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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Payali,

Update will be on every Monday😳Our show comes on mondays only😆

i will not talk to u .
1 week tak sabr ni hota 😡
katti

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

😊😊😊

Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

😊😊😊

Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

res
unres later
hope me beech me ni aai
first
unres
zuby ji 🤗
thankyou very much
home sick hope daily lol 😆
well jb show two days to update kyon ni
back to update 😉
pic perfect
can imagine whole update
especially arshad bhaiya dialogues
no words so apt dialogue 👏
samjhe ya samjhau
book n all
well d most perfect n best good job ⭐️
vikrar so good 😃
perfectly written
khatirdari n no officials known 😳
i guess show me bi pakka etf me traitor ho skta h 😡 😡
part b
well d most fav was aai baji n bhau teasing
👍🏼
well d song ⭐️
i always thought how bhau was so calm in d show
he angry n so calm at d same time
ayesha ahem ahem 😉
so except vikrar n few all work under bhau 😲
somehow i love here bhaji d most 😆
all d dialogues so real
finally bhau know abt miyan 😉
so d real fun or game going to begin 😛
lovely update
ur writing skills ❤️
thanks for d pm zuby ji
waiting for monday now 😉
Dq ( drama queen )
my new name by some peeps
lovely name 😆
love u

Edited by Payal_156 - 13 years ago

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AbsoluteKasainuma

@Phir_Mohabbat

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+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

reswa

unres.

sorry for super late reply...was not in a good mood to comment.

so, coming to update, arshad in action..ahaan. loved his father's concern for him, and also how arshad didnt want to hurt his mother, thats why eat whole breakfast.

then...action!!!!! my fav part...arshad virkar and some others barging into dutta's adda and catch them all. my 2 most fav line, "pata bhi nahi chalega goli kahan se nikli kahan se ghushi" and "sab ko thok daal." awesome!! full mumbaiyya touch type...thank fully none from police side get hurt.

one question, MHCOC is it for real? or its also ur fruit of imagination??? never mind...

then...dutta baji scene. so cute...baji spiling dutta's pyar ke secret and dutta blushing...awww.😆 then, the news...kab tak chup sakta hain? baji's anger, then all those shocking infos...and dutta's concern for dead's family...touching!

jang to ab suru huya hain,.,,,,dekhte hain ghayal sher ab kya karta hain?😉

ps i guess next part mein aisha'a past, right? waiting...

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 13 years ago

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

You know dido, though I was thoroughly flattered by you comparing me to Meenamma and Simran I decided to board the train on time today!!!😆 And then what an update dido!!👏⭐️ Such high voltage drama!! Dil khush kar ditta!! Ekdum jumpak jumpak jumping japaang types!!! I could actually visualize Shaleen saying all that to his men, and his Samjhe ya Samjhaon!!☺️ It couldn't have been any better. The action packed opening was absolutely fantastic. It was fast paced and moved in a typical graph. All throughout that container yard sequence I was hoping ke mere hottie ko chot na lage! The way he roared and barked orders, I could visualize Shaleen in there. What a powerful narration!!! Dido free ki advice hai...ye CA ka chakkar chodo and freelance writer ban jao!👍🏼😎

And the second part, sorry Aayi Saab...Aayesha aapki nahi Najma ji ki soon bai banne wali hai! All the while Dutta and Baji had such a pleasant face but the moment the news of raid came in their faces were drained of color. Dutta bhao tune galat insaan se panga le hi liya hai!😃 Ye Arshad hai koi ainviyi sa police officer nahi! But dido why was Dutta so tensed?😕 He must have faced such situations before na...toh phir why that...? 🤓Meko abhi se hi soch ke bura lag raha hai ki Dutta ka dil toot jayega...kyunki Aayesha toh Arjun..ermmm...Arshad ki hai.🤣

Ab achii achii dido ban kar next part bhi update kar do!!! And precap me daadijaan is making an entry...bole toh ekdum mast!!!

P.S. Dido, anti-smuggling Code of Civil Procedure ke under mein aata hai...and its a national act jo ki sabhi states mein ek hi hai! Secondly smuggling jaise cases ko Anti-Corruption Bureau handle karti hai. But yes you can have all creative liberties!! 🤣

Edited by Meself - 13 years ago

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Aditi

@bright_star89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Wow! loved the updates..

arshad nabbed the gold smuggling racket.. and the description you gave... aisa lagaa ke sach mein Arjun dekh rahi honn..👏😃

Part B : loved the baji - dutta convo abt Aisha.. haaye.. dutta shying away at her thoughts😳😳

loved baji teasing him.. he is mega adorable..😛😛😛

And u are recreating the dutta - baji chemistry so well👍🏼👍🏼

absolutely brilliant Zuby! aur kya marathi bolti hai tu.. gives an ltl feel..

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sarita

@saritak

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

wow
super update
lovely
cont soon 👍🏼

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

unres on previous page 😊
amazing work

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Payal_156
res
unres later
hope me beech me ni aai
first
unres
zuby ji 🤗
thankyou very much
home sick hope daily lol 😆
well jb show two days to update kyon ni
back to update 😉
pic perfect
can imagine whole update
especially arshad bhaiya dialogues
no words so apt dialogue 👏
samjhe ya samjhau
book n all
well d most perfect n best good job ⭐️
vikrar so good 😃
perfectly written
khatirdari n no officials known 😳
i guess show me bi pakka etf me traitor ho skta h 😡 😡
part b
well d most fav was aai baji n bhau teasing
👍🏼
well d song ⭐️
i always thought how bhau was so calm in d show
he angry n so calm at d same time
ayesha ahem ahem 😉
so except vikrar n few all work under bhau 😲
somehow i love here bhaji d most 😆
all d dialogues so real
finally bhau know abt miyan 😉
so d real fun or game going to begin 😛
lovely update
ur writing skills ❤️
thanks for d pm zuby ji
waiting for monday now 😉
Dq ( drama queen )
my new name by some peeps
lovely name 😆
love u

Thank you for the lovely review,Payali😃 Means a lot😳

Hmmm...Baji always manages to take the cake in any scene be it comedy or tragedy😆 At one point LTL was bearable only because of him.

P.S: Har ladki mein ek drama queen chupi hoti hai.Its only that kuch log use control kar te hai aur kuch log nai.Dil pe mat le.😳

P.S.S: Mujhe lagta hai u should be the happiest person on this forum.The people who really matter that is Shaleen & Gorky are going ga ga over only ArNi.😊