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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

Second And The Last Love

~ A TaaRey FanFiction by Jallwa (D3fannm1)

Hello TR'ians 🤗 I'm Arpita 😊 and my friend Jallwa (D3fannm1) is going to write a FanFiction on our beloved couple TaaRey Because of some issues , she will not be able to post the updates so on behalf of her , I will be posting the updates . 😊

Note :- The updates will be purely her imagination . I'll just post whatever she gives to me .

For Pms add D3fannm1

Character Sketch - Page 1 (Scroll Down )

Promo - Page 1 ( Scroll Down)

Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

| | ~ Character Sketch ~ | |

Taani shikhawat- bubbly,plays pranks ,full of life,traditional and modern

Perants died when she was 11
Swayam real brother
adopted by the alwalya- kitne mohobat hai
loved by everyone
Lost her love adi in an accident- the character for this is ruslam mamtaz
there love was secret
Act normal in front of everyone but inside broken
Fights for the right doesn't like to see people sad
Good at cooking 23year old
Grate dancer
Her arohi di knows about her love
Going to join st louis

Sharon and swayam are a couple everyone knows about it
Swayam told shar about taani
Sw is scerd of sis's driving
havent talked to his sis for 2/half months
Grate dancer

Rey-he is just like in the show
But it is after kriya left
He is trying to be normal infront of his friends
deosnt cnsintrat in dance alot but more in work
Gets angry alot
The gang are the same but there's vishaka

But ashi might come some parts

This was the Character sketch . Chapter one will be posted soon 😊

Hit like and comment if you liked it .

~ Jallwa

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

P R O M O

In chandigar,in a big mention in a room the curtens are flowing bez of the fresh air outside and a girl in bed sleeping peacefully but gets disturbed by her sister Arohi shouting
Arohi- wake up taani you have to get ready (louder)wake up

Taani in her bed mouning and covers her ear with a pillow but Arohi takes the pillow and shouts at her but she covered herself with a blanket

Arohi- Taani get up (moves the blanket but she gets another pillow and it goes on and on)wake up (moves a pillow) taani Teri ye atat can never go tom you are going to leave for Mumbai and today is the only day to spend some fun time with friends .so wake up(pillows finished) mom was right you will never change. I am going and I won't talk to you

She takes few steps to the door when she feels a par of two
hands around her waist.

Taani- di itna gussa tek nahi hai varna Arjun ko app shaadi proposal Se pehle hi baga denge (leaves her waist and walking other direction)bichara kaha pas gaya .kiss bes ko girlfriend bana di ya
Arohi. (holder her ear)-acha tumne muje bes bola
Taani-ahhh di chora nay nay app bes nahi ho(leaves her ear and she takes few steps back facing arohi)balke app defenitly bes ho (runs of and arohi runs after her)

Arohi -tuna kabi nahi badloge
Taani- are di app ne wo gana suna hi hoga (putting her arm around her shoulder) ya me hi sunati hu
She goes and stands on the bed
(the song is Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain) (please imagine that the hole day passed just like in the song ok.thank you)

At night taani was standing near the window and looking at the sky and suddenly a long liquid of tear drop went down her check but she wiped it off not wanting to break someones promise so she put on a smile and went to bed but before going bed she thought of something and smiled evily ...

~ Jallwa . 😊

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Monika Saxena

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome blossom concept😛

Plz continue soon

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jallwa_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys as Arpita said that its my work and i have a problem so

i am going to write the chapter by the comment place ok so the index is going to be here

and i thanks Arpita again xxx😊

Index

Character Sketch scroll up

promo scroll up

chapter 1 scroll down

chapter 2 pg 2

chapter 3 pg 2

chapter 4 pg 4

chapter 5 pg 7

chapter 6 pg 9

taarey quotes pg 10

my child pic pg 11

chapter 7 pg 12

chapter 8 pg 14

chapter 9 pg 16

chapter 10 pg 24

chapter 11 pg 29

chapter 12 pg 33

chapter 13 pg 37

Edited by jallwa_taarey - 11 years ago

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jallwa_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter 1

morning

Taani left early morning to the graveyard to see Adi and her parents to say good bey
Taani in front of of Adis grave and her parents grave which were biside each other
Taani- I am missing you adi alot (water starts forming in her eyes) alot ...why did god do this to me first (looks at har parents) mom and dad then (looks at adi's) you (tears started droping from her cheak) why is it that the people that I love leaves me ...some time i feel lonely ...like i have no one in my life but just me and my tears...(looks at her mom) mom you said that everything happens for the good right ...mybe your right ...you left i got a lovely mother just like you or more loving (giggles a bit in her tear) just joking you both are one to me and dad you left i got a grate dad just like you (started to cry more)but i will not brake your promise of living happy but when i really started to feel happy then god snatched that happiness off me ...(cryed louder)..god snatched my love my adi from me ...(looks up to the sky) why did you do this to me..i have always believed in you... and you always take my love onzz away from me...agar mene coy or kodiya to mera vishwas hat jaye ga app pe
after few min taani stops crying but breaths slowly and her eyes are swollen and looks at three of them

taani-app logo ke promises ne muje vapas kara kardi ya hai but Adi i dont think so i can fall in love again...i dont think so i can move on an...(she was cut off by the phone sound) lag ta hai ab time agaya hai mera janeka
mom..me kalse ek new life start karuge ..new city ..new people.. sub anjan hoga mere liye..exp bhai(giggles a bit and water starts forming in her eye's)bye mom.. bye dad and bye adi ... app theeno mera sath denge na bure ya ache time pe na

she stands up and looks at them for one last time and goes home

while taani was started to go home on the other hand at home was

It was fresh and cum morning no sound just peace
All male in the house- (lughing)hahahahaha
All female exp taani- kya hues
when the men looked at the womens and laughed until their stomach hurts .same with the the females
Girls-app mujpe has raheho khud ki shakal ayneme deklo hahaha ek dum larkiyo me Tara dekrahe ho hahahah
Boys -kya (ran to the mirror looked at their faces)
Girls - zarur ye taani ka prank hoga very good one hahaha
Boys (shouts)- taani
Boys turns to the girls and said tumbe apna chehra deklo ayneme kisi putan se kuch kum nahi lagrahi ho
The girls rush to the mirror and screams as they see their faces and one name comes out of their mouth TAANI
All the house members went to taanis room to punish her for doing such a thing to them

scene shift to taani

taani has came to her room by the window bez if the family found out that she was out then they will ask her 10000000 of question which she didn't like and if they go with her then they will ask more questions about Adi and she doesn't like people seeing her cry.

she went to the washroom and as she came out she heard her name been shouted out she understood that her volcano has been erupt(it means her plan has taken action)

taani(worriedly)-chup ja taani varna (she ran to her bed and does sleeping acting)

the whole house member walked to taanis room and as they enter their anger melt by seeing taani hugging her teddy and making a cute face everyone was smiling at her innocents

bare(big)dadu-hey kitni pyaari lag rahi hai😊

bare chachu- kitni chup chap lagra hi he ek dum chup

taani (mind)-hey me itni pyaari or chup chap lagre ha hai.. jobe hai in logo ka gusa tanda hogaya varna meri bend baja karde te

(taa+aro) mom-kissie ke nazar na lage meri bachi par

DJ-hay meto iski shararat ko bohot miss karunge

everyone had watery eyes by now

(taa+aro) dad- meri bachi ke bina hum sab kese rahenge iski shararat ke bina...(a tear dropped from his eyes) muje abibi yaad hai kese mene ise or sawaya ko yaha ayata

by now taani couldnt control her tears and ran to her dad and hugged him tightly and cry-ed... by this action everyone was shocked but understood the situation and everyone smiled

taani (hugging and crying)- i love you thank you for being a father thank you a lot i love you dad i love you

dad-i love you to meri bachi and thanks to you for being my daughter(kisses her head)

taani- dad agar me jarahi hu to kya huwa me to apke dil se to bahar nahi hu haina

mom- are mebe yaha kari hu (opens her hands for a hug. Taani brakes the hug with her dad and hugs her mom)

family members-hum be hai

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i finish here

thank you

Edited by d3fannm1 - 11 years ago

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Akshita Taneja

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice... Would love to read it. :)

Update soon deary :D

P.S - ME FIRST :)))))) YIPPIE

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Monika Saxena

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb n emotional update

Taani trying to be normal in front of others was really nice😊

Loved family's concern for Taani

Keep it up for the good work

Do update soon n thanx for the pm

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jallwa_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter 2

taani has left for mumbai

Here in mumbai st louis rehusal hall

loud female- what the hell are you all doing(you know who)

it was the dazzlers(exp rey) that making wrong steps and sharon shouting at them

sharon- simi tume age ana ta or nil ko pech what the hell is wrong with you two

simi+nil-sorry sharon

sharon- vicky tum tum kya kar-ra-he-ho tum rinni se dur kue dance kara heho kyu kya wo toilet jerms se stink kara hi hai

rinni worried-what lekin me to roz nati hu or...(cut off by sharon)

sharon-rinni shut up

by then the weaklings cums.

swayam gives the gang head sighn to go

swayam in his sweetest tone- sharon cum down(holds her shoulders) they are trying na so just relax humm (hugged her) itna pareshan mat ho health keliye teek nahi hai

sharon-sawyam me rey keliye pareshan hu na wo rehearsals keliye ata hai or na humse bat karta hai he has became such a workaholic (brakes their hug) i want my bff back (she take few steps away from him and facing her back to sw) all because of kriya she is the one that did this to my bff or..(got cut off)

swayam-no sharon (cums in front of her)..dont blame kriya for this.. kriya just wanted rey to move on and i know this because she left a letter before she was leavineg.. she didnt have the intention to brake someones heart(cut off)

sharon-but she did didnt she...she broke my bff 's heart she broke rey's heart and i am never going to forgive her

swayam-sharon i think you should relax ok and leave that and constraint in how we get a 6th dancer

scene shift to gang(exp swaron+rey)

vicky-do you guys remember whats our plan

neha-yes i can never forget what my babu saying to neha

everyone-stop your kagu-babu and concentrate

simi-guys we have to think how will we find a perfect girl for rey ..we already tryed so meany girls but non of them were perfect

neha- neha thinking no one good then kriya

nil-but we have to find someone better then kriya ..that girl should have quietly like kriya

vishaka-i dont think so anyone can be better then kriya nor thay could be a grate dancer like her

neha-vishaka no saying negative say positive

vicky-leave it kagu ye humesha se negative hi sochti hai ...iske muh lagnese koy fayda nahi hai

vishaka-ohh shut up you dazzlers humesha khud ko right sumaj te ho

all the dazzlers got angry

nil-ohh you shut up vishaka why are you make the situation worse ..just zip your mouth if your are not going to help us ok and if you can't zip it then get lost from here

rinni-nil stop it you'r being too rude and focus on the mane situation ok

As the were thinking on the other hand taani has went home and putted her bags in swayam's house and took the car and drive of to collage.

taan's outfit

Taani reached college

she was walking in the corridor and guys are staring at her with half opened mouth ..some guys bump into each other...or some are wondering who is she and how hot she looks .or some try flirt with taani while some guys try to show off and impress her as she stops to ask them but she wasn't interested in any of them

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finished

thank you

Edited by d3fannm1 - 11 years ago