ll False Impressions ll Chapter 9-Pg 84. (17/01)

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MISTIE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

omg loved it

plz pm me whenever u post.

nyc part

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Ruthi777

@Ruthi777

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

"Arnav Singh Raizada had been left behind by the enigma that was Billu Rani, or Madame Butterfly as he liked to think of her. "

I love your Madame Butterfly. I love the fact that you made her such a strong character with awesome brains !!! She knows her stuff !!! I love your NK and Payal. Your story reminds me of 'If Tommorow Comes' by Sidney Sheldon. Khushi reminds me of the female protagonist in it. And the dance 'Piya tu' was awesome !!! Like that she is bold and a great seductress who is anonymous.

Please update soon !!!

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penrith

@penrith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

your story is so great that i have read it twice so far... its killing me to wait... please update you for you admirer's and sincere readers...

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penrith

@penrith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

your story is so great that i have read it twice so far... its killing me to wait... please update seen for your admirer's and sincere readers..

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penrith

@penrith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

your story is so great that i have read it twice so far... its killing me to wait... please update soon for your admirer's and sincere readers..

i can't believe i didn't proof read... ha ha

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pallavi

@palo101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

amazing first chapter..has me totally hooked ...

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pallavi

@palo101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

wooohoo... maybe i should wolf whistle at ur update...jus came across False impressions.. very gripping story..NK and khushi thieves wow ! ... waiting for ur update :) 👏

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

What a pity you decided to leave such unfinished stories lying around. It was a beautiful story... WAS.

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Anukriti

@psychofool

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

all the best writers of this forum suffer from same prob...leaving their beautiful stories incomplete...why ladies have mercy on us readers

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#560

I somehow just read the last update. Sorry this comment is very late. I just love the ffs you two write together. Shades of Gray I started reading some time ago, and this I just never happened to catch up to. The hide-and-seek game between arnav and billu rani is entertaining, but even more intriguing is the mystery of the murders themselves. NK and Khushi are thieves, but how exactly are they involved in the case? Anyways, the payal-nk couple is cute; she's the no nonsense pathologist falling for the dashing NK.