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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey

hey ek leap mat lo...so soon???? nope...show deep frndshi blw shivam n gang...taarey beech ups n downs...swaron ke bare main kuch...u no...then u take a leap... agar idea accha laga toh srsly lo warna ignore... :P :P

waise dhamakedaar update..!!!!


Idea toh mera aisa hi kuch karneka hai😉😉
Bas sabke POV janana chahati thi😊
and don't worry I'm not taking a leap😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys I'm finally here with an update.

Thanks a lot for waiting patiently.😊😊

Here you go.😊😊



Part 19


[TaaYam leaves with Sharon, dropping her home on their way. NikAnsh are in Rey's room chatting.]

Niki: Yansh mein kuch puchu tumse?

Rey: Haan pucho.

Niki: You are seriously fine with Shivam and me dating?

Rey: (keeps silent)

Niki: Yansh please chup mat raho. Let it out.

Rey: Jab tumhe mera answer pata hai toh kyu puch rahi ho?

Niki: Kyunki mein tumhare muh se sunana chahati hoon.

Rey: Nik, I don't have a problem with you dating anyone. It's just that it's Shivam. I know tum kahogi ki he isn't the same now and all, but itni jaldi uspe trust mein toh nahi kar sakta.

Niki: Aur mein tumhe force bhi nahi karungi. In the course of time tumhe realize ho jayega.

Rey: Shivam jabse aaya hai thoda changed laga mujhe, but chahake bhi I can't trust him.

Niki: Yansh don't force yourself. If you want I'll stay away.

Rey: Shutup! Meine kaha na mujhe tum dono se koi problem nahi hai. Bas mujhe Shivam ke saath normal hone time lagega.

Niki: Yansh, I love you. (and hugs him)🤗

Rey: I love you too. (tightens the hug)🤗

Niki: Waise tumne mujhe apne baare mein kuch nahi bataya.

Rey: Mere baare mein?

Niki: Tumhare aur Taani 'bhabhi' ke baare mein.😉

(Rey ruffles his hair on hearing it)

Rey: Taani bhabhi haan? Few days ago, you hated her.

Niki: Voh mein bas gussa thi. I don't hate her.

Rey: Phew. Meri yeh tension toh khatam ho gayi.

Niki: 😆😆Batao na, how did you fall in love with her? How did you confess? Swayam ka reaction kya tha?😛

Rey: Sachchi bolu toh Shivam ki wajah se I realized that I have feelings for Taani.

Niki: Shivam ki wajah se?😕

Rey: Yeah, voh dono jab se fake relation mein the, tabse I had some feelings for her. But I suppressed them. Fir yeh Shivam ka natak khatam hua and we started fighting with each other.

Niki: You didn't like her being the GS?

Rey: Haan. As mujhe lagta tha ki even she is against dance. But fir yeh jhagda bare nahi ho pa raha tha.

Niki: So you confessed it to her?

Rey: Yes and that day was the best day of my life.

Niki: Awee.😳 Waise Swayam ka reaction?😛😉

Rey: Swayam ko baaki team se pata chala tha and vo bohot gusse mein tha.

Niki: Obvious!😆

Rey: But uski misunderstanding solve out ho gayi and then he didn't have any problem with us.

Niki: What if Swayam nahi maanta?

Rey: One good reason for it?

Niki: Erm.🤔 You're right. Swayam knows you very well. Why will he have a problem?

Rey: Baaki ki baate fir kabhi karenge. Look at the time, kal jaldi jana hai.

Niki: Yeah yeah, good night.

Rey: Good night.

[Same time at TaaYam's place. Taani is sitting on her bed wide awake and staring outside. Swayam notices that she hasn't slept yet and enters her room.]

Swayam: Taani tum abhi tak soyi nahi?

Taani: Bhai vo bas neend nahi aa rahi thi.

Swayam: Tum itna kya soch rahi ho?

Taani: Nahi bhai kuch nahi.

Swayam: You can share with me.

Taani: Bhai vo actually, aaj jo bhi hua..

Swayam: Tum chinta mat karo. Rey ab..

Taani: (cuts him) Bhai mein aapke baare mein soch rahi thi.

Swayam: Mere baare mein?😕

Taani: Haan bhai. Aap khush toh hai na?

Swayam: Yeh kaisa sawal hai?

Taani: I mean, aap mere aur Rey ki relationship se khush hai na?

Swayam: Taani, mujhe kya problem hogi tum dono se. Aur waise yeh achanak kyun soch rahi ho tum?

Taani: Vo aaj Rey ko Niki aur Shivam ke baare mein pata chala toh vo itne gussa ho gaye but aapko toh humare baare mein gang se pata chala tha. Toh.. (hesitates to complete)

Swayam: Jab mujhe pata chala tha tab I was very angry yeh sochke ki tum dono ne yeh baat mujhse chupayi thi. But later jab pata chala toh I was a bit relieved ki tumne firse koi galati nahi ki thi.

Taani: Bhai vo mujhe aapse kuch aur kehna tha.

Swayam: Kya?

Taani: Rey hi mera pehla pyaar aur mere pehle boyfriend hai.

Swayam: 😲Toh fir Shivam?

Taani: Voh sab fake tha. Tabhi jarurat thi.

Swayam: Rey ko yeh sab pata hai?

Taani: Haan.

Swayam: But aisi bhi kya jarurat thi ki tumhe yeh sab natak karna pada?

Taani: Rey ki reputation bachane ke liye.

Swayam: But tumhe Rey ki itni chinta kyun thi?

Taani: Bhai, mera Mumbai aane ka aur yeh college join karneka ek hi reason the REY. Mein unse humesha se pyaar karti thi.

Swayam: Tumne kabhi kuch bataya kyun nahi?

Taani: Vo aapke best friend hai toh mujhe laga ki aapko shayad atcha na lage.

Swayam: Khair chodo. Let's not live in the past. Abhi sab saath hai toh sab kuch atcha hi hoga.

Taani: Haan bhai, but aap seriously khush..

Swayam: Haan Taani. I feel tumhare liye Rey se atcha aur koi ho hi nahi sakta.

Taani: Toh fir aap aise weirdly kyu behave karte ho?

Swayam: Tum meri pyaari si behen ho aur tum aise sabke saamne Rey ko hug karti ho toh thoda awkward lagta hai. But that has nothing to do with you two.

Taani: Thanks bhai.🤗

Swayam: Abh apne bhai ko thanks bologi? Chalo now go to sleep. It's already too late.

Taani: Aap bhi jake so jayiye. Good night.



I hope you all liked it.

Please read the note below.😊😊

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE
~*~
Here's wishing everyone a very happy Raksha Bandhan.

This update was a Raksha Bandhan special.
Was going to write a Taayam OS but due to time limitations couldn't do both (update as well as OS)
I hope bro-sis ka bond was shown in a nice way😊
Sorry for any sort of mistake😭

Coming to the question that I had asked in the last update
Well I dont want to disappoint anyone
So I have decided that
I'll go ahead and show how they make their careers (with the small twist & test😉)
and later marriage.
Hope all are happy with the decision.

Also as this thread is nearing 100 pages
I'm gonna start a new thread from Part 21 onwards
So if anyone interested in sending banners or edits or poems or anything
Please PM it to me with the sub 'LTJ Thread 2'

Love
Shweta😊
~*~
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ResssVoh bhi pm se pehlee yayyeee 😆
Unress 😉
M feeling on top of the world 1st to comment 😆😆
NikaAnshhh Lovely convo 😃
Rey bl;ushing hayyee 😳😳😳
TaaYam convo 👍🏼
Miss them yaa 😭😭
Update soon n do pm me 😊
n Haapyyy Rakhi to yuu 🤗
Edited by Ale_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum updte partner...was mesmerised in d3 taarey track n dn my dream shattered as nw dey r no more...n second taayam OS is an amazing concept...m excited to look forward for it...n also to ur new thrad which vil b aftr 2 chaptrs of LTJ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwiee lovely update :)
busy busy me :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
sibings bond is so gud..always... luvd the bith bro sis care n talks .. cute update .. n thnx 4 pm. ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update loved how you showed the love, care and bond of a brother-sister relationship please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update loved how you showed the love, care and bond of a brother-sister relationship please update soon and pm me
Edited by shamanbk - 11 years ago

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