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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer union☺️
update was awsome,anni👍🏼
feeling very bad thinking about uday😭😭
Waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sabakhan16

Manveer union☺️
update was awsome,anni👍🏼
thanks
feeling very bad thinking about uday😭😭
his good days have begun
Waiting for the next update😊


will try to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late comment anni but just loved the update it was so hot that u made me blush lol really happy that manyata realised her love for uday and confessed it to him... Finally they r one now really can't wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Sorry for the late comment anni but just loved the update it was so hot that u made me blush lol really happy that manyata realised her love for uday and confessed it to him... Finally they r one now really can't wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm


awn i am so happy that you liked it jiji be rooted to this ss and more of hot part will be coming in middle of the updates awn it was my duty
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 11

The evening sky was dark and as the clouds had covered the sky entirely , the leaves of the tree blew to the direction of the winds , while the birds crippled back to its nest the nature must be at best of its mood after the heavy rain finally the calm and peace of the place was back it was the silence after the storm , as she sat near the window looking outside with a sweet smile on her face , last night was indeed the most magical night of her life , her married life was COMPLETE , she never imagined this feeling of love would be so beautiful as she looked at the sky that had a pinkish color an unique shade which the city viewed for the first time , she was sitting with her blue netted sari and her hair left over her shoulder , she smiled to herself occasionally and felt her heart at peace after so long time. Her thoughts were disturbed as there was a knock at the door , she being aware of the person , had her cheek flushed as she opened the door but to her disappointment it was not him just a package was there on the door steps she took it and closed the door behind as she carefully started to unwrap the package and a sweet smile placed on her face as it was send from her dadisabh along with a letter , she had send the first fruit of the season for manveer as she read the letter tear drop trickled down her cheek

"my dear pari

I hope you are living a happy married life , I really was tensed as you neither called nor wrote to me so I thought of taking the initiative I am really tensed about you , I cannot sleep in night before a month when you recently shifted I used to wake up by nightmares in my dreams I used to hear you cry and your body bleeding ….. I am so sorry I know I was always cold towards you , and after your parents dead I blamed you for their dead and often cursed that I would be happier if you dies in their place but trust me I would never be as you are equally precious to me , your parents left you as they thought I will be a pillar to you and I am sorry I always discouraged you and showed my hatred towards you but it is only now that I know your value each places here linger with your memory I want to see that face of yours , want to listen to the smile of yours , I miss you each and every moment I am sorry pari please forgive me

Your dadisabh"

As she folded the paper and clenched her close to her heart , she crumbled down on the floor as her face was covered with tears , her heart too cried as she equally missed her grandmother and she too wanted to be with her.

This was his last chance , if he would get into this company even the position of a clerk than there was no looking back , it was the most famous international company "THE AKASH GROUP OF INDUSTRY" as he went inside, there was just akash waiting for him to take his interview as he went showed his files and everything akash had a smile on his face and throughout akash was very polite towards uday more than actually some boss should be as akash said to him

AKASH: so mr uday veer before this you worked with jai right

UDAY: yes

AKASH:I can understand you should have left that company long ago that girl is no less that a witch I was supposed to be married to her but then her behavior towards everything made me realize that in no way she would be a match for me

Uday was happy and contemned akash was like him only he too hated jai and he seemed quite a good person as akash concluded

AKASH :so mr uday do join our company from the next month as the CEO

UDAY: thanks

Saying this he left the office as he drove towards his house , his happiness knew no bounds last night he got the love he had craved for so long and now he got into the biggest company that too in such a high post this would mean that now he would earn three times more than what he earned earlier and he had a month holiday too in which he might go on a honey moon trip with manyata as he reached his house after knocking for a couple of time she opened the door as he scanned her , after last night she looked even more beautiful , her face had an unnatural glow , and the blue sari did a poor job of hiding his imprints on her as he came inside locking the door behind , he wrapped his arms around her and back hugged her while rubbing his cheek on hers as he said with a bright smile

UDAY; you know wifey I finally got a job that too in one of India biggest company and now I will earn three times more than what I should earn isn't it great

MANYATA: it is you may go and freshen yourself while I lead the dinner for you

She tried to move forward as he pulled her back again and said

UDAY: what seems like my wifey is not happy and I know the reason you do not want to part away with me …it is ok wifey I have a month before joining and so we can have our honey moon before that so tell me where you want to go Switzerland , London ,Paris or Thailand

MANYATA; any place you want

As she tried to get off his grip , her nature irked him , here he was planning for their honey moon and she was showing least interest she was trying to avoid him which he would not let her do at any cost he turned her and pulled her chin upwards with his figure and there he saw it her eyes was all swollen and it could be understood she had been crying for really long as he asked

UDAY: what is the matter wifey why are you crying?

MANYATA: nothing uday nothing happened …

She tried to held back her tears but he was her husband he knew her better than she would know herself as he pulled her into his embrace his hands ran up and down on her back trying to pacify her pain and it did help to a certain extend as she burst into tears and said

MANYATA: uday… ds send me a letter …. For the first time ,,,,after so many years she called me pari……she misses me ……she cares for me…..she has forgiven me… I miss her

UDAY: than it is ok we shall spent this coming month with ds and mom

She looked up at him and said wiping her tears

MANYATA: but you had plans for honey moon

UDAY : so what we can still have it at your place no special place is needed to express your love

Her cheek flushed to the beetroot color she as they had their dinner peacefully and went packing after done with the packing as manyata sat on the bed wrapping the gifts for her mother in law and grand mother .Suddenly he grabs her , tipping her across his lap. With one smooth movement, he angles his body so her torso is resting on the bed beside him. He throws his right leg over both her and plants his left forearm on the small of her back, holding her down so she cannot move … He places his hand on her back , softly fondling her , stroking around and around with his flat palm. As she frigits in his touch and says demandingly

MANYATA: what are you doing uday?

UDAY: nothing just making love to my wifey

MANYATA:I have to pack the gifts

He looks at her and then with a smirk replies

UDAY ; well I have a gift in my arms and I want it unwrapped and explored right now

MANYATA: uday please I have to make preparation for the visit now leave

UDAY; even I am making preparations for that only

MANYATA :oh really and how is that possible

UDAY : Well don't you think both ds and mom will be super happy if they get news of a new member when we go there

A sweet blush appeared on her face which was like a assurance for him to proceed and fulfill his hearts demand

PROMO

Before she know it, he's got both of her hands in his viselike grip above her head, and he was pinning her to the wall using his lips His other hand grabs her hair and yanks down, bringing her face up, and his lips are on her . Her tongue tentatively strokes his and joins his in a slow, erotic dance


done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED
EDITED

I am really sorry for the delay ...
But as i told you my ID was not allowing editing it ... for god knows what reason ... 😡

Coming to the update,
It was really good !
Very well written !
And ...
I loved it ... 😳

The story is progressing in a nice way !

I think Akash is upto something big ...
Waiting to get to know it ...

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !

P.S. I am first but not actually ... Hope you got it ... 😆
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nicely written... i hope akash doesn't bother uday that much in the company... but then again you need a complication in the story...

its so sweet that manyata and uday have worked out their differences... Thanks for the PM i can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Anni👏.Akash is definitely up to something. No boss would employ someone and then tell them to start work a month later. Very fishy , I tell you😉.The letter from DS was lovely , very emotional 😔. Glad that she has apologised for blaming Manyata for her parents death.Manveer scenes thereafter was wonderful😳.
Loved the chapter,
Do continue soon😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Amazing update Anni👏.
thank you barfi jiji
Akash is definitely up to something. No boss would employ someone and then tell them to start work a month later. Very fishy , I tell you😉.
it is fishy but do not worry the game will be played in the most tricky way now
The letter from DS was lovely , very emotional 😔. Glad that she has apologised for blaming Manyata for her parents death.
yea after all she too misses manyata
Manveer scenes thereafter was wonderful😳.
as the promo says some more wonderful scene is coming

Loved the chapter,
i am glad you do
Do continue soon😊.

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