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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 11 years ago

"After nourishment, shelter and companionship, stories are the thing we need most in the world." - Philip Pullman

I am here on this thread neither with an OS nor with something to share with you all, but to appreciate the stories of a well known author from IPK Forum.

IPK...a show which changed our lives forever! It was the first ever show which actually was able to capture my heart & even after 9 months of its abrupt end, I miss them dammit! Such was the beauty of IPK, the one & only!

After its end, I am quiet sure that many of us were disheartened & enraged. Even now I wish if only IPK had never ended...sigh!

But FF writers like her filled that space which was reserved for ArHi! She has written her stories so well that you can't help but go all aww over them, like I do...still!

Starting her journey as a writer on forum on 1^st august 2012, her fun-filled love tale made us laugh cause of the 'unnamed' relationship between ArHi. Her next tale was blush worthy...the journey of Arnav finding solace in Khushi's arms. She left us all dreamy by writing an ArHi Fairy Tale. Last but never the least, An Apate Affair was like re-watching IPK.. I mean, how can anyone actually write story so well? Not only that, she has written story of all genres which I love! The best thing about the stories was its language which always helped me to picturise the story or in other words it brought ArHi of her stories into life!

Her shots were as sweet as first date, entertaining which also involved Defending Khushi & naming her.

Do I need to mention her name now?

I am not so good with words but an author like her should be appreciated for recreating the ArHi magic through her stories.

Unfortunately, she quit writing on IF after her AAA ended. I hope she changes her mind & posts her shots on IF someday!

This is an appreciation thread for none other than Rasgulla_sp aka Saiyu di!

Wishing you a great future ahead😊

"We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect." - Anas Nin

P.S. Share your experience of reading her stories below.

P.P.S Thanks Vandy di🤗

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES!

Thanks Dee!

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What can I say about Saiyyu...going by the long detailed comments I used to write for her stories I would imagine a lot but words don't come so easily ...or maybe I just don't know the right words that can describe her...ever since she posted her first story from her sister's account ...I was hooked...and how!

I marvelled at her ability to write...her characterisation, her humour, her wit, her concepts...the ease with which she wrote romance ...bringing out the passion and intensity, the suspense she created and sometimes in her stories left us with...the magically world she took us for a journey in to...all amazing ...I often told her that her words were not just words they were visuals ...I could always picture every scene, gesture and emotion as though I was watching and not reading.

I love how she took the best scenes and gave us her interpretation and how cleverly she reversed some scenes and dialogues...always a delight ...

The sensitivity with which she wrote an emotional scene, the boldness of her characters...so well defined and with so much depth...the many genres she excelled at are proofs of what a talented and accomplished writer she is...

Saiyyu has always appreciated and respected her readers and friends which to make her a great person too, every scrap and message merited a response...ever willing to lend a helping hand and go that extra mile...I think it was her stories that made me write volumes as comments and I could always write more. I waited for every updated, spammed and wrote poems too...

I felt such a strong connect and bond with AAA...that to me it's end was like a personal loss...as is the fact that she has stopped writing...all I can hope and pray for is that no matter what...writing or not...she is always happy and smiling...the rest will follow! But for now I am happy I got to read your stories...

Thank you Saiyyu for being you...!

P.S. ~ I loved her dedications and tributes.

P.P.S ~ I loved the A/N as much as I did her stories.

P.P.P.S~ I loved the P.S. 's too.

AAA- My Tribute

It all started as a plan to appease hi beloved Di
To stop her from blackmailing him emotionally
A partner he needed almost immediately
When all of a sudden she walked in, did Khushi..
An excited Akaash calling her Bhabhi
His girlfriend she would play perfectly
And she did with aplomb and full on nautanki

And pretend they did in front of family
Khushi they loved instantly
But were their feelings fake really?
Losing, and giving into destiny...
Forsaking others, giving into jealousy
Feeling the attraction mutually
A story spun so dramatically
Of how a couple they came to be..

Soon she was his fake fiance
Efforts to break up, failing miserably
It seemed almost purposely
A desire with each other to be
Now that was another story...

NK told to address her a Bhabhi
By Arnav possessively
While Khushi set a boundary
For her amused husband to be
Sheetal not to be in the vicinity
The consequences ugly...

But her, he did tease knowingly
Rise to the challenge, she would definitely
How could he not find her sexy?
Their kisses almost like electricity
Dancing with passion toTeri Meri
Mesmerised by her beauty in a saree
Where they dance in perfect symmetry
As her in tears he could not see
When she was stood by a Savita supposedly

His need for her growing tremendously
Although he claimed quite the contrary
Payal was sure, but she wanted some clarity
Although she knew and that was the irony
And one day he would it admit it surely

Shyam of their relationship still weary
Wanted to discover the reality
His plan to catch some disparity
Put his plan to motion on their mehendi

But it all backfire badly
When in Akash 's arms was seen her jiji...
Who in lucknow he would visit secretly
Payal was the one he wanted to marry
But would wait for his bhai and Bhabhi

Tempers flared on both sides equally
Putting their wedding in a jeopardy
The status of which wondered Shyam nervously
NK buying bangles to pacify Khushi
Giving rise to Lavanya's jealousy

Arnav to her house went in fury...
Her tears did appease his heart in a hurry,
So innocent and lovely
NK 's bangles did not fit he said with glee,
A wound on her he could not see

In his pocket a bandage miraculously !
Around her wrist he wrapped gingerly
Claiming them for Ma's kangans possessively
After the wedding she would wear rightfully

Her love to him she admitted spontaneously
Thrilled but scared he ran off nervously
Reaching home he realised her loved her immensely
She had by now erased the incident from her memory

She looked mesmerising as a bride to be
In all her wedding finery
But love they kept denying there to be...
Her declaration of love he wanted desperately
Determined to taste victory
But that was not to be,
Soon they were joined by matrimony
Husband and wife pronounced finally
Amidst the family smiling with glee

A tearful farewell she bade her family
In his arms he had her comfortably
Waiting to be together in privacy
Wondering how he got so lucky
Just then he was jolted out of his reverie

Games over, to their room he went excitedly
A crying Khushi he was worried to see
On their way to her parents in his SUV
Shocked to see them unexpectedly
No cause to be alarmed, he explained gently

Finally she was made to leave by buaji
Who teasingly doubted Arnav's sanity
For not being able to see beyond Khushi,
He loved her, he admitted finally
His love for her he declared openly
Not in a million years did he think it would be to buaji!

Khushi hearing his admission secretly,
Her heartbeats increasing rapidly
Homeward bound finally
The ambience perfect for their unity
But unresolved issues stood glaringly
Leading to another fight stubbornly

Love each other they did wholeheartedly
In their eyes desire burning with intensity
Forgoing pride realising their folly
Their admission come simultaneously
I love you dammit ...sounding like a melody
To be feel each other in a hurry
Joined together not just physically ...
Their souls connecting emotionally
Entwined together on a beautiful journey

The morning after left us in a quandary
Sore and stiff they woke up respectively
After their nocturnal activity
But both in different places surprisingly !
What happened suddenly?
Her Taekwondo pose ..that would be funny?
Remains another unsolved mystery!

Scenes and dialogues used effectively
Some reversed so very brilliantly
Tributes paid so fittingly
Weaved into your story
Made it hilarious and so worthy
It brought back such amazing memories
Of a show that created history!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Really nice thought dear..

I am following her stories since i read and i loved her stories very much..

The way she put her thouts in to Arshi charctores and the love and care and all the drama.

I trully like her stuff very much.👏

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

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I really dont know what can i tell about Saiyu or my journey with her stories !!!

I just read her one shots and two shots when i was a silent reader . One day when i was just browsing fan fictions forum , i saw a completed story and it was AAA !!!

I read the story on the day when the last chapter was posted !! I truly enjoyed reading it and my comment on that was the first comment i have made for her !! I even asked her to forgive me for not voicing my views then 😛 She being a sweet soul readily agreed !!😃

Thats when we started talking and i am happy to say that IF introduced me to a wonderful author and a beautiful person in and out !!😊

But in this short span of time , i enjoy talking with her and getting to know about her perpetual cold 😆 and about her family and her take on various things. She is sweet and loves sweets 😛😉 . Her writings are really funny and hilarious and she has a beautiful knack to recreate the magic of the original scene of the show in her own unique style but at the same time keeping the spark and the sizzling chemistry alive !! ⭐️ She surprised me throughout the entire story of AAA. My guesses always went wrong when i was reading it 😕 But she got me hooked to her and her story 😉.

As its said that time and tide waits for no body , i too missed reading her other works and she too removed her works and stopped writing giving an ultimatum that only reappearance of SaRun together on a show alone can rekindle her writing spirits 😭 I am waiting for her and her stories !! 😳 Hoping for a day when i see a scrap or a PM from her asking me to read one of her works !!😊

I am waiting Saiyu !!! *ASR holi style* 😛😃

Thanks Dee for creating a thread to appreciate her writings and her talent !!😊 She truly deserves it !!

PS: After this , go and read for your exams Dee 😡😈

PPS: This is my 150th post and i am really happy that i made this to share my love for her stories !! 😃

Edited by arshifan91 - 11 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Being her real sister, I have had the privilege to see her write each of her works, read them before anyone else did, get to share my thoughts about her works before anyone could and above all got to read her unplublished works too ;-)

I have seen her writing certain portions smoothly whereas she would struggle with certain scenes just because she wanted them to be perfect. Perfect is what she wanted to write and give. Being very particular about everything, she would go through each update twice on the laptop - once with me and then again herself and then reading it again from her phone after updating it to make sure that there are no typos.

She enjoyed and spent as much time writing her notes as she did writing each update. She loved reading each comment and would excitedly share a few comments with me. Sometimes she would burn the midnight oil to give an update as she had promised.

Being hesitant from sharing her works through my account and then from her own, today I feel proud to have a sister who now has her own index (now removed)

She is one of the few authors who can confidently say that she has left no story incomplete and has entertained her readers always and I am glad that her talent is being appreciated and recognized even after she has left writing on IF *hugs Dee*

Secret 1: Writing humour is very difficult for her. She would whine a lot and would not move her eyes from my face while I read Unnamed and AAA to see how much I smiled/laughed/smirked. Writing An ArHi Fairy Tale was the easiest for her as that is her beloved genre since childhood. She would even make up stories for me when we were young <3

Secret 2: She was always good in writing since school. Both me, her choti, and our oldest sister, our Di, would make her write all our stories, essays, letter, autobiographies, etc in both English and Hindi :-D

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

she is indeed a fantabulous writer..!

I have not read all her works but watevr i have read i can say that she knws how to give life to her characters nd ho to get d readers hooked up to her stories..!

I also wish her to cum back nd write again nd give us d oppurtunity to read some of beautiful stories again..!

DJ,lovely post 👍🏼

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
Being her real sister, I have had the privilige to see her write each of her works, read them before anyone else did, get to share my thoughts about her works before anyone could and above all got to read her unplublished works too ;-)

I have seen her writing certain portions smoothly whereas she would struggle with certain scenes just because she wanted them to be perfect. Perfect is what she wanted to write and give. Being very particular about everything, she would go through each update twice on the laptop - once with me and then again herself and then reading it again from her phone after updating it to make sure that there are no typos.

She enjoyed and spent as much time writing her notes as she did writing each update. She loved reading each comment and would excitedly share a few comments with me. Sometimes she would burn the midnight oil to give an update as she had promised.

Being hesitant from sharing her works through my account and then from her own, today I feel proud to have a sister who now has her own index (now removed)

She is one of the few authors who can confidently say that she has left no story incomplete and has entertained her readers always and I am glad that her talent is being appreciated and recognized even after she has left writing on IF *hugs Dee*

Secret 1: Writing humour is very difficult for her. She would whine a lot and would not move her eyes from my face while I read Unnamed and AAA to see how much I smiled/laughed/smirked. Writing An ArHi Fairy Tale was the easiest for her as that is her beloved genre since childhood. She would even make up stories for me when we were young <3

Secret 2: She was always good in writing since school. Both me, her choti, and our oldest sister, our Di, would make her write all our stories, essays, letter, autobiographies, etc in both English and Hindi :-D

I have no sister dammit😭