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usha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesum start...waiting fr nxt updt eagerly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

wonderful start...

maan-Geet engaged...

thanx for pm...

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Ketki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

looking fwd to read more from you

all the best

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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Nice one,Interesting start,so both r engaged,and both adoring each otr,waiting for nxt part

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
Finally great news
teri problem finish
and
hamaari long wait
welcome back dear
waise ,i like older one
newly married couple in new city all alone
wow
let see,how you make it now

😆😆

thanks dii..

bt its the same story

the same plot.. this "newly married couple in new city all alone" will be like 5th or 6th update here..😳.. so no worries😃

i jst started it from engagement..

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

"Woh Pehla Ehsaas.."

THANK YOU so much for the likes and all the cutie comments🤗

Didnt go to clg today, so thought to update..😳

Another little update..😆

please bear with me, the length will increase.. in the later updates..

PART 2

Maan looked at the number saved as geet's in his cell phone, he thought about how to talk to her, not to make the situation awkward for them. Hello,who is speaking.. geet ka phone hai to geet hi bolengi naa..Maan singh khurana kuch socho..he again thought for some time..

hii geet, kaise ho tum.. nah!! thats weird.. he thought for some options but none seemed appropriate to him. He sighed still dialing and disconnecting the call.. not being sure what to talk and how.. not to make her uncomfortable and not to embarrass himself but one thing he was sure, he wanted to hear her voice desperately.

Maan looked at pari who was sitting very comfortably on his bed, nibbling her chocolate and choosing some dress for him for the marriage functions.. Here he wasn't having a tension free minute and his dii was busy in herself, he pouted, why can't she help him he thought without even taking the pain to tell her whats going in his mind but thats Maan singh khurana's big fat ego..!!

Diii.. he shouted making pari jump from the bed.

What maan..! she replied calmly, very well knowing his temper and mood at the moment. He looked at pari with hopeful eyes, wanting her to understand it herself, not wanting to admit that he needed someone's help, be it his dii.

But when she didnt do anything he expected, he simply left the room pouting cutely to himself making pari giggle at his adorable face, he fumed listening to that and glared at her forcing her to suppress her giggle as a cough..

He went to the most peaceful corner of his house.. the large garden full of different colored flowers n trees, creating a very peaceful environment.. and moreover the soft gliding rain drops over the large trees.. and the humming sound of the trees, swiftly moving along the wind created a magical feel calming down his nerves for sometime. He closed his eyes, feeling the calm and soothing atmosphere, and thought about her, looking like an angel on their engagement.. it was just not about her physical appearance but the serenity of her face,her smile came to his vision stirring a very different set of emotions in his heart.. The sweet smile on her soft, supple lips.. her glowing eyes making his heart swell in happiness.. The happiness radiating out of her eyes, for HIM..!! He took his cell out the next moment and dialed without thinking lost in her thoughts..

"Woh pehla ehsaas.. ek anjaani si jhijhak ka

Woh pehla ehsaas ek pyaari si koshish ka.."

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Please like and update..

Part 3 coming, today evening or tomm.. surely😳

I can't control myself when i have few bank updates😆😆

Pms will be after updating PART 3

Edited by moni6262 - 11 years ago

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gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Wow lovely update maan want to talk with geet but dont known what to say waiting 4 next

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Maan kya yaar wo tujhe kha thodi na jayegi? ?

Babaji h na to y nervous? ?😉

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deejagi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

pleasant one but too small even to ponder. Please update the next part soon

Jaya

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Maan restless in his thots. Lost thinking
Abt Geet. Loved his eagerness to talk to
Geet, hear her voice.

Thinking how to call her, is clueless abt it.
His desperateness was clearly evident.

Waiting for next part