Arhi FF: I found My SUN (updt 26-3) CHAPPY

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice attempt dear...

loved it...

continue soon...

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ReneeRV

You know Pallavi you are so cute...
Thank you alot, will try to put a nice piece in it, but you know it will be with alot of flaws, becuase i am using third person in it, like marrating the story as well as trying to narrate the character views with their own words,and thought and third person view too, so it is like sometimes i will mix all the view together, as you will read the next Chappy you will understand it.. But i will try it, as i tried in chappy Below.. Please be with me to support my flaws..
Thank you..😊😊
And it's papa who is planning o his son's.. and ofcourse believe me, baby is on his way.. 😉😉
with alots of complication and drama... 😃😃

Awww :D Cant wait to read moreee :D Oops its Papa!:P now im off to reading it :))

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome Start!
Whoa *Sparks* first meeting!:D
Madhumati going on their honeymoon :P Aww it feels good if romance and love continue to flourish over the years!:D
Loved the update :D
Ty for pm :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful starting 👏 loved Khushi's entry and like dis Madhumati. Hahaha 35th honeymoon, even I can't believe in dis old age she and her husband is in lovely dovely mood to enjoy themselves 😆, wonder wat would they hve happened when they were young couples.

Update soon, want to know Arnav's POV wat he felt when he saw Khushi and did he also had electric current run through his spine or not.

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 06Pallavi_Arshi
Awesome Start!
Whoa *Sparks* first meeting!:D
Madhumati going on their honeymoon :P Aww it feels good if romance and love continue to flourish over the years!:D
Loved the update :D
Ty for pm :)

yeah gal, this is just for love, Little complication, just due to ego and insecurities, nothing else.. Hope you will enjoy it throughout...😉😉

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: saj111
Beautiful starting 👏 loved Khushi's entry and like dis Madhumati. Hahaha 35th honeymoon, even I can't believe in dis old age she and her husband is in lovely dovely mood to enjoy themselves 😆, wonder wat would they hve happened when they were young couples.

Update soon, want to know Arnav's POV wat he felt when he saw Khushi and did he also had electric current run through his spine or not.

Dear soon you will see how the young couples wil love eachother in every sense, so they will too enjoy their 35th honeymoon trip.. every year a trip to remember their honeymoon, or more of it.. 😉😉

Yeah soon you will get Arnav POV too.. as he is also the part right.. everyone have its point of view in it, and my point of vieew to the surrounding like background, you will read.. Little complicated but i hope i will justify This Piece of Mine..

RV..