#1 always there with you (chapter 1-10)

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Fimmy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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loved the part...
plzzz cont it soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I liked the story its awesome

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Maryam...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Heya😊

woooww Ah-mazing update...👏

sorry fr d late comment...

plxx update sooon..😛

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Edited by ..FlOrA.. - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Omg the ending! 😲 Loved the update though 👏😃 Please continue soon🤗

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Ankita Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

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chapter-3

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Asad's POV

i found her everywhere but she was no where i shouted her name like crazy but no respond i felt like i was dead she is my life i can't live without her she can't leave for new york i know she loves me too she would not leave me i had faith

i asked passer by showing her photograph if anybody has seen her anywhere but no clue

i got a call i was in no mood to talk to anyone even to myself i decided not to pick the call

but it again ringed i was about to break the mobile when i saw the name flashing it was zoya my zoya

i picked the call

i could not believe my ears she had met with an accident and was taken to a hospital

no i could not afford to loose her forever

i without wasting any second rushed to hospital that she was taken to

when i reached i saw doctor coming out of her room

i asked doctor about her

she had a deep wound on head and some minor cuts she was under the effect of anesthesia

i had already told ammi and najma about her they too reached hospital

i went to her

she was lying lifeless

she was my breath my heart my life my everything if anything happened to he i would have died without her

i hold her hand in mine and cried my heart out

she was in this state due to my mistake

i could never forgive myself for her

i felt a little move in her she was gaining her consciousness back

she was now fine

i was just about to ask her how was she when suddenly i heard her saying "i am sorry mr khan maine hi ayan ke sath milkar plan banaya tha apko rokne ke liye main nahi chahti thi ki aap court pouhonche main phuphi ki ankhon mein ansu nahi dekh sakti i am really sorry but please aap is bar mujhe chod kar mat jayeiga dekha na aapke bina mera kya hal ho gaya"[i am sorry mr. khan i was the only one who made plan with ayaan to stop you from going to court but what can i do i can't see tears in phuphi's eyes and please don't leave me this time see what happened to me in your absence]

what the hell she was talking about i thought

then suddenly i remembered she was talking about the incidence that had held 2 months back before tanveer entered our life

i straight called the doctor

doctor asked me to go outside and checked her

after a while doctor came out and told us that she was suffering from partial amnesia she don't remember anything that had happened with her in this two months she is thinking that she is this state as the bus in which she was travelling had met with an accident which actually had happened 2 months back

i was again left broken

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so here is chapter 3 hope u like it

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Edited by hottytotty - 11 years ago