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Originally posted by: -Xpress-
awww...that was so emotional
Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit
Awesome os
please keep writing more 😊
Originally posted by: newt2007
hi Suhana. nice to see you back with a OS.
how can we forget golden writers of this forum?you lost touch with this forum but not lost the flavour of Premeer and Kis Desh.past and present of Heer life. written with so much emotion. I can imagine every emotion of Heer.Prrem and Heer are meant to be together. in earth or in heaven they are eternal souls.thank you so much for this wonderful OS. write more. we are craving to read more from our Desh writers.
thanks for the wonderful os...brought back all d memories of premeer😊
pls keep writing...will be wating for the updates of ff's and ss...😊
Originally posted by: kiran_28
Awesome Os
i'd read ur almost all stories...dey were really good..i'd got inspired wid ur stories..
Pls dont stop writing...
Nd welcome back to the forum :D
Originally posted by: tarannum6
AWOSOME OS... :)
Beautifully written...
HEER
Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
'Arey ankhein khool ke ek baar dekh tou sahi apne aap ko, kitni sohni lag rahi hai tu', one of her friends insisted her as she turned her towards the mirror.
But she closed her eyes even more tightly, just then her mother entered the room and called her name. 'Heer puttar, tayyar ho gain a tu?'
She turned away from the mirror and opened her eyes. She just stared at her mother and remained completely mum as she had been for last couple of hours in fact she had rarely made a full conversation with anybody for this past year.
'Kissi ki buri nazar na lage meri bachi ko', her mother said as she took her kajal and marked her behind the ear. Her mother then turned her towards the mirror and said 'dekh tou sahi aj tu ek dam pari jaisi lag rahi hai'.
She reluctantly lifted her gaze towards the mirror to look at herself but the image staring back at her did not amaze her as it had others. They were all seeing how beautiful she looked from outside but everyone failed to notice how empty her eyes were, they almost haunted her.
She continued to stare at the mirror; she was looking how a typical Indian Bride looked with her heavy jewelry, mehndi stained hands and red dress. They were right if the eyes are to be removed from the equation she was looking beautiful exactly the way HE has always wanted to see her when she became his bride. She could hear his voice in her head.
'Dulhan tou bas laal jore mein hi sunder lagti hai', somebody whispered in her ear as she was selecting her bridal dress.
'Yeh konsi kitab mein likha hai, I want to wear some other color on my wedding day, red is so common, so old fashioned and so over rated', she had argued with him.
'Nahin meri dulhan to mujhe laal jore mein hi chahiye aur uske hath mehdi se range hoon, and obviously she should be covered from head to toe in gold', he said looking into her eyes.
'You are so old fashioned and I am so not going to wear all that and be an ordinary Indian bride.'
He gave her a quick peck on lips and said, 'yes you are, my love and you can never look ordinary because my eyes on you will always make you feel special, you are the most special girl in my life, Heer.'
So that is what I am missing, his eyes on me, she thought as she came back to reality.
Heer Heer na aakho adiyo...
Main te Sahiba hou...
Ghori leke aye le jave...
They have been madly in love for what seemed like forever. As long as she can remember, she had not thought about anything but their life together since the day she had met him. As if 19 years of her life before him did not matter, they were wiped from her memories it was just him sitting in them like a king. She could again hear him whispering in her years.
Ohde je hi main te oh mere varga
Hans da ai sajra savere varga
Ankha bandh kar laa te thande hanere varga
'Love like this happens to only few lucky ones Heer', he said as he pulled her beside him on the large swing.
'Oh really? But meri friend Ash ko to roz pyaar ho jata hai, kissi naye larke se', she teased him.
'I am very serious Heer, and I am telling you even fewer among the lot get to have their love by their side forever, so you should know how blessed we are.'
'If you say so, Prem. By the way there are exactly two more months before we get to be together forever', she still acted non-serious.
'Yaad karo gi meri in baton ko ek din tum jab main aas paas nahin rahon ga tou.'
'As if, tum mera picha chor ke kahin jane wale ho.'
Ohde je hi main te oh mere varga
Hans da ai sajra savere varga
She snapped out of her imagination as she felt a tear leaving her eyes. No, today is not the day to cry, it's finally the time for me and Prem to be together forever. Though I will not forgive him that easily for delaying our union for almost a year but all will be forgiven once I will meet him, she thought. 'But it was really cruel of you to bind me with your promise, Prem', she mumbled.
Ankha bandh kar laa te thande hanere varga
Ohde je hi main te oh Mirza mere varga
'Arey barat aa gayi', somebody shouted.
'Chal Heer, khirki se tere Ranjhe, I mean Dulha ko dekhte hain,' her best friend tried to pull her towards the window of the room.
'Mujhe kya jaldi hai main tou ab hamesha ke liye milne hi wali hoon apne Ranjhe se', she said with a forced smile but no one noticed as everybody was now busy with the commotion brought by arrival of baraat.
Naal naal turna te vith rakhna
Hadh rakh lena vich dil rakhna
Just as she was left alone another memory knocked the door but this time it was painful.
She was running in the corridors of hospital, scared as hell. She was in her lehenga that she had got after much argument with Prem as it was a pastel pink and he did not wanted her to wear light colors even on her Mehndi. The mehndi design on her right hand was still unfinished in fact it was spoiled, just as her friend had started to write Prem's name on her hand her mother has told her that news and she had just pulled her hand smudging the name and ruining the whole design.
Next thing she was standing on his bedside, with him lying almost lifeless with his head covered in bandages, oxygen mask on his nose and all sorts of machines attached to support his life. Just as she put her hand in his, he opened his eyes.
'You are here, I had been waiting', he murmured, his pain evident from his voice.
'What have you done to yourself, how this happened', she did not know how to react.
Chhanve chhanve paave, assi teri parchhave, tur naa
Ohde je hi main te oh Mirza mere varga
'I can see my name on your palm, though you tried to erase it, I wonder why?'
'Shut up why I would erase it, it's just that I got so worried when I heard about your car crash, it smudged, I will correct it when we get home.'
'I need to ask you something, Heer, you have to assure me something', he said as he tried to catch his breath. The machines suddenly started to blare and she shouted for doctors.
She was once again back in the real world with her mother's voice, 'Heer, humain chalna hai, shaadi ka shub mahurat ho gaya hai.' She took Heer's hand and started walking downstairs towards the mandap.
She climbed down the stairs in a haze. She did not know why her heart was so heavy if it was such a good day and she was about to join her Prem forever. May be it's just all this waiting is getting on my nerves, a wait of more than a year when they were just about to tie the knot the next day when he had that accident, she thought.
Ohde jayhi main te oh mere varga haaye
Ohde jayhi main te oh mere varga
'But I should be happy it is happening now', she said to herself and plastered a smile on her face which did not quite reached her eyes.
She reached the Mandap and joined her groom to be. The priest started chanting the holy words. She could see the people around her happy and praying for her happiness, which she thought are soon going to be fulfilled but who knows they would like it or not when it happens, after all then she will be leaving them forever to have an eternity with her love.
Ho Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye haaye
Le jaaye Mirza koi
The priest asked them to stand up for Pheras. Her string of memory rejoined from where it was broken when her mother had came and asked her to come downstairs.
'Heer, you will become a bride, a traditional one with lots of jewelry and red jora', Prem said with much difficulty as his condition was worsening with every passing moment.
'You shouldn't talk Prem', as she wiped her tears and watched the doctors give him the treatment. They had already pushed her aside from his bedside.
'Don't worry you will look very special as my eyes will be on you, no matter what.'
'I know your sight never leaves my face when we are in the same room',
'You will skip your step when the first phera starts, the heavy traditional dress and the bridal nerves', he tried to smile.
The first phera started and she actually missed a step but she knew it was more than the dress to cause it. The pheras were over before she could think anymore, her mind was now in a frenzy, thoughts all jumbled up and a sting of pain on her temples.
Le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi...
'Then sindoor will be filled and I bet a little will fall on your nose.'
'Off course it will, Prem as you would also be as nervous as me and you hand will shake a little.'
The groom was asked to apply sindoor on her and as he did that, a little fell on her nose.
'Managal sutra will be tied around your neck and it would be a little difficult as you will already have so much jewelry on.'
He was right it was difficult but not only because of heavy jewelry but also because she was not able to keep her neck straight due to every increasing pain in her head, it was as if a fog has started settling on her brain.
Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Just as the priest announced the completion of her wedding rituals, she fell down due to the unbearable pain. There started a commotion around her. She was slowly losing her senses but his voice was so much clearer now.
'You have to promise me Heer, you will find your love again and get married and be the bride I always wanted to see you as.'
'Don't make me do that, don't leave me Prem.'
Their last conversation echoed in her mind again and again as she sat there beside his lifeless body, still clutching his hand. He had not closed his eyes before hearing her say, 'Ok, ok, I promise but you can't leave like this.'
She now had a peaceful smile on her lips as she was lying there with her head in her mother's lap.
'I fulfilled my promise to him, look I am a bride, a wedded bride', she stammered.
'I'm com..ming to you Pr..em, your promise is not there any..more to sto', her head finally lulled to her side as a tiny bottle of a potent poison slipped from her clutch.
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aaye le jaaye
Oh ho...
ONE CRAZY ENCOUNTER
He woke up slightly disorientated, but soon recollected the memories of last night as he glanced towards the beauty sleeping on the other side of the bed in the same state of undress as him.
It had all started with one crazy night of reckless drinking and one totally ruined pair of stinky Salvatore Ferragamo loafers he had just bought. His thoughts were cut short just as the wild brunette, who has taken him straight to the heaven last night, stirred beside him. She held her head in both hands as she tried to sit up.
"Hung over much, darling?" he asked as he tried to avert his gaze from her naked form.
Scattered and foggy images of last night came to her mind as she heard the voice and she quickly turned to face him.
"What are you doing here?" she asked as she shook her head to clear her mind.
"I think, you should ask yourself honey, that's my bed you are sitting on."
"Oh... that's obviously not my place"
"It isnt, sexy..."
"You think we had the THING last night?"
He just sat there, gave her naked body a full head to toe stare and smirked.
"Yeah, we obviously had", she almost said to herself. "You are such a jerk to take advantage of a girl under influence, you know" she said still holding her head.
"Oh yeah? May be you should just revise your drinking habits and start consuming only that much you can stomach so you don't end up being wasted", he countered but his gaze still lingered on her naked bosom, it was almost as if her assets were teasing him and he so wanted to fondle them again as he had last night.
"May be for a change, you should look into girls eyes for once when shes talking instead of just ogling the only parts you men see on her, Mr...", she said as she wrapped the sheets around her naked form and jumped off the bed.
"Juneja", he supplied.
"What?"
"Mr. Juneja, my name is Prem Juneja and you?"
"I am obviously not interested in introductions, we had fun but now its over so maybe you can leave the room for once so that I can get dressed", she said as she collected her clothes which were strewn all over the room but she was unable to find her panties.
"You looking for something?" he asked as he pointed towards her pink undies hanging from his pinky finger.
"You are such a bas***d, give them to me and please can you get lost for some time, I need to get decent."
"Hey you have nothing to hide, I have seen all." he winked as he flicked her undergarment towards her. "Besides, how can I leave my room with a stranger? There are many valuable things all over."
"Oh I am no thief or tramp or whatever you think of me."
"You already ruined my $600 Salvatore Ferragamo loafers, who knows what else you end up doing?"
And her mind cleared at once on the mention of $600 ruined pair of shoes.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
*Last Night*
"Not another drrrinkkk afterrr this oneee", she slurred as she gulped another shot.
"Oye Heeriye no more hun, you are so difficult when you are smashed", Ash said as she tried to pull her away from the drinks bar.
"You think I am high, you reeeaalllyyy thinkkk?" she asked as she clamped her swaying form onto Ashs shoulder.
"No I don't think, I know."
"Then lets go dancing, I am gonna show you I'm not as drrrunnnkkk as yyou think, I can still shake a leg or two."
"Yeah right lets go dancing at least on the floor there's a chance of finding a nice guy to hook up with."
"Hook up? I doubt I have a desire for that now after that fool, Karan."
"Oh come on Heeriye, he was a douche."
"Oh that he was, lets go freaking dancing Ash..."
And they both made their way to the dance floor. It was a chaos out there but Heer and Ash never minded being part of that.
And there on the other corner of the club was Prem Juneja the Casanova, the ultimate bad boy and what else other than a club of beautiful girls can be of more of more interest to him but somehow he did not seem to enjoy. His friend had just left him alone for some girl as if he didn't do the same to him all the time.
He just sat there in the dark booth smoking his anger out when he saw her for the first time. She was hot with her clingy black net mini dress that left very little to imagination and those killer red heels. And the way she was dancing, he couldn't blame the boys who were hanging around her with their tongues practically out of their mouths.
He never let his gaze away from her enticing movements as he enjoyed his beer. Just then the little temptress also noticed him and threw a seductive smile his way as her dance moves became more suggestive.
"Oye Heeriye, what rather who are you aiming at? You said you weren't interested in a hookup tonight?" Ash asked as she noticed Heer getting all sexy and making the guys do crazy things for her, rather with her.
"That's until I saw that hunk in blue t-shirt over there, in the lounge", she replied as she winked in his direction.
"i think you are too drunk to handle him Heeriye..."
"You will see Ash..."
By the time Prem had took her bait and made a beeline towards the dance floor as he chugged up his beer and tossed the can. The girl was so forward she immediately pushed herself closer to him as he reached her crossing the throngs of drunken dancers.
Prem was already turned on and the girls hands all over his shoulders were doing no good to the state of affairs in his lower body. She was teasing him really teasing THE PREM JUNEJA.
"Test the waters before you set sail, honey he purred in her ear. You never know what storm waits beneath the seemingly calm upfront." He blew a hot breath on her bare shoulder.
"You don't know me, do you? I have a strong affinity for storms", she replied as she pushed herself even closer to him. Before she could do anything else, she felt somebody pulling Prem from her arms and the second moment he was lying on the floor with a drop of blood oozing from his lower lip.
"What the hell", she swore as she bent down to help the handsome hunk to his feet.
Than before she knew the guy quickly stood up and landed a punch on somebody. She turned back and saw the guy who had hit the Handsome she was dancing with was none other than Karan, who was now flat on his back as her dance partner had made sure he never got up without help.
"You so needed that, Karan..." she said as she turned around to thank her handsome hunk but she was surprised to see him already making his way out of the club. She followed him outside.
There he was standing on the pathway trying to hail a cab. She walked towards him as she tried to balance herself and holding her head in her head. She had started to feel nauseated.
"Shit, I have once again over drunk my capacity...", she muttered as she reached behind him.
He turned back but before he could say anything Heer doubled over and threw up big time and that too on the guys shoes.
"What the F*** lady? those were $600 loafers..."
Heer stood up as she retrieved a hanky from her clutch and dabbed her mouth.
"Telling me? I can see I am a fashion industry professional, those are Salvatore Ferragamo and I am so sorry I did that to them", she said genuinely.
"As if they would be alright by your sorry"
"So what else I am supposed to do? Lick my mess off them?"
"You should only take that much alcohol you can handle, you lil drunkard..."
"Hey, who you think you are to judge me like that?"
"I am the man whose $600 pair of shoes you just ruined."
"Oh wanna trade them for my $650 Louboutins? she asked as hanged her shoes in front of his face which she had already stepped out of by the time.
"That's becoming too much, firstly you throw up on me and now you are trying to insult me?"
Heer realized that she was just taking the thing to far and may be the drinks she took earlier are just taking over her mind.
"Hey I am so sorry my place is just a few blocks, you can come and I will clean them up for you."
Prem just shook his head in approval started walking beside her. Just after a silent walk of 10 minutes they reached her building and made their way to the elevator, she pushed the buttons for her floor and the doors closed.
Though he was pissed as hell but Prem could not fail to notice the way that girl was leaning against the mirrored wall of the lift. The black lacy dress was giving the glimpse of her smooth milky skin underneath and the way the hemline stopped on her upper thighs was turning him on beyond limits and that killer red Louboutins just added to his misery. He was already undressing her in her mind and pushing her petite body on the elevators wall when they reached her floor and lift stopped with a buzz.
She led him towards her flat and fished her key out of her clutch. Just as she opened the door she was shocked to see Ash sprawled across the living room couch with a guy covering her nakedness but showing his.
She shrieked "Ash, thats my place and you are disgusting."
"You just get lost Heeriye, go take a walk or something", Ash replied between heavy breaths.
Heer hurriedly closed the door and shrugged at Prem. "She is just beyond the limits of reasonableness."
"May be you can clean my shoes at my place", Prem invited her, though he had thousand other things she can do for him rather than cleaning the damned shoes.
"Yeah, right lets go..." she agreed
They made their ways towards the elevator. This time Prem kept his eyes closed to keep his fantasies in check but it did not help much. They hailed a cab and soon they reached his place. He guided her to the elevator and pushed his floor button.
Just as the door closed Heer somehow twisted her foot and landed on his chest as he hurriedly looped his arms around her to steady her. He could see that alcohol was in full effect on her, her eyes were hazy and she could barely keep her balance.
She let her hands caress his hard biceps and said, "You know you are so damn hot..."
Prem who was already turned on beyond limits just lost control and crashed his lips on hers as he pushed her up against the wall of the elevator. She greedily kissed him back as he lifted her further up and she clamped her legs around his torso. Her hands were sprawled on his back and she was grazing her nails on his shirt. Just as he broke the kiss and dragged his mouth towards her collar bone the escalator stopped and he got out still managing to lift her up against his body as his tongue caressed her shoulder.
He pushed her against the door of his apartment as her continued his assault of her shoulder and neck.
"We should go.. in..side", Heer managed between her moans and gasps.
He reluctantly let her go took out his apartment key from his pocket. She was distracting him as she kissed her way down from his ear to his throat, just than the door came unlocked and he hurriedly pulled her inside. He kicked the door shut as he again lifted her little and pushed her back against the wall. They again engaged in a hot kiss.
Before they knew it, they were making their way towards the bedroom with him still cradling her in his arms and their clothes leaving a trail behind them.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"I think I should see myself out..." Heer said as she picked up her clutch from the bedside and started for the bedroom door.
"Hello miss at least you should drop in your name or contact maybe we can meet again, after all as you said we had fun"
"And I also said, if you missed, not interested anymore", Heer replied as she got out and banged the door on his face.
"Hey do let me know when you get dressed and leave the apartment", he shouted behind her with a smile on his face.
"And we are obviously are meeting again Miss Maan coz this story is far from over yet..." he said to himself as he put the visiting card, which he was able to fish out from her clutch when she was gathering her clothes, in his wallet.
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