love always find a way...42 part updated page no 67

deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: snowdream
it was awesome deepanti...👏👏👏
Loved all the scenes as Unnati 's words i too hope rani doesn't feel baad after knowing truth of yuvraj
continue soon ...thanks for pm

thank u Krishna for commenting n soon rani will know the truth n how she will react for u have to wait n read my ff 😃

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Karkit
Awesum update
chuha wall sce so funny
n then flower sce so cute n nice
love it
thanks 4 pm n update soon

thank u for liking my scenes ur comment inspire me to write 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

awesome update!
loved it loads!
looking forward to manveer scene of confession!!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome update!
loved it loads!
looking forward to manveer scene of confession!!

thank u 😊

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: ...anju...
great job👍🏼

thank u

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Nishaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Read your ff for the first time! And its just Awesome.

I hope Rani comes to know the truth

Please continue soon and if you can then plz do add me in your pm list!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: nishaya...
Read your ff for the first time! And its just Awesome.

I hope Rani comes to know the truth

Please continue soon and if you can then plz do add me in your pm list!

thank u for reading n liking my ff n off course I do pm u n also adding u in my Ford list 😊

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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30 part!
Raj getting ready for his engagement n feeling little bit nervous then yuvraj come n say" wha mere sher tune tho baji hi mar li" then raj say in nervous tone" kaya sher yaha meri halth karab ho rahi hai" then yuvraj laugh n raj say" tu has raha hai Maine engagement ki tayari tho kar wali hai par sach kahu tho mujhe dar lag raha hai ! Yarr sab thik ho jayega na?" Then yuvraj say" relax Yarr mai hoo na sab thik ho jayega" then raj say" hope so Yarr kuyki Maine yeh risk tere khene par liya hai" yuvraj say" oh ho tu bhi na bhut darta hai abhi ache se tayar ho ja warna nanadani tujhe reject na kar de" raj say" dara mat wase bhi mai dara hua hoo" yuvraj smile n say" relax mai tho mazak kar raha tha" n help him to get ready
next scene ( in nandani room)
Nandani is getting ready for her engagement n her 2 frds enter in room by saying " oh my god! nanadani hum dono ko tho ab bhi wishwas nhi ho Raha ki tum jaigradh ki maharani bane wali ho " then nanadani say with attitude " girls jitna jaldi ho wishwas kar lo kuyki yeh last time hai jab hum tumse mil rahey hai " then her frds ask" why" nandani reply " kuyki tab hum maharani hoge or maharani aam logo se kam milti hai" then her one frd say" par tum humhey ek bar jaigradh tho le chalo GI na?" Then nandani say" soche gey hum ne is bare mai abhi socha nhi hai" her frds feel sad then unnati enter n say" nandani tum tayar ho gyi ho to jaldi neeche chalo sab tumara itne jar kar rahey hai" nandani reply " unnati relax itni bhi jaldi kaya hai aaj tho itnejar karana humara haq banta hai or wase bhi itejar mai Jo maza hai WO jaldi mai kha" unnati say" thik hai hum neeche tumara itejar karte hai but jaldi ana ok" n unnati leave
Next scene ( hall)
Raj is sitting on sofa n komal doing aarti n tilak of him n briraj standing next to komal n looking all the rasam then unnati come n komal ask about nandani n unnati reply that she is on the way then unnati ask komal about rani then komal say " WO apne room mai tayar ho rahi hai bas aati hi hogi tum beto" n here raj getting more nervous n thinking about yuvraj n saying in his mind" kha hai yuvraj!"
Next scene ( rani room)
Rani Wear beautiful saree but her blouse not pin up from back side n she is trying harder to pin up but she is failing everytime then she hear some voice of legs n thought that she must be ria n say" ria yeh tum ho kaya ?????ria agar yeh tum ho tho humari Madat karo na yeh blouse ki pin nhi lag rahi hai " then she feel that someone is helping her n when look up in mirror this is yuvraj who is helping her n then she try to shout but yuvraj put his hand on mouth n yuvraj say" chilake pure ghar walo ko room mai bulna hai kaya??" Then rani remove his hand n say" tumhe sharam nhi aati hai kaya ? U kisi ladki ke room ate Huey" yuvraj reply" tumhi khe rahi thi ki madat chaye tho humne bas tumari madat kari hai" rani say" dekho yada hoshiyar bane ki koshish mat karo Maine socha ki ria hai islye awaaz lagyi thi samjhe" yuvraj say" yeh acha hai ek tho tumari madat ki or upper se tum humhey hi suna rahi ho" rani with anger trying to say something but one servent come n say" gustaki maaf rajkumari SAA per maharani saa aapko bula rahi hai" then rani control her anger n go with her n yuvraj smile n also go after her here in hall nandani comes downstairs with her frds n raj look at her with totally lost eyes n she sits next to him then briraj say" komal humhey lagta hai ki saghai ki rasam shuru kar deni chaye" then komal say" thoda ruk jate hai rani abhi tak nhi ayi hai" n nadani listen brijraj n komal convo. N say" mom saghai humari ho rahi hai rani jiji ki nhi" then komal say" nadani aap yeh mat bhulye ki rani aapki badi bhen hai" then rani comes downstairs n guest start talking about rani beauty n nadani feel jealous then komal say to pandit ji to start engagement n pandit ji start with all the mantr n then yuvraj come n raj ask" kha tha tujhe pata hai na meri halth kaya hai" yuvraj say" bas Yarr kisi ki madat kar raha tha" n he look at rani then raj say" Yarr mujhe dar lag raha hai khai kuch gadbad na ho jaye" yuvraj say" ssshh tu ese Dare ga na tho jarur gadbad ho jaye GI tho ab chup chap beth ja samjha na" n raj keep silent n engagement moving on here one men continuously seeing raj that where he see him after a hard concentration he get it that he is not yuvraj infect he is raj hotel business king son n he decided to tell whole truth to brijraj n he goes to briraj by take him into a corner n tell him whole truth but briraj say" nhi apko koi Galt famai hui hai yeh yuvraj hai humare dost griraj ke bete " then that men say" nhi brijraj mujh koi galti nhi hui hai infect mai raj ko or uski family ko ache se janta hoo yeh yuvraj nhi ho sakta hai" briraj say" han aap jante hoge par humari beti ki shadi yuvraj se hi ho rahi hai raj tho WO hai Jo unke side mai beta hai " that men again look at raj again n say " nhi brijraj yeh kese ho sakta hai jis deal ke silsley mai Mr raghuvindar rathore se mila tha yeh bhi wahi tha or yeh hi nhi Mr rathore ne mujhe yeh bhi batya tha ki yeh unke bete hai" here panjit announce " ab ladka or ladki ek dusre ko aguthi phenye gey" but brijraj shouts" rukye pandit ji yeh sagai nhi ho sakti hai" n everyone stand up n get shocked to hear this n pandit Ji ask "why " brijraj hands together n say" hum maafi chate hai pandit ji par yeh sagai nhi ho sakti hai" komal comes n say" maharaj yeh aap kaya khe rahey hai sab mehman aye huye hai?" Brijraj say with frustrated mood" komal hum apse bad mai bat kartey hai" n every guest leave after that Nandani start crying n ask to brijraj " kuy dad kuy apne humare sath esa kuy kia?" Brijraj say " bete dokha tho humare sath hua hai" nandani n everyone get confused then komal ask" kaya khey rahey hai dokha par kisne or koi kuy karega dokha?" Brijraj remain silent then raj ask" kaya hua papa aap ese bat kuy kar rahey hai?" Brijraj anger got bursted n say in loud tone" mat kho apni gandhi juban se humhey papa" then yuvraj say" par uncle kaya hua hai?" Brijraj say " tum in sabse dur raho hum kisi bhi bhahar wale ko izazt nhi detey ki WO humarey ghar ke mamle mai bole samjhe" n yuvraj feel sad keep silent Here Brijraj with full anger go inside after that rani ask to komal " maa daata ko kaya hua hai humne is se phele unney itna gusse mai khabhi nhi dekha?" Komal try to say that brijraj come with his Royal gun n pointed at raj n ask" kon ho tum or yaha kuy aye ho? Sach sach batna warna hum tumhe abhi shoot kar degey" n everyone get sacred n raj ask him in scary voice" kesi sachi or kiski bat kar rahey hai?" Here komal hold brijraj hand n say" maharaj aap yeh kaya kar rahey hai?" Briraj didnot listen n say" komal aap chup rahi aap nhi janti hai humare sath kitna bada dokha hua hai! Yeh ladka yuvraj nhi balki raj hai or na jane kitne jhoot boley hai". N everyone again get shocked to hear this n nandani was so shocked that she could not handel this n rush to her room n rani also go behind her then komal say" nhi maharaj aapko koi Galt fami hui hai!" Brijraj say" nhi komal humhey koi Galt famai nhi hui hai " then brijraj told everything how that his one of his business frd told everything to him n brijraj anger burst n again he ask" ab ladke balhi isi mai hai ki tum humhey sach sach bata do ki tum yaha kisliye aye ho or tum humari beti se shadi kuy karna chate they?" Raj hand together n say" sir sach tho yeh hai ki mai apki beti nandani se bhut payar karta hoo or Maine Jo bhi kia hai nandani key liye kia hai" n he hold brijraj gun n point to his own head n say" or agar mai jhoot bolu tho aap mujhe isi wqt shoot kar di jye" briraj control his anger n put down his gun n say" agar tum humari beti se itna hi payar karte ho tho tumne sida aakar hum se bat kuy nhi ki yeh drama kuy kia?" Then raj told everything to brijraj that how he meet to nandani n how they lie to each other n when they reach here they don't know about rani n how all confusion create then unnati say" han uncle asal mai hum apko dokha nhi de rahey they bas ek confusion ho gaya tha or fir humne socha ki ek bar engagement ho jaye fir hum apko khud sach bata dege or sach mainey uncle humare Bhai yuvraj rani se hi shadi karne wale hai " then brijraj say" khanni tho achi par tumhe kaya lagta hai ki tum humse ek bar fir jhoot bolo gey or hum vishwas kar legey phele humse jhoot bola ki yeh tum yuvraj ho ab bol rahey ho ki tumara dost yuvraj hai or hum vishwas legey" then suddenly one voice come " tho mat karo vishwas hum humare bete ki shadi khai or kar degey" n all back n get shocked

to see griraj n brijraj say" griraj aap yaha kese aap tho kisi meeting ke liye bhar gaye they" then griraj say" konsi meeting are yeh jhoot bhi humare bete yuvraj ne kha ho ga " komal say" han bhaishab par aap yaha kese humara matlab tha na koi phone na kuch" then griraj say" actual mai bhabhisaa aaj hi subha humhe unnati ka phone aya tha or usne humhe sab sach bata diya or mujhe jese hi pata laga pheli flight lekar aa gaya" brijraj say with sad mood" acha hua griraj tum aa gaye warna yaha n jane kaya ho jata " griraj say with smile " kese nhi ata mai tera gussa bachpan se janta hoo or jese pata laga ki mere bete ne kaya kia hai mai foran aaj hi gaya" n griraj hands together n say sorry about what yuvraj done n brijraj hold griraj hand n say " nhi griraj maafi maag ke humari dosti ko chota mat kijiye" griraj say" thank u" n yuvraj come forward n say " dad I m sorry yaha itna sab kuch hogaya or Maine " n he try to say something more but griraj say" just shut up yuvraj tumari har galti maaf karne ko tayar hoo par not this time itna bada jhoot bolne se phele humhey batna jaruri nhi samjha or humse bhi jhoot bola ki tum rani se Milne jaa rahey hoo" yuvraj say" han tho mai rani se Milne hi aya tha but mere style mai " griraj get angry n say" bas yuvraj bas har bat koi mazak nhi hoti hai" yuvraj keep silent then brijraj say" chodey griraj bacha hai galti ho jati hai Jane de jiye"
next scene
Nandani enter in her with crying n angry face n remembering all moments which she spend with raj when he purpose to her, when he dance with her then suddenly rani come n say" nandani hum samjh sakte hai ki tumhe kesa lag raha hoga par is wqt tumhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga" then nandani say" rani yaha se chali jao humhey kisisi se bat nhi karni hai" then rani say" par nandani hum tho bas tumhari madat kar rahey they" suddenly nandani shout " humhey tumari koi madat ki jarurt nhi hai " she turn back n hold rani hands n say" kuy kar rahi ho humari madadt ka dikhwa infect tum tho bhut kush hogi na ki humari shadi yuvraj se nhi ho Rahi hai ?" Rani look with very strange way n say " kesi bat kar rahi ho nandani hum bahala esa kuy soch gey? Humhey bhi utna hi dukh hua hai jitna aapko hua hai " nandani leave her hands n start crying more n rani hugs her n say" nhi nandani mat roiye sambhalye apne aapko Jo galti unhone ne ki hai uski saza unhey jarur milye gi"
To be continued... ...

Edited by deepsoul - 11 years ago

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Nishaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Awwsumm chappy!

Specially Rani's and Raj's convo. So Brijraj has found the truth and got his gun pointed at Raj, OMG!!!

Wanna read next chappy eagerly, do continue soon and thanx for the pm!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: nishaya...
Awwsumm chappy!

Specially Rani's and Raj's convo. So Brijraj has found the truth and got his gun pointed at Raj, OMG!!!

Wanna read next chappy eagerly, do continue soon and thanx for the pm!

thank u so much for lovely comment n ya sure soon i will update my next chappy😳

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