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Posted: 11 years ago
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Masoom Ishq


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Part-5


Geet was four and half years old now and Maan was 12and half years old. Geet was old enough to go to school.Ram got her admitted in same school of Maan. On the first day of her school she was very happy as she was wearing the same clothes which her angel wore.She was happy that she was going to stay with her angel.

Both reached the school. Maan took her to her class and asked her to sit there on a seat. She set there but she still was holding his hand. Maan Settled her and was about to left but he could not as Geet tightened her hold on his hand-Angel.. Aap kahaan ja rahe ho?

Maan-Mitthu I m going to my class.

Geet-I too will go with you. Mujhe yahaan akele nahin rahna. Aap ne kaha tha ki hum ek hi school me rahenge.?

Maan-Off course Mitthu hum ek hi school me hain but our classes are different.We sit in the class according to our age.See yahaan sab tumhaare jitney chhote bachche hi hain.No one is of my age.

Geet-par agar mujhe akele darr laga to?

Maan-Main hoon na.If you have any problem tell your teacher.I will meet you in lunch break.We will have our lunch together.One more thing Mitthu -Rona nahin...please. He kissed her cheeks-We all have to study na. The children who cry more are called weak,and My mitthu is strong... hai na...

Geet-Angel I m strong. I will not cry.aap aaoge na mere paas break me.

Maan-Sure mithu.Try to make some friends here.

Geet nodded at this and kissed him.

Maan too pecked her and left,but he himself was feeling heavy in his heart for leaving his doll alone.It was first time that Geet was going to stay alone and he felt his eyes moist. He went to his class but his mind was only with Mitthu. In break time he was going to her class , one of his friend called him-Maan where are you going.aaj lunch nahin karna kya?

Maan -Not today I have some work.He went to Geet's class and found her waiting for himself. He seeked the permission of her class teacher and went near her.

Geet was happy to see him.She lifted her arms asking him to lift her. He smiled and lifted her .She kissed him and said-Angel.I didn't cry. Sab ro rahe the.mera bhi mann kar raha tha rone ka par aapne kaha than a ki rone wale weak hote hain to main nahin roi.

Maan-Good girl. My mitthu is strong.With the permission of her class teacher they had their lunch in geet's class. He helped her to eat her food neatly. Geet's C.T. suggested Maan to leave Geet alone in class as it will help her to come close to her class mates. And Maan agreed to it. He knew it to be come.Now he had a big task in hand to convince Geet for this.

He asked Priya to convince her and she did the same by saying If she didn't want her angel to be scolded by anyone at school because of her then she should stay in her class and should not disturb him in study hours. And she instantly agreed as she didn't want her angel to be scolded by any one.She cared for him as much as he cared for her.

Next day Geet told Man that she will not cry and will have her lunch with her friends.Saying this she kissed him and set in her class. Maan too went from there.But Maan used to go to her class to look her if she was fine or not. But he saw that Geet was perfectly trying to mix with all.

Few days passed like this. Geet was happy now in her class and she shared all her experiences with her angel.

The Almanacs were given to the students. She told Maan while returning home about it. He also told that It was given to him too and told her that he would fill up the required information in her almanac. He took her almanac. In the evening she went to KM. Savitriji was sitting there-Geet come . how are you?

Geet set in her lap-Fine dadi.

Savitriji-How is your school?

Geet-Achchha hai. Dadi red wala halwa khana hai.

Geet loved the carrot halwa made by Savitriji.Maan too liked that a lot.

Savitriji-Why not ?. tum Maan ke paas jaao hum thodi der me laate hain.

Get-Thank U dadi.She gave a hard kiss on dadi's cheek in advance for the halwa and ran to Maan's room.She saw that Maan had already filled the information in her almanac on student profile page. His almanac was too lying there. She held both almanacs in her hands..Maan remembered some work and went to talk to dadi. She opened the both almanacs found everything different except one information. Her eyes stuck there. It was their DOB. She noticed that on both places 20th February was written.her child mind wondered-when everything is different ,why this no. is same.Maan returned to the room,she wanted to ask Maan but Dadi brought halwa for both of them and she forgot everything seeing her favorite dish.

Days were passing like that.Geet forgot about that same no. thing. Once teacher was telling them about their birthday.

Geet asked-What is this?

Teacher took her almanac and opened it.She showed her where the date of birth was written-Geet Date of birth means the day when we celebrate our birthday.

Geet remembered something-But Maam.wo to sabki same same hoti hai.

Teacher-Who told you?

Geet-I saw it in angel's book.unke paas bhi aisi hi book hai na.usme bhi aisa hi no. likha hai yahaan .(Everyone in school knew now that Maan was her angel )

Teacher laughed to hear that innocent soul-No Geet.. It means that your angel too was born on same day.You both have your birthday on the same day.

Geet was confused to hear that. She was a child so didn't remember her last birthday so well.But she was now happy to know that she and her angel shared the same birthday.

While returning from school She wanted to ask Maan but forgot because Maan started to talk to her about her friends and studies and she explained her what she did with her friends.Who is still crying in class or who fell from the chair.and while telling all this she slept in his lap.Maan smiled to see her and petted on her head to make her sleep.

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Geet was such a cute child that everyone always forgot their tension after listening to her talks.Ram Didn't have time during the day but after returning from office he was all engaged with his kids.Geet used to sing the rhymes which she learnt at school. Sometime she wasn't able to pronounce the words correctly and used any random alien word. all laughed to hear that strange word from her mouth.

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Her birthday came again.. Khuranas and Malhotras never celebrated her birthday with pomp and show. It was always a family affair as it was the anniversary too of Vikram and Neha.In the morning they always used to perform puja first for them and after that in the evening birthday was used to be celebrated. They didn't set the ritual of wishing at 12 at night because of that shradh puja.

In the evening Geet was ready to cut the cake but this time something has changed. Geet looked at the decoration on the walls. She found only her name on wall.and on cake too it was written Happy birthday to Mitthu. Geet looked at all.

Ram-Geet kya hua beta .Kya dekh rahi ho.?

Geet-papa iss cake par aur wall par angel ka naam to hai hi nahin.

All were stunned to hear that from her mouth.

Priya-Geet ye kya kah rahi ho?

Geet-Mamma aaj to angel ka bhi birthday hain na to cake bas mere liye hi kyun?

Maan-Mitthu who told you?

Geet-Angel I know it. wo hamaari school wali book hai na jo dono ki same same hai usme dekha maine. Teacher na bataya ki jin ki date same same hoti hai unka birthday bhi same day hota hai.To hum dono ki date same hai to birthday bhi to same hua na.

Maan-Mitthu main apna birthday nahin celebrate karta.

Geet Kyun nahi karte angel?

Maan looked at his dadi.How could they tell her the reason behind that.

Maan-Bas nahin karta.

Geet-To main bhi nahin celebrate karti.aap cake nahin cut karoge to main bhi nahin karungi and she went from there set on a chair crossing her hands on her chest.

Maan-Mitthu aisa nahin karte na.Come on

Geet-Nahin Nahin Nahin

Maan helplessly looked at all. Savitriji was blessing Geet in her heart. May be his grandson is ready to cut the cake today. After all for her he too was a kid. Ram and Priya too wanted the same so they didn't try to convince Geet this time.

Maan -Mitthu meri baat nahin manogi.

Geet-Aap bhi to meri baat nahin maante.Angel please hum dono ka birthday hai na aaj.agar aap nahin manoge to main bhi apna birthday kabhi nahin celebrate karoongi.

Seeing no other option Maan got ready.His Mitthu was more important than any other thing in the world.

Maan-Okey Mitthu I too will cut the cake. All were very happy to hear Maan and geet hugged him .she started to jump with joy.Today she and her angel were going to cut the cake together Elders were feeling their eyes wet to see the kids.Maan took Geet with him and came near the cake.

Geet-Arre pahle angel ka naam to likho.

Ram-Geet wo kiase Karen.cake to market se aaya hai na.

Geet thought for a minute and said -Wait.Main abhi aati hoon she ran from there and returned with some packets of gems

She asked Ram to open them and then she wrote her angel's name on the cake with those gems balls with the help of her parents. Maan was watching them silently .Savitriji had the tears of happiness for her grandson in her eyes. Angel was written successfully on the cake

Geet- Ho gaya. Ansel see it. Cute hai na.

and Maan nodded to her. She held his hand and then both blew the candles and cut the cake together . Then both fed the cake to each other.

Today it was the occasion for double celebration because Maan cut the cake after six years.

Geet-Ab se hum har birthday par ek hi cake cut karenge. Hain na papa. Aap agli baar angel ka naam bhi likhwana cake par.

Savitriji came near Geet and Kissed her with all her love and blessings.-Priya See this doll. May be Maan is angel for her but she is the real angel for all of us. I had lost all the hopes to see Maan celebrating his birthday.but this small soul made it possible for us. May God bless you with all the happiness Geet.

Geet didn't understand a word whatdadi saidAll eyes were full of tears today.

Dadi hugged Maan tightly-Happy birthday Maan. I m so happy today.

Maan too was crying silently remembering his parents. Geet came near him and wiped his tears-Ro kyun rahe ho? Birthday par koi rota hai kya?and she gave numerous packs on his face in effort to make him smile. Finally maan laughed-Mitthu stop it. Gudgudi ho rahi hai and Geet giggled at this.

Ram and Priya too blessed both the kids.It was the best day in the life of family after Vikram and Neha left them.

Precap-Some more incidents and Maan completes his school.


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Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and lovely update👏

Mithu so happy that she is going to school with her angel
maan ki har bath maanthi hai 😊
he said she is a strong girl so she should not cry and when he came to her how sweetly she told him that she wanted to cry but he told not cry isliye nahi roi mai
she remebered maan's birthday and wanted him to celebrate it with her
ab maan tho aapni angel ki bath manni padegi
she wrote his name with gems and they both cutted the cake
loved it
waiitng for next part
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
finally maan celebrates his birhtday😃
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first of all...I'm just loving cute cute photos of cute mitthu...😊
both angel & mitthu care for each other so much...
Geet you r angel of maan's life...
She made him celebrate his birthday...
beautiful written...
loved it...awesome...marvellous...
I love u di...😊
Precap seems interesting..
maan ko abroad mat bhejo...peeejjj...😆
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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haii Reshu ji i am here also
i like childhood stories soo much and this was super cure and sweet story loved it soo much. maaneet cute cute moments woww. maan with his baby doll having great time ahaa even me also loved it soo much.

when neha died me too flet sad you make me cry sach kaho tho but you compensated it with maanneet cute moments
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Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

haii Reshu ji i am here also

i like childhood stories soo much and this was super cure and sweet story loved it soo much. maaneet cute cute moments woww. maan with his baby doll having great time ahaa even me also loved it soo much.

when neha died me too flet sad you make me cry sach kaho tho but you compensated it with maanneet cute moments


Aaj to you are sparkling very brightly pooja ji.
I m blessed to see you. Thank u so much for liking it

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