AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling *CH 20* 11/11/13 Pg 134 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rivya

I am sorry I am not on schedule this week. Two things happened -
1. The TS snuck in, taking away a lot of time.
2. The Health God's and my muqaddar are at odds. I was just starting to get better when my little one got sick.

I have half the chapter done i.e. the dialogues. Once I can put in the expressions and stuff, I'll post. Later tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks for checking though...and yeah is Muqaddar ki to...😆


aww- hope your kid feels better soon...
it's ok- i enjoyed the TS 😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
went well can get chapter 12 update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
when are you updating dear .
please update soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey folks,
Sorry the update is not up yet...But thanks for all the love and reminders.

I promise I am working on it, its just that the I have very little inspiration happening. Plus I was unwell.

However, I did write a new TS this week. Here is a link to it in case you missed it. I would love to hear what you felt about this TS.

Coming back to this update. I will work on it and will try to post asap.

Now two annoucements -
1. I am looking for 2 beta readers, if you think you would like to volunteer please PM me. But I will need extremely honest critical reviews.
2. Next couple weeks, the updates shall be a little infrequent. In Laws are going to visit, and if you have them, you would know how busy it gets.

Thanks again for all the love.🤗
Rivs
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!!!

get well soon..

and try to update when you are free..
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know where to find me, Rivs!!! 😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Take care yaar...
Get well soon.Update only wen u r completely healthy and fine.
We will wait...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi di
Just read all the parts in a go and I loved the story...I enjoy romantic comedy genre a lot and man this was good...
I liked their first meeting...very refreshing and unique 😊 pehli hi mulakat mein ek doosre ki baahon mein kya baat hai...zoya brought a poodle with her 😆 man I can't imagine how angry asad would have been...doosri mulaqat and phir se asad ki baahon mein and is baar pura ghar nd asad k white kurte ko ganda kar doya 😆
I loved how you showed that the first time that zoya actually saw his face asad was actually sleeping and she saw him in the moonlight...the best combo...very nice touch...
'my jaan'licking asad's face was funny 😆 and our museebat queen fell again...I can't believe that asad thought zoya was trying to seduce him 😲 but m happy she gave him a piece of her mind...
Zoya fell down the stairs and asad carried her again..poor asad bechare to apbe AAP pe kabu rakhne k. Liye zoya se door rehna pads but m glad that he made up for his rude behavior later...asad tending to zoya was very sweet...
So chaand bi thedhi hain 😆 oh man there is something up with ruksar right?and najma wahy do I feel that she has someone in her life?
M really excited for the next update...please pm me wen you update nxt
Love
Anushree 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Hi di
Just read all the parts in a go and I loved the story...I enjoy romantic comedy genre a lot and man this was good...

I am so glad to see your comment...welcome to the world of Mr. Muqaddar...🤗 Okay this will not be totally RomCom...but mostly...thoda drama to chahiye na life mein...
I liked their first meeting...very refreshing and unique 😊 pehli hi mulakat mein ek doosre ki baahon mein kya baat hai...zoya brought a poodle with her 😆 man I can't imagine how angry asad would have been...doosri mulaqat and phir se asad ki baahon mein and is baar pura ghar nd asad k white kurte ko ganda kar doya 😆
I know...overdose of hugs...and then none for a long time...But we will go back to the hugs and stares soon...
I loved how you showed that the first time that zoya actually saw his face asad was actually sleeping and she saw him in the moonlight...the best combo...very nice touch... Thanks...I take inspiration from my real life...a whole lot...😆
'my jaan'licking asad's face was funny 😆 and our museebat queen fell again...I can't believe that asad thought zoya was trying to seduce him 😲 but m happy she gave him a piece of her mind... I know pride and prejudice much...with role reversal..😆
Zoya fell down the stairs and asad carried her again..poor asad bechare to apbe AAP pe kabu rakhne k. Liye zoya se door rehna pads but m glad that he made up for his rude behavior later...asad tending to zoya was very sweet... Thanks...see initial reaction ho gaya in the first 24 hours...now time to keep distance...
So chaand bi thedhi hain 😆 oh man there is something up with ruksar right?and najma wahy do I feel that she has someone in her life? Chaand bi is a mystery...Rukhsaar kuch zyada hi seedhi hai...and there is no one is Najma's life, currently
M really excited for the next update...please pm me wen you update nxt
Love
Anushree 😃

Thanks for the comment...will PM the next update..
Rivs

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