virman os __ Zindagi Ruswaa Kar Chali... part 3 (ii) updated pg 22 - Page 12

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hii guys i am here with the last part of this os... but but but you can rejoice thinking that its the first subpart that i am posting... other subpart will be posted later...
i will be inactive for the coming week or even after that also, so this ones for all of you... hope u like it... 😊
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PART 3 (i)
manvi : virat we were waiting downstairs for breakfast... aap aaye ni toh -
virat : actually i was busy in completing this presentation...
manvi : why dont you go and have breakfast...or i will bring breakfast here only or give it to me, i will complete this...
virat : ohhh cmon dont worry... i will complete it...
manvi : but i should have helped you... yesterday also whole day passed because of some school project of kunal...
virat : manvi... sit down... (looking up from the laptop)
manvi sat down on the bed which was just opposite to the couch where virat was sitting working on the lappy...
virat : are you human or a robot...???
manvi : what...??
virat : manvi how much will you work... whole day you work in office with me, then you take care of kunal and the household responsibilities... try and take rest sometime...
manvi : but i cant let you work alone... you also have loads of responsibility...
virat : and you know what because of this office thing, you sometimes ignore the most important duty of yours, the duty towards kunal... i just want you to focus on him... he holds the highest priority in my life...
manvi : virat aap... i mean sab hote hai na kunal ke liye... dont ask me to discontinue office... i wont be able to... i want to help you...
virat : you are already helping me so much... you are the best mother and a best daughter-in-law but i guess now you want to become the best businesswoman as well... cmon lemme become best in atleast one category... businessman of the year stuff...
manvi : you the best virat... aap best husband hai, best father, best son and a best bro-
virat : no... i failed... i am not the best brother...
saying this, virat got up and went outside the room...
manvi pov
i did it again... i again reminded virat of that day... i donno why he feels so guilty despite the fact that he did nothing... he blames himself for what all happened... how do i make him understand that kushal didnt leave us because of his mistake... it was an accident... an accident which took my love away from me... please dont do this to yourself virat... it hurts me whenever i see you like this... you are my support system and i cant see you being hurt and breaking in million pieces... but today i promise myself that i wouldnt let you break... and if u are broken, i wouldnt let you shatter... i will hold you and will never let you feel weak... i will be your strength...
virat pov
i couldnt protect you... i am not the best brother kushal... i miss you... come back to me kido... i feel incomplete without you... it feels as if one part of soul is lost somewhere... but who am i fooling... i know you can never come back... but trust me i would never let anything happen to kunal... teri aakhri nishani ko main apni aakhri saans tak sambhalke rakhunga... i promise...
at office
virat was working in his cabin and a knock on the door disturbed his concentration.
virat : come in...
manvi entered dressed in a formal dress, black straight skirt which was upto her knees and a formal t-shirt teamed up with it, hair neatly brushed into a puff.
manvi : aap ke liye lunch lai thi...
virat : thank u but may i know the reason of you knocking on the door... i have told you million times... you dont need my permission to enter my cabin...
manvi : wo kya hai na... aadat hai, jaate jaate jaegi...
virat : hehe... i know... tum aur tumhari aadatein... i doubt they will ever change...
manvi : i dont know... but i know one thing that now you have to close this file and join me for lunch... i am very hungry...
virat : didnt you have breakfast...??
manvi : no... i was waiting for you but u never came...
virat : why in the world were you waiting for me manvi...?? you should have eaten your breakfast on time...
manvi : i didnt feel like...
virat : okk... now lets eat... i am also very hungry...
manvi : didnt you have breakfast...??
virat : no actually i was waiting for u but u never turned up...
manvi : try n be original sometimes mr. vadera...
virat : no... i am hell bent on copying you and originality is not my thing u see...
manvi : chhiii... what are you saying...???
virat smiled at her and opened the tiffin box and attacked on the food.
manvi : already eating... hawww... meri wait bhi nahi ki...
virat : jaldi kha lo... fir meri meeting bhi hai...
manvi : humari... (smiling widely)
virat : yeah yeah...

now they were done with their lunch and were discussing something when manvi's mobile started ringing... virat glared at manvi as he doesnt like attending any calls while working...
manvi : hello...
kunal : mumma... when will you come back...??

manvi : baby i will come back by 4... okk...
as soon as virat heard it, he smiled while working...
kunal : dad ko phone do na... (give the phone to dad please...)
manvi : dad is busy working honey... he will call -
virat : no... gimme the phone manvi...
manvi gave the mobile to virat thinking that he always do this... he will never attend any call at work except's kunal...
virat : hello my big boy...
kunal : hiii dad... you know there is a picnic being organised... can i go...??
virat : picnic... you can surely go after i make sure that the place is fine for you or not... okk
kunal : okk... and can i have new sports shoes...??
virat : you can have anything in this world... your dad is there for you...
kunal : and what about a new mouth organ...??
virat : prepare your list kido and on sunday we will go and shop...
kunal : woww... your the best.. i love you dad... and did you eat lunch...???
virat : i love you too and yes i had lunch... all thanks to your mommy...
manvi unknowingly blushed and looked at the file.
kunal : okk then give a kissey to mumma from my side... okkk bye... muah...
virat : ku... kunal... rakh dia...
manvi : kya hua...??
virat : kuch nahi... (nothing)
manvi : sure...
virat : sure...

in the meeting
in the conference hall, virat was busy giving the presentation while manvi was lost in her la la land... she was looking at virat and smiling unaware of her surroundings... she was admring her husband when someone called her...
" what do u think about this whole idea mrs. vadera...?? "
manvi : huh... umm... i...i
virat noticed it and immediately replied " actually gentleman its her idea only... right manvi...??? "
manvi : yeah... right...
" ohh... so i think when you two are so confident about the idea, then i dont need to doubt on it... do i...?? "
manvi : absolutely not... my husband will handle everything... he is just too good... and doubting him is just of no use...
virat was wondering what has gotten into manvi... he never thought manvi would talk so fondly about him in front of everybody...
" so all the best mr. n mrs. vadera... we are glad that our project is being efficiently handled by you two... "
virat : thank you...
after the meeting
manvi : virat can i ask something...??
virat : hmm...
manvi : why did u say that that idea was mine...?? it was yours...
virat : you were lost somewhere manvi and if i hadnt jumped in the convo, then you must have been hell embarassed and that too in front of the clients...
manvi looked down thinking that she was so lost in admiring him that she lost track of the meeting...
virat : by the way what took your attention back there...???
manvi : ah.. woh.. i ..u... i mean nothing...
virat : you should go back home... trust me... you need rest...
manvi : i also think so... i need rest...
virat : okk then go... but dare not go home and start working in the kitchen... okk...??
manvi : okk... come soon..
virat : hmm... bye...
manvi : bye...

evening
kunal : mumma... (coming and sitting on manvi's lap)
manvi : hmm...
kunal : when will dad come...?? its already 10 pm...
manvi : he might be busy baby... (hugging him)
kunal : at night also...
manvi : yeah at night also...
kunal : itna kaam hota hai kya office mein...??
manvi : hmmm... its very difficult to handle business...
kunal : ohh then i should also join and help dad...
manvi : so my baby wants to become like his daddy... a businessman (smiling)
kunal : no... a big bussinessman... famous wala...
manvi : accha... then you have to leave your music and concentrate on business, files and projects...
kunal : mumma... we can move forward with both of them... music and business... why do u think i will have to leave one thing behind...???
manvi : baby moving on in life while holding onto two different things is very difficult...
kunal : but its not impossible... and as dad says everything is possible...
manvi : my smarty... now lets go n sleep...
kunal : but dad...
manvi : meet him in the morning...
manvi came back and thought about what kunal said...
manvi's pov
unknowingly my son gave me the solution i was looking from such a long time... he was right... moving on and accepting someone doesnt mean letting go the one which were holding onto earlier... i have to move on in my life with virat doesnt mean i have to forget kushal... i can cherish you kushal in my heart for the rest of my life and i can live each and every moment with virat... how stupid i am to think that i have to forget you in order to love virat... so atlast you gave me a hint... player ho tum by god... humare bete ne hi mujhe itna bda hint de diya... bilkil tumhare jaisa smart hai... thank u kushal... thank u... i know you want me to move on and i will... i will start my life a fresh but never think your manvi forget about you... i still love you...
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Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 1st!!!!!

Awieee kunal is so cutooo! and so is Virat!!!!! he is so sweet!!!!!!! even i am wondering achanak se manvi ko kya ho gaya ki she has started falling for Virat! i know in previous upd8 it was shown that she respects virat and wants to move on with him but suddenly!!!! And yeah Kunaalll he showed his mother the correct path!!!! U dont have to leave one thing to hold on to another!!!!!!

Awesome uppu!!!! will be w8ing for next part eagerly!
Edited by abbay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mubarak ho... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
anki chal ja parhne, meko firsht ana tha :o nainu anki ko bhej :o
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima06

anki chal ja parhne, meko firsht ana tha :o nainu anki ko bhej :o

AB ISME POOR NAINU KYA KARE... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
haww you are going away for weeks thats not fair yaar ...be back soon naina ...
and this update was fab amd loving this OS you should convert into an ss ...😃😃 virat is being sooo supportive and caring towards both manvi and kunal i mean overprotective for kunal i mean he is the kid of kushal and the gal he loves if it was anyone else he wud just let him be and try gaining manvi's attention but am sure virat can even ignore manvi for kunal he is that protective and loves him even more than kushal 😃
and manvi again falling for virat for his support and love and now also decided to move on this is awesome waiting for the next step taken by manvi 😃😃
and how dare virat not manning kunal's baat ..he said to give kissy to mumma na ..nai diya usne 😉
waiting for next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


AB ISME POOR NAINU KYA KARE... 😆

anki ke comment ko gayab kar de :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
inactive kyu :o hawww no ways,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
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Wow...superb update...😊
Loved Virat's and Kunal's convo...
Awesome...Manvi realising that she loves Virat...😛
Virat is sooo sweet...Love him...❤️
It was fantastic update di! 😊
You will inactive for a week? 😔
Next update kab miloge...cant wait...
And please dont end this...its a superb story!
Take care and continue as soon as possible! 😊
Edited by Viru_Neutrogina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know why are u dancing dishu... i know u swthrt 😉

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