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Aparna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Aaj updt milega kya
if not then meri stalking ki mehnat bachegi lol

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Friday = update day. :)

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Aaj Friday hai suhana

meera ne swami hai lana.

La la la la la la

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Meera did i tell you that i love your habit of commenting on your own thread and join we readers in our Masti.

Very few writers do that ya.
I love u dammit

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howardr07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Chapter 31 - Awesome awesome awesome ...goosebumpy-awesome :) Loved the sexual tension underneath their conversations for the sake of a conversation...

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: meera30

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000066">I tired them with a boring story ;)</font>

Dare you say that meera... Just that we are all in lalalala land with limited access to sense needed for spamming :)

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Chapter Thirty Two: P.S. I Love You

Edited by meera30 - 11 years ago

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

RES of all RES i tell you!

Good Lord i need to come back to this after gathering my thoughts...

*Edited*

After lot of thanda thanda pani and a cold shower!

Meera i am stumped and grappling for words here to let you know what i am feeling right now. This was incredible. What a declaration of love that was. Swami at his best ⭐️👏

That whole 'because i love you' was just outstanding. Hell i don't know any one who will not be floored by such a declaration of love and khushi was already fighting her growing love for Swami...the whole scene that you created had me wanting to run across and give Swami a big hug and ...😳 And i am so happy that khushi did not hold back but confessed her love as well.

After that awesome poetry you just hell i don't know what to say. ☺️😆. That intimate scene between A and K has to one among the best that i have ever ever come across. Hot, Sensual, passionate Ab mai aur kya boloon ! Speechless.

You rock meeraji ⭐️👏 and i think that 'because i love you' is going to play on my thoughts for a very very long time.

Edited by kondhili - 11 years ago

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#639

RES

Oh My M, must you always exceed every expectation and even bring things that one would never imagine. I know everyone is having a hard time recovering from what happened towards the end of the chapter and yes I am one of them too because you just covered the scene in the most beautiful and sensual way possible! *needs a fan

Now having talked about that part, I have no words to explain how much I LOVED the confessions! Arnav's confession that surprised him too and the reasons for he love he felts for her! I am just going to quote you because I have no words to describe it:

"Because when we fight, I feel alive. Because when you are not around, I can't help wondering what it would be like if you were. Because when I walk into saree shops with you to buy presents for my mother, I can imagine doing it for the rest of my life. Because when you talk about your favorite street food haunts in Calcutta, I can't help but regret that it is a part of your life that I wasn't a part of. Because when I ask you to come to Bombay, it scares me to imagine that you might not. Because when you lecture me on morality, I want to be a better person even though I know that change isn't easy. Because when I read your stories, I want to be part of bringing them to the world. Because when I kiss you, I know I don't want to kiss anyone else. Because there is no one else I want to be with anymore."

^^^

If this is called Cheesy then like Khushi I LOVE this kind of cheesy any day! *sighs And then to have Khushi respond back with an I LOVE you Too was just the icing on the already delicious cake. I am just so glad that their intimate moments happened during this confession and after this confession! This made their moment seem all the more special, urgent and meaninful making us gasp and blush! Their need and desire for eachother was highlighted with perfection, their need to show eachother their feelings that they just verbalized took over them and we had ourselves the hottest and most ascetically beautiful written part ever!😳

M and

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#640

That was such a perfect confession. Heartfelt, spontaneous, unplanned, unrehearsed...all the pertinent ingredients to make a memorable confession. The part I liked best about it was it's spontaniety...I think even Swami was taken aback to hear those words come tumbling out of his mouth, because as you had mentioned earlier he had planned on holding himself back for a while.

Planned, synthetic confessions, the whole 'going down on your knee' kind of routine, make me cringe !

This one has to be my favorite I've read on IF so far...loved it.

And the lovemaking was beautiful, very aesthetically described by you.

Wondering how the plot will unfold now. Very eager to read the next part...:)

Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago