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Posted: 12 years ago
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Swaron os : Not Again!
Pre warning: the os is actually very bad..may be with no logic..lol! i don't know why am i posting.So read at ur own risk.And by mistake if any one likes it...plz do comment.

Swayam was in his room on a dark dull night,it is midnight and he is reading some strange stories from the past.while reading he felt sleepy and just then he heard a gentle knock on the door.He thought it must be nothing more than a visitor knocking to be let in.He wished the morning to come as he was trying hard to find an end to his sorrows in the book without success.He was trying to end his pain of having lost his beloved Sharon forever whose name did not exist any more.The soft sound made by the movement of the curtain filled him with imaginary fears.He went towards the door and opened to find no one there except darkness.
Looking very hard in the darkness he stood there afraid and dreaming about things no human being had ever dreamt of.There was nothing but silence all around and it gave him no sign and only thing he heard was echo of his own word "Sharon".He returned back with his soul burning in the memory of Sharon.
He now heard a louder knock at the window and he decided it to find out the mystery.
He opened the window wide and jumped a black cat from old time.Without paying any attention and respect to him it settled himself below a photo of Sharon which was hung on the room wall.The serious and decent apperance of the black creature trickled him into smiling.He asked him its name and it replied "Not again".Swayam was surprised that this creature could speak so painly even though what he said made no sense.Swayam then thought his awkward situtation that creature sitting beneath the picture of his lady love and had a name like "Not again".
But the cat was sitting calmly and spoke only that one word as though it was pouring out its soul in that one word.After which it sat quietly and Swayam was in his chain of thoughts and said to himself that as his life and his hopes have gone away, similarly the cat would also go away next morning. But cat said "not again".This shocked Swayam to the core as the reply fitted exactly appropriate to the situation.The raven again tricked him into smile.This made swayam kneel on the floor in front of him.And started guessing the logic behind the word 'Not again'.
Swayam fond the creature interesting and thought to chit chat with him as he was the only campanion to him in the dark winter night.
He questioned him that will he be able to dance again after the tragic moment of life.As accpected the only reply he got was "Not again".He could connect to this answer as for him Sharon was only the soul reason to dance and no Sharon means no dance.
Suddenly he realised that the air around him had become dense and he could feel the same aroma which he felt when he saw sharon for the first time.He closed his eyes and thought may be angels have sent back his love to him, to cure his pains and sufferings.Sharon was always a balm to his reliefs.
The atmosphere of thoughts was broken when again the same word echoed in swayam's ear "Not again".
This time Swayam could not resist himself and he erupted like a volcano on the poor creature.He ordered him to leave the place immediately and not even leave a single mark of his arrival behind.He addressed the cat as a ill omen creature who is a sign of bad luck in every one's life.He also shouted that he can never ever misjudge the presence of his beloved. He was so much fiery by now that he shouted so loud "Sharonnn".
The cat got scared and decided to leave but this time before leaving it said a sentence which cooled swayam like a ice and he started dancing like a man who has all the happiness of the world.
"she is waiting for you in Heaven".

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Posted: 12 years ago
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so me the 1st one to comment on your os!
a very nice concept and beautifully penned down.
Keep on writting more!
Edited by sonaliluvstanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nic os is wid no logic...nd plzz keep writting but plzz clear miss under standing in this os...

what tregic momnt... wt happen 2 shar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a really nice OS
i liked it
please do keep writing more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaronlove001

nic os is wid no logic...nd plzz keep writting but plzz clear miss under standing in this os...

what tregic momnt... wt happen 2 shar


Thanq!!
tragic moment there refers to sharon's death, no story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

it was a really nice OS

i liked it
please do keep writing more

thakyou!! 😊 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was nice and good os... emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no logic---yes---but different

and really cool

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