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Posted: 12 years ago
So sandy has come up with another set of questions to get me into trouble πŸ˜† My answers are in Violet πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: Sandy_BS

Since my favorite FF is ending, I'm back with my questionnaire...πŸ˜‰

So, Ready, steady, Po...

~Ummm... so how did u get this idea of writing a story fully about babies instead of writing a romantic one which the whole forum goes mad of?

After my SS- His Crazy Pregnant Wife i had this thought of continuing the journey of the babies as a sequel.Initially i had planned to write it only as an SS with max 10-12 parts.But then i started loving the story line myself and the encouragement from the readers made me to continue it further πŸ€—


~What was your reaction when you were getting a good response for the FF?

It was very surprising.I never expected a story about babies will receive such a good response.Like you mentioned, the forum is flooded with story of Arshi in every form.But this is the only story that gave more screen space to Arshi kids than Arshi.I was very apprehensive about the response at first.But my readers surprised me and from then on they never disappointed me in their encouragement.

~Who encouraged you the most in writing this FF?

Every reader who read on commented on this FF.The comments are my encouragement which gave me the courage to continue and kept me going with new concepts in every update.

~From crawling, crying, speaking, walking, running...How much these babies trouble you?πŸ˜‰ I know this is totally an imaginary FF...but still I need an answer..

They are real sweet hearts ❀️ !! Like the readers, even i cant get enough of my Aloo and Puri.It was as if they are real for me and am there in their every activity.Sometimes it got tough to imagine some baby scenarios but somehow i managed.I also got several ideas from You , Pari and DQ πŸ€— i really wanna thank u guys for helping out when i got blanked out for ideas.


~How was the one year journey with these babies?

It was a complete jolly adventure and i enjoyed every bit of it πŸ₯³!! They always made my smile 😊 whenever i write about them.They were also my stress busters.Thinking and writing about them always made me relaxed and happy.I cant believe its been more than a year now 😳

~ Do you like babies in real life?

Of course i do !!! I just love and adore them ❀️ They are so special and sweet.After writing BOB i just wish to have twins πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ and my training bhi ho gaya while writing the FF !! And i now know how to handle babies and take care of them 😳

~Have you ever had any fantasy with these babies?

Oh yeah every time i wrote a cute incident i wished they are actually with me in real Just cant get enough of them !

~"Babies on Board"- according to you?

Very close to heart ❀️ and personally my favourite FF among all my works.This is my Baby 😳 ! This FF also established me as a good writer and the response for BOB never ceased to amaze me every time ! πŸ˜ƒ

~If given a chance to live with these babies for a day, what will you do?*I'll directly go and meet their DadπŸ˜‰*

🀣 Of course you will hit on the daddy ! You are besharam 😑 !!

Well coming to your question, i guess almost all the readers at one point wished they could get their hands on them for real 😳 I read many of the comments like that.And yes i would love to cuddle and kiss them ! I just love them ❀️

~When it comes to BOB.. I know a reader of yours who totally loves this FF.. And BOB can't be complete without her...The girl is Meetu... *you know, I like her scolding u.. and how u hide and roam offline coz of her🀣* I know you were also scared of herπŸ˜†...So, share your experience u had with her... *No offence meetu.. I genuinely like u.. 😊*

Oh my gosh
🀣 !! You love getting me into trouble dont you ? πŸ˜•

Well ya Meetu πŸ˜† .She is the only reader wholove scolding me every time i delay an update.And its also true am scared of her whenever i delay the update for long πŸ˜† ive told this to her too..But even though she posts i hate you with an angry face 😑 , she is such a sweet heart ❀️ and never failed to comment and appreciate an update.

~Any other readers you would like to mention?

I cant really pick out as all of them are indeed special.If not for them BOB wouldnt have come this long with so many threads !! Love you all
❀️

~Favorite Critic?

Not really ! When it comes to BOB all the comments were sweet and encouraging πŸ˜ƒ



~Any funny incidents that happened while writing this FF? *I know your "Mistake(s) of Century"πŸ˜†*

πŸ˜† Ya many i remember that mistake of century where i had written by mistake, Arush hugged and kissed Khushi's neck 🀣

And that Arush ne kaata upd made be go all blushy blushy ☺️


Will add more questions when I remember...


πŸ€— Thank you so much for the lovely questions enjoyed answering them !
Edited by crazyyfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d epilogue
will miss tis story a lot 😭
but all good things must come to an end 😊
I really enjoyed reading d story πŸ˜ƒ
Yay am first πŸ₯³
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago
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Edited by vijiasr08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Babies on Board...a Sequel to His crazy pregnant wife!!!

When I started reading BOB I know you as an IF writer only...
I got so addicted to BOB that I read the whole prequel in one go...

You remember pushpee one day you asked me why none of mine comments were there in MCPW...

Its because I read BOB first then read the prequel...and believe me that was one of the finest FF on pregnant Khushi!!!

Later we came to know each other and my first expression for you was "Hailaa she is so friendly".
Duffer udhna bandh kar now EARTH pushpee..

But really you are one of the finest writer of India Forum and I am glad that I met you here.

Now we all know that BOB is your baby... You love BOB more than us...

I can very well understand what you must be feeling now ...
But you know nah all good things always come to an end!!!
You should be happy that BOB
completed 9 threads and 59 chapters ( including the epilogue)...

Big bear hugs on the successful completion of BOB!!!

Now coming back to the epilogue...
Lemme first tell you the things i liked the most...

1) You took a leap for one and half years inspite of taking a long 20 years.

2)You gave us the pics of our grown aloo and puri.

3)You ended the story with Rakhi celebration not marriage of aloo or puri.

4) You very well showed the bond shared by Dia-Nk and arush-arushi.

5) The little ASR was a treat to read.

6) Arush's " Haat the" and "Aman ichan to me aamit.i aant ile now " was cheery on the top.

7) We can see the little ASR and little sankadevi..kudos to you!!!

8) The bond between Arush and Arushi was fab... True Raizada bond!!!

9) Dia's pregnancy was quite certain and expected but Khushi's pregnancy came as a surprise.

10) "Agar beta hai toh Jalebi bai aur agar beti hai toh Rasagulla Rani "... This line cracked me up!!!

11) The end
"he is happy and looking forward to the baby he is also scared to go through another bout of his crazy pregnant wife's antics" was awesome!!!

12)Beautiful end, awesome plot, beautifully written... wooo you left me speechless Damn-it!!!


We Will Miss "Babies On Board" and our own " Aloo and Puri"!!!
A small gift from my side ( you know nah I am not that much good in making edits...so accept it as you dont have any other option other than accepting it)...





BOB ROCKS!!!!!

Sandy's comment...

Originally posted by: Sandy_BS

It all started with "Babies on Board!"

Yes..for me It all started with BOB.. and it is d first FF of urs which I have ever read...

And yeah... The short form calling of BOB started wid me.. Thanks to my laziness!!

I still remember how La Di added an extra O and fooled me. And blah blah❀️

You know... you both fooled an innocent...

Never mind... I'll continue my story...

So.. where was I?

Umm...I just clicked d link thinking what d story might be...

But after reading d very first chapter... BOB was an addiction..

I read all 8 chapters at a go... and decided to send a buddy request to u...and what followed that remains a history!!!

How nostalgic!

This FF is such a masterpiece which has totally envisioned exactly how Arnav and Khushi would have been after 2 years if they had twins...

If 'The Dirty Picture' says that the film runs for entertainment, entertainment and entertainment..

For me, The Babies On Board!' ran and still runs for babies, babies and babies..

Awww... the babies..

Arush and Arushi...no Aloo and Puri...

Whatever the names are, they are very cute...

Sometimes I feel like squeezing and kissing these two kids..

And Ranju's banner added more love and beauty to d imaginated babies in mind..

How much I love this banner!! Aww..

Arushi...

The Dad's princess...

I just love her a lot.. She is exactly like her mom...

the naughtiness, super-active-bubbly-chirpy girl...

How she goes and breaks the nail paints of mamiji

But who dares to deal with this Jr. Lady ASR?

Arush..

Mumma's raja beta...

The xerox copy of his father... who is less active compared to his sister..

but never leaves any chance when it comes to breaking...

whether it may be his dad's mobile or any valuable product..

And not to forget.. troubling his NK chachu along with his sister and cousins...

But Lately he got more attached to Dia... Aww.. Naughty boy...

These two babies have stolen hundreds of hearts... I treasure this story a lot and I do feel it very real while reading...

My big kisses and hugs to them..

All the credits goes to your writing..

A huge applause for that..πŸ‘


Edited by aNkItA.C - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
well i will nly say dat i have started reading BOB wen it had already croseed some 30 chapters..!

U remember one day we were talking on GS nd i asked u abt ur index so dat i can read ur stories nd wit dat i started reading all ur stories nd wen i started reading BOB i simply got stuck to it..!

Its sooo sweet,sooo innocent nd yet sooo beautiful dat i actually completed those 30 chapters in a go nd aft reading them i simply fall in love wit dis story..!

Wit days passing by i actually got totally hooked up wit this story like i used to wait wen u will update dis story nd a mere thought of ending of BOB actually broke my heart evrytym but wit ur point keeping in mind i knw it dat it will end one day nd true that if we actually stretch it witout d plot d story would have lost its essence nd i can never want dat to happen..!

BOB is truly one hell beautiful story wit give us a detailed view of arnav nd khushi going through d phase of parenthood nd how a life can b blissful wit such cute nd naughty babies who alwaz r ready to make u thnk how lucky u r to get those angels in ur life..!

I truly want to thnk u from d bottom of my heart for writing such a beautiful story nd giving us an oppurtunity to read it nd to enjoy it..! πŸ€—

now cuming to d epilouge -

oh its beautiful nd wat actually made it more beatiful is dat u took a leap of one nd a half year rather dan taking a 20 years leap nd in dis i totally support anku..!

Its perfct coz u have not ruined d essence of d story showing arush nd arushi grown up coz this story is abt them nd their childhood nd untill last u have totally done justice wit d plot..!

I loved it how u have shown a grown up version of arush nd arushi going to school nd i indeed love it how u have shown arush copying arnav..!

As we say that kids alwaz learn from their parents nd here also there is no difference nd his "haat d" nd "aman ichan to me aamit..i aant ile now" was simply perfct or should i say adorable..!

We can see d glimpse of arnav singh raizada in his son..!

Wat i love is u ended d story wit raksha bandhan showing d bond of arush nd arushi nd d scene where arush gave arushi d gift seeing tears in his sister's eyes proved how much beautiful their bond is..!

The raizada family is going to witness another anji-arnav bond wit arush nd arushi..!

I love it how u have shown dia nd NK's bond wit arush nd arushi nd also u have shown dia preggy making the whole story nd family complt..!

But i love d most where u made khushi faint nd its understndable dat she is preggy nd d way u have written arnav's reaction wit dis news was beautiful..!

He is a chngedman now who is thoroughly enjoying parenthood nd is all set to welcum another baby wit his crazy wife who has made his life living heaven wit her love,support nd care..!

Nd d last but not d least khushi's planning abt naming d baby,wow its awsum actually..!

Nd finally now cuming to arnav's happiness getting to knw dat he is going to dad for d third tym technically nd instantly his thought to deal wit his crazy wife again during her pregnancy was beautiful..! But still he is happy to get through dis whole phase wit his wife by his side as he knws life cannot b more beautiful dan dis..! Actually it was perfct..!

Khushi's pregnancy was unexpected actually but its d best part wit arnav all happy to b a father again..! ❀️

phewww kudoos to u aartu πŸ‘

anku has already said it but i also wanna say d same dat u left me speechless actually wit dis beautiful nd perfct epilouge..!

Will miss BOB nd our sweethearts aloo nd puri but as we say evry good thng should cum to an end but it will stay in our hearts as one of d beautiful memories forever..!

A big hug to u aartu nd even if i dnt say this u already knw it by now dat i love u πŸ€—

keep rocking nd we wil alwaz b here wit u to eat up ur head ❀️
Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago
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It all started with "Babies on Board!"

Yes..for me It all started with BOB.. and it is d first FF of urs which I have ever read...

And yeah... The short form calling of BOB started wid me.. Thanks to my laziness!!

I still remember how La Di added an extra O and fooled me. And blah blah❀️

You know... you both fooled an innocent...

Never mind... I'll continue my story...

So.. where was I?

Umm...I just clicked d link thinking what d story might be...

But after reading d very first chapter... BOB was an addiction..

I read all 8 chapters at a go... and decided to send a buddy request to u...and what followed that remains a history!!!

How nostalgic!

This FF is such a masterpiece which has totally envisioned exactly how Arnav and Khushi would have been after 2 years if they had twins...

If 'The Dirty Picture' says that the film runs for entertainment, entertainment and entertainment..

For me, The Babies On Board!' ran and still runs for babies, babies and babies..

Awww... the babies..

Arush and Arushi...no Aloo and Puri...

Whatever the names are, they are very cute...

Sometimes I feel like squeezing and kissing these two kids..

And Ranju's banner added more love and beauty to d imaginated babies in mind..

How much I love this banner!! Aww..

Arushi...

The Dad's princess...

I just love her a lot.. She is exactly like her mom...

the naughtiness, super-active-bubbly-chirpy girl...

How she goes and breaks the nail paints of mamiji

But who dares to deal with this Jr. Lady ASR?

Arush..

Mumma's raja beta...

The xerox copy of his father... who is less active compared to his sister..

but never leaves any chance when it comes to breaking...

whether it may be his dad's mobile or any valuable product..

And not to forget.. troubling his NK chachu along with his sister and cousins...

But Lately he got more attached to Dia... Aww.. Naughty boy...

These two babies have stolen hundreds of hearts... I treasure this story a lot and I do feel it very real while reading...

My big kisses and hugs to them..

All the credits goes to your writing..

A huge applause for that..πŸ‘

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Priya... not fairwa...
how u came first :(
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I'm very angry with u crazyyfan...
hate u
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Stil; could nt be;iev that this has come to end di😭 😭 😭 😭
but this is the best epilogue fr BOBπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
nothng wud have been more perfect than the rakki day to show the bond of younger generationπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Aloo n puri look cute😳 😳 😳
OMg the antics of jr.ASR was so sweeytπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
haat the🀣???? hayee how sweeeyyytπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
He is alo torturing poor amanjiπŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
puri is crazy on ladoo taking up her momπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
nk n dia relationship with kidos was truly nice⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
they are gonna add their own jr's to the batalion of jr.raizada's😳😳 😳😳
wow 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
n Arshi again gona be parents😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
ofcourse y nt with besharam arnav around khushi this is prone to happenπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
once more BOB fr arshiπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
crazy rani khushiπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
jalebi bai n rasagulla😳 😳 😳 😳
really she is such a m,aster pice di⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
Am gonna miss this so much badly😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago

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