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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

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Updating in some time



mera pet bhar gaya iss lunch ab ghar ka khaana kya karoon😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



mera pet bhar gaya iss lunch ab ghar ka khaana kya karoon😕


raat ko mkhana .
Hii priyaa.
Yestarday I missed you all
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish


raat ko mkhana .
Hii priyaa.
Yestarday I missed you all



rashmi ne jo poem bheji thi wo kaha hai usne kaha uski thread par post karna hai aur jaakar dekh uss thread par nishu aur maine kal baath bhi karliya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



rashmi ne jo poem bheji thi wo kaha hai usne kaha uski thread par post karna hai aur jaakar dekh uss thread par nishu aur maine kal baath bhi karliya


That is on Punarvivah Thread before first part.and I came for few minutes and I noticed that you talked.Congrats for that😉
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Posted: 11 years ago



Part-2

All were taking care of Priya as she was having some problems in her pregnency.It was fourth month of her pregnancy. Neha was forcing Priya to eat some fruits.But she was not interested at all.

Neha-You know Priya If you will not eat them our doll will born weak, and I dion't want my daughter to be weak.You know I m thinking something.

Priya-What?

Neha-Priya if you have a girl which I m sure you will have,I will make her my D..

before Neha could complete her sentence Priya shrieked-AAhh

Neha-Kya hua?

Priya-I felt the movement.

Neha-Really? and she put her hand on her stomach-Hollo Gudia

And she too felt that movement.

Both friends giggled to see each other.

Neha-Priya Now I m sure you will have a girl.You saw when I said Hello she responded.

Priya-Neha Yaar you are really crazy.Itni pagal to tum tab bhi nahin thi Jab Maan aane wala tha.

Neha-Now that's a secret between me and my doll.

Priya-What secret?

Neha-Hmmm... No now I m not in mood to tell you.

And both got busy in their talk.

At night Neha was talking to Vikram-Vikram.You know ,today priya's baby moved and I felt her.

Vikram-Wow.that's good news.

Neha-Vikram I have decided something.I will make Priya's daughter my DIL.dosti ek rishte me bandh jaayegi to achchha rahega na.

Vikram-Not a bad idea.

Savitriji who came there for some work listened to them and said-Neha Let the baby come first.We don't even know if it will be a girl or boy.And why are you in such a hurry?It's not that I don't like your idea.It will be a wonderful relation between all of us.But It's not good to bind two persons in a relationship.Let them grow first.and then let them decide what they want. May be after growing up they won't like to accept your decision. ya phir unhen koi aur pasand aa jaaye.Think about yourself , You love Vikram but what would you have done if your parents already had decided someone else for you.

Neha thought for some time "I think you are right maa,It is too early to say something.

Savitriji-Let them grow like two indevisual and see what they want.

Vikram and Neha nodded at this. And left it on time.But neha silently prayed God to fulfill her wish.

Priya's delivery was due on 5th march 95.Means two weeks after Maan's birthday.Maan heard it and was sad to know that doll wasn't coming on his birthday.

Time was flying very fast. KMC was a well known construction company and their business had it'sbranches in other countries too and it was easy for them to handle as both friends were very cooperative to each other .Ram and Vikram were taking care of their business in abroad turn by turn . one of them used to go there when they were needed there.

Maan's 8th birthday was after six days , and Vikram had to go to see their business in Dubai as Priya needed Ram at this stage of her pregnancy. Dubai is known for shopping so Neha couldn't stop herself from going with Vikram. She asked Priya if she was comfortable and Priya assured her that she was fine.and Neha after being assured about Priya .left for Dubai as she wanted to shop for the doll too.

It was 18th feb. and unfortunately Vikram and neha's stay extended in Dubai for two day that means They will not be able to come on Maan's birthday.Maan knew about it and he was hell angry on his parents.

Neha talked with Maan and he cried on phone-Maa you lied to me .First you said that doll will come on my birthday .But she is not coming on my birthday. Now you are saying that you too are not coming here on my birthday.Then why did you go? I will not cut the cake if you and dad are not here.you always tell a lie, and Neha was sad to hear her son.

She talked Vikram-Vikram I think we should go back.Maan is very sensitive. He is hurt that we will not be there on his birthday. He is refusing to even cut the cake without us.

Vikram "Neha I will try to complete my work as soon as possible but earliest we can leave on the morning of 20th Feb.We will reach home by the evening.

Neha-No problem Vikram.I will tell Ram to arrange a small party on 20th evening. Maan will be happy if we reach there on his birthday.

Vikram informed Ram about the same.And Ram told Maan about the arrival of his parents on his birthday.

It was 20th Feb.Ram had arranged a small party in the evening. Maan was happily waiting for his parents.

But that evening Instead of his parents their dead bodies arrived at KM as the plane by which they were returning caught fire while landing due to some technical defect. The fire was so out of control that inspite of using all the available resources no one could be saved.

Ram brought the bodies of his two friends at home. Maan couldn't react at all .He saw his parents lying on the floor covered in white clothes.He was crying to see his parents.Priya who herself was in such a critical condition was trying to handle Maan.She didn't have the time to mourn on her friend's dead body.

Maan -Choti maa .I killed my parents.

Priya-Maan why are you saying so?

Maan.Choti maa agar main zid nahin karta to maa papa aaj nahin aate na, wo kal aate.But I forced them to come today.I m too bad.I killed them.

Priya "No Maan .How can a son kill his parents. You know God needed them for his help that's why he called them.You didn't do anything .If your maa see you like this she will be angry on you. She is watching you from there,and she signaled up .

Priya too was finding it difficult to pacify that eight year old boy.

Savitriji was in worst condition.She lost her whole family in few years.Only Maan was left. But she had to be strong for her grandson. She came near Maan-Maan.. be strong beta.

and Maan hugged hid dadi-Dadi.. maa papa kyun chale gaye.I m too bad na .First daddu and now maa papa.They don't love me.

Savitriji-Nahin beta. Every one loves you but we have to face life. Ma papa were coming here for you only and they lost their life .Now it's your turn Maan to perform your duty for them.Be Strong Maan. Your parents need you at this time.I know they have left us but they will watch us from the house of God.

And She prepared Maan to do the last rituals for her children and Maan's parents. As they were ready to leave for the cremation Priya held her stomach and Cried-Raaamm

All looked at her. Her water broke because the atmosphere had forced her BP to shoot.

Ram saw her -priya what happened.

Savitriji-Ram I think It's time to go to hospital.

Ram-But maa there are still two weeks.

Savitriji-It happens Ram. Aise atmosphere me ho jata hai.

Ram-Maa Right now My friends and my son needs me. Please you take her to the hospital. We will come there after the cremation.

Savitriji was having tears in her eyes seeing the loyalty of two friends-Theek hai beta.I will take her to the hospital.

Ram "Priya I m sorry .Please.. Right now that is more important for me.

Priya-Ram don't worry, Maa hai na .We will manage.You take care of Maan.

Ram nodded and they all left from there.

half family was going to bid a last goodbye to their two family members and half family was going to welcome a new member in their family.

Precap-Doll arrives as Maan's birthday gift from his parents


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Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

painful update😭

maan is too sensitive
he is angry that his parents are not coming to his birthday
they died in accident and priya in hospital 😭😭
maan is shattered hope he will over come it.
it was maan's bithday but he became his parents death day and his doll's birthday.
aap ne rula diya bachi ko😭😭
waiting for next part
bul gayi me first to comment😊
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oMG maan lost his parents its soo painful ..its heart wrenching update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 👏
It feels so good to comment on ur thread that too on first page😆
Masoom ishq 😳
Well I think the title is the most apt title for this story
Maan again this boy stole my heart with his endless innocence😉
And geet well she is yet to enter😆
My heart goes to Maan poor soul lost his parents at a tender age
I just hope geet fills that place soon in his life with her merry colours
The situation some what reminds me of kuch kuch hota hai when that little argali tells Kajal that her mother is no more in this world * sigh*😭
Heart wrenching update di🥱
Just want to see how this little wrecked boy reacts on seeing his light 😳
Waiting for the next update 😳
Thank u for the 😆pm 😃
Love aanya

P.s -u will find this comment little absurd as it is not the usual "Anaya comment "
But di I didn't have appropriate words to explain Maans pain 😭
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
its very painful update maan lost his parents on the sameday oh god so they are going to have happy and sad day 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish


That is on Punarvivah Thread before first part.and I came for few minutes and I noticed that you talked.Congrats for that😉

Hiii didis missed u guys
I see u have enjoyed a lot without me
Happy Krishna birthday

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