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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

hello friends...here's my one more lame poem...dont knw why i posted this...and yes kisi ko samajh aa jaye to plz..muje bhi samjha dena...

Kal... ret se phisal gaye haath se wo pal

Kal... lamha wo pyaar ka sang chale the jab hum

Kal... sang rehkar bhi jab adhuri si reh jaati thi baat

Kal...jab meri ankahi baat ban jaati thi tumhari awaz

Beeto lamho ki kasak ab bhi is dil me hai

Teri yaado ki mehak ab bhi in saanso me hai

Zakhm kured jaata hai wo hansta hua kal

Fir teri yaad se aankhe nam kar jaata hai wo kal

Gujarte har lamhe k saath khud ko karti hu taiyaar

Bematlab se is jahan me liye phirti hu zindagi k pal char

Zindagi ki har sheh se anmol hai mera kal

Mere aaj ki tasveer hai mera beeta hua...Kal !!!

posting through phn...will format tomorrow...sorry

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

Kal... ret se phisal gaye haath se wo pal

Kal... lamha wo pyaar ka sang chale the jab hum

Kal... sang rehkar bhi jab adhuri si reh jaati thi baat

Kal...jab meri ankahi baat ban jaati thi tumhari awaz

Beeto lamho ki kasak ab bhi is dil me hai

Teri yaado ki mehak ab bhi in saanso me hai

Zakhm kured jaata hai wo hansta hua kal

Fir teri yaad se aankhe nam kar jaata hai wo kal

Gujarte har lamhe k saath khud ko karti hu taiyaar

Bematlab se is jahan me liye phirti hu zindagi k pal char

Zindagi ki har sheh se anmol hai mera kal

Mere aaj ki tasveer hai mera beeta hua...Kal !!!

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Ret si fisalti in lamhon me...
pyar ke gehre dastaan chupe he...
jab tere ashq ki nami mere aakhon me thi...
mere honthon ki kashish tere labon pe thi...

Us ankahe dastaan ko bayan karta he ye sama..
Uski kahani sunta he mera ye dil nadan ..
Kal ke lamhe moti ban ke bikhrte he aaj ..
Un palon ki khushi chedti he dhadkanon ki saaj..

Zindagi ..har pal naya kissa sunati he..
Kabhi mujhe gujre huye kal ka ..
Kabhi aaj ke is pal ka...
Hissa banati he...
Kal ke panno se khud ko samet kar..
Naye pal..naye lamhe ke sapne ..
Aakhon ke aaine me saja kar...

Baby..i love the purity in ur words 😳...so very proud of u ❤️..love u moreee🤗

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely poem!!

i wonder how do you write so well!!

thanks for the pm.

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@Death_Memories

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

You cal this Lame😲😆🤣

If you call this Lame then I wish I could write this Lame

I loved it

It was sweet simple yet Beautiful and the Best thing about this was that I could Only Imagine Swaron while reading this.

The choice were words was perfect and Apt

Brilliant Again

-Harshita

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

himani----

agar tumhe samajh me nahi aaya toh rehne do---

na samajh ke hi fantastic hai.

actually i guess love is not something u understand why or wherefore of.

just---happens.

so ---just---i love it.

----ek na samajh swaron fan:O

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Unreserved

Sorrry behan maine tera aage wala comment ab dekha :/
I was ol through ph!

Mahnn wat awesomeeenesss!!! Amazingg..!
Kya deep lines likhi hai...waaah! Super impressed.
Waise tell me one thing...yeh kisse impress hoke likhi hai ;) ;) Batade yaaar ;D

Lame toh tu hai..mai hu awesome toh...jo iss poem ko khud se bhi awesome smjhti hu 😎
Wow likha hai aapne toh!
Keep writing!
Love You Kajal Bhaai ❤️
Muahh :*

Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago