Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Shamz, why this suspense lol, waiting for next part now!

Quote

Shammu

@Shemmo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Chapter 12

Shemmo starts with "Naan ungala...". Tanu stops him and asks to be silent. He notices that she is listening to someones conversation. Two nurses are talking about Autumns that her sister is arranging marriage for her nu. One nurse says "Nejama va di? Aiyoo paavam di ava. Ava uyirukku uyira ava colony la irukura oru paiyan ah love panrale". Second nurse says "Aama athaan epdi veedla solrathunu confused ah iruka". 😕 Tanu and Shemmo are shocked. Tanu is thinking who could that be nu. Shemmo in mindvoice "Colony la enna vitta azhagana boy ye illa, aiyoo oruvelai enna love pannurangaloo? Chaa chaaa". 😆 First nurse asks the other one who she is loving nu. She says that she didnt know his name. Shemmos coffee arrives. Both drinks fast and leaves the place. While leaving Shemmo thinks "Ada ennada ithu, yen love ah sollavantha vera oruthanga oda love matter velila vanthiduchu. Naan eppo love solli settle avurathu?". 🤣

On the way to home Tanu tells to Shemmo "Inga parunga? Ada ivlo neram pesurom aana unga per therilaiye. Unga per enna?". Shemmo says "My name is Shemmo". Tanu replies "Oki see Shemmo. We have to help Autumns. We know that she is loving someone nu and we have to search who nu. So lets go and talk with her". Shemmo agrees. 👍🏼

Maha is back from hospital. He goes to Mini house to attend the function. All are there waiting for the groom family. Esther and Ratna are with Autumns getting her ready. Shemmo arrives with Tanu. Both goes to Autumns room. Shemmo says "Ratna Aunty ungala amma koopdanga. Ennamo bike ah patti pesanumam". Ratna goes out and Esther follows her. Tanu then goes to Autumns and asks "Autumns I know everything, tell me yaaru nu". Autumns is confused and asks what you know. Tanu updates her about the coffee shop incident. Autumns is shocked. She feels weird as Shemmo is there. Shemmo says "Kavala padavendam. Im here to help you. Sollunga yaara love panreenga?". Autumns says "Athu vanthu, athu vanthu...". Shubba calls Autumns to come as groom arrived. Tanu tells Autumns "Dont worry, just go there. We will do something". Autumns says "Enaku bayama iruku. Bhagi ku kooda theriyum, aana yaarunu theriyathu". Shemmo tells "Ippo pesa vendam, neenga anga poithu vaanga. Approma itha patthi pesalam".

Shemmo goes out of the room. Bhagi sees him and thinks its the right time to talk with him. 🤓

Freeze

Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

JAYASHREE

@vjayam

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

haha ha shamz...great going...this is getting really interesting!!!...this colony may see a lots of love marriages within it seems! and shamz's mind voice...(no one as handsome as me...rofl...too good... and now bhagi wanting to talk to u...) triange turning into polygon it looks like!!!

waiting eagerly for the next part...

Quote

Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

What characters we are lol, roller coaster ride! Thanks Shamz.

Quote

Shammu

@Shemmo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Chapter 13

Autumns comes out with coffee. Groom family are looking at her and they like Autumns. When groom takes coffee he looks at her with a romantic look. Hollie and Smiles notices it and smiles. 😆 Autumns goes back to room. Groom family says that they like Autumns and what about them. Mini says she likes them too and her sister will also like them. All are happy, except Bhagi. Shemmo and Tanu goes to Autumns room. Bhagi sees him going and follows Shemmo. 😕

Gisel in his room thinks about Tanu. He is not out of yesterday incident. Smiles is searching Gisel and gets to know that he is at his house. She goes to Shubba house. Gisel house bell rings. He opens the door and sees Smiles. He asks what. Smiles says that he is not attending the function nu. Gisel says he is not interested. Smiles is sad. She asks what happend. He says nothing and asks her to leave. 😭 Smiles is hurt and leaves the place. While leaving she strumbles and Gisel catch her. Smiles mind la "Kangal Irandal" song is going. He asks her to be careful. She leaves and he calls her back. She turns, he says "Smiles nee po naan approma varen". Smiles is happy. 😳

Shemmo, Tanu and Bhagi are there with Autumns. Bhagi goes near Shemmo and says "Shemmo naan unga kitta pesanum". He asks what. Bhagi starts but Autumns interupts and says "Pls help me. I dont want this marriage to happen". Tanu asks "Oki sari neenga yaara love panreenga?". Autumns says "Unga ellarukum antha person ah theriyum". All 3 are confused. 😕 Mini comes in and calls Autumns. All 4 goes behind Mini. Groom family asks Autumns whether she likes them. Autumns is silent. All forces her to say something. Suddenly Tanu says "Illa, Autumns ku intha kalyanathula istham illa". Gisel enters in Mini house.

Freeze

Edited by Shemmo - 11 years ago

Quote

viswai123

@viswai123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Mudiyale Shammu...

Smiles -> Gisel -> Tanu <- Shammu
Autums -> ?
Tanu -> ?

Ippidiye kathe pochuna yaru yara love pannuranga ne maranthiduvom.

Ennavo mothathula yarayavathu nee kalyanam panna intha amma ku tholla theerum. Bhagi, Tanu, autums, Charu yaru nalum parava ille pa...

Quote

JAYASHREE

@vjayam

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

agree with shobi , shamz...u got us real confused n curious now...whos for who? waiting for u to reveal...

but u ure know how to keep up the suspense!!!

Quote

Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Lolll Shamz, wow what a twist to the story!! Kangal Irandal for me ha ha. Finding the story more and more interesting, waiting for your updates!!

Quote

suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Shamz samma part...

Smile ku kangal irundal patttaaa...

Autumns yara love pannranga...!!!

Come on update the next part soon...!!!

Quote

Shammu

@Shemmo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Chapter 14

Gisel enters in Mini house. Everyone is shocked hearing Tanus words. Jaya asks Tanu to keep quiet. But Tanu says "Illa ma, Autumns ku intha kalyanathula istham illa ma. Ava sollamudiyama vedanai padura". Mini goes to Autumns and asks whether its true. Autumns nods yes. Groom family understands the situation and says "Ponnuku istham illathi enna panrathu? Avanga oru velai love panrangalo ennavo. Saringa naan poithu varom". Groom family leaves the place, the groom looks sad. 😔

Smiles sees Gisel and is happy. Everyone is sad and confused. The whole house is silent. Mini asks Autumns what happend, why she didnt want this marriage to happen. Autumns says "Sorry ka, enaku epdi solrathunu therila. Naan vanthu oruthara love panren". Mini is shocked. She asks Autumns "Love ah?? Yaaru?". Autumns feels bad to tell infront of everyone. She takes all her courage and tells "I love Sri". Jaya and Tanu are shocked, 😲 also the other ones. Jaya asks "Ennathu Sri ah? Ithu eppo? Avanuku theriyuma?". Autumns tells "School time la naanga love pannom, suddenly oru chinna problem nala pechu varthai ethuvum illa. Aana enaku theriyum, he still loves me. Anniki Maha Uncle la avar parka varumpothu he got shocked seeying me there". Mini looks at Jaya with a "what to do" look. Jaya winks and says to Mini "Dont worry, we will see". Maha says "Oki athaan unmai therinjichu la. We will see what to do, lets leave Autumns koncham thaniya". All aunties leaves to kitchen.

Gisel is confused. He asks Bhagi what happend. Bhagi tells him everything. After telling she searches Shemmo. But he is not there.

Autumns is in balcony with Shemmo and Tanu. She thanks Tanu for the help. Tanu says "Athu seri, neenga en anna na love panrathunu yen enkitta sollala?". Autumns says "Sollavendam nu ethuvum illa, antha problem nala naan nenaichen ellam finished nu aana noo i still love him". 😳 Tanu says "Oki oki dont worry. I will talk with Sri anna". Shemmo is mesmerized by Tanus helping nature. Tanu looks at Shemmo and says "Thanks". Shemmo is happy. 😎

Freeze

Shemmo ithuku per thaana "I am in Cloud 9"? 🤣

Edited by Shemmo - 11 years ago