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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg it is rocking ,fantastic update
Thanx 4 pm me

Sorry 4 late
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kunchu,

This one falls neatly into 2 parts: one, the beginning and the end, which take the main narrative forward, and the rest, which is more pleasantly atmospheric. Oh, yes, there is the part between Roshni and the patient in the Little Flower Hospital, who is being handled by her with such imaginative gentleness, but that is in the very early stages as yet.

I liked the middle part very much too, for I adore Maasa, and her warm welcome to Aisha is charming. She is of course far more protective of Shaleen than she is of Sameer, but then Shaleen needs her much more than her real son.

Now for the Zaid plan to trap Arjun by provoking him into doing something drastic thru a false show of police inaction. I see that Naina is very uncomfortable with it and so am I. Let me explain why.

If Arjun feels that the police are taking action, however slow and measured and restricted by their rules and the provisions of the law, to nab the culprits in the hospital and punish them for their crimes, he would not try to take things into his own hands and perhaps kill one or more of the criminals operating from within the hospital. Zaid thus seems ready to precipitate this situation solely in order to nab Arjun, and thus end up indirectly helping those whom Arjun is punishing for their crimes,and/or will do so in the future.

The fact that Zaid personally has nothing much against Arjun's vigilantism, which supplements the efforts of the police and acts where they cannot, makes this even more difficult to understand.

The last para is excellent. There seems to be a karmic connection between this Arjun and Roshni as well. I do hope that this connection does not end tragically as well.

Shyamala Aunty


Hello all, here is another update of Adhuri Kahanai
Thank you all for the previous comments and likes

PART 14:


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Posted: 11 years ago
arjun waiting for zaid and naina and they are planning something else...

so he is going there to meet anamika everyday ...

family talk was cute.cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! Superb!
liked the way u are linking up the dots...

So you have really established a kind of would be friends or more than that kind of relation between Shaleen and ROshni!

cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update heli...it had every one in the frame...

loved it...

so finally anamika showing some progress...roshni's efforts are working...gud...

aisha nd roshni bonding well...cool...

loved the small cute teasing session betn sam and sha...

naina nd zaid steadily reaching th points...keep the work up...

so finally Shaleen and Roshni meet...officially...lets see hw their story progresses...

continue soon...

love
Aisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ..😉... mujhe laga tha roshani Arjun ke liye he but ye shaleen ke liye he ...👍🏼...chalo dono chalegaaa ...🤣...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu


He smiled and took a seat by Roshni. Now this was real awkward. Opposite was two loverbirds and near was an unknown girl.



i can feel for both Shaleen & Roshni 😆

loved the update
excellent 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the conv of sam and shaleen!!!!
lovelyy update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kunchu,

You are at it again!😉 Mixing up Arjun and Shaleen and making even me, otherwise allergic to speculation about plot development, speculate again about the split personality thesis. Or whether you are going to land us with the triangle beloved of readers in general - Arjun-Roshni-Shaleen. I will take it too,but only provided Arjun rents/borrows Shaleen's body from time to time!

Otherwise it is nice and smooth. So much so that I am suspicious, and am awaiting something unpleasant next time.

Incidentally, today's Arjun episode was singularly ugly, unnecessarily violent for prime time TV, especially what happened to the young girl, and displayed no particular detection skills at all. Even otherwise, when the CVs descend to serial killers, it is not a good sign. The last few episodes have all been unpleasant and unintelligent. As for the cast, Rathore is gone, and where is Chotu?

Shyamala Aunty

Hey all...
here is next update of Adhuri Kahani...

PART 15:


Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago

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