Dil kya kare..................part-2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys!

thanks a lotttttt for ur sweet coments on the previous part...here

is the second part...hope u enjoy reading it...

anitha was moving from the kitchen to the dining room to keep the

dishes and gauri was following her...

g:anitha...plzzzzzz batana pratham ke baare mein...plzzzzzzzz

a:gauri! tum bhi na! kitni baar poochti ho???this is the 8th time u

r asking abt him....

g:not 8 only 6 times ok??

a:accha accha 6 times...phir bhi kitni baar poochti ho???

g:main kya karu???main jab bhi pratham ke baare mein poochti hoon

tum ho ke sirf uske dost vicky ke baare mein kehne lagti

hai...(teasingly)aakhir chakkar kya hai??

a:chakkar vakkar kuch bhi nahi ok???tum bhi na...

g:ab tum pratham ke baare mein bataogi ya nahi???waise vicky bhi

bura nahi hai...he seemed cute....

a:quickly)aye!tu meri vicky par nazar mat lagana...

g:accha!!! 'meri vicky'?yeh vicky tera kab ban gaya???

a:(blushing)accha batati hoon...actually...hum dono ek doosre se

pyaar karte hai...

g:wow!!yeh to bahut khushi ki bat hai...kyun re??chupane ki koshish

kyun kar rahi thi??

a:bas aise hi....tu bata...baar baar pratham ke baare mein kyun

pooch rahi hai???

g:(dramatically)anitha...meri annkhen dekho...neend ke bina kitna

soona ho gaya hai...

a:kyun??kal raat soyi nahi kya??

g:kaise soti???woh stupid pratham ne meri neend churayi hai...annkh

kholti hoon to pratham dikhta hai...annkh band karti hoon to pratham

dikhta hai...

a:kyun??woh stupid pratham mein kya hai???

g:(warningly)aye! dont u dare call him stupid ok???he is stupid only

for me....

a:ok ok baba

g:haay...main kya kahoo anitha???mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya hai...

a:(surprised)kyaaaaaaaa???/tujhe pratham se pyaar ho gaya hai???sach

bata ...yeh pyaar hai ya pehle ki tarah koi crush?

g:(dramatically places her hand on head)nahi yaar!kasam se....sacchi

main usse pyaar karti hoon...aisa kabhi pehle kabhi nahi hua tha....

a:wow gauri!tu pyaar karti hai pratham se!

g:wohi to main keh rahi hoon na??...ok ok...ab pratham....

a:gauri ! tu bhi na....tote ki tarah 'pratham pratham' ka rat laga

rahi ho...accha suno...pratham 3 saal se yaha settled hai...

g:oh really!

a:ek MNC pe general manager hai....

g:wow!

a:kya wow???meri poori baat suno....dont interrupt me ok???

g:accha theek hai...bahut bhaav khati ho tum...

a:(smiling)aisi hoon main....mmm...kaha thi?? haan....uska is duniya

mein koi nahi hai.....

g:tch tch...how sad...

a:(acting angry)gauri!

g:opps!sorry...ok next....

a:vicky uska bahut accha dost hai....dono ek apartment ko share

karte hain....aur ek hi jagah pe kaam karte hain...vicky batata hai

ki woh dil ka bahut accha hai....

g:woh to main jaanti hoon...

a:(surprised)kaise??

g:bas aise hi...mera dil kehta hai...

a:gauri...tu bhi na...bilkul pagal hai...

g:uski kahi chakkar to nahi hai na???

a:baap re! pratham aur ladki???impossible! vicky kehta hai ki woh

ladkiyon se bhaagta hai...all girls have tried every possible way to

attract him but of no use...

g:woh isliye kyunki woh mere liye banaya gaya hai....

a:gauri!u r impossible! theek tarah se uske saath baat bhi nahi ki

aur....anyways...vicky keh raha tha ki uske zindagi mein kuch haadse

hua hai ...aur isliye woh itna reserved rehta hai...kisi se zyaada

baat nahi karta...par woh batata nahi ki kya hua tha....

g:oh oh...

a:ab main sirf itna jaanti hoon...for further details contact

vicky...

g:chal abhi milte hai...

a:gauri....woh abhi office ke liye nikal gaya....sham ko milte

hai...

g:sham tak!...accha theek hai...aur kya kar sakte hai???

a:waise doctor sahiba...aap hospital kabse join karne wali hai???

yes gauri is a doctor...

g:after 2 weeks....

a:ok...


they wait till evening....gauri herself doesnt know how she spent

the time....

g:chalna...milkar aate hai...

a:usse aane to do

g:(looks through the window for some time and then suddenly)woh aa

gaye!

a:ruko na...unhe thodi fresh hone do....

g:ok...

they wait for 10 min....

g:dekh to tu aa rahi hai ya nahi???

a:(smiling)ab mujhe lag raha hai ki tu seriously pyaar karti hai

usse

g:(angrily)to subah se kya laga??main jhoot bol rahi hoon???

a:ok yaar sorry! ok ab chalo...mmm....gauri tu chal main abhi aati

hoon...

g:kya hua??

a:kuch nahi baba...tu chalna...abhi aati hoon...

gauri went up to pratham's apartment and rang the bell....her heart

was beating rapidly with excitement...afetr a few moments pratham

opened the door....gauri's heart missed a beat...he looked sooooo

handsome....she just couldnt resist and stared at him without

speaking a word...prathm was feeling uncomfortable with the stare...

p:ji???

gauri remained silent...just staring at him....by that time anitha

came and saw the situation...she quickly pinched gauri on her

shoulder unnoticed by pratham and gave a sweet smile to pratham...

a:hi pratham! vicky se milna tha...

p:main abhi usse bhejta hoon....

he went inside....

a:(angrily)gauri! tu bhi na!

g:(innocently)kyun maine kya kiya???

a:itne ghoor ghoor ke kyun dekh rahi thi use??

g:kya karoo yaar?yeh to uski galti hai...

a:(surprised)uski galti??

g:haan....woh itna handsome jo hai...aur aaj to kitna cute lagraha

tha ki i couldnt control myself...

a:(laughs) gauri..tu to bilkul pagal hai....

by that time vicky came....

v:(with a sweet smile)hi anitha!

a:(blushing)hi....vicky yeh gauri hai..meri friend...

v:hi gauri


g:hi

both vicky and anitha started staring at each other...gauri waited

for some time and then decided that they both will stare throught

the evening if she doesnt do anything...she pinched hard on anitha's

shoulder...

a:ouch!

both came out of the reverie....

v:kya hua???

g:kuch nahi...woh actually mujhe tumse baat karni thi...

v:zaroor...come in...

g:nahi yaha nahi....

v:ok...walk pe chalte hai...walking ki walking ho jaayegi aur

talking ki talking....

a:ok good idea....

they start for a walk....anitha walking in between....a & v held

hands and were walking staring at each other....

g:(thinking)uff!main bhi kaha aa gayi??/yeh lovers to ghoorne ki

alawa kuch karte hi nahi...mujhe hi kuch karna padega.....

she went and broke in between them....both of them looked at

gauri....
g:plzzz huh! main kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahti ...lekin kya

karoo???main yaha aayi thi tumse baat karne ke liye aur aap

dono....khair...i am sorry...but plzzz vicky meri madad karo....

v:kaisi madad???

gauri told him everything abt how she loves pratham, how they met

etc....vicky started laughing.....

v:gauri! tu pratham se pyaar karti hai???woh ladkiyon se door bhagta

hai....

g:isliye to! mujhe tumhari help chahiye....plzzzzzz help me...
v:ok ok...

just then they saw pratham coming.....

v:aao pratham.....tum bhi chalo hamare saath...

p:nahi yaar...main to tumhe keys dene aaya...mujhe kuch kaam hai..

v:pratham!tu gauri se mil chuka hai na???

p:haan...(turned towards gauri)hi..

g:hi....

v:woh pratham...gauri ne aaj hum dono ko dinner pe invite kiya

hai....

gauri looked at vicky with shock...vicked quickly winked at her....

v:woh khana bahut accha banati hai...anitha ne kaha...tum aaoge

na...

p:nahi yaar...main nahi aa paaoonga....

g:(pleaingly)plzzz...aayiye na...

p:sorry...kuch kaam hai...i am really sorry...ok then...bye chalta

hoon....

he went away...
g:ab???
v:kuch na kuch to karna padega....


so how was it???very long na??was it boring ???plzzzzzz post in ur

comments positive or negative.....any suggestions welcome...
keep smiling
shruthi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very gud,it was long but interesting.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SO,u guys like it?plz tell me!

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