virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 87

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update 👏👏👏👏 u hav portrayed virat emotions very well how badly he is trying 2 be happy with all dis which r happening around him poor guy trying very hard 2 control his feelings 2wrds her 😭😭😭 , jeeman was nice finally jeevi understand dat wht kabir means 2 her sis how she had suffers without him , kabir n maanvi was nice 2 n luved d way maanvi being confused dat wht happened 2 her partner her concern 4 him dat y he is so sad hopes she cum 2 know soon , virman r going 2 married (wo b kisi or se) 2 gud wht a date u hav selected after maanvi wedding virat's wedding (let maanvi married 2 kabir n after dat virat cancel his wedding bcos maya don't deserve him dats my thought u know d best wht u hav 2 do ) but i know dere will b a other dhamaka 4rm u just waiting 4 d new twist 😊😊😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz nw cnt bare this maBir and viYa jodi thingy plz..nw want my virumanu..plz.,i hate wen kabir touch viru's manu..cntiune soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
My fav ff!!!!:) yaha par me spam karungii!!!! or tujhe jaldi jaldi update dena hoga!!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
exam ke bad ek update to banta haii!! 😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Part 16 and 17 I loved it...Poor Virat...Really interesting part and waiting for the next part...Please update soon,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i know i am here after long two months but but but the update will be soon...!!!!!


next chapter will be updated today n it will start directly from manvi n kabir's wedding day... i didnt feel like adding sangeet n mehndi functions...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soonnn it was faboulus i read all chapters in one go plzzz make virman soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just an hour or two left for the update guys...


I m just feeling too lazy to update but a promise is a promise...



Update toh aah hi ayega...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys the updatE is split into 2 halves... this is the first part and second part will be posted soon... 😊

BE READY WITH A TISSUE BOX...!!! VIRAT WILL DEFINITELY MAKE U CRY TODAY... 😭

CHAPTER 18

manvi : uff... ye sab kahan chale gaye hain...??? koi dulhan ko akela chodta hai kya...??? aur ye virat kahan hai...???manvi dialled virat's number but he didnt pick it.
manvi : now where the hell is he...??? i am the one who is getting married and he has no time... ufff virat yaar... why are u doing this to ur bandriya...??? i need you partner...
jeevika : mannu... ohhh so you are talking to yourself only... i thought...
manvi : di i am getting bored... no one is here na... and what am i supposed to do sitting here dressed up like a plastic doll...??
jeevika : hehe... you are supposed to blush today mannu... no one likes a chatterbox bride...


manvi : is it...?? okkk... i will try n blush... be the way di why dont you go n check where has the baraat reached... ye kabir ka toh kuch ata pta hi nahi hai... and virat...?? virat kahan hai...??
jeevika : abhi phone karti hoon and virat... virat was here only... he is busy...
manvi : send him na di... i need my partner di...
jeevika : i will find him and send him... u relax... okk..??
manvi : okk...

scene shifts
viren : virat... woh
virat : just gimme two minutes bhai...
viren got worried and entered into the room and then only he realised that the lights were switched off and virat was standing near the window in the moonlight.
viren : bhai... dekh virat (viren was at loss of words because he knew what virat was going through... the love of his life would get married to somebody else in front of his eyes)
virat : bhai plzzz (his voice choked because of the tears flowing from his eyes... he was broken... broken for ever this time)
viren : i cant see you like this... it is making me weaker by every passing minute... (taking steps close to virat who was not just a sibling, a little brother for viren but a son whom he has brought up... their father died when virat was only 5 years and viren was 9... he from that very day treated virat as his son and became a father to him... he gave virat every ounce of happiness possible and he never let virat miss their father even for a second... he made this a purpose of his life that he would never let virat think even for a second that what if his father was alive...)
virat hugged viren as soon as he felt his fatherly affectionate touch on his shoulder...
virat : bhai... why me bhai...?? why me...??? i cant live without manvi... i love her bhai... i love her... i cant move on... bhai mera pyaar mujhse cheen jaega aaj... bhai aaj sab khatam ho gaya... aaj meri aankhon ke saamne manvi kisi aur ki ho jaegi aur main kuch nahi paunga... mera pyaar kisi aur ka ho jaega... bhai bahut dard ho raha hai.. bahut dard... main nahi jee sakta aise...
viren : shhh... rona band kar... no more tears now... do u get it...??? humein nahi rona... (controlling his own tears) we are doing this for manvi's happiness... hai na...??? so we shouldnt cry yaar... jo tu kar raha hai na, woh bahut kam log kar paate hai... apne pyaar ki khushi ke liye usko chod dena... its a very difficult thing to do... setting the one free whom you love more than your life is just way to difficult and only the ones who understand the real meaning of love can do it... tu haara nahi hai virat... balki aaj... aaj tere pyaar ki jeet hogi... dekhio... aaj kuch bhi ho, jeet tere pyaar ki hi hogi...
virat : hmm... you are right... i can only be happy when manvi is happy... and manvi is happy with kabir... i should be happy for them...
viren : chal ab chalte hain...
jeevika who was witnessing this scene was in tears and she immediately wiped her tears and entered the roomas if she heard n saw nothing...
jeevika : arrey aap dono yahan hai... main kab se dhoond rahi thi... aur ye light ko kya hua...?? band kyun hai...??
viren : kuch nahi... bas aise hi... chal virat...
jeevika : virat mannu tumhe bula rahi thi... wo akele...
virat : hmm... main chala jaata hoon uske paas...
jeevika : virat agar tum jaana chaho toh hi jaana... main nahi chahti ke tum kisi bhi tarah ke dard se guzro...


virat : i am fine bhabhi... thank you...

scene shifts
manvi : i love you...
kabir : i love you too...
manvi : kab tak aa rahe ho... i mean how much time will you take...
kabir : i dont know manvi... they are preparaing for the ceremony that is to take place just before leaving...
manvi : ufff... here i am dressed up n waiting to see you... waise sherwani aachi lag rahi hogi... hai na...??
kabir : hmm... u chose it so it had to be good.. isnt it...??
manvi : yeah it had to be...
kabir : see you soon baby...
manvi : okk see you...

scene shifts
virat took a deep breath and closed his eyes... he had imagined manvi as a bride in his dreams for hundreds of time but today he will actually she her as a bride. but see the irony, he always imagined her as his bride, but the reality was far beyond the one imagined... she is a bride today bit not his and this very fact hitted him hard.
virat : partner...


manvi : where were you partner...???
virat : i was busy doing the preparations ded futiya...main vella nahi hoon tumhari tarah...
manvi : haha... very funny... accha tell me how am i looking partner...???

virat : hmm... looking okk..
manvi : okkk...??? on my wedding day, i am looking okk... you cant be serious...
virat : i am serious... you are looking okk...
manvi : dekho tumhe majak mat karo warna main ro dungi...
virat : rona mat plzzz... warna saara makeupo kharab ho jaega... itna mehanga package book karwaya tha tumhara waise bhi...
manvi : how cheap...!!! but cmon seriously tell me no virat...
virat : you are looking like an angel manvi... more beautiful than i ever imagined... you are looking marvellous... the fairy decended on earth... teh most beautiful bride on earth...
manvi : haaye... ab itne bhaw mat bdao mere partner... awww... i love you... (hugging virat)
virat : i love you too... (wrapping his arms around manvi and thinking that this might be the last time he is holding her in his arms)
manvi : waise na ye jo busy wali line hai na wo main parso maarungi... (breaking the hug and winking at virat)
virat : as u wish partner...
manvi : waise tumhari maya memsaab nahi aai tab tak...
virat : why is she required here...??
manvi : what...??
virat : i am she has guests at her place and may be she wont be able to make it...
manvi : this is not done... didnt she think what will you do alone...?? accha tell me honestly, are u missing her...??? (being the bride she is teasing virat who is soon to get married...)
virat : hmm... poor me... (virat faked a smile)
manvi : hehe... dont worry mere sher... bas ek raat ki doori hai, fir maya tumhari...
virat : yeah... u sit here.. i have to go... okk...
manvi : okk... but kisiko bhej do na... i mean i am damn hungry, kuch snacks hi bhej do yaar...
virat : bhejta hoon meri bhookhi sherni...

scene shifts
jeevika : viren ji...
viren : hmm...
jeevika : ye sab kuch... i mean... i cant take it...
viren : nor can i... but we can do nothing jeevika... i am feeling so damn helpless...
jeevika : i am worried for virat a lot... he loves mannu a lot... how will he live with maya...?? and maya isnt the one for him... she would spoil virat's life...
viren : i dont know jeevika... i am just praying to god to make everything alright... but i know nothing can be alright... not with virat atleast...
jeevika : sambhaliye apne aap ko... sab theek hoga...
viren : hmm... u go n spend time with manvi...
jeevika : viren ji... i am not in a state to meet manvi now... i am already emotionally unstable right now thinking that my mannu will be going away from me... i will broke into tears...
viren : shh... u have to be strong...
jeevika : aap hi meri himmat hain...

scene shifts
beeji : virat...??
virat : jee...
beeji : virat please call kabir and ask na where are they...?? they should have reached by now...
virat : jee beeji... they must be on our way...
virat calls the kabir's mobile and it was unreachable, so he tried calling kabir's mother (uma)
virat : hello... aunty main virat
uma : bolo virat beta...
virat : aap log kahan pahunche...
uma : bas beta hum log nikal hi rahe hain... thode late toh ho hi jaata hai...
virat : i understand aunty... we are waiting...

scene shifts
manvi : hello...
kabir : manvi...
manvi : kabir...
kabir : manvi...
manvi : kabirrr...
kabir : manvi i love you...
manvi : i love you too...
and the call got disconnected...
manvi : hawww... mera phone cut kia... you are so gonna regret this kabir... this is not done... abhi pati bne bhi nahi aur itne bhav... bhagwan bachae... mujhe nahi... tumhe... aur wo bhi mujhse... (saying this manvi giggled)

Part 2 will be soon...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maar daa kabire ko!!!!! Jo VirMan k beech ayega choor choor ho jaega!!!!!

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