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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 (Last Part)

GA was standing and smiling at all of them present in the room though everyone was crying including Naina but she was smiling. It was a smile of victory. Yeah she was succeeded in not only showing Naina that people love her but also she made others realized that how much Naina means to them. It was high time Naina couldn't stop herself anymore. Thus she ran and kneeled down in front of Yuvi and hugged him tight. Yuvi was shocked by the sudden hug but as soon as he felt it he mouthed "Naina". Everyone around him was shock even Naina herself as she was still in burkha and her face was still covered. She breaks the hug in shock but Yuvi doesn't leave her he holds her arms from both hands.

One of Naina's friends come and keeps his hand on Yuvi's shoulder and says "dude leave her, your Naina is gone". Yuvi shrugged his hand from his shoulder and says "dude this is my Naina. And she is not gone she is here right in front of me." Tears were rolling down from Yuvi's eyes he wipes them and goes close to Naina and says "show me your face. I know it's you. Please don't test me anymore. I give in. I am sorry for everything I did. I am so sorry. I love you Naina. I love you more than anything in this world. Please I beg you." Naina finally lifts her veil and now everyone can see her including Yuvi. He smiles through his tears and hug her as tightly as possible. "I... I ca... can't breathe Yuvi" manages to say Naina in Yuvi's tight grip.

He chuckles "you are dead so it doesn't matter technically". Naina opens her mouth wide and says "haw... how mean?" and breaks the hug. "You know how much you have hurt me?" Yuvi said making a pout. "I have hurt you hah? I? Who pretended to hate me? Who didn't wanted me in his life? Who disliked everything about me? Hah?" saying this Naina starts hitting him on his chest. Yuvi tries to stop her but she doesn't so he holds her both and puts it behind her back. Now she is inches close to him without caring for the presence of others Yuvi kisses Naina making her go all red. Every ones cheers for them and they break the kiss. Yuvi moves his hand in his hairs blushing and Naina well she runs and hides behind GA. She sees her elder sister looking at her in shock.

She giggles at her expression and walks up to her and says "what you are not happy to see me alive?" The next second Kavya hugs her tightly and starts crying. "Please di, don't cry. I am an idiot. I shouldn't have done this to you all. I am so sorry" Naina says while soothing Kavya's back. She breaks the hug and Kavya goes and grab the ghaghra and says it "wear it now." Before Naina could say anything Kavya pushes her in her room and closes the door. In few minutes Naina comes out in that beautiful ghaghra but in her hand there was another ghaghra much prettier than the one she was wearing. She walks up to her di ignoring the stare of Yuvi while blushing she gives that ghaghra to her and says "di I wanted your ghaghra so that you can wear this ghaghra which is much prettier than this one [Kavya felt guilty for what she did to her younger sister] now time for you to wear this." Saying this Naina does the same thing and forces Kavya to wear that pretty ghaghra. They hug each other and now she turns towards Sidhart.

"Bhai" Naina says and Sidhart hugs her tightly. "Guys if you want me dead than tell me please don't kill me while hugging me" complains Naina and everyone in the room laughs. Sidhart breaks the hug and folds his hands in front of Naina and says "I am sorry. I know I don't deserve forgiveness but at least you can try to forgive your idiot brother. I am..." before he could complete Naina cuts him off and says "please bhai don't say all that. You know na how much I love you? But you know na that I don't forgive that easily either? [Sidhart gives a confusing and questioning look to Naina and she continues] well you will be punished than you will be forgiven" saying this Naina gives evil smirk to her bhai and puts her hands on her both side. "I am dead now" says Sidhart and Yuvi laughs and says "you are so right saale sahaab (brother in law)" making Naina blush hard. Finally having no other choice Sidhart says "fine tell me my punishment." Naina comes and stands behind her bhai and says "like childhood you will have to lift me up on your back and walk me around." Saying this Naina jumps on her bhai's back and Sidhart walks her around the entire house. He stops and she climbs down giving a peck on his cheek and ruffling his hairs and says "thank you bhai love you lots"

She sees her mom still in the state of shock and goes to her before she could say or do anything THAP. Her mom slaps her on her face. She holds her from both shoulders and jolts her hardly and says "is this the way? Is this how you will take revenge? What were you thinking? Or did you even bother thinking before you planned to play with our emotions? You have any idea what I went through? What your brother and sister went through in these few minutes?" GA comes in the middle and stops Naina's mom and says "aunty I know what happened shouldn't have happened but trust me it was better than what was about to happen. [Naina's mom gives her confusing look and GA continues] I know what I said was all a lie except one thing your daughter was about to jump off from the tall building." Everyone gasped present in the room and Naina's mom says "what?" Naina comes and stands in front of her mom and says "yes mom I was being stupid. I thought no one loves me and I am just causing problems in your life. So I thought to ease up your pain and others' as well. So I decided to jump off that building. But if it wasn't GA than I would have been dead and whatever just happened could have been true. I am so sorry mom. I am so sorry for hurting you mom. I didn't mean it". Naina falls on the ground feeling guilty of her thoughts and actions. Her mom picks her up and wipes her tears and takes her into a motherly hug. They stayed liked this for few minutes than they break the hug. All were sad (cause of what they did to Naina) yet happy to see Naina alive. GA decides to lighten up the mood of all so she starts singing.

Zindagi hai duaa
rab ki adaa

kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa
laaye the ji kyaa
le jaayein bhii kyaa
kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa

Yuvi joins in and starts singing while coming in between Naina and her mom and giving both of them side hugs.

rangeen hain
kabhi berangeen hain
kabhi to haste haste aankhoon ko rulaaey

kavya comes to them and sings while hugging Naina

banti hai
kabhi bigadati hai

chalte chalte kuch ye sikhaayein

Sidhart also comes and stands in between Naina and Kavya and hug them and kisses their foreheads and sings

hain haseen ye lamhein
jo mile hain unhein

aise waise yuun hi kahin
dekho kabhi bewajah
ham na gawaayein

Naina's mom also starts singing

hain hasiin ye lamhein
jo mile haiin unhein

aise waise yuun hi kahin
dekho kabhii bewajah
ham na gawaayein

GA again sings bringing them all family and friends together

zindagi hai dua
rab ki adaa

kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa
laaye the ji kyaa
le jaayein bhi kyaa
kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa

Kavya sings bring Naina and Yuvi together making Naina go all red.

armaan se saji ye dulhan hain
ise ham tanahai mein kaise phir bitaayein
Khawaboon ko jagaa ke aankhoon mein
umeedoon kaa aanchal ham udhaayein

Naina sings hugging her sister tight and then hugging her mom.

pal pal mein dhali
hal chal mein chali

Dubi dubi khoi khoi
jagi jagi soi
soi guzri jaaye

GA again sings seeing everyone happy together and moves her hand on Naina's head

zindagi hai dua
rab ki adaa

kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa
laaye the ji kya
le jaayein bhi kyaa
kah ke shukriyaa
jee lo naa

Then everyone sings together hugging each other just like a perfect family

zindagi hai
zindagi hai dua

Soon they all settle and GA finding everyone busy tries to sneak out without anyone's notice but soon she hears Naina's voice which forces her to stop and turn around. "Guardian Angel are you going without saying a good bye?" Naina asks innocently. GA turns around and smiles and says "I hate good-byes that's why I am going without informing anyone." Naina walks towards GA with Yuvi and says to her "you seem not surprised when I called you with your full name. Why? And where are you going?" GA smiles at her and replies "because you were meant to know my name as soon as you change your decision of dying and I am going to see my family. Do you both want to come meet them?" Naina looks at Yuvi and he nodes in a Yes' and then she looks at GA and says "sure GA I would love to meet your family. Let's go"

They go to a really poor colony and walks towards an old man who was sitting with a young boy. They were few steps away from them when GA points at them and says "this is my dad and my little brother." Naina and Yuvi were shock to see them in such a bad state. Naina asks "why are they like this GA? Why don't you help them?" GA had tears in her eyes and guilt on her face. "Ummm... I can't do anything. They... they are like this because of me" GA was sobbing by now. Naina hugs her and tries to calm her down and asks "what did you do?" She breaks the hug and GA replies "what you were trying to do some time ago. I thought I was burden on my parents. They wanted me to get married to a nice guy that means lot of money needed, money for dowry, for wedding preparations and many more stuffs. My father was ready to mortgage our house and his shop but I wasn't ready to put everything at stake for my marriage. So one fine day I jumped off the bridge into the stream. I didn't know how to swim and I died cause of drowning." Naina and Yuvi take a step backward. GA takes a deep breath and says "tell them that I love them a lot and I want them to live a better life. I just wish I could help them in living a better life. Also, ask my brother not to blame himself for my death. He couldn't do anything because he was young and this was meant to happen. Naina, I was supposed to stop you from doing the same mistake I did a year ago. Yes today was the day last year when I died. Please take care and don't end up doing what I did to myself and my family. Because destiny doesn't give second chances and you are lucky to get one don't let it go waste. Also, keep smiling. It doesn't solve problem but give you the courage to face it. Yuvi is the best guy you can ever get don't let him go away ever without a fight" GA winks at Naina and she blushes. Then GA turns around and walks away and soon disappears in thin air. Naina and Yuvi made sure that GA's younger brother got proper education and they got proper place to live.

It been six years now Naina is married to Yuvi and she has a daughter whose name is Angel. Her name was inspired by Guardian Angel (GA). She is living a happy life in her own house and visits her maternal house every now and then where she, her husband and little angel is welcomed with open arms.

*THE END*

Authors Note

I am sure readers, many of you will say that GA and such stuff don't exist but children smile when they listen to fairytales. They get inspired by them and no doubt every one of us was one of those kids who loved fairytale or believed in any kind of supernatural beings/heroes. I am sure we don't believe in them anymore. But sometimes it's good to believe in someone else's belief.

I have written this SS to inspire people and not to make them believe in GA or any such things. So please let's just take this SS as an inspirational story instead of finding logics behind it.

I hope you guys liked the SS as a whole and this last part as well.

Thanks to all for your support for this thread and my updates. Love you for that.

Next SS will be out soon and it can be either on Swaron, Taarey or Arnav and Khushi (I don't know the short form for them). Let's see what I do. Stay tuned for the next SS

Don't forget to hit like button and comment BIG. I really need your support in this please.

Once again thanks for giving my work a chance 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Awesome update :D
Loved it <3
yuvi-naina part was so cute and romantic :D
And loved the whole Siddhant-naina, kavya-naina, and naina and her mom scene :D
I thought GA would have done the same mistake but didn't knew she was dead!! But yah it's good to believe in fairy tales ❤️
Write more :D
Will be waiting for next story in this :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Yuvi and Naina are so cute
Their scene was so romantic
Love Naina bonding with everyone
TaSha as usual u did a fab job
I love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
awseome update!!
yuvi-naina are just so romantic!!
lovely!!
thanks for the pm.
please format your work as it is aligned in a rather peculiar manner.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
res
unres...
omg...
she is thinking to suicide?
and the quotes all were simply beautiful...
continue soon...
Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome story...naina wanted to commit suicide..oh no
Lovely quotes...superb
Don't end it
U should continue tashu..
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Nice update.. read next part also😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Awesome update :D
Loved it <3
yuvi-naina part was so cute and romantic :D
And loved the whole Siddhant-naina, kavya-naina, and naina and her mom scene :D
I thought GA would have done the same mistake but didn't knew she was dead!! But yah it's good to believe in fairy tales ❤️
Write more :D
Will be waiting for next story in this :)

thank u so much lil sis 😃
i m glad u liked yuvi-naina part 😳
yeah it is good 😃
sure maam i mean lil sis 😉 i will write more
awe well will not make u wait for long 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Yuvi and Naina are so cute
Their scene was so romantic
Love Naina bonding with everyone
TaSha as usual u did a fab job
I love it

thanks a lot dear
i m glad u liked naina-yuvi part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

awseome update!!

yuvi-naina are just so romantic!!
lovely!!
thanks for the pm.
please format your work as it is aligned in a rather peculiar manner.

thanku so much dear
i m glad u liked it
u r most welcome
n yeah sure

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