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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Carrie-


B,

Bahut der kardi sanam aate aate😳😳😳

Finally you are here🤗

Been waiting forever for ur reviews,B😃

Hey!Meri marathi kaise lagi?😉😆 Not even fit for jootis & chappals??? 😛

Nah!Arshad isn't visiting them.They have rushed over to meet their grandson.A bit more family pyar mohabbat on the way.For both.Ash & Arsh!😉

yup... me back in action 😉
hey... good use of Marathi with Dutta and his Aai ... perfect ... I didn't comment on it separately because I didn't find it disconnected from the story ... it was gelled perfectly 😉
But I have a question... will ask u in the PM TongueTongue
OhhhKKK... Nana - Nani visiting them ... and yes... believe me... it is much needed ki koi Arshad ki nazar utarey ... bahuton ki buri nazar hai uspar 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊😊😊
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



😊😊😊
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

😉Unres

Yippie... I was here when u had reserved the posts 🥳
Read first part even before you posted the second part 😉 ... Apna kaam chhodke page refresh kar rahi thi 😛
OK... Coming to update ... Ahaaa... Bollywood import as Nawab Khan ... Jackie Shroff ... Superb 👍🏼
Aisha miffed with the person who has started this mission against Dutta ... her SIR 😉
The father - daughter part was beautiful ... Aisha worried about her dad's health and cooking for him...
Sad back story of Khans ... But this is the universal truth ... daughters r special... they understand their parents better that sons 😊
Here i'm getting some funny thoughts... but will shut them for a while ...😳
Ahannn... Sun sun sun Aisha tere liye ek rishta aaya hai 😉
But Dad... aapki laadli ka dil to kahi aur atkaa hua hai 😉 ... ufff... ek to wo gangster hai... uspar se ye mazhab ki deewar ... kaise hoga ye Milan 😉
Dad ko bhi hints milne lagey hain ... to beti ka dil kis direction mein titli ban ke udd raha hai 😉
And here comes the firebrand Nani "Rukk rey Chokrey" 😉😉😉
Seriously Arshad (Arjun) ko bahut logo ki buri nazar lag rahi thi... iska utarna bahut zaruri tha 😉 😆😆😆
Nana ji asking ques as if he is gonna apply for work in ETF 🤣
Dutta Patil ... sirf naam hi kaafi hai dehshat failane k liye ... uska naam sunke nana-nani bhi darr gaye 😉
Aur ab dekho Dutta ka khel ... Arshad Miya ... kya laga tha tumko ? Dutta koi kachcha khiladi hai ? usne achchhe achchhon ki band bajayi hai ... its not gonna be easy 😉
Waiting for the next part now 😉
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
reswa

unres😛

buhahahhaha...yeah thats what i call a update !!!!!!!!!! perfect in every aspect!

ok, so starting from aisha's pov...aww girl is tensed for dutta bhau! hmm...thoda sa pyar huya hain, thoda hain baki,,,,hum to dil de hi chuke...ab bas khud se kehna hain baki,,,,😉 then her dad...and marriage proposal, hmm...looks like there will be dutta- aisha- nawab sahab clash...very intersting and waiting for this. mujhe ye clashes qubool hain😆 and looks like nawab is nt in favour of dutta aisha...of course which father will support a gangster and his own daughter relation? now it will be intersting what nawab sahab will do...btw nice choice of aisha's father.

then...arshad coming back and all that buri balaye rituals 🤣 poor him...loved the reunion of senior rawtes. and when he mentioned dutta, sab chup! only they know what will happen in future,

and then...next day virkar dhoying all criminals but none of saying anything. loved the dialogue ek kolhapuri chappal bechne ki aukat nahi👏👏 awesome!


but i felt like it was small update...i must be mad 🤣 but loved it as usual...update soon, ho sake to before monday...pretty pls?😃


and i was here before PM...buhahahhaha 🤣🤣
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

reswa


unres😛

buhahahhaha...yeah thats what i call a update !!!!!!!!!! perfect in every aspect!

Thanks Riya😃 Glad u loved it!😉

ok, so starting from aisha's pov...aww girl is tensed for dutta bhau! hmm...thoda sa pyar huya hain, thoda hain baki,,,,hum to dil de hi chuke...ab bas khud se kehna hain baki,,,,😉

Aww...Loved that line❤️

then her dad...and marriage proposal, hmm...looks like there will be dutta- aisha- nawab sahab clash...very intersting and waiting for this. mujhe ye clashes qubool hain😆 and looks like nawab is nt in favour of dutta aisha...of course which father will support a gangster and his own daughter relation? now it will be intersting what nawab sahab will do...btw nice choice of aisha's father.

Err...😆😆😆 Loadz of clashes coming your way😊

Have always loved Jackie since I watched Hero😳

then...arshad coming back and all that buri balaye rituals 🤣 poor him...loved the reunion of senior rawtes. and when he mentioned dutta, sab chup! only they know what will happen in future,

They are not RAwtes😆 Nana & Nani i.e maternal grandparents.Didnt want to confuse you all with too many Muslim names so havent named them😛 Except for Nani😆

and then...next day virkar dhoying all criminals but none of saying anything. loved the dialogue ek kolhapuri chappal bechne ki aukat nahi👏👏 awesome!

Now its the other side's turn to give it back😉 Dutta "lega" abhi!😆


but i felt like it was small update...i must be mad 🤣 but loved it as usual...update soon, ho sake to before monday...pretty pls?😃

Will try Riya.Next part is very tricky.I need some time to set it all up to synchronize properly


and i was here before PM...buhahahhaha 🤣🤣 Shukriya😊 Thanks for the comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
@Carrie, I see you have changed you DP. It's been years since I posted anything on IF except your Bd thread of course on the only forum I know. I logged into IF to respond to the Buddy list request from my email notification and saw this thread. I don't read FF/SS etc but because I saw a certain person/character as one of your story characters I had to comment just to say I wholeheartedly support your creative endeavor to write again in a style I can vividly remember and in doing so, you have not forgotten and included "my favorite man",😉 character that is for whom I still have a special place in my heart and will always be a lifelong memorable experience.
Please continue for as long as you can with your immense creativity and penchant.
TC my friend,
This is for you now and always. With much luv. Aneesa
An Old Irish Blessing
May the road rise up to meet you.
May the wind always be at your back.
May the sun shine warm upon your face,
and rains fall soft upon your fields.
May God hold you in the palm of His hand.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
Loved the father-daughter convo..
love it
keep it up
cont soon
Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nizam13

@Carrie, I see you have changed you DP. It's been years since I posted anything on IF except your Bd thread of course on the only forum I know.


Don't call me Carrie,Annesa.I am your good old Zuby.Hello & Salaamz to you🤗


I logged into IF to respond to the Buddy list request from my email notification and saw this thread. I don't read FF/SS etc but because I saw a certain person/character as one of your story characters I had to comment just to say I wholeheartedly support your creative endeavor to write again in a style I can vividly remember and in doing so, you have not forgotten and included "my favorite man",😉 character that is for whom I still have a special place in my heart and will always be a lifelong memorable experience.

precisely why I wanted you to accept the buddy request which i had accidentally deleted I knew u'd like it.I'd wanted you to read my take on the most lovable pair of all times & if you'd permit I'd like to send u updates😳
Please continue for as long as you can with your immense creativity and penchant.
TC my friend,

Thanks so much😳 As I have always mentioned no one talks to me so loving as u do.Your encouragement means a lot.Thanks for dropping by😊
This is for you now and always. With much luv. Aneesa
An Old Irish Blessing
May the road rise up to meet you.
May the wind always be at your back.
May the sun shine warm upon your face,
and rains fall soft upon your fields.
May God hold you in the palm of His hand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
zuby ji 🤗
dis is it in true remo ji style
badtameez in karan johar style ji
😉
thoug ur sabr ka phal was short 😡
felt like abi start n khatam bi ho gya
jackie shroff ji as nawab khan n dad of ayesha 😛
again awesome choice
well nostalgic feeling again
feeling like i m talking to my dad in first part ⭐️
no worries nt abt wedding n all abt future studies lol 😆
ayesha pov
😉
ahem ahem ayesha n bhau
pehla pehla pyar h 🥳
now 2nd part
arre yei hota h wen a family get together done 😳
arshad miyan mere bhaiya ko dho diya 😭
at d same time i m 🤣
vikrar 😎
chappal kharidne ki aukat ni 👏
superb 😭
well lovely
wow 😃
chotu update n bada comment 😉 😡
precap 😉
lagan ni dekhnne ko aa ri h 🤣
so dutta bhau bhaji n ayesha on roll 😃
waiting 😉
one of my fav reading now 😉
thanks for d pm ji
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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