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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey all!! Here it is my new OS. As per some requests this one is based on Raghu's jealousy as my first one was on Antara's. Hope you guys like it! lets hope this helps us get through our Jaan free day :(
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Raghu and Antara strolled through the wedding admiring the decoration and getting into little tiffs about the correct name of all the colours. Since they danced together earlier in the evening there was a level of awkwardness between them. They had lost themselves in the moment and had ended up at a close proximity with each other throughout the dance. By the time they came to their senses they were in each other's arms with a room full of people admiring them. Antara was still red from the incident and Raghu could see how uncomfortable she was. So to take away some of the tension he was purposely getting the names of all the colours wrong. Vo red nahi maroon hai Raghu' Antara said agitated at Raghu's lack of knowledge. A re haan jho bhi hai mast to lag ra hai na. Noori Aunty ke shaadi main ye colour to acha hi lage ga' said Raghu very proud of his not so original idea. Appa ke shaadi ke colour main choose karoongi. Tum rehne do'. With that Antara walked off with a little huff as Raghu smirked and followed closely behind her.

They reached the day corner of the house when Raghu began fiddling with his phone as Antara admired the flower arrangements. To her left were a group of young guys politely admiring Antara while she was lost in a sea of flowers. Yaar kitna khoobsurat hai ye. Ja ja kar baat karna usse' said one of the handsomely dressed guys to his even more gorgeous friend. The conversation amongst the boys had caught Raghu's ears. He stood 5 ft away from Antara as he watched the impeccable dressed young man take graceful strides over to her.

Hi' he said with the utmost charm I'm Shahid main America se aya hoon'. Antara turned to face him and was taken aback by how close he was standing to her. Taking a step back she said Hello' with a polite smile she turned to leave when he began speaking. Vo main India pehli baar aya hoon dost ki shaadi main. I was wondering, this may sounds really forward but. You are really beautiful, main aapko dobaara mil sakta hoon?' Antara totally taken aback by his question felt extremely awkward. A million things ran through her head in such a short period of time. One she had never been asked out before. After all that she had been through dating and boys wasn't even on the agenda. Two she never thought an NRI would ask her out she quickly racked her brains thinking what they would have in common and what this guy's real intention were. The final thought in her head however shocked her to her very core. She felt like telling this person "sorry im taken". This alien thought was accompanied by a quick glance to Raghu. She gave herself a mental slap after realising this guy was still waiting for an answer to her question.

Raghu at this point felt his entire body flame up. All he wanted to do was rip this man from limb to limb. Beautiful? How dare he admire her like that, how dare he want to ask her out. HOW DARE he! His thoughts screamed in his head, his muscles tensed up, his hand rolled into a heavy fist while his teeth clenched so tight he thought they would fall out of his mouth. They was some part of him that knew he was over reacting but he didnt have any control over his body.

Before Antara gave her answer Raghu bolted towards the pair and grabbed Antara's arm and left. Poor Shahid stood there without a response or a girl. His friends giggling in the back lagta hai vo taken hai bhai' the crowd erupted with laughter.

Raghu had a strong hold on Antara's hand. Raghu yeh kya kar rahe ho chodo muhje... aaa...a Raghu dard ho raha hai muhje'. Raghu with a furious look on his face grabbed his phone and called mach mach. Eh MM ghadi nikal ABHI!' Raghu dragged Antara to the jeep finding Aaji and MM already settled inside. Chintu kya hua? Antara tere haath teek na?' Asked aaji after watching Antara rub her wrists. Raghu said nothing and sat down in the front signalling MM to drive home. After a short silent drive they arrived home. Raghu told MM and aaji to leave and got off at Antara's place. As the jeep drove away his angry gaze turned to Antara who was still shocked and rubbing her wrist. Yeh tumhe kya ho gaya tha Raghu itni zoor se tumne aaj tak nahi pakdi muhje. Pata hai kitna dard ho ra hai!'

Aur jo muhje ho raha hai vo!' Raghu said with a loud scream! Realising he was standing outside her house he decided to take her to Kalyan Mandap. He was about to grab her hand again when he realised she was still hurt, so with one swift move he picked her up and began moving towards KM. Antara protested and much as she could but his grip on her tightened. Once he reached he swung her inside the empty room and shut the door. Antara became nervous as his face was still full of rage. m muhje yiha kyun layo ho' she said nervously. The room was dark but a candle was still burning from some earlier event. Raghu's face was intense as he took long strides towards Antara. She decided for once she wasn't going to move back. She was shocked at the audacity of Raghu's behaviour towards her. Raghu reached her, his face still intense. He closed in on her making her realised that if she didn't move back their lips would touch. Antara began the dance and moved back. She finally hit a wall she knew was waiting for her. She stared into Raghu's eyes. She couldn't make out what was going on in his head. Raghu continued to close in on her and finally caged her against the wall. Kya hua tereko? Ghussa a ra hai ki apun tereko vo America wale se baat nahi karna diya? Shaadi karni thi?'

Antara was completely taken aback by his question. THIS is the reason he rushed out of there? This is the reason he bought me to KM? Why does he care?

Tumhe isse kya farak pardta hai Raghu? Hum waha shaadi dekhna gaya the aur tumne iss wajeh se Pagal ho kya?'

Antara was slightly angry and tried pushing on his chest to get free. Raghu who did not break eye contact with her grabbed her hands and pinned them to the wall. Haan pagal hoon main.' Antara not knowing how to react continues staring into his eyes. The heat between them was getting more intense with every passing second. All they could hear was each other breathing heavily. Raghu suddenly pulled her into his arms. Antara collided with his strong form and her chin finally found a resting place on his shoulder. She tried to break free but Raghu's hold on her tightened. Raghu's hands slowly began travelling up her waist slowly caressing the material of her suit as he went. Antara became lost in the sensation that his hands were creating on her back until finally they reached her back skin. Her breath hitched at his touch. He seductively travelled on her bare skin reaching the line of her suit. He grabbed two pieced of dori that had come undone and bought them closer together. Antara snapped out of her trance and realised what Raghu was trying to do. She felt a huge disappointment on realising Raghu's goal and then immediately was astonished at her thought. They both reluctantly parted ways however Raghu's gaze was still piercing straight through her.

Pehle nahi bata sakte the. Itna drama karna zaroori tha?' Antara said slightly miffed that he drove her crazy only to disappoint. Haan to tereko kya laga, main yiha tere saath romance karne ke liya laya'. Antara's eyes widened and a slight blush crept onto her face. "how does he read my mind" she thought. N nahi.. vo.. main chalti hoon' As she turned to walk he started to speak. Vo America wala socha ki apun tere vo.. b... kya bolte hai... haan boyfriend hai'. Antara turned around. Kya pagal hai kya vo.. tu aur mere bf chi kabhie nahi'.

Eh Eh kya boli tu! Chi? Aur main? Vo tere America ki passport se to acha hoon'

Pagal ho? Use dehka? Kitna handsome tha, kya sherwani pehni thi, kya awaaz tha, kya style tha, haye mar gayi thi' Antara said swooning around the room enjoying the affect this had on Raghu. Raghu began to feel his anger rise again. Within a second he grabbed Antara spun her around, pinning her to the wall and slammed his lips onto her. He kissed her passionately, intensely and rough at first but then settling into a slow and tender kiss. Antara felt overwhelmed. Deep inside she knew this was the outcome she wanted from her teasing and she thoroughly every moment. After what seemed like an eternity they finally parted for air. Breathing heavily Raghu gazed into her eyes. Kya vo tereko iss tara pyar kar payega?' Antara smiled and shook her head ever so slowly before noticing a smirking Raghu was descending for another kiss...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... awesome OS.. 👏👏👏 😃
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WOW! That was awesome! ☺️
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I would love to see this 😃excellent
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Hnmmm great OS!!!
The situation was used perfectly!!!
Kalyan mandap was amazing!!!
All over a great post!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Hnmmm great OS!!!
The situation was used perfectly!!!
Kalyan mandap was amazing!!!
All over a great post!!


Awesome feedback tnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayye.. it was sooo awww.. 😳 ...jealous raghu!!! wow...!!! aftr so many days i felt butterflies in my stomach...actualy not only stomach,my heart,my mind my whole body.. 😉 ...keep writng more...jealousy.par ek aur os bhi chalega...n nxt tym plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was wonderful!
I like how Antara is so naughty 😉
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WOW CUTIE! WHAT AN AMAZING STORY! JUST LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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upar wale ne kya mind diya h... kaise nikalti ho atni achhi2 baatein👏

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