Alvida!!!- Page 2

superb mindblowing awesome writing..

Awesome amez fav story loveit

heart touching os
feel bad for anu & adi
that criminal deserved a very cruel death 😈
finally arjun confessed his love to riya & started to romance in the office😉😆
feel happy for ariya & sasha
feel really sad for adi poor guy
loved sam-arjun-adi friendship
awesome os
loved it

will gonna kill you...but you save you... 😉


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will comment soon...😊

nice os...

Don't do that again. Always mention that if its an os, ss or ff.

OMG u r leaving the forum was the first thought that came across my mind after reading the topic. U nearly gave me a minor heart-attack.

BTW its an incredible update dr!!!!!!!

U potray each n every emotion exceptionally well.

Hats off to u dr!!!!!!!

Loved the convo of Arjun n Adi. Wow Adi is the broken soul. His each word contained so much pain.

The way he tried to knock some sence in Arjun's head that he deliberately pushed her away frm him was mind blowing!!!!!!!

Loved the way Aisha tried to pacified Sam.

FB was awesome!!!!!! Their life so peaceful n full on masti n fun!!!!!!!

Ariya moments were beautifully written. Finally he confessed his feelings n the kiss was super hawt!!!!!

Adi's convo with Annu's pic n FB related to them was heart wrenching!!!!!!!

Atlast thy all gunned down that b*****d.

Loved Ariya sweet moments n the way Adi teased them.

Nice ending!!!!!!

Awesome and mindblowing os di.
It was very emotional.
I amliterally crying.
Adi was the broken soul.
His annu died.
Love the way adi knocking some senses to arjun for pushing riya away from him.
Loved there friendship.
Love fb scene.
Ariya scene was awesome.
Love there convo.
Ariya kiss was hot.
Me blushing.
Finally ariya together.
Loved adi convo from annu.
It was very hearttouching.
Finally they killed that b*****d.
Ariya last scene was amazing.
Loved there friendship.
Love they way adi teses.
The song was awesome.
It was beautifully written os.

wow

Relly very nyc os nd emotional...:-)
Thanx for pm dear.