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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rhu90

nice one...pls reveal the mysteries soon...


thanks.. will reveal in this update! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanchal_Kreya

awesome update

i loved this
i m sure nandini did it
pls update soon


yup its her.. thanku so much! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

Amazzzing...nams👍🏼


thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Iook 😆😆I am finally here too.I had been meaning to read this since a very long time!!Had Bookmarked it but when I opened it today finally ,I found it very interesting and quick to read.So here are my two cents about it!!
The start
A very interesting build of characters introducing protagonists at loggerheads.A little vague but we do get an idea that something got awary in an otherwise simple story.Waiting for the unfolding of the events.I could imagine Nandini in her bus dazed with the bitter aftereffects of a confrontation.We all face such situations,.After all we are humans too.

Chapter 1.
An interesting boy meets girl scenario.Need I say I love your heroines nams.They are cute and adorable from the word GO!! the Baap of Boredom word had me in splits🤣I can see yawning faces😆Oh toh Nandini kept ogling at hero ji 😛😛😛Lovely ..Over to read the next and will update by and by😆
P.S-GORGEOUS BANNER!! BTW answering the question you asked in my thread here.I am a bengali 😳who has lived in many places.Now finally settled in Uttarakhand the hill state😳🤗Thanks for the pms


Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Chapter 2😆😆😆😆
OMG I love this niharofying self proclaimed Teen heroine and her staring session.Believe me Its very possible we have been through similar situations back in college..So our Dee-rama queen is now in a spell😆😆😆moving on to the next very adorably cute update😳


Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Chapter 3

Oh so here comes the oola la dreamy boy Yash!! Loved the entry with a very interesting scenario 😆😆😆
BTW I loved that Nandini is a painter...It gives a whole beautiful feel to the story😳Lovely progress
chapter 4
Oh that is helluva cute update .So MR.Rude is not her type but she certainly can have a crush on him..Aww I love your Nandini...The sweet tone and a casual approach makes it even more interesting .Moving on to the next😆

Chapter 5
Wow I love this gang and I am certainly sure that the Rangoli and decorations have been bdone by our one and only Crush k upar CRUSHING Ms.Nandu😆😆😆😆
Ok this is interesting and now when r u going to update since I am in a continuous flow..I am getting excited to read the next..Do update soon🤗


piu 🤗

my heroins are adorable coz most of the time i imagine myself in their position 🤣 aint i adorable? 😆😉

coming back.. this one is going to end soon.. as i said im converting it back to SS.. and yes revenge will be taken!!

starting with its sequel soon 😳

and thank u sooo much for ur valuable feedbacks!!! love to read them!! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 6


"Now you can begin" one of the judges gave green signal to begin. After taking two rounds around the room checking on the contestants, all the judges exited the venue. It was decided that they would come back at last 10 minutes to continue their judgement on team-management skills on contestants and then later give the final set of judgement.

Once the judges went out, yash relaxed on the seat. "Bro! couldn't you temme you guys had done all this? I yelled at you for no reason!!" yash frowned at abhi. Abhi smiled confusedly.. "aah.. that's all right bro.. chill.. no issues..!" yash and abhi shared hi5. Meghana and kriti were monitoring around. who did all this?' abhi wondered.

"but abhi? Who did this?" yash asked furrowing his eyebrows. "that's what I am wondering!" abhi said in a low voice. "what?" yash queried. "no nothing.. kr kriti did!!" abhi said pointing at kriti who was standing at far end. Kriti looked at abhi asking what is it' through her expressions. Abhi shrugged with a gulp.

"kriti did it?" yash asked surprised and stared at kriti. Kriti was now taking rounds around the room.

Abhi looked at yash with raised eyebrows who was continuously staring at kriti. "umm.. dude .. you good?" abhi asked interrupting. "aah.. ofcourse.. all good bro! all good.. and nice rangoli.." yash replied getting up. He had now decided to compliment kriti.

"um.. kri?" yash called kriti her back facing him. "yassh! Wassup!"

"umm.. nice.. rangoli! I mean great.. I never thought you knew rangoli so well! Did I ever tell I love rangoli's? these colours... they make me feel life is also colourful just like them.. its awsum isn't it?" kriti stared back at yash confused.

Behind yash stood nandini who had just entered the venue with tray full of certificates. She frowned and stepped back. Her unfortunate or god's will she had stepped upon one's of the contestents rangoli making the colours spread and spoil the part of it. "shit! i.. I am so sorry.. I didn't mean.." nandini stammered worried.

"OMG! WTH.. what the hell did you? Can't you see you..." A girl from the group shrieked with horror.

Yash kriti meghana and abhi came running towards them. The mess had taken everyone's attention. Nandini was almost to tears. "I am so sorry.. I didn't mean.. I am sorry!!! I will fix.. it-" nandini tried to convince. "What the.. you!! Don't you have so much senses? Cant you see and walk? And what the hell have you done you idiot?!" yash howled at her with anger. Nandini flinched back. "Yash! Let me handle this.." kriti came forward. "kriti.. you.." yash tried to object. "I said I will handle relax.." kriti asked him to relax and then turned to the contestents. The group had 5 members.

"guys. We are really sorry for the inconvenience. Tell me how can we help you.. and we will not let this be your minus point in your judgement okay? We will let judges know about this. And if you dont mind we would help in fixing this." Kriti's words convinced the group somehow.

"let me do it!" nandini came forward. Yash tried to object but kriti held him back.

Nandini cleverely removed some mixed colours. She made some combo of the mixed colours and sprayed over the other part of the rangoli. She also gave them a tip on how to cover if colours get mixed up while designing. Abhi meghana yash and kriti gaped at her open mouthed. Nandini once again apologized them, now the whole team thanked her instead. Nandini smiled at them. Their rangoli had now got a whole new look.

"you know all this.. ?" abhi spoke first with a gulp. "National Pookalam Competition & Colours of india rangoli competition winner!" nandini informed them. Meghana came forward pushing yash and kriti "you.. you are the one who lead team colours' on National level Colours of India' competition that was held last year? You guys had created rangoli on 100 yard ground in delhi? Your theme was Radha Krishna? And you guys had won it? You.. you are ND? Nandini desai? Team leader????????"

Nandini chuckled and closed meghana's gaping mouth. yes!' nandini replied and went towards the table.

'take that mr.yash!' nandini said mentally. the tears that had reached her eyes dried up slowly as her lips curved into a huge grin. "why didn't you tell us before!?" kriti slapped her hand. Nandini winced rubbing her hands "whats the need to say anything about that?" nandini shrugged. "you are The Artiste dude! What the hell are you doing in engineering college? No wonder you can draw so well!!!" abhi said patting her back. Nandini smiled. "that's my hobby. Computers is my passion!" nandini informed with a wink.

All this while yash remained stunned staring at the mess nandini had created. It wasn't mess anymore. It was looking more beautiful than before.

"you did this rangoli didn't you?" kriti nudged her, nandini smiled again. Once again yash stood there stunned. The rangoli which had impressed him so much was done by none other than nandini herself! What do he do now? the rangoli had different colours. each colour had one other colour accompanying it. it was so beautiful that the first thought anybody would get seeing it was 'can life also be this colourful?' and that had impressed him so very much! he still couldnt believe it was nandini who did all this arrangements single handedly! and here he was yelling at her for no reason!

Just then judges came back. And all his thoughts about talking to nandini vanished in thin air, he went back to his work.


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you might be wondering why am i making so big fuss out of this rangoli or of her being artiste etc.. you will get to know that soon!!! and if u noticed i changed it back to SS. which means this is gonna end soon!!! 😆 may be 5 or 6 updates more.. 😉


and and.. see the banner guys. there are 2 girls.. and one boy.. so your job is to guess who is who?

who is the girl in left?

and who is the girl in right ?

and also who is the guy hugging the girl in right! 🤣

chalo lag jao kaam pe 😆


till then sayonara!!

with love

nams! 😳

Edited by ..nams.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres😆

omg me first one to comment
yipeee...🥳

seriously i m so happy now
😛
my god best way t start my day was by reading ur story...i m sure my day will be awesome.. now...😉
cuming to ur update
it was mind blowing...i mean seriously di...i luvd it...
i was blushing thru out the update...😆😉

it was so awesome di👏
👏👏
seriously how do u manage to be such a fabulous writer...and...write such great stories...
awesome
continue to keep writing such amazing work di...
just wnderful
...👏...👏

di banner to fab hain...awesome...lekin mera guessing power weak hain...aap hi bata dena

thanks for pm...and update
do update next part soon...

Edited by jas112 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its awesome
loved it
loved the rangoli sequence
it was like "HOWZ that ??"
upate soon waitng to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's raining updates Hallelujiah!! Aha...Must say what a kickass chapter👏👏👏👏Pookalam was introduced by my Kerala friends and I could not only visualize Nandini's beautiful Rangoli but also Yash's Gaping mouth and TAKE THAT -mentally by Nandini😆😆😆😆😆
The whole scenario ,built up was thrilling ,I had this typical girlish grin on my face while reading it😆😆😆😆😆
Superb can't wait to know more..
NOW I am ADDICTED😛😛😛😛Now please do update Like real fast !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update di
firstly when yash congratulated kriti i was like
W*F
but when nandu came and the way she handled everything i was like thats way it should be
yash can't he be polite with her jab deko chillata rehta hai
but i smiled imagining yash face at the end it woud have been amazing
overall fabulous update
u made my day awesome and banner is supercute
i think both the gilrs are kriti and nandini and guy is yash and may be if u want to give it a tragic ending then the girl ysh is hugging may be kriti but pls aisa mat karna di
waiting for next one
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
next update may be on monday or teusday?

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