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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

Tasha ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
I am happy that you are writing such a great thing ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
It will help us to be happy and will teach us lessons to live ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
The title is just perfect "Don't Take Life For Granted"
And the title is so pure and true ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
And then "Life is short live it fully"
This is my all time favorite phrase ๐Ÿ˜‰
And this is the rule of my life ๐Ÿ˜Š
I always follow this phrase ๐Ÿ˜Š
Then the synopsis ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
What should I say about the synopsis
I am speechless ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Super awesome ๐Ÿ‘
Then the quotes ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ And specially Allama Iqbal's ๐Ÿ‘
"Khudi ko kar buland itna ke har taqder se pehle
Khuda bande se khud pooche bata teri raza kya hai."

I personally love this quote ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
eat Then the part 1 ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Outstanding ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

thank you so much dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ
hope it does i will try my best to do so
i m glad u liked the title
yup it is
great now i know ur fav phrase too๐Ÿ˜†
wow thats great i m glad u follow it ๐Ÿ˜Š
awe thats my fav too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
sure dear the update will b out tomorrow hopefully
thanks for such a lovely comment ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

tasha, greatest idea ever.


kudos to you for writing this.

this is a poem i love---and it seemed appropriate. if u have not read it maybe u would like it.

brilliantly written. and who cant face life are cowards.

A PSALM OF LIFE

WHAT THE HEART OF THE YOUNG MAN
SAID TO THE PSALMIST

TELL me not, in mournful numbers,
Life is but an empty dream !
For the soul is dead that slumbers,
And things are not what they seem.

Life is real ! Life is earnest!
And the grave is not its goal ;
Dust thou art, to dust returnest,
Was not spoken of the soul.

Not enjoyment, and not sorrow,
Is our destined end or way ;
But to act, that each to-morrow
Find us farther than to-day.

Art is long, and Time is fleeting,
And our hearts, though stout and brave,
Still, like muffled drums, are beating
Funeral marches to the grave.

In the world's broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle !
Be a hero in the strife !

Trust no Future, howe'er pleasant !
Let the dead Past bury its dead !
Act, act in the living Present !
Heart within, and God o'erhead !

Lives of great men all remind us
We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time ;

Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o'er life's solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.

Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate ;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.

thank you so much dear
n the poem is so sweet
thanks for sharing dear
will post it in next update so all can read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Wow tasha ypu rendered me speechless completely speechless I'm in awe of you angel you were brilliant..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.
First things the concept of this work its fantastic something very different and something very important also people get frustrated and tired of life very easily and just consider an option of giving up and ending their life which is a very sad option trying to evade problems and not facing them is the wrong thing to do facing them and working a way out is the thing that should be done..
Depends on the outlook one has towards life if you try to see the good and positive things and try finding happiness life becomes beautiful and worth living automatically but if negative is all one thinks and thrives on then its a watse of life the precious gift given by god to us..๐Ÿ˜Š.
The way you wrote this update showing how one should see the positive rather than the negative aspects of life and value our life and weighing our options before taking any step was commendable girl you're a brilliant talented writer no words to say..
The quotes were awesome and truly motivating it made me think for a minute whether my outlook is truly right or even I'm taking my life granted and just living it for the sake of it..
You should definitely 100% continue this work I'd love to read it and support you in continuing this through my comments..
You rock angel simply superb you are..๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love,
Kashmi..๐Ÿ˜Š

awe thank you so much kashi ๐Ÿ˜ณ
yup dear its a different concept and i m glad u liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
true everything depends on ones outlook ๐Ÿ˜Š
awe dear ur words touched my heart โค๏ธ
i m glad u liked the quotes
awe thanks once again kashi ๐Ÿค— it means a lot โค๏ธ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: anushka1129

hey tasha u did a brillant job๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
keep it up..
quotes are awesomes.
totally loved your concept ..

Yes life is too precious to waste just like this..
whatever happened or happening in our life we just have to be strong n tackle it..
Sucidie is never an option..
yes we all know its easy to say but hard to do but still we just can't waste our life n give up so easily right..
life is sometime good n sometime its really bad but we all know that it will never stay still..if its bad time now then definetly our good times will also come but till then we just have to work hard n stay strong to tackle whatever comes in our way ..


this story i am defintely gonna read..
poor naina..
really feeling bad for her :(
her family memebers ๐Ÿ˜ก
those words they use for her own daughter or sister i can't belive it..seriously they need to realise what those words does to her๐Ÿ˜ก
GA is angle to save naina n make her loved one to realise her importance in their life n to make naina also realise that sometime what we see is not always right..
Amazing start..
excited to read further..
thanks for the pm :)

thanks a lot dear
i m glad u liked the quotes and concept both ๐Ÿ˜Š
i agree dear it is precious ๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks for reading the story dear
hmm they will realize it dont worry relax and smile ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
will b updating by tomorrow
u r most welcome dear ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

OMG awesome :D

I know already said it but once again it's awesome :)
Loved It
Yes everyone need to take their life seriously!!!
It can't always give you happiness!!!!
yah it's true sometimes you see no solution but committing suicide is also not the choice!!! running away from the problem doesn't end it...
So proud of u di!!! โค๏ธ
and I love the quotes!!!!
Update Soon!!!
and hoping that naina's family regret each and everything that they did to hurt her!!!
and wow rati is Naina <3
but who is GA!???

awe lil sis thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
well said dear it cant give happiness all the time
n neither sadness just hv to wait for right time to come and stay strong till than
awe thanks a lot lil sis :') โค๏ธ
i m glad u liked the quotes
will b updating by tomorrow
awe they will dont worry
yup rati is naina ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
well u will know who is GA by the end of the SS ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ..Shanae..

WOW di... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
it's just so amazing and an applaudable thing for u to be writing such inspiring SS's
So proud of u!

the first Update was amazing...
cause there are a lot of cases like this. and i'm hoping some people reading this will learn something from ur short stories...
โค๏ธ

No one should take life for granted, which is y i love ur title too...
amazing idea!
and i know... no one else can carry out such an amazing idea like this!

update soon!!
will be waiting...

~Shanae

mu band karo warna makhi chali jaey gi ๐Ÿ˜†
awe thank you so much dear :') it means a lot
yeah i hope that too dear โค๏ธ
i m glad u liked the title
awe thanks once again for such lovely words dear
sure tomorrow dear the update will b out ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all the name listed below for liking the first post ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

What We Believe Is Not Always TRUE

Part 2

There was pin drop silence for several minutes until Nainas mom fell on her knees. It was like her entire world came crashing down in front of her. Her eyes were welled up with tears in few seconds. She was not sobbing or crying out loud but tears werent stopping either. It was like she was a lifeless person sitting helplessly on ground. GA looked to her side to make sure Naina saw her moms condition. Naina was about to go to her mom and hug her tight but GA stops her by holding her hand and signaling her not to do anything.

No its not possible finally her mom said that and started crying out loud. She was hitting her head with her palms and mumbling to herself. I never treated her properly. I always thought that she is ill-fated for me and my family. I cursed her day and night. I am worlds worst mother ever I never move my hand on her head with love and affection. She always craved for me and my love. Her father died few months later she was born and our business and everything failed. We lost all our assets. I always said that she is responsible for what happened. But she wasnt. she cried her heart out and after saying all that she kept mum. She didnt said or did anything after that. Even her eyes were lifeless and tears were just rolling down from her eyes emotionlessly.

Now it was turn for the siblings to react all this time they were listening to their mom and were trying to grasp what GA said and what their mom was saying. Sidhart was the next one who broke down. He takes steps backwards until he reached the corner of the room and his back hits the wall. He sits down with his legs crossing in such a way that he hid his face with the help of his knees. He kept crying like a baby. He clutched his hairs tightly and hit his head with the wall backwards. He hit his head but Naina felt the pain. She again tries to walk up to him but GA stops her. With broken heart she stops and listens to GA.

I always treated her like she means nothing to me. I cursed her, almost tried once to beat her. I also said that I will never pick her doli on her wedding day. Now look I will never going to get that chance. I am definitely a bad kismet he pours his heart out and hit his head again with the wall. Then he hid his face again with his knees and cried. Naina and GA both had tears in their eyes seeing the condition of Sidhart. GA so wanted to let Naina go to her brother but it wasnt over yet. Nainas sister, friends, and her loves reaction were left.

Nainas sister, Kavya, runs into her room and opens her cupboard meanwhile GA and Naina follows her in. She was searching for something desperately. She throws a lot of stuff on floor including her clothes. Finally she found what she was looking for. She holds the cloth close to her heart and starts crying and sits by the end of her bed at the floor. It was her favorite ghaghra. She always wanted to wear it but I didnt even allow her to touch it. One day we fought a lot for this ghaghra and in anger I told her that I will not let you wear this even if you die. Today she is dead and my words came true. I am definitely unlucky person not cause I had her as a sister but cause I never realized her real worth and never treated her well. she was crying so badly that now she was unable to breath properly cause of the sobbing. Naina grabs a glass of water and gives her. Kavya denies at first but drinks it as she sees that girl in burkha (Naina) wasnt giving up.

All three were crying on their spots and suddenly a group of girls and boys enters the house. Girl 1 says while looking around Naina, where are you? Girl 2 looks towards nainas room and says must be sleeping. What else? they all shared a laugh. Boy 1 says with a fake seriousness and sadness girls behave and laugh slowly you guys or her dream of prince charming will break. They again laugh out loud but soon get a 500 volt shock when they saw nainas mom and siblings crying. Aunty what happened? All ok? Where is Naina? boy 1 asked while sitting beside Nainas mom. Nainas mom who was quietly crying starts sobbing badly and while crying says she left us all alone. It was hard to understand what she really meant. Some thought she left the house. Some thought she left something. Actually they all didnt get anything. Girl 2 walks inside the room passing GA and Naina who were standing by the door and sits beside Kavya di, where is Naina? What she left? Why did she left? kavya didnt say anything but hug her tightly.

GA couldnt wait so she asks the question as she wanted to know who they all were ummm who are you guys? Friends. We are Nainas friends. Girl 3 replied who was quiet all this time. Well I am sorry to inform you all that your friend, Naina, committed suicide by jumping from the top of the building and now she is dead GA replied. No they all gasped. Boy 1 says with real emotions and sadness and with teary eyes how can she? She was the bravest and strongest of all. She was my inspiration. I had never seen a girl strong enough like her. Nainas face lights up she never expected his friend saying such nice things about her. You are right dude. We ill-treated her, bullied her daily but she never fought/replied back. She always was the most sensible girl in over group. What made her do that? boy 2 asked in disbelief. GA chuckles sarcastically and says your answer is already in your statement. Your treatment and attitude towards her, her familys ill treatment and other stuff forced her to do so. Am I wrong? After GA says all that and asked the question to all present in the room, each and every ones face drops down. As they all knew whatever GA said and they did to her was the sole reason for her suicide.

They all were crying and after sometime girl 2 goes to sidhart and says to him are you ok? I know it is hard to believe it but we all have to accept this. We have to let her go. We have to accept that she left us that Naina died. What the f***? a guy who just entered the house almost snapped at girl 2. She turns around and looks at the guy with a shocked expression. Are you in your senses or not? Do you even know what you are saying? Do you even remember you are saying all that crap about your own best friend? No, let me re-phrase your so-called best friend the guy questioned the girl 2 with full sarcasm and venom in his words for girl 2. GA takes a deep breath and says calmly she is talking about Naina who lives I mean used to live here and you are? GAs questioned made him realize the presence of GA and the girl in burkha. He walks up to them and looks at both of them carefully one by one. My name is Yuvi. I am Nainas BFF and someone who she loved Yuvi replied with pain visible in his eyes.

GA gave him a quick smile which went noticed by Naina only. GA was happy to see that pain in his eyes because it proved his love for her. Naina takes step ahead to stop him and hug him tight but GA manages to stop her again. She closes her eyes unable to see her love in pain and crying. GA keeps her hand on his shoulder he looks straight into her eyes. GA eyes had an assuring feeling which was felt by Yuvi. Yuvi said can I see her? I want to see her? Talk to her? I know she cant reply me but I have to say it to her that I love her the most. That I cant live without her that I want to be with her even if it means dying he said the last line with confidence. He was ready to give up his life for her. He turned around may be to do the same thing but stopped as soon as GAs words reached his ears. If you loved her than why you didnt said that to her when she was alive? GA questioned him and indirectly his love for her.

He turned around and replies I wanted her to change. I made her belief that I dont like her kind of girls who speak truth, who dare to stand up against wrong, and who would tolerate everything from her family and friends just with the hope to get love in return. I did that so she can change herself. So that she can stop tolerating all the bad actions and words she gets from her family and friends. So that she stop taking the side of truth so that her family and other wrong people would not go against her. So that she never feel lonely. So, that her family and friends stay with her always. In order to change her I made sure that I show my hatred towards her and not love. But the truth is they all dont deserve her and neither do I as we all wanted to change her no matter what the reasons were but we all were wrong. And she, well she was always right and deserved love and happiness. But what she got is loneliness, pain, hatred and now death. He fell down on his badly. He was shattered completely. He lost everything completely everything.

Precap

The end of the story and the real identity of GA.

Attention

I do not promote suicide, or ill-treatment, nor do I want anyone to change for others unless the change is for GOOD.

Authors Note

Thank you all who supported, read, commented and liked part 1 of this SS. I expect the same thing for part 2 and my future updates. Please if possible pass on this link to your buddy list when you inform them about your updates. Its a request.

Also, I want you guys to suggest me tellywood celebrity who you would like to see in my future SSs. You can suggest me the Jodi and individual actor/actress as well. Also, give me full real name of them as sometimes I dont know the names given to them in particular shows.

Also, I am open up for suggestion. So do pm me if you feel like doing so. Or you wanna share a story, incident, and lesson and want me to write it alone or with you lemme know. I am ready to do that too as long as someone gets inspired through those stories.

Please guys support me in this thread and help me write more stories through your comments, likes and support.

Also, PMS will be sent after I update A One Man Army. So please DO NOT panic as I will PM to ALL. Thanks for your cooperation.

Love you all

TaSha โค๏ธ

Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Gaah late here tooo >.<
Res
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Wow .. Di.. The concept is really awesome ...
I loved the quotes..
Superb..
PAta ni kaaha se ate hai aapko aese ideas ๐Ÿ˜†
First part was really awesome !!

Main chali second part ke liye ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Not that late for part 2
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Superb part !! ..
Awesome..
I love the you write .. that to you know naa ๐Ÿ˜†
Well , this is really interesting..
Wating for the next part.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

~Arpita โค๏ธ

Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago

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