Arakshi FF: Rang jo Lagyo, pt 8, pg32, 10/11; pm later - Page 15

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Thanks so much😊
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Originally posted by: anu91

superb update...
prem entry was so awesome...
he was so naughty...
prem and sakshi bond was so good...
arjun start to feel something for sakshi...good ACP...
prem mom was so good...
precap was superb...
cont soon dr...


Thanks so much dear...I am glad you liked Prem's entry and Prem and Sakshi's bonding
Well you are right Arjun have started feeling something but abhi usse samjhne mein toda time lage ga...
Thanks so much againšŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: littlebrat

nice ... well i guess this prem is going to make all the etf guys realize their love an wanting for their ladies

great going

keep updating
can you plz pm me


You are right..Prem is very important person in the story..He is here for a reasonšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...Sure I will definitely pm too..Thanks again dear😊
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First of all thanks for liking my story...and since lot of my friends have threatened me that they want long updatešŸ˜†...so now basically I have to fulfill all of your demands...I hope this one is long enough..waise aap sab log bahut greedy ho gaye hošŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Chapter 5

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Prem and Sakshi was again walking back to stand with team

Prem: Yaar yeh Maa neh bhi kya promise le liya. Ab usse tod bhi nahin sakte. Kya yaar kitni bore party hai. Yeh Hitler bhi nah itni boring parties kyun arrange karte hain. Kuch happening hona chahiye

Sakshi was laughing seeing Prem's expressions.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Prem: Tu hass kyun rahi hai Saks..

Sakshi: What else should I do. Iss baar we let it go

Suddenly Prem saw something

Prem: Ek baat bata mirchi madam, Yeh Sameer nah Ayesha ko bol diya ki he loves Ayesha

Sakshi: Nahin..I think they are still trying to figure out their feelings. Yeh saare love birds itne slow kyun hote hain. I only joined ETF a while back and what I have observed is that Ayesha really loves him but wants Sameer to actually say it first

Prem: Idea..šŸ˜‰

Sakshi: Kya...

Prem: Dekh ab party meh koi dhamkha ho nahin sakta, toh todi social service hi kar lete hain..

Sakshi: Matlab

Prem: Are Tubelight, mera matlab hai, Kyun nah Sam- Ayesha ki love story, joh abhi tak slow chal rahi hai, usme kuch dhamkha kiya jae...

Sakshi: Oh Aise..

Prem: Haan Aise..Tu bhi poori tubelight hai

Sakshi: Phir kya karna hai..

Prem: bas tu dekti ja...Just follow me..ok

Sakshi: Ok teek hai..done..

With that they both finally reached where team was standing..

Suddenly announcement was made that dinner is served.

Everybody got the dinner and sat on a round table. All the team plus Prem were sitting on same table.

Sameer: Hey Prem humhe toh pata nahin tha, you know Sakshi for so long.

Prem: Haan Sameer, bahut der se jhel raha hoon isse, kitne saal ho gaye hain...Ab toh I don't even remember

Sakshi: hitting on his arm: ooohhh hooohoo..Jo meh tumhe jhel rahi hoon, uska kya

Prem: (by holding his arm): dekha kaise kaise achtayaar hote hain mujh par..Its happening in front of you guys..

Sakshi: What the..Prem...and she turned around her face on other side.😔😔

Prem: (side hugging Sakshi): Sorry jaan...maaf kar de...Tu toh meri jaan..tera bina meh kya karoon ga iss world mein and made a puppy face...

Sakshi: Ok sweetheart..apology accepted...

With that Prem was about to eat his food when Sakshi stopped his hand.

Sakshi: Kya kar raho ho Prem...

Prem: Kya Saks...Khana kaha raha hoon

Sakshi: stupid...Whey are you eating matar mushrrom..Tujhe mushrrom se allergy hai nah...

Prem: Oh I thought Matar paneer hai...

Sakshi: teri aankhen ya button Prem, tujhe mushrrom aur panner meh difference nahin dikta kya..

Prem: Sorry yaar..Thanks tune bacha liya..warna abhi panga ho jaata...

Sakshi: Hmmm

Everybody at the table was slowly getting used to Sakshi and Prem interactions and they were quite liking their interactions too and one could clearly tell they were really fond of each other...except there were one person who was still trying to maintain the expression of indifference and more so expression of irritationšŸ˜µšŸ¤” by their talks but deep down him, he was totally feeling miserable right now and he was not getting why he was feeling that way...Guys u know who that person..offcourse none other than our hottie Arjun..

Prem: Waise guys, iske baad ka kya plan hai...

Ayesha: iske baad ka kya plan..ghar jaaye ga...

Prem: Comeon GA...abhi toh party time have begun...

Ayesha: GA

Prem: Gorgeous Ayesha..

Ayesha blushedā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø: So what's your plan HP?

Liza: Yaar Ayesha tu kab se yeh specky ki language bolne lagi..Ab HP laptops kahan se bich mein aagaye...

Shree: Shut up u Liza and don't call me Specky..

Liza: You shut up Specky...

Sakshi: Don't fight guys...

Prem: Haan GA tum kuch bol rahi thi

Ayesha: HP means Handsome Prem

Prem put his hand on his heart pretending to be dreaming...🄳

Sameer was about to eat something with spoon when his spoon did not reach his mouth..

He was looking at Ayesha with shocked and surprised expression thinking: Yeh Ayesha ko kya ho gaya hai...Tera kuch nahin hoga beta Sameer..

Both Prem and Sakshi saw Sameer's expressions and gave each other mental Hi-5...

Arjun also saw Sameer's expression and thinking..Yeh Sam ko kya problem hai😲😲...Kahin jo mein soch raha hoon woh sahi toh nahin...Kahin isse Ayesha se ...iss ka toh pata lagna padega..

Prem: Yaar meh soch raha..dekho abhi its 10...yeh party maximum half n hour aur chale gi...You know yeh parties aise hi hoti..aao..couple dance karo...dinner karo aur around 10.30, hitler..ooops I mean dad sabko tata bye bye kar kar free kar denge..

Since we all are out and in some party mood..Let's go out and have some fun..waise bhi pass meh ek pub hai..Its gonna be rocking there...What say guys..Who's in...

Sakshi: Wow nice..I am totally in..

Liza: I am in too..

Shree: Ya Yaar Lets have some fun

Chotu: Let's do it guys

Sameer was looking at Ayesha hoping she would refuse it

Prem: Come on GA..chalo nah..It will be blast...chalo nah..

Ayesha: Ok guys I will come..Lekin yaar pub mein saree meh kaise jaaye ga..

Sakshi: Don't worry about that Ayesha...I will get the dresses...

Prem: Sameer and Arjun you are coming nah?

Sameer: Ok guys if you are going I will come too...

Sakshi and Prem gave each other another mental Hi-5

Arjun was about to say no to the party..He was least interested in going to pub but he suddenly remember..Yehi acha mauka hai check karne ka ki whether Sam loves Ayesha or not.

Arjun: Ok I will come too..

Everybody was looking at him surprised..

Arjun: what guys..

Everybody resumed to eating...

As Prem said party was over by 10.30...

Sakshi and Ayesha both went to change their dresses and guys were waiting for them in the parking lot.

Guys had ditched their jackets and folded their shirts three fourths with top buttons open...(You can drool on guys)

Suddenly Ayesha and Sakshi came wearing following dresses..

Again Arjun and Sameer's reaction were no different. But the words they were hesitant to speak. Prem spoke for them

Prem: Both of you are looking extremely gorgeous..

Issi Baat sher arz hai..

Sakshi and Ayesha together: Irshaad Irshaad...

Kaate nahi kat te hain lamhe intezaar ke,

nazarein jama ke baithe hain raste pe yaar ke,

dil ne kaha dekhein jo jalwe husn-e-yaar ke,

layaa hai koun inko, phalak se utaar ke
.

Sakshi : wah wah wah..

Chalo ab chale..

They left in three cars

Car #1: Shree, Chotu and Liza

Car #2: Sameer and Ayesha

Car #3: Arjun, Sakshi and Prem

In Car # 1

As usual Shree aur Liza ni nok jhok chal rahi thi aur Chotu bechara pakk raha tha..

Chotu: Kahan fas gaya yaar..isse se acha toh mein Arjun sir ki car mein baith jaata

Shree and Liza both looked at him and started laughing..

Shree noticed Liza laughing and he was just lost in her. She looks so beautiful while laughing...Odi baba Shree what is wrong with you. Yeh Liza hai Liza..your number 1 enemy..tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai..

Liza: Yaar Chotu agar tu Arjun sir ke car mein hota toh, tujhe itna entertainment dekhne nahin milta balki tu bilkul chup chap silent baita hota..

Everybody started laughing...

Car # 2

Ayesha and Sameer both were silent but stealing glances at each other..

Sameer: Ayesha...

Ayesha: Yes sir..

Sameer: woh mein kehna chahta tha...You are looking very pretty in dress too..

Ayesha: Thanks sir...

Ayesha was sitting ki jiss rate par Sam usse shocks de rahe hain..kahin usse heart attack nah aa jaaye..😲😲😲

Sameer: Waise I thought you don't like to going to pubs that much

Ayesha: Ya I mean it's k sometimes not too much though

Sameer: If you still want I can drop you home and we can message them..I can reverse the car if you want.

Ayesha: Nahin Sameer, it does not look nice aur Waise bhi Prem neh and aur sab itne pyaar se kaha hai..becharo ko bura lage ga..He really seems to be a very nice guy..right sir?

Sameer: Hmmm (that's what he managed to say) and turned his attention to car. But right now he wanted to go somewhere...Sam get a grip...

In car # 3

As Liza had pointed the car was pretty silent.

Arjun was driving the car and Prem was sitting on the passenger seat and Sakshi was sitting on back seat.

Sakshi came forward and talked to Arjun

Sakshi: I cannot believe you are coming with us to pub. Mujhe toh laga tha tum mana kar doge and he tapped lightly on his shoulder

Arjun just glared at her😔

Sakshi: Oops..sorry...(she went back to sit on the seat)

Prem wanted to laugh seeing this scene. He cannot believe somebody can make Miss Chirpiness quiet too..

Sakshi (thinking to herself): Kadoos kahin kašŸ˜•

As if Arjun heard her mind and he looked at her through rearview mirror and their eyes met for a second.

Sakshi quickly averted her gaze and fixed her eyes on the road as these black orbs have something that everytime she looks in that, she feels like she is drowning. Those eyes attract her and make the situation worse.

Her thoughts drifted back to their dance few hours back. She cannot believe she felt something like that and that too in the presence of Arjun. Even the thought of dancing so close to him was enough to stir something inside her. She could feel butterflies in her stomach.

She just closed her eyes to clear out her mind. Come on Sakshi..What you thinking? Don't go this path. You will regret one day..

She was so busy in her thoughts that she did not even realized that they had reached the pub and Arjun had even opened the door and waiting for her to step out.

Arjun: Agar sona hi tha, toh pub aane ka plan kyun banaya.. Sakshi

The sudden voice of Arjun brought her back to reality.

She looked at Arjun standing at the door.

Sakshi: Sorry.. and she quickly stepped out of the car.

Arjun started walking in the front and Prem and Sakshi were walking behind

Sakshi: Prem kya plan hai ab...

Prem: Chal dekte hain

Arjun turned around and saw them standing and talking. Now he was really getting irritated. Cannot they both walk and talk together. Wahan party mein I have seen, it took them good 10 minutes to reach back to us after meeting Prem's parents. They would walk for a second and then start talking and just stand there. What's wrong with these two?

Arjun: Guys you want to go in or not?

Prem: Ya we are coming

All went in. Everybody else had already reached and they were sitting at one table and waiting for Arjun, Sakshi and Prem

Sakshi saw them and spoke: Guys we are not here to sit. Let's just dance.

All of them got up to dance except Arjun, Sameer and Ayesha

Prem: Are Gorgeous aap nahin chale gi

Ayesha; Nahin Prem, you guys carry on

Prem: No Ayesh, Please come on. We are here to know

Ayesha: Ok

Prem turned around towards Sakshi: šŸ˜‰

They all started dancing.

Suddenly the music stopped.

Everybody in the pub...(hey whats up DJ)

Suddenly music starts playing and we saw the spotlight on someone and he turns around and its none other than our Prem

(Imagine him dancing like that)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFBqPtWj8p8[/YOUTUBE]

We see Prem lip syncing on these lines.

Sabse haseen hai

Sabse juda hai

Woh dekho meri jaan

Here he passed Sakshi and went to get Ayesha on the dance floor. Sakshi quickly understood what he was doing. Sameer saw this and was totally mad. He just went to bar and ordered the drink and drank it. Arjun saw the reaction of Sameer and now was pretty sure what he was thinking earlier was right. He thought yeh mera dost gaya kaam se..

Pyaar ke liye hi duniya bani hai

Pyaar ka mila inaam

Raghupati Raghav...

Raghupati Raghav RajaRam

Raghupati Raghav RajaRam

Non-stop party

Aaj ki party

Celebrations tere naam

By this time Sakshi, Shree and Liza have also joined Prem and Ayesha on the floor.

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram

(Raghupati Raghav, Raghav...)

Kya raat hai, kya baat hai

Meri zindagi mere saath hai

Na chain hai na hosh

Har aarzoo madhosh hai

By this time Sameer had already drank enough. Every time he was seeing Ayesha dancing so close to Prem was making him more and more mad and he was drinking more and more.

What a groove!

I wanna move

Check it out!

Na na na na...

Sakshi is dancing just like Priyanka in the movie

Rangon se bhi rangeen hai

Yeh pal bada namkeen hai

Phir ye samaa na aayega

Phir ye nasha na chhayega

Suddenly Sam came on the dance floor and turned Ayesha towards him and started dancing on these lines

Raina bhi khwabon ke charagon se saji hai

Mere khayalon mein bhi dhoom machi hai

Behke huey hai armaan

Sakshi and Prem gave each other really Hi-5 this time and hugged each other. Their plan was now successful. They were so happy now.ā­ļø

Now everybody dancing on these lines.

Hola Amigo!

Hola Amigo!

Hola Amigo, sabko salaam..

Hola Amigo, sabko salaam..

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram

Non-stop party

Aaj ki party

Celebrations tere naam

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram

Raghupati Raghav!

Arjun was totally lost seeing Sakshi dancing. Then he saw her dancing so close to Prem. He had enough of this nonsense now. He had already made sure what he was thinking about Sam was true. First of all he did not want to come to pub and then he does not why seeing her dance so close to someone else was making him feel so weird. He does not why but he was just feeling so low from within. So he just decided to leave from here.

He was in the parking lot and was about to step in the car when he heard a voice. It was Sakshi

Sakshi: Hey Arjun... You leaving. Come on stay for some more time nah. We all are leaving soon too.

Arjun: No I have to go. I already had enough of this nonsense.

Sakshi: What do you mean Arjun

Arjun: Look I need to go and I don't need to give you any explanation

Sakshi; Tumhari problem kya hai ArjunšŸ˜•. We did not ask you to come. You came by yourself. What is wrong with you?

Arjun just turned around and held her by the arms and pinned her against the car.

Sakshi: Arjun what the hell..

Arjun: Sakshi tum...

They both were so close to each other that they can even feel each other breath. For a moment, both were lost in each other.

Arjun realized what he was doing. He left her arms and stepped back.

Then again he pinned her against the car and spoke: Door raho mujhse. Samjhi tum. Stay away from me Sakshi.

With that he got in the car and left.

Sakshi was just bewildered to see all this. Before she could even take time to comprehend what had happened, everybody had come out and was ready to go.

Ayesha told them that she will take one car and will drop Sameer at his home.

Everybody else left in the other car.

Sakshi while sitting in the car and thinking about the parking lot incident: Kadoos kahin kha..Nahin sirf Kadoos nahin, Akdau bhi kahin tha. What does he think of himself.

Note: The following scene is like the one as shown in the video. Just imagine Arjun performing this scene and thinking about Sakshi. I have put the video here because if you look at it, this scene will look more effective.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XbLWEndQWs[/YOUTUBE]

On the other side Arjun was driving the car and it had started raining too.

He was constantly having the flashbacks of Sakshi. She entering the party looking so pretty in anarkali and then their dance together. Her hug with Prem, their being so friendly with each other, him calling her jaan , Sakshi dancing and their eyelock in the parking lot.

He stopped the car in the middle of the road and stepped out of the car in the rain.

Arjun: Kyun mujhe usi kya kayal baar baar araha hai. Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe. Meh yeh sab nahin soch sakta aur who bhi Sakshi ke liye. He stood against the car and closed his eyes. When he opened his eyes, his mask of indifference was back. Arjun Suryakant Rawte sirf Roshini ka tha aur Roshini ka hi rahe ga. Mein kal bhi Roshini ka tha aur hamesha uski ka raho ga. Meri life mein aur kisi se koi fark nahin padta.

With that he sat in the car and left for his lodge...

This time Arjun have convinced himself that Sakshi means nothing to him but let's see for long he can wear the mask for indifference.

To be continued...

Note: Ok guys I hope you guys like this update.

Secondly for next few updates, there will be no Prem because story will focus more on Arjun and Sakshi and other characters. Don't worry guys Prem is not going anywhere. He is very important part of the story and he will appear again when necessary. For now this is it for him.

Also guys suggest whom should I cast against Chotu..Guys suggest the actress whom u like to paired against him and also suggest a name...

Also Can someone let me know which software to use for the banner...I really want to make banner for this story..Can someone help me with that...I will really appreciate it..

Precap: Are we ready for some fight between Arjun and Sakshi? Let's see who will win? Also will Sameer be able to tell his dil ki baat to Ayesha this time or something else will happen...

To be continued

All feedbacks are welcome

Rati

Edited by shaleenrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

me liked!

achha, so prem bhaisaab ki wajahse Rathod aur Ayesha ka milan ho gaya, and also Arjun has finally started accepting /rebuking his feelings for Sakshi! Kya baat kya baat! Ek teer aur do neesbane!šŸ‘
Ahww poor Arjun seeing all green due to jealousy, abhi ayega maza! Let's see if Sakshi is able to break through this chakravyuh called ArjunšŸ˜‰
Loved the RaEsha dance, lekin why Sam had to go get drunk? GRHH usko saaf saaf bolna chahiye thašŸ˜›
And amazing precap! So ArAkshi fight, abhi dekhte hain ke kaun jeet ta hai!
Also a chhoree for our chhotu? Hmm lemme think, I'll get back to you on that
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..awesome update dear...
Dil khush kar diya tumne...
Though my heart is heavy for Arjun...
Bichara...what is he doing?? What will he do??
Its heartwrenching to see him in this vulnerable state...
My heart is paining to know that he is getting quenched in rain to seek his mind...
Wonderful update dear...
Sakshi and Prem were also so good...
Finally because of Prem, Raesha came closer...
This love is so difficult. ..
Kisi ki duniya banti jaati hai toh kisi ki bigadti jaati hai...
Always confusing..
Thanks for the lovely update dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update
Sakshi and Pream's plan is awsome.
loved Sameer's jealousy.
Poor Chotu hamesha Shree aur Liza ke bich me phas jata hai.
loved the update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update luv d it just awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.. Thanks for pm.. Continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
love naughty prem😊
blushing ayesha n jealous sam was cute😳
Arjun feeling for sakshišŸ˜‰
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