Kagaz Ki Kashthi-Luv tht Sacrifices life#9_(#10 pg 1)- Page 7

Originally posted by: abinash079

beautiful update wow loved it
they way maan made love to her was really too good
and get finally let go of everything

really hats off to u tichu👏👏

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

tich wat is tis, i became numb..oh god,

wow lovely lovely emotional heart touching tearful, hapy wala tear dear,, very lovely, i stood numb after reading tis update.. te way my maaneet ki love made me shock, im really dreaming or real, only my maaneet can love each other tis much crazily.. te way my maan loving his geet, with slow steps as he touching her like a feather was lovely... te way he melting her with his passion and both drowning in they love was so lovely emotional, heart touching scenes.. te way my maan want to erase te past and marking his geet with his pure love and geet too loving him was so lovely, i got tears seeing they love dear... im craving for tis love, but i know i wont get from any one,except from my maan... te way my maan making his geet to feel special and made her to remember tis night was so emotional.. i love tis update so so so so much

tich tis is one of ur best update...

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

thanku for giving tis feel.. i love u tich

Originally posted by: babygurl10

I discovered ur FFs recently, must say you are one of the best writers.

Hope you continue to write on Maan and Geet!!

I love love this ff, can't wait for next part.

This part was written very nicely, agreed if someone find it offensive then certainty there is something abnormal. ..