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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 30

Ayaan: Watch me!

Asad came running towards Ayaan to stop him.

BOOM

The gun had been shot causing blood to splatter. Asad looked down to himself. He was fine. If it wasn't his blood, then who was it?

He raised his eyes to look in front. His eyes had seen his biggest fear. Zoya had been shot. Zoya had her eyes closed as she held her stomach. Blood oozed out of her as she fell to her knee's. Ayaan had dropped the gun in shock of what he had just done.

Asad: ZOYA!

He ran towards her and bent down to help her.

Asad: Zoya! Zoya! Stay strong! Don't worry, everything will be fine! Just don't give up.

Zoya didn't have the energy to say anything. Ayaan quickly turned around and made his way out.

Asad: Oh no you don't!

He swiftly picked up the gun and ran behind him. He chased him all the way out of the building on to the street.

Asad: Ayaan! This is the end of you.

*BOOOM*

Asad his shot the gun right in the leg causing Ayaan to fall down on his face.

He ran towards him and turned him around to hold his neck.

Asad: I would have shot you in the head if I didn't think of your mother, father and most importantly your sisters! Don't think I'm leaving you though! You deserve to spend the rest of your life in jail.

All of a sudden 2 police cars had pulled up to the hotel enterance. Quickly getting out, they joined Asad and Ayaan to the scene.

Police man: Asad, thank you for calling us. We can take it from here! please go to the officer standing beside our car and give them the full details of what happened.

Asad slowly got up and moved away from the Ayaan. He gave him a disgusted look and walked to the officer.

After several minutes, Asad had completed his explanation on what had happened.

Police office #2: Asad, this all does make sense but where is the victim, Zoya?

Asad: Oh she's-

He stopped. She was still in the building, alone, dying.

Asad: SHE'S STILL INSIDE!

Police office #2: WHAT?!

They quickly ran inside the hotel making it to where Asad had left Zoya.

Asad was shocked at what he saw.

She was gone. No where around to be found.

A message had been written with zoya's blood on the floor.

"YOU THINK THIS WILL END SO FAST? YOU WHERE WRONG. ZOYA IS NOW WITH ME. ONLY TIME WILL TELL YOU WHAT YOU CAN DO NEXT."

Asad fell to his knees.

ASAD: ZOYAAA!!!!



And that was the final part guys!

I want to make a season 2 of this because I do have some good ideas. Please do tell me if I should!

Comment and thanks for waiting sooo long!!!

-Kawal!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally!!!!! Have been waiting for this update since May!!
What was that...5 months ago!! 😲



Anyways the update was awesome!!

But sooo short!!
Dont u think we deserve a little more? 😆 (After all, we waited sooo long!)

Ayaan 😡 hate him (but love him in the show ❤️)

Hope Asad finds Zoya!!

You should totally write a Season 2!!

Thanks for the pm!

Edited by iLuvYellow - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iLuvYellow

Finally!!!!! Have been waiting for this update since May!!

What was that...5 months ago!! 😲



Anyways the update was awesome!!

But sooo short!!
Dont u think we deserve a little more? 😆 (After all, we waited sooo long!)

Ayaan 😡 hate him (but love him in the show ❤️)

Hope Asad finds Zoya!!

You should totally write a Season 2!!

Thanks for the pm!

Omg thank you!
AND YES YOU DO ALL DESERVE MORE!
Thanks why I ended it in a way so that i can make a season 2!
I have the 1st part of that pretty much done, so now I just wait to see how many people do want to actually read my bakwaas 😆
anyways thanks again 😃

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