MG SS Woh Phele Baar Jub Hum Mile...Updated Part 5 Pg110 - Page 60

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Part 4


Geet quickly run towards her dad and closed his eyes from back...


While he got shocked knowing who is the person and said...


MR. Handa: geet...


And turning around both hugged each other...


When maan come out of brij's room with brij they both saw MR.HANDA and geet while brij was shocked... maan was shocked and angry at the same time...



But before they could react there was sudden power cut and then they hear geet's scream maan at once got worried as to what happen while MH and brij who know what it is react accordingly and brij said ...


Brij: dad u take care of her I will see what is the problem with power ...



They could hear voice from the hall too where the party was going on as everyone their thought what the problem is...and panicked too as some of them their got scared too because of dark ...


Maan was about to say something when MH phone rings and he somehow manages to pick it up while hugging geet with one hand as she was not ready to leave him just too scared ...


MH on phone ...



MH: hello...who is this?


MH: oh yeah hello sir how r u?


MH: hello ...hello I can't hear u sir I think there is some network problem...



MH was not able to do anything as he can't even cut the call it was a really imp oversee call and hear geet was not even moving an inch he just pinched the bridge of his nose thinking now what to do and said on the phone...



MH: Hello sir can u please hold on for a minute...



And then MH looked at the direction where maan was standing and he called him conforming who it is as he too couldn't see him properly because of dark ...


MH: Mr.khurana can u please takes care of my daughter for a minute she is just too scared of dark and this is an imp call please...



When maan said smirking evilly thinking something in his mind...


Maan: sure...



While geet who heard it just hugged her dad more tightly and was not ready to leave him she didn't even pay attention to the name her dad said because she was scared and didn't want to trust a stranger at this moment while MH knew maan well and trusted him knowing how responsible person maan is ...he thought to leave geet with him for few minutes till he can attend the call and check everything in the hall where party was going on...



After hearing the response from maan MH somehow made geet leave him coaxing her and give her to maan promising to be back soon ...



While geet who was really scared off dark just hold his hand clinging to his side while maan just smirked thinking something and said in his mind...



Maan: revenge time Ms. Geet Handa...now u will see what it is to mess with maan Singh khurana ...


He said in his mind thinking about what she did to him while he was just helping her...


He took out his cell phone and played a voice which had scary sounds he had guessed by now seeing geet that she must get more scared by hearing some voices in dark and that is what happened hearing the sounds geet just got all the more scared and hugged him tight yelling ...

Geet: mama...Papa...


When maan tried to separate her from him as she was hugging him just too tight and he was feeling suffocating with it as she was holding him by his neck almost chocking him...and thought...


Maan: ohh god here I was trying to scare her and here she is already to kill me just because she is scared...


He was still trying to separate her when he heard her say...


Geet: please don't leave me right now ...please...



Her voice was sounding like a scared small kid and maan didn't had the heart to say no to her at this moment and just hugged her back trying to calm her down by rubbing her back and patting her head a lil and said...



Maan: shhh its ok don't worry...shhh calm down...I am not leaving u but can u please soften u r hold I can't breathe like this...



He said all this in gentle and soft voice which made geet clam a lil and she just hugged him more tightly but softly letting him breath...she was feeling secured in his arms so she was not ready to leave him...at this moment...and both closed their eyes slowly...



Soon they both were lost in each other arms unknown to the feeling that was growing in their heart for each other and the seed of love which had taken place in their heart ...



Meanwhile brij was returning and called his dad and geet to locate them in this dark ...And said loud for them to hear ...and for geet to calm a lil knowing she must be freaking out at this moment...


Brij: Dad doesn't worry there was some problem with the wiring but now they have solved it and the light will be coming back any moment tell geet to just relax...


And this was enough to bring maan to this world again from the dreamland he was lost in till now and he moved his arms away from geet which brought her also out of her dreamland and then maan called brij...


Maan: brij MH is not here geet is with me right now and she seems to be freaking out...


While hearing it brij try to locate them and finding them he reached and moved his hands in air and caught hold of them and gently pulled geet in his arms while geet to moved away from maan feeling embarrassed to have hugged a complete Stranger like this and then getting lost in his arms ...



While as soon as that happened the lights come back ...with geet now facing her back to maan ...


Geet relaxed now and come out of her brother arm and said to maan while looking at her brother...


Geet: thank you...MR. Stranger...


And then said to her brother...


Geet: bro I am going in my room...


And rushed from their embarrassed before anyone of them could react...


While maan was amused hearing his new name ...brij just shook his head at his lil crazy sister and then looked at a shocked maan and said...


Brij: don't mind Mr.khurana she is like this only fully crazy...


While maan come in his MSK form and just nodded at brij ...


When brij continued and said...


Brij: I think we should get going MR. Khurana ...



And maan again nodded in response ... Then they both moved to the party...


Mrs.Handa come upstairs wanting to meet her daughter whom she was missing so badly and when she comes to know that her lovely daughter is back she couldn't control and come running upstairs to meet her...


She entered the room and found it empty but she could hear voice of the running shower and guessed geet was inside and thought to wait for her or maybe she can take her to the party to with herself...which seemed to be a good idea to her and she decided she will take her to the party...knowing her daughter she knew she must be lil angry on everyone as they were partying without her this may solve that problem too...



Geet come out of washroom after getting freshen up in her bathrobe just to see her mom lost in her thoughts and run to her hugging her tight and shouting...


Geet: I missed u so much mom ...


And kissed her tight on her chick while her mom smiled hugging her back...and said...


Mrs. Handa: I missed u too beta...


Geet: I Love u so much mom...


She said and this time kissed her on her second chick that to a tight kiss...


Mrs.Handa: ale mera baby I love u too dear ...ok enough of all this u quickly get ready for the party then we both can go down together...and I will not here anything u r coming and that's final...



She said and quickly moves to take out a dress for her not letting her say anything and quickly made her get ready for the party...



In the party MH, brij and maan were busy talking to the clients their work was complete now and there were just chatting casually about business and other things...



Suddenly the lights were dimmed and a spot light fell on the diva that comes down the stairs with her mom looking absolutely stunning while everyone present their were stunned seeing the beauty their...in all of them maan was also one of them he was just not able to take his eyes of her...and was looking at her lost in her beauty...
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https://i.imgur.com/0meHCFq.jpg





Geet's dress



Meanwhile geet come down the stairs with her mom and join the ladies talk their ...


Everyone else also got back to enjoy the party...when they hear a voice it was brij...



Brij: hello ladies and gentlemen ...thank u everyone for coming here and joining us on this happy occasion I hope u r enjoying the party ...why not make it more joyful ...

When everyone replied...


Everyone: yes...



Brij: then what r we waiting for...



Then he said loudly in between...


Brij: music...


Everyone clapped and soon the hall was full with everyone dancing around and enjoying ...



Everyone was dancing and enjoying while maan and geet where standing in 2 different corners in front of each other...geet was looking at her parents dancing and enjoying while brij was also dancing with someone else ...while maan was busy looking at her or u can say staring at her when he was disturbed by someone...


It was none other than his own dadima...


He looked at her and gives her a smile when dadima forwarded her hand in front of him saying...


Dadima: may I have the pleasure to dance with the great maan Singh khurana ...


She said it with a smirk on her face while maan just shook his head at her and took hold of her hand which was forwarded towards him and took her to the dance floor soon they were dancing ...on the slow music...geet too was now their only dancing with someone randomly ...


After some time everyone started filliping their dance partners and soon geet was in maan's arms when the music changed into a romantic slow number...


It was then that geet looked at her partner to get the biggest shock...


Precap: dance continues with geet's reaction😉



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Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woowww update...
unknowingly Geet felt secure in Maans arm which was good..

ab maaneet Dance...Hayyeee

waiting Next Pqrt Jaldi...
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Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

woowww update...

unknowingly Geet felt secure in Maans arm which was good..

ab maaneet Dance...Hayyeee

waiting Next Pqrt Jaldi...


Thank u 😃


next part only after i update my ff 😃😃
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

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Thank u dear 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
maan wanted to take revenge...seeing her scared he gave up😊
waiting to see maaneet dance
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Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

lovely update
maan wanted to take revenge...seeing her scared he gave up😊
waiting to see maaneet dance

Thank u dear 😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! superb update! Thanks 4 da pm! Loved it! So Geet does nt knw who he is! Both unaware! Geet calls him Mr. Stranger! Brij apologises on her behalf! Love the scenes btwn Mrs. Hn Geet n Maan n dadi! so fially they dance n den she realises who her partner is! update soon! Well written! Dnt worry wil nt sahre with anyone!
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Many many thanks for the pm.Lovely update.Looking forward how love story of maan and geet will progress.Waiting for next update
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hey dear i have pm the update only to those who r not on fb and i know u r my loyal reader its just i don't remember everyone na that why i had pm about the note i posted i think u haven't seen it please see the note on thread on pg 62 u will understand and tell me if u r on fb i will add u for sure dear i was waiting for every reader of mine i will always add my reader whenever they come to me ...




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