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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 fantastic ff 😳 so interesting 😉 in 3rd champu-dimple separation is heart touching...sid's love is amazing in 4th part...i'm sure champu is non other than our sid !eagerly waiting for next update studies first...concentrate on ur studies !
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is 2nd time i request u plz update next part soon i want to see rosid romance and about champu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

after reading everything all i can say is just...FANTASTIC...


👍🏼👏...



thnk u so much HEMA di...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AmreenBanoManso

SORRY SORRY SORRY FOR LATE REPLY 😭

you know na i was busy 😔
WELL DONE ... THIS IS REALLY AMAZING ⭐️
LOVE YOUR FF 😳
HAHA SID ... SO CUTE AND NICE ROSID CHEMISRTY 😆
THATS WE ALL WANT NOK JHOK AND CHIK CHIK PIK PIK
AND I WANT JUNGLE MAI MANGLE LOL 😆
YOU BETTER UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN 😛
LOL KOI LION AA JAYE TO MAZA AA JAYE 😃
... ROSID ROMANCE HAHA I WANT NAUGHTY AND FUNNY SID 😳
once again thanks
and CLAPPING for you 👏
LOVE YOUR FF 👍🏼
KEEP IT UP 😛




its k.. dimple di...
thnk u so much
yes yes ur jungle main mungle is ready...

wo lion bhi agaya hai..

romance jari hai...

once again thnk u so much...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arabjan

👏 fantastic ff 😳 so interesting 😉 in 3rd champu-dimple separation is heart touching...sid's love is amazing in 4th part...i'm sure champu is non other than our sid !eagerly waiting for next update studies first...concentrate on ur studies !



oh tnks a lot...

yes i will try to update asap...

thnk u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetal1979

this is 2nd time i request u plz update next part soon i want to see rosid romance and about champu



yes yes i know you are eagerly waiting...

i will try to update asap...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow just amazing story nd sorry yaar 4 late comment but I really like ur creation u guys just mindblowing... 👏 pls do update soon pls,pls can't 4 next one I mean our Rosid reaction keep it up 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HarryAustralia

Wow just amazing story nd sorry yaar 4 late comment but I really like ur creation u guys just mindblowing... 👏 pls do update soon pls,pls can't 4 next one I mean our Rosid reaction keep it up 😉




thnk u so much... no its k...yes i ll try to update asap...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone. Thanks for all your appreciations. And I am here with the next part. Some ideas are given by AMREEN DI…. (the forest and the movie). I love the ideas and so I am putting it in ff. so here I go for the next one…………….

Part 5

Rosid are in deep sleep when Roli coughs and Sid wakes up.

Sid: ROli! Roli! R u ok?

Roli: wa….wa…. water…..

Sid: yes wait……

He sees his bottle is empty.

Sid: roli come we will go.

Roli: where?

Sid: you need water naa?

Roli: haan. So?

Sid: so we have to go in search of water.

Roli: what?

Sid: yes.

Roli: but……..

Sid: if you want to drink water then come with me otherwise we will not find water..

Roli: wait wait… I am coming……….

Both then goes. After sometime they return and sees that the bus has left. Roli sees sid angrily.

Sid: what? Why are you looking at me? I haven't done anything.

Roli: you …………

Sid: what me?

Roli: irk!!!!!

Sid: uff! Where is the bus?

Roli: god! Now also you are waiting for the bus. They gone leaving us. It's because of you only.

Sid: what?

Roli: yes.

Sid: oh! Madam I wasn't thirsty you are thirsty and I helped you, instead of telling thank you, you are telling it's happen coz of me.

Roli: hello! Mr. if you would have water with you naa then this problem wouldn't have arisen. You are the in charge and you haven't water with you.

Sid: uff! This girl.

They then heard lion roar. Both look each other and scared. Sid then bows down and starts to tight his shoe lash.

Roli: do you think you can run speed from the lion?

Sid: who told you I am getting ready to compete with the lion, I am getting ready to run so that the lion can eat you first.

Saying this he starts running. Roli is shocked.

Roli: hey wait for me……

She also runs behind him. Sid then stops and sits at a stone. He sees Roli coming. Roli see sid is sitting on a stone, she also looks around and sits on a stone.

Roli: aan! Do really boy left girls always like this?

Sid: haan?

Roli: I mean are every boys same?

Sid: every boy????????????

Roli: nothing…………

Suddenly then thunder and lightning started. Roli is scared of it. Sid sees it and ask

Sid: you can come here and sit if you are scare.

Roli: no thanks.

Sid: k. but don't tell later on that I didn't asked you.

Roli: no I will not tell.

Again the thunder sounds. Roli is scared now and goes near Sid and sits.

Sid: hmm. When I was asking why you were making excuses haan?

Roli: aan! You please sit quietly.

Sid: why you always say me to sit quietly?

Roli: irk!!!!!!!!!!

Thunder again strikes and its starts raining. Sid goes and enjoys the rain. He drags Roli too. Both were enjoying the rain, when sid stops and starts watching her….

Palkon mein tum, meri neendon mein tum

You are in my eyelids you are in my sleep
Mery khawaabon main tum, bass tum
only you are in my dreams

Yaadon main tum, mere waadon main tum

You are in my memories, you are in my promises
Meri ati jati sanson main ho tum

You are in my breathe

He goes near Roli, drag her towards him.

Palkon main tum, meri neendon main tum
Mere khawaabon main tum, bas tum
Yadon main tum, mere waadon main tum
Meri ati jati sanson mein ho tum
You are in my eyelids you are in my sleep

only you are in my dreams

You are in my memories, you are in my promises

You are in my breathe

Roli has also lost with him. both were lost in their world.

Chahtaa kitna tumko dil tum nahen janatey
Kia hai mere dil ki mushkil tum nahi jantey
Chahta kitna tumko dil tum nahen janatey
Kya hai mere dil ki mushkil tum nahi jantey
Aisa ehsaas dharkan mein kabhi pehle na jaaga tha
Chaahata kitna tumko dil tum nahin janatey
Kya hai mere dil ki mushkil tum nahi jantey
You don't know how much I love you

You don't know what is the difficulty of my heart
such a feeling never awakened inside me

You don't know how much I love you

You don't know what is the difficulty of my heart is

Sid looking in to Roli's eyes and she too is in lost in his eyes.

Tumsy mili is tarah se nazar
Mein hosh mein bhi raha bekhbar
Tumse mili is tarah se nazar
Main hosh mein bhi raha bekhbar

Chha gaya, chha gaya ajanabi sa nashaa

My eyes met yours in such a way that

I remained ignorant in my senses

An unknown intoxication had cast on me

Sid then holds Roli's waist and roli put her arms around sid's neck and they both starts dancing .

Chhahata kitna tumko dil tum nahen janatey
Kia hai mere dil ki mushkil tum nahi jaantey
Aisaa ehsaas dharkan main kabhi pehley na jagaa tha

You don't know how much I love you

You don't know what is the difficulty of my heart
such a feeling never awakened inside me

Both are enjoying the rain and the love between them.

Is zindagi ka sabab maan loon
Sajda karoon tumko rab maan loon
Is zindagi ka sabab maan loon
Sajda karoon tumko rab maan loon
Keh raha, keh raha saanson ka silsila

I shall consider it the reason for my life

I shall bow infront of you and consider you god

This is what the circular motion of my breath says

Sid then sees Roli and move her face forward to kiss her, Roli is also unknowingly agree. She has left herself to the boy.

Palkon mein tum, meri neendon mein tum
Mere khwabon mein tum, bas tum
Yadon mein tum, mere waadon main tum
Meri ati jati saanson main ho tum

You are in my eyelids you are in my sleep

only you are in my dreams

You are in my memories, you are in my promises

You are in my breathe

Chhahata kitna tumko dil tum nahin janatey
Kia hai mere dil ki mushkil tum nahi jaantey
Aisaa ehsaas dharkan main kabhi pehle na jaaga tha

You don't know how much I love you

You don't know what is the difficulty of my heart
such a feeling never awakened inside me

Both are so closed Roli close her eyes. Sid was about to kiss her when Roli get her sense and push sid and shouts.

Roli: no!!!!!!!!!... no!!!!!!!!!!!!...

Sid: Roli!!!!!!!!

He goes near her and about to touch her shoulder

Roli: please stay away from me, please.

Sid: what happened Roli?

Roli: you please just stay away. I don't know how can be I so close to you, I could……. What a big mistake I was going to do?

Sid: Roli you were not going to do any mistake.

Roli: stop it! Just stop.

Sid: why will i?

Roli: you don't know anything about me and my life. So you stay away from me.

And she starts going.

Sid: Roli….. Wait……

She doesn't wait and at the same time their bus return and everyone comes out and tells them to go inside the bus. They all then reach their respective home.

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next day

College.

Everyone is gathering. Roli's friend and sid's friend are in a group now where Roli and Sid has also joined them. All are talking about the picnic and at that time Rosid thought about the rain and………………..

Roli: I am coming……

Sid sees and feels upset and also feeling guilty for his behavior. He goes behind her.

Sid: Roli!!!!!!

She stops.

Sid: aan Roli…. I am sorry…

Roli: its k. sid.

Sid: Roli actually…..

Roli: look I am not in a mood to talk so will you please leave me alone.

And she leaves.

Evening

Roli gets call from sapna.

Roli: yes sapna tell.

Sapna: roli get ready we are going for movie.

Roli: what?

Sapna: yes… quick……

Roli: but…

Sapna: no but……..k… be ready… by …. We are coming……

She cuts the phone.

Roli now gets ready, her friends come and they all leaves and reached at the hall where sid and his friends were present.

Roli: sikha… what are they doing here?

Sikha: they have also come with us.

Roli: what?

Sweta: yes..

Everyone then goes inside the halls.

Sikha sits near vishal. Sapna sits with Tarun and sweta sits with Punit. And atlast Rosid seats near to each other. And at the film the same scene happens what Rosid had already experienced. The thunder and lightning, rain and………….

Rosid are shocked. And they look each other and bow their head. Both were thinking of escaping from the hall as soon as possible.

At last the movie comes to end and they all comes out.

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diwedi house

Roli opens her facebook account and sees the message from sid.

I am sorry Roli. I am really sorry what I did. Please forgive me.

Roli: uff! What this guy is?

She then message to champu.

Roli: champu. You know everything of my life. But I don't know what happened to you. Why you are not replying me from last 1 year. Are you alright naa. And in this last 1 year everything changes in my life. My hobbies, my dress style, everything changed. And the love of my life, he has also……… (Crying)…… champu….. you also goes away from me and yesterday that sid he also leaves me and runs when the lion roars, so I asked him does every boys are same. And do they leave every girl like this. At least reply naa champu. I am missing you so much and you are not replying me. I know you can see the message but not giving reply. Please champu reply me. Please.

Scene shifted

A room a boy is sitting infront of his lappy looking at the profile of crazydimple. Then checking message getting from her. He then thinks

Champu: I am sorry dimple I can't reply you… I am really sorry.. I know you are missing me. But what will I do I have some reasons.

Then the face is seen and its none other than sid.

Sid: I am sorry dimple. I want you to accept me as Sid not as Champu. You never recognize me as Champu and I know why it is. You told me to be like this attitude. I am today also that champu just my look has changed and it's because of you only. And I know you always want to share everything with champu. But I… I want you should share everything with Sid.

Scene shifted to diwedi house.

Roli: (writing) I don't want to share anything with others champu. I only want you. I don't know why but that Sid, I feel something when he was near me. I feel as if I know him long time. And you know what when he comes near me, suddenly I… I … think about Rocky. My love, my life, he is my everything.

Sid sees the message and is shocked.

Sid: Rocky! Again! .Oh god! He is reading in our college, but I never want to see both of you together. Hmm. I have to find out the truth behind this. And because of him you are so changed. And you have to tell your life history to Sid not Champu. Now you see Roli what Sid will do. You didn't tell Champu about you and Rocky as he never replies you. Now sid will know it and you will tell it to him.

To be continue…

Hope you like it…..😊

if there is mistakes then forgive please.

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next update
awesome

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