reasons to live ~a taarey and swaron ff~ - Page 5

Amazing concept dear...

Super awesum concept...beautifully laid out...d way u used a phrase to decribe each charactr...u hve good command ovr d lang n i cums across beautifully...d characters hve a different personality..vry diff frm d ususal ffs...f done nycly...dis will b 1 remarkable ff...n i think u certainly hve it in u...m so lookin 4rwd to dis...plz update soon :)