TH#3 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted TH#4 PG.140 (29/08)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am still typing the chapter. I have already written 3000 words and I need to write some more. So by the time I type, why don't you guys read these poems written by my awesome readers? 😃


For Part 7

Originally posted by: aashi12

With the ignition of the attraction buring up high and rain adding to fuel to their desires, they are seeing each other in new light!

Even with the havoc of nature around them : jaane kyun dil jaanta hai , tu hai to i'll be alright!


With sky turning dark, and night too cold..
I have a few things for you, i never told..

With havoc around , i can't stop thinking of those mistakes..
I have to tell you today, watevr though it takes..

For i never said it this way..
That its just a 'sorry' i had to say..

Those times i hurt you and made fun of you..

Now i tell you, 'i was jealous of you'




I couldn't find the second poem


For part 8

Originally posted by: ma-nishada

They were destined to love,
Thru gusty wind and nasty rain,
Thru thick and thin,
Their love blossomed.
Bounded by an armour- the family,
They are destined to love forever...




Originally posted by: aashi12

The family you had, the family i yearned for..
Showering you with love, every time some more..

While i lived a deceit till long..
To face it, i was never too strong..

Though the truth was in front of my eyes..
Yet i continued to believe in worldly lies..

I met you all, and the sudden emptiness in my life i found..
I yearned for family, you had around!

I never thought this love and affection exists..

And yes, i was jealous..
Jealous of you..

My family never had an elder to shower with care..
So nani, dadi so full of love, was a sight too rare..

Though my parents were great..
Yet they cudn't make the atmosphere that family memebers create..

So, yes, i was jealous , jealous of you..

Need no reason to say..
Things weren't as easy ,in my way..
The dream i saw..
The admission which i had to withdraw..

For life never was a fairytale..
Chachi's one blow, and followed a blood trail..

I was orphan with dreams that lay crumbled..
Parents gone, none to hold me when i stumbled..


As i now recount those days..
Think back on my rude ways..

Isn't it all because of me...?
Had you been there, all this wouldn't had to be..

With their heart in open, they spoke of pain..

With their hurt being washed over by rain..

Sharing the past, walking the present..
Any reason left to resent..?

Joining hands, moved on..
With all the MU's gone..

A friendship that sets on start..
With many promises playing their part..

An end to a part, just to begin a new..
With all the ladies on terrace, wishing for their dream to come true..:)




I will see you guys later 😉
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipee - You are going to give a new update of the story. Can't wait now.

Awesome poems. Really beautiful - loved reading all of them.

PS:- Haila, I am the first one on the thread. That has got to be a first.
Edited by psarada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on new thread... More to come😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congeats on the new thread.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poems are outstanding
congrats for new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread !!! looking forward to update... 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
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i m late...

congratulation on new thread..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread!!

I wrote my comments on the previous one for chapters 7 & 8 (finally!!!), I think on pg147... :)

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