi lalki (girl) ko chail se uthne ko bolta hai kya? Now this little geet was in full lecturing mood.

So she kept her hand on her hips as she continued...while Mr Khurana was standing there with his mouth hanging open...

Pata nahi,lalki che kaiche baat kalte hai?Mamma papa ne kuch chikhaya nahi?

She ACTUALLY USED HIS LINE ON HIM!!!!

Chame Chame (shame)!!!Ab CHOLLY (sorry) bolo.

Mr khurana looked at her like she was an alien.

ALEEE! (areee)!!!! CHOLLY BOLOOO. she glared at him as she cried out this order.

I...I am very sorry. A startled Mr khurana replied her.

Dadi,Mrs. khurana & maan,who were holding their breaths,both because of fear for little & for holding their laughs drew even more air...now did Mr. Hitler just say sorry to a 2 year old girl, that too with the adverb "VERY"!!!!


Mr Khurana blinked a few times to bask in what just happen.

But just then,little geet patted his head standing on her toes...

Goog Boy ,Goog boy,(Good boy).Ab phil che galti mat kalna.

A few more seconds in silence...dadi couldn't handle it,she cracked up laughing...maan & mrs khurana followed & so did geet,without knowing the reason though...she didn't need any reason to smile.

Ale app hach (smile) kyunn nahi lahe ho? geet said looking at mr khurana.

He still just could blink.

Accha ,geet ne data bula laga?? She asked sincerely pouting her cutiepie face in his "sadness"

lote nahi...she said as she kissed his cheek.

dekho ab geet ne kich (kiss) vi kal diya,ab hacho!! (now smile)

Mr khurana also couldn't help it,he started to laugh loudly. Probably after many years...


Precap- No precap for this ff. 😈


PLEASE give me as much galis & chappals & tomatoes as you want for not updating this ff even after giving notification of updating it. I will accept them with open arms. But IN RETURN you guys HAVE TO tell me how was the update.

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Finally Tomorrow aa hi gaya
update was awesome. Little Geet was cute and dominating. But I was confused by a sentence(noone could tell that this person,who was so casually sitting infront of them,had already crossed the level of madness. No one seemed to notice what a dangerous person he was turning into...without anyone knowing...)
what did you mean by this.Itni cute si story me ye kyun daala tumne
I love this story a lot
and keep updating it very frequently
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Omg...
this was cutest update till date...
mr.khurana & little geet's scene was out of the world...
maaneet's kiss😳
Plz continue soon!!!
Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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wow superb update... finally itne time baat update mila thank u
geet or mr. khurana conversation hehehehehe its too too gud
kitni cute hai geet uuummmaaahhh geet ke liye
plz jaldi jaldi update diya karo
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awsemmm update maneet scene fab and past geet lacture to mr khurana fab
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Finally Tomorrow aa hi gaya

update was awesome. Little Geet was cute and dominating. But I was confused by a sentence(noone could tell that this person,who was so casually sitting infront of them,had already crossed the level of madness. No one seemed to notice what a dangerous person he was turning into...without anyone knowing...)
what did you mean by this.Itni cute si story me ye kyun daala tumne
I love this story a lot
and keep updating it very frequently



Ok this was my first story so,very dear to me. At first i thought to make it a normal ff,then seeing that u guys loved it so much,
i decided to turn it into a drabble series,matlab no storyline .
Only pure fun,each part then would have been like "one day..."

But i figured out that then this story will never end . I am already writing 4 more stories & have three more hovering inn my head. So as u see i have to finish it. But don't worry,it won't be a rush ending. It will be a proper ff with proper ending as i had intended to do with the story at First.
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simply awesome update...couldn't stop laughing hearing geet giving lecture 2 mr khurana...
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oh god the flashback was just awesome could'nt stop laughing😆
loved it😃

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