SwaRon SS : Incompatible Love! Ch-1 updated

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Res IS Awosm

love it

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ..Aishaa..

thats what happens when you write half an update on sunday and the other half on thursday :P
well ill solve that in the next update

ah well---i know trust me! slip ups. good luck with solving this---and anyway not many people notice.😛

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

ah well---i know trust me! slip ups. good luck with solving this---and anyway not many people notice.😛

weel i think y readers are quite smart. they all make me feel nt less than a super dumbass at the moment. the next update is definitey gonna be something with which i can say " on your face" 😆

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Great Chapter :)

Loved the characterisation and concept

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome start...
beautifully written..
i had also the same question that how she can be tour guide if she don't know the way home but you clear it😆[:p]
waiting for next part..
plz update soon.
thanks for the pm:)

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

awesome update

loved the starting of this ss

u described everything so well

ya was a bit confused in sum parts but may be they will be solved in the next update

their first meet was well shown

n good u didnt show love at first site in dis ss as the title wouldhv not gone along it but i know swaron best scenes r yet to cum rather them falling in love wid each other is yet to cum n this is for sure going to be interesting

update soon