MG SS - mujhe Shadhi Nahi Karni...last pt on pg 29 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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intresting strt pls giv index on 1st pg...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that one lovely part...

beautifully written...

loved it to the core

keep writing

do cont soon//
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

thanks Deepa for the correction once again...😃
mein bhi na jaldhi jaldhi mein galthiyan karthi rehthi...
very bad student... haina ?😉



the other link also wrong...grrr...😆
now posted the right one...
dear check after posting the links are they the right ones are not...
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Part - 1

One evening at KM'''.

Dadi and Maan's bhuaji are seriously discussing something'..

Maan just enters'..

Suddenly they stop their chat in the middle'..

They look at each other and pretend to have not seen Maan'..

Maan knows that it's all about his marriage'.

He has told them a thousand times that he is not interested in marriage'.rather he hates marriage'.

For him marriage means suffering'..

He had seen a lot of troubled marriages including his own parents' marriage'..

Buaji ko hi lelo''she loves only money and property, luckily Maan's uncle is a fairly good businessman'.he started KC along with Maan's father and also had taken care of it after Mr.Khurana left till Maan took over the business last month'.

But for Maan she is very loving and caring'..

Atleast she took care of him all these years'..

Kiran: maa, Maan aagaya

Dadi: Kiran, aap hi baat karna

Kiran: pehle app shuru toh karo

Dadi: Maan bete, aap aagaye?

Maan: Dadi, pichle 5 min se mein yahi kada hoon

Kiran: aur humne dekha hi nahi

Isse achche koi joot nahi bol saktha'.

Maan: kaise dekhteh? App donno toh koi nayi kichdhi pakane mein busy the

Maan thinks'.patha nahi aaj kisski band bajanewali hai'..mein toh jaantha hoon ki meri hi band bajanewala hai aaj, haan

Kiran: kya? aaise kuch nahi hai

Dadi: haan haan, hum toh bas aapke barein mein baat kar rahe the

Kiran: maa''

Maan gets angry'..phirse wahi purane kahaani? Shadhi karlo, aldhki aaisi hai, waisi hai'.

Maan: toh meinne sahi samja? Koi mujhe bathayega ki yahan kya ho raha hai?

Maan chilatha''

Kiran isse dekhkke darnewali nahi'.Dadi may surrender atonce'.but not Kiran'.

Kiran looks into his eyes'..

They are red hot in anger'..

Kiran ignored them'don't show me this attitude beta'I'm your bua'same blood'same anger'.don't forget'.i'm also a khurana'..merried to a khanna par ho toh ek Khurana'..

Kiran: Maan, ab tummare padayi bhi katam ho gayi, aur tum KC ko bhi sambalna shuru kiye ho

Maan: buaji, mujhe patha hai ki aap kya baat karnewale hai

Kiran: that's better, so you too think that it's time for your marriage

Maan: what? I don't want any marriage' Why do you want me to repeat this again and agian?

Maan starts walking away'.with the attitude..I don't care''.

Kiran: Maaan, ab bahut ho gaya, iss bar mein teri shadhi karkke arhoongi, tummare pyaare Uncleji bhi mere saath hai

Maan stops'..what? Uncle too wants the same?

But he has always supported him'..what happened now?

Kiran starts her emotional hatyachaar''

Kiran: tummari Dadi iss umar mein akhele iss ghar ko sambal nahi pathi, you know she is getting weak day by day

Dadi: hare bagwan, mere palpitations, lagtha hai phirse shuru ho gaya

Dadi joins the act'..

Kiran: maa

Dadi winks'..

Dadi: Maan bete, ab aapko hummari koi chintha nahi hai

Maan looks at her with a mischievous smile'.

Dadi can't control her smile'..

Maan: Dadi, you and your palpitations, try something else next time'..

Maan laughs''

Maan: dekha buaji, ye meri Dadi hai, kabhi mere khilaaf nahi jayenge, haina Dadi

Dadi: par Maan bete, aapke bhua ki baat mein bhi dum hai, humme aapki shadhi dekhna hai, humme bhi apne ghar ko roshan karne ke liye ek bahu chahiye

Maan shows the lighting'.: itni roshni kaafi nahi hai kya?

Kiran: Maan, be serious, Dadi sahi kehthe hai, it's high time we get a bahu for this house

Maan: bahu kya show-piece hai, jo aap donno rathon raat kareedhkke layenge?

Kiran: tumme usski fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, humne pehle hi ladhki ko chunliya hai

Dadi: haan bete, humne bhi dekha tha, ladhki bahut sundar hai aur padhe likhi bhi hai

Maan: what? Dadi mujhe koi shahdi nahi karni, chahhe woh koi aasmaan ki bari bhi ho, and that's final, aaplog iss baat ko abhi bhool jao, MSK abhi kissi bhi ladhki ko shadhi nahi karega

Maan just leaves without waiting for their reaction'.

Dadi looks worried'.ab kya hoga?

Ye ladhka kitne din aaise zidd pakadkke rahega,hummare mar jaane ke badh issko kaun sambalega?

Baabji, aap hi hummare madat kar sakthe hai'.

Buaji: maa, aap kyun fikar kathe hai, mujhe patha hai ki Maan ko kaise manana hoga

Maan is realy pissed off'

What the hell is going on ?

Maan doesn't know how far they have gone with the wedding plans'

Dadi has already seen the girl? So they must have talked with her family too'.

Maan hates this'.

He doesn't like marriage, so what? He doesn't have the right to hurt any girl's feelings'.

Now they will ask Maan to meet the girl'.

And how on earth would he tell her that he is not interested in marriage,

But which girl would believe that?

It's all just another excuse, thoda alag hai par ho toh joot hai'.

isska madlab toh seedha hai, I don't like you'.

This would hurt her pride'.why is that every girl wants the boy to say that she looks like a princess, princess are found only in fairytales''

Maan has to stop this right now'.

Meanwhile Kiran has implemented her plan'..

Uncle calls Maan'..

Maan respects him so much that he can't say no to him ever'..

Kiran uses this to trap Maan'..

Vijay: halo Maan

Maan: haan Uncle

Vijay: when are you going to meet that girl?

Vijay asks him straightaway not giving Maan time to think of an excuse'.

Maan: woh'..meinne abhi abhi business join kiya haina, thoda busy hoon

Vijay: you can't tell this to me, I know KC better than you, how about this weekend?

Maan: this weekend? It's firday?

Vijay: so what? Come to Amritsar along with your buaji tomorrow, we can talk then

Maan: par mein kaise aaoon?

Vijay: take the car young man, zyada sochne ki koi zaroorat nahi, I know that this is the girl for you

Maan: aap ne bhi ussko dekha hai?

Vijay laughs'..

Vijay: don't worry, you can see her soon, why not this Sunday? I'll talk to Jodinder(Geet's naanu)

Maan: woh'mein keh raha tha ki

Maan fumbles'..

If Vijay has decided something then Maan has no other go but to meet this so called beayty queen'.

Vijay: good night Maan, see you at Amritsar

Maan: good night Uncle

Kaise good night'.unlce has spoiled his sleep now''

This is not good, he has to do something quick or else there is no escape'.

MSK, you can do this, socho Maan socho'..

Though he had been locked like this by his bhua the key is also in her hands only'.

Maan has to somehow persuade her to help him get out of this trouble'..

This time there is no escape Mr.MSK'.be ready to meet our princess'..

Actually Vijay wants Maan to meet the girl and then only after he likes the girl Vijay would proceed further'.

It's not a good idea to force someone to marry a girl of your choice'

Maan should like her first''

But Vijay is confident, who wouldn't like Geet?

Even Kiran liked her atonce'.

It's not easy to satisfy Kiran easily'.

She rejected about a hundred girls for Dev and finally selected Meera'..

Vijay would tease her that she has scored a cenrury'.how could she meet so many girl and keep picking faults? And she never gets tired finding faults with others'specially meera'.

But for Maan this is the first official girl they are seeing'

And Kiran likes her ?

What's the magic?

Nothing like that, she is more concerned in persuading Maan to finally get married than worrying about the girl'.

But the problem with Maan is not the girl'.he hates marriage or maybe scared of marriage''

Next part next page...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1 super
maan hate marriage

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Ek aur ud aj hi pls this was dam awsum
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Part – 2

At Hoshiarpur….

Geet thinks about what happened after she finished her degree….

She was very happy that she successfully completed this …..

Now it's time to get into the MBA course…

Geet had been preparing for the entrance too……

But her family is busy with her wedding plans…..

Geet too knows this very well….

Once when Geet was at Hoshiarpur for a holiday….

A woman called Geet's home….

Geet attended the call…..

A mother os a software engineer working in the US….and as Geet was a computer graduate she was keen in this rishtha….

After a little chit-chat with her Geet had a good impression on her, she was a woman with a lot of confidance, well-educated, not like her mother, she is a finance consultant in Chandigarh….

Geet instantly liked her….software engineer? Us?

Geet could do her MS there and join his office itself…..

But Darji interrupted, had a brief convo with her, he didn't seem much interested….

We won't send our girl abroad, we are looking for a local boy…bang he kept the receiver….

But the real reason is he didn't like a woman bossing around, what's her man doing? Letting her speak while he hides behind her pallu?

Now Geet imagines what kind of a family she would be married to?

Same sick people always underestimating women like these Handas…..

From then on Geet is having nightmares about her sasuraal…..

What if she also ended in the kitchen?

What if she can't read naymore?

What if she can't go out anymore?

She prepared well for her project and hoped that somehow she can impress her family and get into PG….she had even got applications from a college in Chandigarh…..

But she knows that it's impossible…..

Letting her alone to saty in a hostel….no way is this going to happen…

Still her mind thinks about this only and never about marriage……

It is not for me….I don't want any marriage…..

Just to postpone her permanent return to Hoshiarpur she joined an advanced computer class….

Moreover someone told her that it would be the best choice if you want to get employed……

She can get a job and run away from home, isn't that a good idea?

But hardly a week later everything changed…..

Why did she go to that Pinky's marriage?

Doesn't she know that matches are made at such marriages in her society?

Btu how could she miss her best friend's wedding?

And everything happened so fast after that…Geet didn't even have the time to realize that it's all real…..

The final count down for her life sentence has started……

Ranno came and took her to Hoshiarpur that day…

Geet was reluctant to go back to Hoshiarpur….

Once she goes there there is no coming back…..

They will spoil all her derams…..

What about the MBA entrance?

Darji won't even know what she is talking about…

Mohinder though sympathises with her won't be able to go against Darji's orders…

Who wants his sympathies?

What a father he is?

Not able to fulfil his daughter's wishes…..

But Darji is the head of the village, the whole of Hoshairpur nod their head to his words without even thinking for a second, ye toh Darji ka izzat ka sawaal hai…..Mohinder kuch nahi kar saktha…..

Darji had already given his words to Vijay……

No stopping what so ever….

And why would anyone even think of stopping this?

They are too happy that Geet is going to Delhi, first girl going so far from Hoshiarpur…..

And she also loves the city life more….haina?

Ranno also finds this the best opportunity for Geet to get her freedom….

She is impressed with Kiran's authority….

So the women have their voice in family decisions…..

Moreover Vijay is a well educated nice gentleman…..

She had seen him at her house a couple of times….

He respects her father very much……

She has heard about Maan's parents' tragic end……

Her father believed that it was realy unfortunate that people start blaming each other and someone even accussed Vijay for all this…..

He cheated Maan's father in business….

So Sheetal left him and so on…..

People and their imaginations…

It took a long time for the stories to stop…..

Now …….At KM…..

Maan thinks about how to escape from his bua's cunning trap…..

She is too smart….but only she can help him now…..

Only she can manage Vijay know?

But Maan doesn't know that it was only Vijay who had seen Geet first and thought that she would be a good choice for Maan……

Geet naanu Joginder is a good friend of Vijay…..

They are both from Amritsar and they know each other for nearly three decades…..

Business friends, but later became close buddies…..

Joginder introduced Geet at Pinky's marriage to Vijay…..

Told him that they are planning to get her married….

He can also help him find a suitable var…..

Vijay knows about Ranno and her in-laws too….

Vijay was sceptical about getting Ranno married to Mohinder who is a school dropout….

But to his surprise Ranno adjusted so well and Darji is very proud of his choti bahu…,

She never complained that her in-laws are gavaar, unpad or anything for that matter….

She is such a great person, so humble and never boasted that she is better qualified than the others, her daughter should be like her only….

Vijay was already thinking about Maan…..

Given the horrible back ground of Maan, you need someone who already knows his family troubles…

Anyone new would agree to this relationship only for the money and Maan's past would be made a big issue whenever there is a misunderstanding, they will compare Maan with his father and say that they have been cheated….

As for as Joginder is concerned, he knows everything about Kiran's family…….

There is nothing to hide from him…..

And moreover Maan has been left alone all these days, no family except Dadi….

Darji's family is one big family with his two sons and their children living happily under the same roof….

So this is a jackpot for Maan…..moer than anything he needs a family to support him…..

And without any hesitation Vijay told about Maan….

Vijay told about the girl to Kiran and she went and saw her the next day itself…..

She also liked her very much…..

Then ti was Dadi's turn ….and now it's Maan's turn….

After all these drama how can one reject a girl?

Vijay wouldn't have let them do this picnic to visit the HAndas every week if he isn't determined to get them married…..

Though Geet would get a hundred good offers than this Maan wouldn't get a better girl…..

Not only her looks but her family, her background, her Naanu, everything is just more than satisfaying for Vijay….

And Maan's marriage has been his responsibility…..

He doesn't want to do this for Kiran….he wants to do this for Maan……

Somehow he is always attached to Maan, though he won't show it off he loves him very much….

And Maan would only listen to Vijay, and not even Kiran……

Kiran never commands Maan, she always pampers him just like Dadi….

But she also tries to instill some discipline in Maan lest he becomes like his father….

She always used Vijay as her weapon…..

Maan respects him so much that he won't even utter a word against him other than "yes Uncle, ji Uncle, OK Uncle, I'll do it…"

Though this rishtha was brought by Vijay, Kiran also liked Geet, as her pathija is good looking she needs a beautiful girl for him, her bahu is also not bad, she won't admit Meera is so beautiful which she is, now Kiran had to find a girl more beautiful than Meera else everyone would complain that Kiran is biased, she had got a good girl for her son and not Maan, if it was Maan's mother, Sheetal,she would have found a better match for Maan…..

Since her babhi left Kiran had the extra responsibility of Maan, and everyone would ask her about Maan only not Dev, she hates when people say that Maan is very unlucky, what's Maan's mistake? His parents were two lunatics…..

She always defended Maan and says that Maan has brought them luck for KC's business boomed only after his birth……and that was b'coz of Vijay and Madan's hardwork…..

Madan almost spent days together at KC……not even bothering to see his pregnant wife…..

That's one big obsession he had, his business…..this was one of Sheetal's complains….no time for wife….

So everyone is happy with this marriage except for our Maneet…..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnx 4 indx..😊both prts r nyc ,mneet gting married vil dey meet b4 mrg...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the update in page 5 is part 1?
the first 2 updates are CS'?
in title its 2 and in the update its 1...
gosh u are gonna kill me for pointing out everything and pestering u...
sorry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

the update in page 5 is part 1?
the first 2 updates are CS'?
in title its 2 and in the update its 1...
gosh u are gonna kill me for pointing out everything and pestering u...
sorry...

ha ha ha...Deepa...😆
no problem dear...
I'm grateful to you for the care you take...
not even I care so much about my FFs...
that's Deepa...keep up the good work m'am...😉
yeah...the first two posts are just character sketch...
and I've upated two parts already...
one on pg 4 and 2 on pg 5
sorry guys...
just not prepared for this...
and this suhaana requested another one too...😳
so sorry for any confusion...
think the index is correct now...

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