MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 20

Geet came down.geet got a phone call.she picked it up.
Geet:hello
Rohit:geet ma'am wo order are ready I m going to kapoorz office for delivery.
Geet:hmm...Rohit armaan kaha hai...
Rohit:ma'am wo..wo..armaan sir india gaye hai..
Geet:india aachanak...par kyu...
Rohit:wo...sir ne bola kuch jaruri kaam hai..
Geet:ohk...usey bolo ki mene uskey barey mey pucha tha...& ask him 2 call me...
Rohit:ohk ma'am.
Geet keeps the call & goes near window.
She looks at the moon.

PAST
it was late night wen maan gets the baby & the letter. Even his eyes get moist wen he got to no the feelings geet still have 4 him...he turns to baby.he kisses the baby.
Maan:u r my dream...mu muskan...
I I...I m ur..DAD...
The baby looks at maan & smiles...
Maan:u look just lke my geet...ur nani si geet...nanu...
Maan hugs her & kiss her...
Love u muskan...
His eyes suddenly went on his phone...he remember geet told him about gift & muskan is his gift...
He takes his cell phone...& try 2 call on the number 4m which he got call 2dayz back...
He tries again & again..but couldn't reach on that no...
He got frustrated & throws the phone on the floor.
He saw muskan crying he takes her on lap & talks 2 her.
She smiles again bt again starts crying maan thought she much be hungry tua he rush 2 nakuls room.
Maan:nakul...nakul...
Nakul gets up all suddenly.
Nakul:haan.. haan...sir..
Maan:jaldi se dhood lekar aao muskan ke liye...jao jaldi. ..
Nakul:yes sir...
Nakul brings milk but der was no bottle at his place so he got it in a cup.
Maan tries to feed her but he was not able to feed her...
But at last maan sum how feeds her & make her sleep..
He takes her to his room & make her sleep.
He also slept over der all tiered. ...
Next morning,
Maan got up at 6 coz of muskan' s cry he thought she is hungry again he getz milk & try 2 feed her but den she didn't stop crying...
He was not knowing wht should he do...he was cursing geet for leaving such a small child like dis...
It was morning so daadi came 2 maanz room.she saw a baby with maan.
Daadi:maan ye baby kiska hai..
Maan:daadi dekho na ye chup hi nahi ho rahi...
Daadi:shayad usney susu ki hogi...w8 I will check..
Maan:hmm..
Daadi:see I was right...
Daadi change muskan & takes her in her lap.
Daadi:maan ye itni pyaari bachi kiski hai...aur kaab ayi..
Maan was afraid 2 say everything 2 daadi bt he couldn't hide it 2.
Maan:daadi ye meri beti hai...meri aur geet ki...humari beti...
Daadi:kya...par aap ki tua shaadi bhi nahi hui..tua ye kahi aapne..
Maan looks down...daadi slaps him
Daadi:sharam aathi hai hamey...
Maan:par daadi hamari shaadi ho gayi hai...aur ye bachi zajaz hai..
Daadi:aur geet uska kya hua...she left u r8...now aachanak y she is back where is she..
Nakul comes in room with a basket & a bag.
Nakul:sir ye wo ek aadmi ne ye bag aur basket lakar diya kaha aapko dene..
Maan takes the bag & opens it...he finds muskan's clothes & bottle toys etc. ...
Daadi got really shock. ...
Daadi:kasi maa hai ye aapni hi beti ko chod diya...shi...
Maan:daadi...
He shows Nakul eyes on which Nakul goes out..

PRESENT

Geet goes to sleep.she alwayz do think how is her muskan but also is very sure dat maan will take care of her much better den her.


Khurana house,
Maan comes home.muskan comes running.
Muskan:daddy...
Maan spread his arms & takes her in arms & kiss her.
Maan:how was my muskan's day...
Muskan:daddy muskan day is not complete yet...long 2 go...ohk can we got out today plze...
Maan:today...hmm..y don't u go with daadi..
Muskan:daadi's knee panning...
Maan:oh...amm...ohk but not now daddy tiered so evening ohk...
Muskan:ohk..
Maan:now go & play on ur ipad..go go fast..
Muskan:ohk daddy...
She runs to her room. Maan goes to his room & change & was really tiered so took small nap to relax.

Precap:Manav & his daddy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!
thanks for the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for son and dad's meeting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
come back geet...everyone is missing u...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just finished reading the whole story..lovely and so different...so many MUs ...oh why could geet not have waited patiently to see what maan had instore for her...and how come maan was not able to track geet tillnow?


poor kids...deprived of their other parent in their lives...

waiting for them to know the truth about each other and get to be with each other soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice parts dear update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
sory for late comment...not well
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will update by 2day n8 4 sure was really busy with all functions tua couldn't make it on time...but 2dau would update part 21.
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 21
Maan got up in evening around 6pm.muskan comes to maans room.
Muskan:daddy u woke up...
Maan:yes baby...ok where u want to go..aachi...
Muskan:daddy u got aachi...nt well
Maan:no baby it's just cold...I m good.
Muskan:no daddy u take rest I will call daadi...
Maan:no..wait..
But Muskan was already out of the room.

LONDON
Geet got call from armaan.
Geet:hello armaan..how r u & why u went 2 india.
Armaan:geet u have to rush to india...badey papa is not well he have got heart attack.
Geet was totally shock.
Geet:wht...b..but...papa..wo..wo kasey kasey hai..
Armaan:geet relax he is feeling good now but he want to see u & manav so please come to india as soon as possible.
Geet:yes I m coming I will leave today itself...
Armaan:ohk geet we are waiting.
Geet keeps the call &march towards he room to pack bags.
Geet calls manav.
Manav:yes mama...
Geet:baby get ready we have to leave for india...
Manav: y mom...
Geet cups manav's face.
Geet:to meet nana & nanny...
Manav:nanu wowo...chalo we will go...
Geet smiles & kiss manav...
Geet books for the air tickets. geet fortunately got air tickets for india.
Geet's bags were packed & her flight was at night around 11'o clock.

DELHI:KHURANA HOUSE

Maan had his dinner & took medicines & again went to sleep but for change he was not at all feeling sleepy...that to wen he was not well..
He was sitting near window.
Maan:geet agar aaj tum hoti tua...I m missing u a lot today jane kyu lagta hai dat u r still der...u can't leave me & go...
Maan had tears in his eyes.he looked at geets pic & smiled.
Daadi had given maan kada coz of which maan was feeling a bit good.
Maan goes to sleep.

Here in London geet makes manav have hia food properly & ask neelum also to pack bag as she was also coming with them to india.
Geet, manav & neelum left to airport to all the way to delhi...
Geet thanked god as her visa to was not expired & she could easily go to india without any mess.
(Geet was still Indian & was in London coz of her career.geet easily opened a boutique over there.)

Precap: manav & maan to meet each other.

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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Posted by: zajedno

1 months ago

Marry me, please.

How do you react when a man asks you if you want to marry him?

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