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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally i comment on dis ff
Ch 29 :
Brilliant update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ whn i start reading i thought i missed sumthing but when i read whole para i sigh a deep breath dat it was a dream n it was nice 😊😊 , maanvi reaction on reading virat message is beautifully portrayed πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ luved her message 2 she respects him n his decision 2 move on in his life 😊😊 , maanvi bonding with maya n shaurya was adorable 😊😊😊 n where is virat ❓ hope he is fine 😊
Ch 30 :
Brilliant update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ such a emotional 1 😭😭😭😭😭😭 u hav portrayed virat breakdown very well ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ he let her go destroyed deir memories but still its difficult 4 him 2 survive without her feeling really bad 4 him 😭😭😭😭😭 but he himself was responsible 4 all dis dat wht he had done he hav 2 paid 4 it 1 day , angad was really a gud frnd 😊 it was gud 4 virat dat angad was with him i wonder wht he had do if angad was not dere n maanvi was so worried 4 him when she look at him it made her realize what he was going through she was feeling his pain n wanted 2 console him but she is also helpless πŸ˜” hope everything will b f9 in dere life
Ch 31 :
Superb update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ wht happened 2 maanvi y she is confused now she wanted virat 2 let her go 4 viren n her happiness n whn he let her go she is feeling sad becoz he is ignoring her 😲😲😲😲😲😲 again she wants to be with him i think she forgot dat she is in luv with viren n soon going 2 marry him but she is so confused dat she herself doesn't know what she wants whom she really luv n what is wrong with viren y he doesn't talk 2 her neither maanvi payed any attention to him like he was not dere 😲😲😲😲😲 n virat was going through a lot of pain but still he stood by his decision by telling pandit dat she is going 2 his bro wife not his luved dat scene n fb was really nice everything was written very beautifully 😊
Ch 32 :
Nice update πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ maanvi is still confused she thinks dat virat was just acting all nice 2 get her back its all his plan n she is feeling guility 4 her behaviour with viren dat person who brought her back 4rm d darkness of life who gav her all happiness which she deserve n on d other side virat is trying hard 2 distance himself 4rm her n manvir convo was really nice dey both understand eachother very well 😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Finally i comment on dis ff
Ch 29 :
Brilliant update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ whn i start reading i thought i missed sumthing but when i read whole para i sigh a deep breath dat it was a dream n it was nice 😊😊 , maanvi reaction on reading virat message is beautifully portrayed πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ luved her message 2 she respects him n his decision 2 move on in his life 😊😊 , maanvi bonding with maya n shaurya was adorable 😊😊😊 n where is virat ❓ hope he is fine 😊 thank u soo much... everytime i update i wait for ur comment... you enjoy reading the updates n i enjoy reading your comment πŸ˜ƒ thank u... i am soo glad u liked it πŸ˜ƒ
Ch 30 :
Brilliant update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ such a emotional 1 😭😭😭😭😭😭 u hav portrayed virat breakdown very well ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ he let her go destroyed deir memories but still its difficult 4 him 2 survive without her feeling really bad 4 him 😭😭😭😭😭 but he himself was responsible 4 all dis dat wht he had done he hav 2 paid 4 it 1 day , angad was really a gud frnd 😊 it was gud 4 virat dat angad was with him i wonder wht he had do if angad was not dere n maanvi was so worried 4 him when she look at him it made her realize what he was going through she was feeling his pain n wanted 2 console him but she is also helpless πŸ˜” hope everything will b f9 in dere life thank u again... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ virat and his feelings are something i was scared of penning down n i pened it down bfully as u said.. it somehow came out good... he is at fault but seeing him we caan relate with the youth of today... guys these days are just like the virat i showed in this ff excluding the possessiveness thing... i too hope the same
Ch 31 :
Superb update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ wht happened 2 maanvi y she is confused now she wanted virat 2 let her go 4 viren n her happiness n whn he let her go she is feeling sad becoz he is ignoring her 😲😲😲😲😲😲 again she wants to be with him i think she forgot dat she is in luv with viren n soon going 2 marry him but she is so confused dat she herself doesn't know what she wants whom she really luv n what is wrong with viren y he doesn't talk 2 her neither maanvi payed any attention to him like he was not dere 😲😲😲😲😲 n virat was going through a lot of pain but still he stood by his decision by telling pandit dat she is going 2 his bro wife not his luved dat scene n fb was really nice everything was written very beautifully 😊 thank u again... 😊 😊 manvi never expected virat to let her that easily and she is confused n shocked... but somehow first love is something which always remains in our heart and it will always be special... this is what is happening with manvi at the moment... virat's pain is pulling her towards him...
Ch 32 :
Nice update πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ maanvi is still confused she thinks dat virat was just acting all nice 2 get her back its all his plan n she is feeling guility 4 her behaviour with viren dat person who brought her back 4rm d darkness of life who gav her all happiness which she deserve n on d other side virat is trying hard 2 distance himself 4rm her n manvir convo was really nice dey both understand eachother very well 😊😊😊😊😊😊 manvi is unable to digest the sudden change... cmon it happens πŸ˜‰ manvir are just too adorable...

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Posted: 12 years ago
@@@@@ PRECAP @@@@@
manvi : viren tum tension mat lo... sab theek ho jaega...
viren : manvi we should end it here...
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end it here... " listening these three words made manvi feel worse... it hurted her badly... she was feeling empty suddenly... ending things and the trauma that follows scared her... she dont want to go through all of it again...
keep waiting for the update just like the way i keep waiting for likes n comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab yeh kya hai ??kaunsa naya dhamaka ...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
"end it here"?? What does it mean?? Break up?? Eagerly waiting for the update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

ab yeh kya hai ??kaunsa naya dhamaka ...update soon




Ye precap aka teaser h n dhamake bta kar ni kie jaate... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
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Hailot...yeh kya hua? Kyu hua? Kaise hua? Kab hua? Kaha hua? Kisne kiya?...OMG...cont soon
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OMG..Coming Up Dhamaka..Naina m Waiting..!!!!:)
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all the information regarding every update, every precap will be now available through my official fb page " naina n her virman world " ( https://www.facebook.com/NainaNHerVirmanWorld ) so those who havent like it, do like it... and for the ones who are not on fb, kindly pm me regarding the same... i will make a special pm list for the one who arent on fb...
link to the previous chapter
CHAPTER 33

"There is one pain I often feel, which you will never know. It is caused by the absence of you."
sangeet
viren : someone is looking like an angel today... very pretty infact someone is looking like a pataka as we say in punjabi...
manvi : ohhh that someone is thanking you hone wale pati dev... but as i am your to be wife, i have the right to know who is that lucky someone...
viren : no no... abhi biwi bni nahi ho madam...
manvi : kitne din baki hain... kuch din hi hai na... ban jaungi... usme kya hai...
viren : tab tak i can flirt you see...
manvi : if you promise to flirt with this particular "someone" you can carry on with thif flirty with my consent...
viren : ye "someone" mera sab kuch hai aur i promise kabhi kisi ki taraf aank uthakar bhi nahi dekh sakta main...
manvi : hehe... anyways on a serious note, thank you...
viren : pyaar mein thank you... saare romance ki bja di... kya yaar...??
manvi : awww... baby sadd gaya...??
viren : haan...
manvi : toh fir sado sadao life bnao... enjoy... i am busy u see, today is my sangeet...
viren : ohhh mine as well... what a coincidence...!!!
shaurya : by god tum log aapas mein aisi hi pakate ho kya ek doosre ko...
maya : cmon shaurya... dont tease them now...
shaurya : oh cmon maya ji... you be on your side... your jiju's side... main toh apni mannu ke saath hoon...
manvi : my jiju greatest...
viren : toh my saali cum bhabhi prettiest...
manvi : mere jiju handsome hain...
viren : meri saali beautiful and elegant hain...
shaurya : guys continue this fight on your wedding night...
viren : yeah... what a bakwaas idea...!!! i will kill you for this shaurya...!!!
manvi : nahi jiju ka idea best hai...
viren : tu yahan se chala ja shaurya... dimag mat kharab kar manvi ka...
shaurya : haha... we are going... desperate much...
manvi : hawww...
maya : cmon shaurya... let them enjoy yaar...
shaurya : okk... enjoy but dont forget you both are the focus point today...
after sometime
manvi was busy talking to viren when she noticed that something was missing... soon she realised that virat wasnt present there. first she thought that he was somewhere around but then she realised that from the time the sangeet started, she didnt even caught a glimpse of his... while she was looking here and there, she saw angad. she wasnt shocked to see him because she saw him in the hospital yesterday. but the very next moment, she saw kripa... her best friend... her buddy...
viren : where are u lost manvi...??
manvi : no where... just looking around... by the way, i saw this guy (pointing towards angad) yesterday also... who is he...??
viren : arrey woh angad hai... and the girl next to him is huis fiance... they are virat's friends...
manvi : ohh... (manvi was happy for kripa as she heard they she n angad are engaged)
viren : lemme introduce you to them... angad...??
angad : coming
angad and kripa made their way to the stage and the introduction took place...
manvi : hello...
kripa : hii... congrats... (kripa hugged manvi and manvi hugged her back)
manvi : thank you...
manvi whispered into kripa's ear " meet me upstairs after 5 minutes ". kripa broke the hug and smiled in response.
angad and kripa went down the stage...
manvi : aaj virat nahi dikh rahe... i mean he isnt around...
viren : arrey haan... i think he hasnt come yet... he had some work and told that he will be late...
manvi : kaam...?? aur wo bhi aaj... i mean aaj ke function se jyada important aur kya kaam ho sakta hai...
viren : u only told me to give him some space.. remember... he will come back... and he had gone for some official work i guess...
manvi : okk... i will be back.. going to the restroom...
viren : okk..
manvi went upstairs to the terrace and saw kripa already standing there...
manvi : kripa...
kripa : mannu...
manvi and kripa hugged each other... two long lost friends finally met after 3 long years...
kripa : kaisi hai tu...??? (how are you...??) (breaking the hug)
manvi : i am good... how are you krips...?? how is everything...?? your are happy na...??
kripa : i should ask you all this mannu... how dare you...?? how dare you leave all of us behind like that... how could you...???
manvi : i dont know krips... evrything shattered and i left like a coward... i was not in my senses... i destroyed evrything kripa...
kripa : you didnt do anything wrong mannu... i am with you and i will support you no matter what...
manvi : kripa i misheard something and... and i hurted you n virat... par main majboor thi...
kripa : matlab...???
manvi : krips i... i was pregnant... and and ----

manvi told kripa everything... evrything she heard... everything she went through later on... evrything that happened on the day of her engagement... everything that happened when she metr virat... everything about the day when the whole truth was revealed to both of them... everything that was now happening in her life...
kripa : i always told you to be careful... didnt i...??
manvi : i am sorry...
kripa : its okk... now i am damn sure that you love viren bhaiya... he is gem manvi... dont lose him... though i can feel that you are melting... you are getting weak... virat and his presence n his absense is making you weak mannu...
manvi : yes i am getting weak par main kya karun kripa... i loved him at one point of time... and today i know it wasnt his fault... i spoiled everything... i didnt trust him...
kripa : dont blame yourself manvi... the time, the circumstances and most of all destiny played with both of you and you know what it all point towards...
manvi nodded her head in negative...
kripa : towards you and viren bhaiya... you both are meant for each other... just too perfect together... soulmates... remember your soulmate concept... jinko milna hai wo hi jaate hain...
manvi : dilon ke phool patjadh mein bhi khil jaate hain... yash raj istyle...
kripa : yup... now dont be a sdist... lets go and enjoy your sangeet... thank god i am here else i would have missed it...
manvi : haan haan... tu aaj bhi utna hi bolti hai krips... poor angad...
kripa : i am the one suffering... ainwai poor angad...
manvi : hehe... will do something for me...??
kripa : anything...
manvi : please ek baar virat ko call kar na... ask where he is...??? please...
kripa : he will come... he is not a kid...
manvi : call him na... please.. for me...
kripa : i will tell angad to call him... is that okk...??
manvi : okk...
kab aaoge kab aaoge jism jaan juda hogi kya tab aaoge
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
aaja re ke mera man ghabraye
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
manvi and kripa both came down together and manvi made her way to viren and kripa to angad. viren smiled at manvi and held her hand in his while manvi's eyes were fixed on kripa and angad... she was asking angad about the whereabouts of virat.
viren : are you okk manna...??
manvi : yes... i am fine..
kahan hai ronake mehfil yahi sub poochte hai
barha tere na aane sabab puchte hai
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jay
manvi was looking here and there and this didnt went unnoticed by shaurya. he went to manvi and asked her if she needs anything. manvi said she doesnt need anything... she is fine... shaurya wasnt convinced... he knew something was wrong... he knew manvi very well to judge whether she was lying or not...
har baat ka wakt mukarar hai har kaam ki saat hoti hai
wakt gaya to baat gayi bus wakt ki kimat hoti hai
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
aaja re ke mera man ghabraye
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
listening to the lyrics of the song manvi realised how true it was... the time lost can never return and the value of one second can only be understand by the one who is about to die.. the one who is on deathbed knows the value of one second better than anyone else could... time once lost is lost forever and likewise she and virat lost their chance... they would never be together again... never ever...
rasta roka kabhi kali ghata ne
ghera dala kabhi baren hawa ne
bijli chamak ke lagi aankhe dekhane
bedle hai kaise kaise tevar faza ne
sare vade irade barshaat aake dho jati hai
main der karta nahin der ho jati hai
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
aaja re ke mera man ghabraye
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
love is a journey full of surprises... they may be good at times or at times bad or at times the worst suprise ever... but we humans are left with no option other than accepting it... we have to accept what comes our way and move along with it. sometimes love makes us feel the most luckiest person alive and sometimes it gives us so much of pain, and hurt, and bad memories and miseries that the person feels he is is nothing but a corpse... on one hand where love has makes us, on the other hand, it has the power to destroy us... love makes us strong while on the other hand it weakens us... Love, at times, may feel as though we are getting weaker by the minute; yet it is not love that makes you weak, rather it is the fear of losing it...
dil diya aitbaar ki had thi
jaan di tere pyaar ki had thi
mar gaye hum khuli rahi aankhe
yeh tere intezar ki had thi
had ho chuki hai aaja jaan par bani hai aaja
mehfil saji hai aaja ke teri kami hai aaja
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
viren : i wonder where is virat...??? ye ladka bhi na... i will go n call him manvi...
manvi : hmm..
manvi looked at kripa and she nodded her head in negative...
manvi : oh god virat... when will you stop torturing me... kyun chain se jeene nahi dete... where are you virat...??? now what is going on in your mind...?? let me live in peace...
aaho ki kasam tujhe naalo ki kasam hai
khawaboo ki kasam tujko khayaalo ki kasam hai
In bajte chiraago ke ujalo ki kasam hai
aaje ke tujhe chahnewalo ki kasam hai
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
aaja re ke mera man ghabraye
der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye
viren comes back and sits quietly.
manvi : what happened...??? baat ho gayi...
viren : pta nahi kahan hai virat... phone bhi unavailable aa rha hai... i am scared manna...
manvi : dont be scared... kuch ni hoga... vo aata hi hoga... (yes.. he might be on his way)
manvi wasnt really consoling viren, she was saying it to make herself believe on what she was saying... she was trying to make her heart understand that everything is alright...
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiya
dar se hatti nahin nazar aaja
aaja dil ki pukar par aaja
der karna teri aadat thi sahi
der se hi sahi magar aaja
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiyan
manvi's eyes kept searching for the person she was dying to see at this moment... she dont know why but she wanted to see him just to make sure that he was alright.. she was missing him but missing someone doesnt always mean that we want that person back in ouw life, sometimes its a part of moving on and letting go...
the evening was full of colours, music and fun... all the people were lost in their world... singing dancing and enjoying... while the others were swing with the mood of the ocassion, some were worried... worried thinking what will happen next... viren, manvi, angad, kripa were worried thinking where is virat and what is he doing... all four of them were praying that things dont go wrong and they were praying for virat's well being...
manvi : viren tum tension mat lo... sab theek ho jaega...
viren : manvi we should end it here...
" end it here... " listening these three words made manvi feel worse... it hurted her badly... she was feeling empty suddenly... ending things and the trauma that follows scared her... she dont want to go through all of it again...
manvi : matlab...??
viren : i mean the sangeet... i need to go and find virat...
manvi : take jiju along with you...
viren : no... there is no need of troubling anybody... angad is there with me..
manvi : keep informing me... please...
viren : hmm...
soon the vaderas left and manvi went to her room.
she was suddenly feeling as if she is about to lose someone very important... soomeone without whom she wouldnt be able to survive and face this harsh world and its reality.. she was feeling weak and all alone... somethings were going inside her mind, which she couldnt even share with herself at the moment... something was badly bothering her...
manvi : what is happening to me...??? what is going wrong...??? why am i feeling so vulnerable...??? why am i feeling that something bad is gonna happen...??? something that would ruin everything... something that would turn our world upside down... but i really hope you are alright... i dont know why i am suddenly split into two halves... i dont know why there is a pain which is caused by your absence virat... the same pain i lived in when i returned... i dont know why.. why everything around is losing its important in my eyes... today also i wasnt even concerned a bit about the enjoyment or the function, i was concerned about you and sometimes about viren... what am i doing..?? why i am suddenly unsure of things...?? why i am not able to give viren the time and love he deserves... why being with him also, i was looking for you...??? why...??? why is everything becoming so difficult...?? ye sab kya ho raha... kya ho raha hai mujhe... god.. god please help me...
manvi kept on thinking and dont know when sleep took her into its embrace.
"tring triing "
manvi : hello...
kripa : manvi...
manvi : kripaaa... kya hua subah subah...??
kripa : woh.. actually manvi...
manvi : sab theek toh hai na...??? virat...?? where is he...?? is he ok...???
kripa : manvi i am scared... angad and viren bhaiya has gone to find him, but they havent return yet... hopehe is fine...
manvi : and you are telling me all this NOW...?? how could you kripa...??
manvi disconnected the call and got up. she was scared... her fears were scaring her more and more... she was thinking right... something is surely wrong with virat...
manvi : virat... oh my god where is he...?? virat kahan ho tum... mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai... viren.. viren ko call karti hoon...
manvi calls viren hurriedly...
viren : h..hello...
manvi : viren... viren where are you..?? virat ka kuch pta chala...
viren : hm..hmmm..
manvi : viren.. viren is he alright...?? where is virat...??? where was he all night...?? answer me na...
viren : ac..acc. accident.. he had an accident manvi...
manvi : accident...?? how is virat...?? woh theek toh hai na...?? ye sab hua kaise...?? kitni baar... kitna baar kaha tha drive carefully par nahi...
viren : kya...?? kya kaha tha...???
manvi : woh i mean... he should have drived carefully... how is his condition...???
viren : he is.. is critical manvi... mere bhai ko kuch ho gaya toh...
manvi : jijuuu... (manvi called shaurya's name)

manvi was numb... not in her senses. shaurya ran to manvi's rooma nd saw her standing numb with the phone in her hand...
shaurya : what happened mannu...???
manvi : v..virat..
shaurya looked confused and took the mobile from manvi's hand.
shaurya : hello...
viren : hello...
viren told shaurya that last night virat had an accident when he was returning from the office and his belongings were also missing (mobile, wallet, watch evrything) and he is critical.. viren told shaurya that he has informed his family and they might be there any moment...
shaurya : dont worry viren... i am coming there... i am with you... dont lose hope...
shaurya disconnected the call and looked at manvi's expressionless face...
shaurya : mannu...
shaurya shook manvi hard and she came in her senses...
manvi : jiju... jiju virat...
shaurya : he is not good... not good at all... accident was serious... but dont worry... i am going... you dont worry... stay at home and i will keep you informing...
shaurya wiped manvi's tears and kissed her forehead.
shaurya : take care and trust me evrything will be okk... your wedding wont be affected manvi...
shaurya turned to leave when manvi held his hand...
manvi : take me along jiju...
shaurya : mannu today i your mehndi... you shouldnt step out of the house... we all are there to take control of the situation... just relax...
manvi : take me with you... please jiju...
shaurya : manvi there is no need...
manvi : why there is no need...?? he needs me...
shaurya (holding her hand) : i will take care of viren... he is my friend even before you guys met...
manvi : jiju you are not understanding... mujhe jana hai... (controlling herself)
shaurya : see maya is also here na... stay with her... beeji and i will go... mannu try to understand...
manvi : you try to understand jiju... he need me... he is critical... i cant see him like that...
shaurya : viren is okk... trust me... you can meet him tomorrow manvi... but not now...
manvi : jiju... (taking a deep breath) virat needs me... he needs me...
shaurya : he has his family.. why would virat need you...?? cmon manvi... i will be back sweetheart...
manvi : jiju please... please...take me...
shaurya : what is wrong with you manvi...???
manvi : everything is wrong... sab galat hi toh ho raha hai... wahan virat.. virat maut se lad raha hai aur yahan... yahan aap mujhe usse milne se rok rahe hai... mujhe jaana hoga uske paas... virat needs me...
shaurya : manvi...??? (shocked with her behaviour...)
manvi : aise mat dekho jiju... abhi nahi... abhi nahi please... jiju mujhe apne saath le chalo... agar virat ko kuch ho gaya, toh main khud ko maaf nahi kar paungi... jiju i cant let anything happen to him... mere virat ko kuch ho gya toh... nahi... main kuch nahi hone dungi usko...
shaurya : mera virat...?? what are you saying...???
manvi broke down into tears and hugged her knees...
shaurya : say something manvi...
manvi : please mere virat ko bacha lo... please... main uske bina nahi jee sakti... please... i beg you... please take me... i want to see him...
shaurya : ohh... now i understood everything... manvi chaudhary was in a relationship with virat vadera... right...???
manvi looked down still tears flowing continuously from her eyes...
shaurya : amazing... applauding... maine kya kuch nahi kia tumhare liye manvi... i always treated you like my younger sister and what did you do... you hided such an important thing from me... this virat and the virat who spoiled your life are the same... Today you broke me and my trust on you manvi... today you destroyed everything... even when you returned to india 3 years ago with a child in your womb, i accepted you and loved you the same way never ever doubting you or your love... but today... today i am feeling ashamed of myself... i destroyed the life of my best friend because of you... kya jawaab dunga main viren ko... tumne sab khatam kar dia... sab...
manvi : jiju... jiju i am sorry... i am sorry jiju... jiju please forgive me... i never wanted to hide anything but the fear of losing viren, made me decide against telling anyone anything... jiju...
shaurya : you know what i really wish he doesnt survives this time...
manvi : jijuuu... please dont say like this... jo kehna hai mujhe kaho... par please... please dont curse virat... please... he is not the same... he is changed... he let me go... trust me jiju, he is no longer that same guy... and jiju he wasnt wrong 3 years ago, i was the one who misunderstood and misinterpreted things... mera virat galat nahi tha... please usko baddua mat do... please...
shaurya : let it be... by the time i return, decide what you want to do... if in case you decide to marry viren, apne haathon mein mehndi lgwa lena aur agar nahi, toh please ye ghar chod ke chali jaana... jo bhi faisla karna soch samajh ke karna... ye soch ke karna ke jise tum dhokha dene jaa rahi ho, uss insaan ne tumhara saath tab diya that jab tumhare pet mein kisi aur bacha tha... aur haan jiske liye dhokha de rahi ho, woh toh shayad... forget it... soch lo...
manvi : jiju... jiju main viren ko dhokha nahi de rahi... maine koshish ki thi usko sach btane ki par -
shaurya : btaya toh nahi na...
manvi : main.. main sab theek kar dungi... main ye shaadi bhi karungi... i will marry him but please let me make sure that virat is okk... lemme see him for the one last time...
shaurya : i have already given you two options and mind it... you are not going out of the house, if in case you decide to marry viren...
saying this shaurya went out of the room leaving behind a crying and helpless manvi...
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40 likes... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ next tym i get 40 likes on any of my update of any ff, i will not threaten anyone, trust me i will straightaway stop coming to the forum...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon😊

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