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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ankita_95

congo dear 4 2nd thread !!

amazin story !!
continue soon!! thnx 4 pm :)

thnk u so much dear!!
im glad u like it!!
will update soon n ur welcome 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Wing Di🤗


Congratzzz for your second thread 😃😃

now update soon:D

love ya❤️

jjaaannuu!! 🤗
hahahaha 😆
thnx dear!! will update in a minute 😃
n yeah i love me too!!😛
hehehehe 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on ur 2nd thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: velvetrose

Congrats on ur 2nd thread

Thank u so much dear! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hey guys! In d celebration of my 2nd thread, here is a small treat for u all!! so presenting d 18th chapter 😃

Chapter 18

*Rey's car ws parked outside TaaYam's place..he got out from his car hoping dat taani wud b ready by nw to go to d party wid him..as he ws walkng towards the entrance of d house, he ws praying to taani's krishnaji dat she will come wid him..he rang d door bell n calld out her name bt to his dismay, she ddnt open d door..he waited outside for few minutes n clld out her name once again bt still she ddnt come out..he wanted to just barge in or bttr yet, climb in from d famous pipe, bt den he remmbred his promise to her dat he will nt force her to come wid him if she ddnt want to*

Rey - ok baby..i guess u really dnt wanna go to d party..ur really busy huh? Fine den..i respect ur decision bt I will wait for u at d party if u chnge ur mind..luv u taani

*as rey ws retreating back towards his car, a girl ws struggling under a guy's arm behind d closed door..d girl ws none oder den taani n d guy ws our very own devil, karan..he held taani in one arm n d oder arm closed her mouth to prevent her from shouting..he ws a pretty buff guy so taani ws really struggling to get out from his hold..as she struggled even more, karan den took out his gun n pointed towards d entrance door whre rey supposedly stood outside*

Karan(whispering) - ssshhh..baby dnt make any sound..warna yeh jo gun hai main seedha rey ke head mein maarungga 😡 n den bye-bye rey n u will b mine forever..nw u dn want ur stupid hero to die rght? So stop fidgeting n dnt make any sound!😡

*d fear of loosing rey ws unimaginable to taani so she stopped struggling n ddnt make any sound..as rey retreated back n sat in his car, taani ws somehow releaved dat he ws safe bt she ws also scared for wat may happen to her now..rey den started d engine, stared at d entrance door for a while n left, unaware of wat ws happening behind d door*

Karan - chhiii..usko dekh moti..woh jaa raha hai tujhe chorke..i mean wat kind of a bf is he to leave d gf like dat..n he ddnt even fight for u!😲 aggar main hota toh I wud hve never left n wud always b dre wid u..he is pathetic n u dnt need him..u need a guy like me baby..nw since he is out of d way, lets party karan style..nw for dat, dis is gonna sting abit bt later u will enjoy it

*at frst taani ddnt understand wat he meant..bt den she saw him taking out a syringe from his pocket n she understood den n dere dat he ws gonna jab her wid it..n wtver d syringe contained was nt good for her n defntly nt gonna help her in dis situation..fear overtook her n she struggled a lot in his grip bt he ws stronger den her..he took out d safety cap from d syringe n jab it on her*

Karan - shhshshshsh..dre nw..evrythng will b allrght..nw its gonna b fun n ur gonna be mine n only mine

*as d injection worked its magic, taani's body became weak n she struggled to steady herself..her eyes were getting heavy n she felt her head spinning..her legs were shaking n she cudnt fight it anymore so she just gave in n fell unconscious in karan's arms..meanwhile, in collge, d party ws in full swing..evrybody ws enjoying demselves except for our majnu boy, rey..SwaRon noticed dis n came to his rescue*

Sharon - rey wats dis yaa! Y r u just sitting here like an old guy wen all of us are at d dance floor! Come on lets dance!😃 I miss my dancing partner n best frend!

Rey - nahi Sharon..u guys hve fun..mera mood nahi hai dance karne ka

Swayam - wat mood nahi hai? Look I knw dat ur upset dat my sister is nt here bt she really ddnt wanna come n had loads to do for tmrrw..vp sir ne usko bht kaam diya hai n u knw hw taani is..she is very stubborn n she wants to do evrythng herself..bt later wen she will ask me hw ws rey at d pary den she will b sad to knw dat u ddnt even dance n hve fun! N u knw hw taani is..she will feel guilty n cry n punish herself n wat not..so pls rey to avoid my sister getting hurt n emotional drama happening, cn u pls join us n dance?

Sharon - dance for taani😃

Swayam - yes..chal na! chal

Rey - accha ek second..let me just send a quick sms to her

*after sending d mssge, he ws den forced n pulled towards d dance floor by his two best frend..In TaaYam's place however, d reality ws nt as fun n sweet..Taani wakes up from her deep slumber n recalled bck on wat happened to her..she looked at her surrounding n realized dat she ws tied up to a chair in her basement which ws decorated wid lights n confettis..her mouth ws also covered wid a cloth so she cudnt even scream..her head ws still spinning bt she could see n understand wat was happening..den she heard some noices n saw karan entering d basement..he stared at her wid full of lust n she stared bck at him wid disgust..she knew nw ws nt d time to panick bt to deal d situation bravly n intelligently..she saw him putting d gun on d table nearby n he played music from d player..he ws swaying wid d music..he den turned n faced taani..she saw him coming towards her wid his devilish smile n he ws holding a knife..her breath increase wid his evry step..now he ws just inches away from her n as he moved his face towards her, she jerks her face sideways n few strands of her hair came to her face..karan moves d few strands of her face wid his knife*

Karan (smirking)- ohfo moti..itne nakhre..gosh tu seriously mujhe ek din maarhi dalegi..n ur eyes..iss mein itna gussa ki kisiko jala jayye..ab bas bhi kar na moti..dnt b angry anymore n stop resisting..enjoy dis moment wid me n uppar se ghar mein koi bhi nahi hai aaj toh will hve loads of fun baby..bt usse pehle I will chnge dis music n den will dance..ek second baby

*as he ws changing d music, taani ws struggling to take her fone from her pouch which ws tied wid her hands..she ws trying to dial rey's number bt den her fone rang..karan came towards her n snatched her fone from her hands which ws tied at d back*

Karan - wth!😡 U trying to b smart baby? U knw u cnt get away from here nw...Chalo lets see kiska mssge aaya hai..uuugghhh rey ka mssge!😡 Woh yaha bhi aagaya humare beech mein..chalo koi nahi lets c wat he has written.."taani baby I miss u n im nt enjoying d party widout u..tumhare bina kuch accha nahi lag raha..if ur nt coming here den im coming dere n will help u wid evrythng..naa mat karna main bas aaraha hoon..luv u" oh god..he is so annoying!😡 N uski himmat kesi hui to say I luv u to u baby..moti ur only mine!😡 N im gona take u far away from here..u dnt worry ok..hum dono bht jald ek ho jaengge..bt use pehle let me reply him bck so dat woh yaha naa aaye..ok hw does dis sound.." baby I miss u too..dnt come her, im coming dre..see you in one hour..luv u" send n done

*n den he threw her fone n broke it into a million pieces..he den moved towards d player n crancked up d music..he placed d knife on d table n walked towards taani..he untied her ropes n d cloth on her mouth..he lifts her up n started dancing wid her..taani ws still feeling weak n so she cudnt stand properly n her head ws still spinning from d effect of d injection..bt she struggled n screamed for help from d top of her lungs..dre ws no effect of her screaming coz karan den cranked up d music even louder so dat no1 cn hear her..nw taani ws desprte n she cudnt thnk of anythng dat she could do to save herself so she prayed to her krishnaji..meanwhile at d collge*

Rey - yes!😃 Guys taani is coming in an hour! Nw im very happy

Swayam - she is coming?😲 Thnk god..warna tu iss party mein bas devdas jeise hota😆

Sharon - bt she is coming in an hour? Y so long!😕

Swayam - aarey we all knw dat girls take a lot of time tayaar hone mein..toh she must b getting ready na

Sharon - bt still! U knw wat..main waha jaa rahi hoon usko lene..i will help her in getting ready too😃

Rey - aarey Sharon its ok..i ws thngkng of going n pickng her up😳

Sharon - rey let me go n get her..will help her get ready na..toh chill loverboy..main abhi gayyi aur abhi aayi😉

Swayam - Sharon yeh spare key lelo..actlly servants arnt dre toh u cn let urself in

Sharon - oohh..uumm thnx 😳

Swayam - ur welcome 😳

Rey - ab aggar tum logo ka thnx n ur welcome ho gayya toh Sharon pls go n get her!😆 I cnt wait any longer

*Sharon den leaves n reachd TaaYam's place..she rang d door bell bt no1 opened it..she decided to cll taani bt tani's fone ws nt reachable..she felt weird dat no1 ws opening d door n her fone ws nt reachable..den she heard music from d basement n concluded dat taani must b down dre..she barged into d house wid her spare key n walked towards d basement*


that ws it guys..i knw it ws kinda boring bt next chapter will b full of action n drama! pls hit d like button n commnt! 🤗

Edited by forever18able - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Congrats dear
Yesterday only read ur full story

Its way awesum
Finally taarey are together
but ur story has lot of twist n turns that are unexpected

hate that cheap karan
Mental hai vo pura

Poor taani use bbf maan baithi

Hope rey taani ko bacha le
Iss baar karan nhi bachne wala
Pakka marega

Update soon
Congrats for second thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: payu_taarey

Congrats dear

Yesterday only read ur full story

Its way awesum
Finally taarey are together
but ur story has lot of twist n turns that are unexpected

hate that cheap karan
Mental hai vo pura

Poor taani use bbf maan baithi

Hope rey taani ko bacha le
Iss baar karan nhi bachne wala
Pakka marega

Update soon
Congrats for second thread

aawww thnk u so much hun!!!😃
im so glad dat u like it!!
n yey new reader!!
hahahaha yeah loads of twists😉
bt ab bas no more twists
its ending
lol😆
thnx a lot dear!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
hey...
it was quite thriller chapter...
bt kya yeh seriously zaroori tha?
i was shocked literally!!!
anyways...
its full on in suspense and
update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
omg...karan is so creep...hope sharon do something to save her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update
karan that creep hate him 😡
Taani in danger
Thank god sharon is come
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon

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