ArHi- Zindagi Gulzar Hai|Chap14 on Pg61- 22/9 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
cool update but i want this story to move on i mean i wanted to see changes in arshi particularly!!
Cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was awesome

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
both r missing something in their life maybe they can fulfill that void



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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god
jeez when will these two quit bickering like little kids arguing over one toy n start to open up to one another
am i bad to find khushi funny when she was telling Arnav to continue
one whole yr to get their act together
gotta feeling when they do finally admit liking each other it will be in form of arguing with a slip of the tongue
looking forward to more teasing n tormenting
but hoping also to see some wavering in their stance towards hating each other
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani

wowww first to comment

beautiful update


Thankyou So Much!

Originally posted by: naina1716

Loved it...
Awesome update

Thanks!


Thankyou!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Nice update

Both arnav and Khushi fought like kids. Did arnav went in dargah because Khushi went in their? I hope at the end of their academic year they will become friends.
The story is getting interesting
Update soon


Thankyou! and No, he didn't go because of Khushi. And I Hope I could make it up to your expectations!

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

Loved d update

beautifully written
Thanx for pm


Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: archa2810

they behave like kids n their ego never lets them open up around each other

i feel sorry for arnav... sheetal does not know anything about her son

khushi is crazyy... really!!


Oh Yes.. this Khushi is Crazy, but doesn't want to show that Craziness at this stage! & I totally Agree with you! :)

Originally posted by: sri91

lovely update...
So both arhi comes to cliff from their age of 8..
Both went to dargah...
Wat happns next??
Cont soon..
Waitin..


Check the new update to know more & Thankyou! =)

Originally posted by: deepa.e

cool update but i want this story to move on i mean i wanted to see changes inarshi particularly!!

Cont soon :)


Thankyou for sharing your opinion! :) Well.. Yeah! Even I think I should bring the Changes now but Still.. there are things which needs to be shown in this story and For sure and Soon the Story is Gonna Gear Up! Stay Tuned! šŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

oh my god

jeez when will these two quit bickering like little kids arguing over one toy n start to open up to one another
am i bad to find khushi funny when she was telling Arnav to continue
one whole yr to get their act together
gotta feeling when they do finally admit liking each other it will be in form of arguing with a slip of the tongue
looking forward to more teasing n tormenting
but hoping also to see some wavering in their stance towards hating each other
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon


Thankyou So Much! & Lol.. No I really tried to make her sound funny after all She is Khushi, You know what I mean.. Khushi Kumari Gupta!šŸ˜‰ & Lets see what happens next! Because we never know!😳
Edited by -RabbaVe- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*AUDIO AHEAD!*
Note- A very BIG THANKS to HK90 for the Audio! She's a sweetheart! =)

-Chapter 13-

Arnav stands at the entrance of Dargah, Taking in the view ahead of him which was very simply decorated with flowers and all with Small shops and a far away's view of the beautiful architecture of a Building Which was Actually the Dargah. while on the other hand Khushi Looks ahead and Adjusts her Duppata on her head and Moves in.


There were many people around.. Holding their Hands up for Prayers, Some Talking to others and Some carrying away the Precious Veil yet the place was So calm and Soothing. And a Rhythmic Voice of Kafi (a Sufi poetry kind) could be heard.


Arnav quietly moved in Copying the people who were performing the necessities. Khushi bought the Chaddar and Flowers lost in her thoughts and Moved In Dargah, where the place dark yet the Natural light from outside was peeping in through the very well carved and ancient walls.


Khushi passed the Basket to the man standing on a side of the tomb and Bowed a very little and Went away to tie the lock on the wall. Arnav came in and gave the basket that contained the Chaddar and Flowers to the Same man and Bowed Down before leaving to tie the lock.


Khushi tied the thread with the lock and so did Arnav, but Neither of them recognised eachother's presence because of the wall in between them and went back to Pray. Khushi Sighed, Joing her hands together to pray,


"I Don't know If I would get anything that Pray for.. Because I can no more wait like a little girl of Six years for her wish to come true when she wakes up the next day but Still if You, the God has to listen to me than Please Show me the Sign that can vanish the sorrows that I have in my Heart, Which are not ready to part away from me since my childhood. A Single Sign? But.. Oh No! that can never happen right? Happiness for the Already happy people and Difficulties for the already miserable ones. That's Life!" She open her eyes and Got up to leave.


Arnav silently looked up at te ceiling not knowing how to Make That God listen to him thought he didn't need to but this case is a serious dude!,


"Look" he said aloud making the people near him turn towards him and soon slowed down his volume, "I've got everything! and I don't Think so I have to ask for anything as I can easily get it out there, but You know what Only One thing That you have created has made my Life a Tornado! Yeah! That Witch-iee-Witch! First, Why did you even Created Her?! Second, Why did you sent her in my life?! and Third, You bet.. I'll Win!" He winked looking up and Left.


Both came out and Were leaving When Khushi's Duppata Dropped from her Head to her neck and almost strangled her So She turned around to see the cause and Saw Arnav standing there With his one hand covering his face with a cute look, "Cut that", She mentally scolded herself at the thought.


"YOU!" Khushi began shouting at him in anger when he pointed towards his hand.


Her Duppata was Stuck in his Watch. He gave her a sheepish grin receiving a deathly glare in return and She came near him to get rid of him She Shuddered and Streched his Hand towards her and She made sure that she didn't touch his hand and tried all her might, but Couldn't undo that.


"Mein ne already try Kiya tha!" [I already tried!], he told her. but Seeing her getting ready burst again in anger He offered, "I'll do it.. again!"


Arnav tried smoothly but at last pulled it out tearing a bit of her duppata and smirked.


"Why do keep crossing my way?" Khushi frowned seeing her Dress.


"hey! Wit-" he paused to realise what he was gonna say and resumed, "Whatever! i don't do that intentionally and Its not your home.. Its a public place for your kind information!."


"Oh As If I don't know!"


"Exactly!"


"What the hell.. "


"Wrong.. Its World!"


She looked up at him and glared again, "Cant you shut up?!"


"I'll once you do.. You know, ladies First!" he said.


"Malik!"


"Gupta!"


"What-"


"The!" he completed her sentence in his way.


"What do you think of-" She shouted at him but he interrupted.


"You? Um.. You're Ok. Not as Beautiful as Others. Erm.. Good in Studies and-" that was it Khushi cut him of and Spoke,


"I didn't ask you about me!" She gritted her teeth in anger While Arnav grinned seeing her.


"I Don't want to see your face!" She said and stomped her foot Turing to leave.


"Neither Do I!" he screamed making sure she heard him and chuckled seeing her irritation. but Soon Hit his fist on the other palm realising what he did.


"damnit!"



As Soon as Arnav Entered he saw Abhaas talking to his dad.


"hello Sir!" he greeted.


"You can call me Uncle here.. You know." Abhaas said.


"really? I thought I was banned to call you uncle ever again!" Arnav said sulking down on the Sofa next to his dad.


"look at him!" Abhaas lamented gesturing towards Arnav, "He'll keep joking around While Khushi would take away the label of the topper of the year!"


"No ways Uncle!" Arnav Spoke Confidently.


"Whatever happens.. I support my Son!" Aarav's words depicted his proud as he patted Arnav's shoulders lovingly and Arnav just stared at him.

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Sneak peak of Upcoming Chaps- Changes
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*REPLIED TO FEW COMMENTS ABOVE*
Hello lovelies!😃 Thanks a tons! for such response.. =] Love You Guys! You never fail to give a huge smile on my face, No matter What! & I hope You'll continue Showering Likes and Comments the same way😳
P.s- I love Dargah Scene of Ipkknd.. So Inspired from there! and I hope it was up to you all's expectations! =]
Love.. -KRā¤ļø
Edited by -RabbaVe- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update
tat was awesome
can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
Cute fight btwn arhi...
Wat is next???
Continue soon..
Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme thnx 4 pm


i loved the update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cat and mouse fight between arshi...

Awesome up dat)..

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