Taarey FF-Be Intehaan*Part-8 Updated on Pg.82* - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Very interesting, dear..👏

You should definitely continue this..👍🏼


Thanku...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Thanku...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Thanku...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: raddhi

damm interesting

concept


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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: d3fannm1

really loved it

i cant wait plz plz plz do continue soon
love you
love your ff
pm me
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Thanku tweety...
Hehehehehe...😆
Love u tooo...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: chinudolly

wow its really very interesting story 😛😛,

i m excited 2 read it 😛
pls pls update soon dear 😊😊
would love 2 read more ...😊


Thanku so much dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Writer's Note

Hey guys frst of all thanku so much for ua response...M glad tht u all liked d concept...Guys m so showwy for posting late I was gonna post it yesterday bt due to some personal problem couldn't do so...N guys m really showwy...I really tried hard to make this part perfect but dnt knw whether i have reached ua expectations or not...N I cnt promise whn I wud give nxt part as m nt in a right frame of mind...Hope u all wud understand...N ya one more important thing frst chapter is small as its introductory bt trust me frm chp-2 dey wud b long...So nw enough of my bak bak...Nw enjoy update in nxt post...Love u guys...N once again thanku so much...

P.S:-Guys If u want pms plz add me as ua buddy...
Edited by --Mrunmayee-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Part-1

It's a bright sunny day...Taani has come to Mumbai the day before so she is tired and is sleeping...Its 8 a.m and the sunrays are falling on her face making her look heavenly beautiful...As windows and curtains are open slow breeze is coming in room and is causing her strands of her hairs fall on her face caressing it...She keeps the strands behind her ears and tries to sleep again but it seems naughty wind wanted to play wid her strands of her hair...She tries to sleep but her alarm rings and she is trying to shut it with closed eyes but is unable to...Finally she succeeds and then is gonna sleep again but remembers something and just jerks up from bed...
Taani:Hey Krishnaji,Main aaj kaise late ho sakti hoon?? Aaj to mujhe st.louis jaana hai admission ke liye aur main aaj late kaise ho gayi??Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho Krishnaji?? Aap jaante ho na ki aaj kitna important din hai?? Phir bhi...(now she remembers that she is getting late)Ohho Krishnaji subah subah aap bhi na kya baaton mein laga diya???Saying so she gets up quickly freshenup and gets ready for college...She then goes to the krishnaji idol and prays him for spreading happiness and take care of everyone...Then she goes to hall and sees some photo frames...Tears rolls down from her eyes...She wipes it and smiles and leaves...She reaches college and is searching for principal's office when she collides with someone...
Taani:Hey krishnaji!!!I'm sorry vo maine aapko dekha nahi...Maine jaan bujhke kuch nahi kiya...Aap theek to hai na??
Sharon was shocked to say anything...But soon she recovers from shock and tries to say something but Taani cuts her again and starts
Taani:Aapko kahi chot to nahi lagi na??Aap
Sharon recovers from shock and says
Sharon:Chilll...Main theek hoon...Par tum aise kyun react kar rahi ho??Are u alright???
Taani:Haan main theek hoon...
Now this is the time Taani see's Sharon...She tries to hide her nervousness and awkwardness...
Taani:Haan main theek hoon...
Sharon:Tum is college mein???
Taani:Vo main iss college mein nayi hoon...Main chalti hoon...
Saying so she leaves...
Taani goes from there leaving Sharon shocked and teary behind...
Taani goes to principal's office and completes remaining formality...She goes to canteen and sits there thinking...
Taani:Oh my god agar vo yaha hai matlab...Nahi Taani agar aisa hai to tumhe strong rehna padega...No one will recognize you as you have changed yourself completely...Your hair,your dressing style everything...So chill...
Sharon msgs to Reyam and asks them to meet her in canteen...
Gang also reaches canteen...
Vicky:Yaar bahut bhook lagi hai...Chalo jaldi...
Nil:Usmein kya nayi baat hai??Ise toh hamesha bhook lagti hai...
Amar:Light...
Taani leaves and while leaving she bumped into Sharon once again...
Sharon:Hey...
Taani:Oh hi...Vo mujhe kuch kaam hai main chalti hoon...
Sharon:Are ruko ruko...Kaha jaa rahi ho???
Taani:Ummm vo library...
Sharon:Ok...
Taani leaves...
Here Reyam enters the canteen and see's Sharon...
Reyam:Hey Sharon...Wassup???
Sharon turns and was was having tears in her eyes...
Swayam:Sharon,kya hua???Tum ro kyun rahi ho??
Sharon:Swayam vo maine use dekha college mein...
Rey gets shocked and due to shock he takes two steps behind...
Swaron sees his condition...
Swayam:Rey tu theek to hai na???
Rey:(while crying)Main sahi tha...Vo hum sabko chodke kahi nahi gayi.,...Vo yahi hai...
Sharon:But Rey m confused...
Swayam:Wht u mean???
Scene shifts...
Taani just runs to fire escape...
Taani:Hey Krishnaji,ye kya ho raha hai????
She sits there for sometime...She remembers all the past moments...She was crying...
Scene shifts
Rey was shocked...He just walked away like a lifeless body...He reached near fire escape and...

Guys this was introductory chapter so it was short bt I promise to give u long chapters...Guys I have done my work nw u go hit like and comment...B bye cya all soon...
Love
Mrunmayee...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
res/unres
Yippee me first 🥳🥳
And that too without PM 🥳
Awesome update dear 👏 👏
But why Sharon was sad ?
And Rey shocked ?? 😕 😕
Update soon 😉
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
omg!! so much suspense.. !!
update soon plz..
n yeah nyc update ... lyk it :)

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