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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...matlab bahut cute moments hone wale hai...
priya ko bolo uska diya hua pain Priya ko bahut pasand hai...☺️
yeh pain bahut pyaara aur meetha hota hai...ramji...
mein eise blushed na ho jaau isse pehle update de do...😛
waiting...☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice preview..😉
plz update yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

wow...matlab bahut cute moments hone wale hai...

priya ko bolo uska diya hua pain Priya ko bahut pasand hai...☺️
yeh pain bahut pyaara aur meetha hota hai...ramji...
mein eise blushed na ho jaau isse pehle update de do...😛
waiting...☺️



Priya has no complaint for the pain but Ram being so caring he thought he really hurt Priya, par unko kya pata Priya ko yeh pain bhi bohot meethi lagti hain...arrreee preview me hi tum blush karne lagi, update ke baad kya karogi😛😉
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Originally posted by: shut

nice preview..😉

plz update yaar...



update coming up😊
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here I come with the next update, hope u all enjoy reading this part

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...Rishabh very gently lift her chin and take her lips in him and locked her lips with his. Saumya shivered but feel the sense of belongingness in the kiss.



On the other hand all reached Kapoor Mansion. Ram went to his room while Priya took dadi in her room and Krishnaji also came there. These three ladies chatted for a while about the party and then Priya came to her room. She bolted the door and found Ram standing near the window. His coat is lying on the chair which is unusual. Priya looked at this and slowly came near to him and stand beside him. Ram looked at her and then again looked outside. Priya understood Ram is going through some emotional upheaval.


Priya – Mr. Kapoor……………….


Ram – jab babuji death bed pe the tab unhone mujhse kahan tha ki Rishabh aur chhoti meri zimmedari hain, aur main un dono ko apne bachhon ki tarah palu, I was only 25 at that time, tab se leke aaj tak main unn dono ka bada bhai hone ke saath saath ek baap ki zimmedari bhi nibhayi, kabhi apne bare me sochne ka fursat nahin mila, Sarah ke jane ke baad yehi meri sab se badi priority bann gaye the aur shayad isi wajah se main apni zindagi ko kahin peeche chhor paya tha. Itne salon baad aaj meri zimmedari khatam huyi, chhoti Karthik ke saath khush hain aur Rishabh Saumya ke saath, maine babuji ko kiya hua wada nibha diya, Kapoor industries ko bhi maine samhal liya, bas meri zimmedari khatam ho gayi.


Priya was listening to this and was watching keenly Ram's face, unn me bohot dard abhi bhi chhupa hua hain, she said, kisne kahan aapki zimmedari khatam ho gayi hain, hum sab aapki zimmedari hi toh hain, yeh pariwaar aap ke bina ek kadam nahi chal payega, ma, dadi ko aapki zaroorat hain, aap iss ghar ki bade bte hain, Rishabh aur Natasha ke bade bhai hain aap, unn logon ko aaj bhi aap hi ki zaroorat hain, Vikram ko aur aapki business ko bhi aapki zaroorat hain, aur aapki sabse badi zimmedari main hoon, main iss ghar me ayi hoon toh woh bhi aap hi ke liye, mera iss ghar pe haq hain toh sirf aap ke wajah se, hum sab ko aapki zaarorat hain Mr. Kapoor, aap kaise yeh keh sakte hain?


Ram – Priya aaj mujhe lag raha hain ke maine apni saari zimmedari puri kar li hain, bas ab main chain se so sakta hoon, kya main thodi der tumhare god me sar rakh ke so sakta hoon


Priya – Mr. Kapoor, aap yeh sab kyun………………..


Ram – plz Priya


Priya came to the bed and Ram kept his head on her lap, Priya was stroking his hair with her fingers, Ram closed his eyes. Priya was watching him carefully, Priya ko bohot dukh ho raha tha Ram ko aise dekhte huye, woh Ram ki feelings ko samajh paa rahi thi, aaj itne saalon baad Ram ab apne saare zimmedariyon se mukt hain, iss baat ki khushi jitni hain utna hi dard bhi hain, apne family ke liye Ram ne apni saari zindagi de di par kahin na kahin akele reh gaye, Priya iss jazbaat ko achhi tareeke se samjhti hain, kyun ki akeli to woh bhi thi, pariwaar hote huye bhi, lekin aaj yeh dono complete hain ek dusre ko paake, kahin na kahin ek sense of belongingness hain jo yeh dono samajh rahe hain, mehsoos kar rahe hain ek dusre ke liye, a lone tear drop from her eyes makes Ram open his eyes. He sat up and saw Priya has tears in her eyes. Ram too felt the emotion of Priya, he wiped the tears of her and tightly hugged her, Priya find solace and security in his embrace. They, for some moment remain in that position. Ram very gently laid Priya on the bed resting her head on the pillows, he kissed her tears and also gives peck on her forehead, Priya cupped his face in her palm, both looked at each other ardently, dono ne ek dusre se kuch nahin kahan par phir bhi inn dono ki dil ki baat ek dusre ki dil tak pohaunch hi gayi. Ram took her lips in him and kissed her while Priya too reciprocated him, it wasn't a passionate one, it was rather a sense of saying that am with you, always beside you. Ram kissed her neck and kept his head on her chest, Priya hold his head, Ram kissed her cleavage and removed her pallu from her chest, he got the access of her chest and continues to kiss on her cleavage. Ram holds her from waist and caressed her face with his other hand, Priya shifted him and came on top of him, she kissed him on his cheeks, eyes and forehead, she opened his shirt and kissed on his chest. Ram grabbed her shoulder and opened the dori of her blouse. He came on top of her, slided her blouse and kissed her shoulder till her cleavage. Priya moaned. Ram took out his shirt and also the pleats of her saree and took out the saree from her body. Ram placed his hand on her waist and tried to take out the kamarband, he took that by his teeth touching her belly button. Priya shivered in pleasure. Ram took out her petticoat and also his pants. Priya cupped his face in her hands and brought it near her face and kissed him harder. Ram's hand was moving on her back, he slided his hand and opened the hook of the blouse and ripped it off from her body. Both were still kissing each other. After some time they parted and Ram was staring at Priya, his big brown eyes were conveying the message to Priya that he wants her. Both wanted each other desperately, Ram was watching her so as Priya. Ram parted her and very gently entered into her. The sudden jerk made Priya grasp his shoulder, but within moments both came into a rhythm. Ram took out Priya's earings and also entwined her fingers with him. Her bangles created a sound and also due to the pressure some broke off. Ram wanted to feel Priya with the last inch of his part. He deepens his thrust. Priya too wanted him, she arched her back and neck and Ram continue to kiss her on her neck, shoulder, chest and on breast. Both wanted more and more from each other. Ram deepens his thrust and also raised his motion, it seemed he would reach her womb, both wanted each other, they both panted, both shouted while Priya moaned, Ram groaned at the climax, both came out at same time spilling their love inside. Ram looked at Priya who had her eyes closed and was still panting, careesed her hair. Priya opened her eyes and saw Ram is looking at her ardently. She opened her arms and Ram took her in his embrace. Later Ram put the duvet on both of them, while Priya slept on her side, Ram embraced her and slept in that position. While in sleep, Priya changed her position and was sleeping flat while Ram had his head near her shoulder.


Both were sleeping peacefully in the warmth of each other. Aaj sahi maino mein Ram aur Priya ek dusre ke ho gaye hain, they are now two body but one soul. Ram ki jo saari insecurities aur akelapan tha Priya ne apneaap me samet liya hain, aaj sahi maino me Priya Ram ki ardhangini bann chuki hain, bhale hi inn dono ko jeevan me ek dusre ka saath der se mila hain par yeh dono ek dusre ka saath ki ehmiyaat ko samajh gaye hain, aaj RaYa complete hain. The trust, compatibility aur love, the three stepping stone of a relation is very much in their relation. Zindagine bohot imtihaan liya hain inn dono se lekin ab khul ke jeene ki baari ayi hain.


Ram stirred in his sleep, sensed warmth and closeness. He opened his eyes and found Priya sleeping very close to him. Her hot breath is touching his cheeks. He smiled. He stared at her, she is looking lovely in the light of a new day. Ram continues to stare at her. Priya opened her eyes and found Ram is staring at her. She smiled at him. Ram whispered a good morning to her which she greeted back. Inn dono ko kal raat ki baat yaad aa gayi aur Priya Ram ko dekh rahi thi, jo dard kal raat ko uske aankhon me tha woh dard Priya ko nazar nahi aya par ek khalipaan phir bhi tha, Priya ne apne baahen felaya toh Ram hugged her back, she kept his head on her chest and tried to make him put at ease. Ram ko Priya ki baahon me aake ek sukoon sa mehsoos ho raha tha, Priya was stroking his hair with her fingers, Ram clutched her more tightly.


Priya – ek baat poochu Mr. Kapoor?


Ram – hmmm


Priya – kya kabhi bhi aap apne liye nahi socha?, matlab Sarah ke baad aap aage badna nahi chahe?


Ram – after some pause, Sarah ke jane ke baad me bilkul tut gaya tha, apne aap ko samhalne ki koshish hi kar raha tha ke babuji guzar gaye uske baad toh phir peeche murr ke dekhne ka mauka hi nahi mila, apne bare me sochne tak ka fursat nahi mila, ek taraf se achha hi hua kyun ki main Sarah ko bhool gaya, uske diye ghav ko bhool gaya par rishton par se vishwaas uth gaya. Sach kahu apne aap ke liye jeena maine chhod hi diya tha, sab ko laga tha main apne zimmedari ke liye aisa kar raha hoon par yeh pura sach nahi tha. Par jab maine tumhe dekha toh………………saying this Ram raised his head and look straight to Priya and continued, jab tumhe dekha toh tum pehle nazar me mujhe pasand aayi, hala ki pehle nazar me pyaar nahi hua, par ek ajeeb si kashish maine mehsoos ki par apne aap ko rok liya, khud ko samjhaya ke u deserve the best and woh best main nahin hoon.


Priya – aap ko kisne kahan ke aap best nahin hain mere liye?


Ram – achha toh main best hoon?, maska laga rahi ho?


Priya – jo sachh hain wahi bata rahi hoon, yeh shaadi, yeh ghar aur aap mere liye life ka best hain


Ram – achha yeh batao, tumne haan kyun kiya?


Priya – maine apne pariwaar ke liye kahan tha, yeh baat nahi hain ke aap mujhe ache nahi lage, aap se baat kar ke mujhe yeh mehsoos hua tha ki kuch hain aap me jo aap dabane ki koshish karte hain, ek dard aapki aankhon me maine dekha tha…………….


Ram – tumhe pata hain Priya jab hamari sagaai hone jaa rahi thi tab maine………..


Priya – aapne aankhen band kar li thi, maine notice kiya tha, mujhe thoda ajeeb bhi laga tha


Ram – I was praying that ki main iss rishten ko nibha pau, tumhe khush rakhun


Priya – Mr. Kapoor aapne mujhe dher saari khushiyan diya hain, zindagi se mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye.


Ab tak Ram Priya ko dekh raha tha, sunn raha tha, now he closed the gap and kissed her, a simple kiss turned into a passionate one, both were savoring this moment.


Ram shifted his position, lying flat and Priya resting her head on the crook of his shoulder, Ram's left hand is encircling Priya on her shoulder. Priya took his palm and was playing with his fingers. She noticed his ring and also her ring. A smile crept on her lips.


Ram – what makes u smile?


Priya – nothing


Ram – areee bolo na!


Priya – hum dono ki engagement yaad aa gayi, aapne mujhe mere size se bada wala ring pehenaya tha


Ram – aur tum ne kya kiya tha?, mere size se chhoti ring leke aa gayi thi


Priya – ab aap itne bade hain toh main kya karu?


Ram – tumne mujhe mota kahan?


Priya – aree maine aisa kab kahan?, main toh sirf yehi keh rahi thi ke aap pleasantly plump hain and giggles


Ram – achha abhi dikhta hoon ke main kya hoon, saying this Ram firmly gripped Priya's two hands and came on top of her, he pressed himself more on Priya and pinned her between him and the bed. She was startled to this action and looked at him, Ram pressed her more left her gasping, Priya lowered her eyes, she can feel him, Ram's big brown eyes had naughtiness in it, he asked her, ab bolo main kaisa hoon? Priya couldn't say anything and tried to release her, jitna koshish karti utna hi Ram usse kass ke pakadta hain, his chest is brushing Priya's breast sending her shivers, she started panting, Ram watched her and he slid himself in Priya and took her in his rhythm, that morning they made love again.


Priya opened her eyes and felt pain in her body. She understood why it is, she shifted her eyes and found Ram is seeping peacefully beside her. A smile creeped in her face. She said in her heart, iss dard me bhi aapka pyaar hi chhupa hua hain. She slowly get down from bed and get her saree, wrapped around her and go into the washroom. Today is Sunday, so Ram has some extra time in his hand. Priya came out from washroom wearing a salwar kameez and saw Ram is still sleeping. She goes to his side and very gently stroke his hair and called him. Ram very lazily opened his eyes and saw Priya has freshnd up. He smiled and said good morning.


Priya – good morning, ab uthiye, aur jaldi fresh ho jaiyye


Ram – jaldi kya hain waise bhi aaj Sunday hain


Priya – Sunday hain toh kya hua, pata hain kitna kaam hote hain Sunday ko, ab aap uthiye.


Ram – plz thodi der aur sone do na


Priya – theek hain aap sote rahiye main chali


Ram – ok, am getting up, saying this get up but felt nakedness


Priya was watching him and enjoying his helplessness and was simultaneously smiling, aur smile karte boli, u go and freshn up, am going downstairs.


Priya came in kitchen and Ram smiled at her gesture and went to freshn up.


Ab breakfast table pe shaadi ki baat hi ho rahi thi, Saumya ke parents aaj lunch pe aa rahe hain, baki ki baat wahi pe hogi. Bohot kam waqt bacha hain shaadi ke liye, inn me sab kuch karna parega and with that it is also to be looked that bride's side doesn't feel any awkwardness or problem.


Dadi – Rishabh, ab teri shaadi hone jaa rahi hain, Saumya ka khayal rakhna aur uski zimmedari tera hain, usse hamesha khush rakhna aur aisa kuch mat karna ke woh na-khush ho, samjha?


Rishabh – jee dadi,


Krishnaji – Rishabh, dekh beta, har ladki apni sab kuchh chhodke ati hain apne saasural me, aur wahan sabse important hota hain uska pati, bhale hi koi uska saath na de kabhi par agar uska pati usse support karta hain toh ladki sab kuchh seh leti hain, Saumya teri sirf zimmedari hi nahi balki ek saathi hogi, jiske saath tu apna sab kuchh batega, tere har khushi, taqleef me tere saath rahegi woh, beta yeh rishta bohot nazuk hota hain lekin bohot strong bhi hota hain, ek dusre pe trust aur pyaar ho toh saare zaamane se bhi larr sakte hain couples, tu samajh raha hain na main kya kehna chah rahi hoon?


Rishabh – jee ma, samajh raha hoon, I assure u ma and dadi ke main hamesha uska saath nibhaunga.


Krishnaji – dekh beta jahan tak maine Saumya ko jana hain woh bohot matured aur sensible hain aur pariwaar ki ehmiyaat ko janti hain, bas thoda sa emotional hain, tujhe uska taqat banna hain


Ram – mujhe Rishabh pe pura bharosa hain, am sure yeh jitna achha beta, bhai hain utna hi achha pati bhi saabit hoga.


Priya – sirf bhai aur beta nahi, ek achha pota, dewar bhi hain aur sab se badi baat ek bohot achha insaan hain mera dewar.


Rishabh – kya bhabhi aap bhi, but yes I promise ke main apne saare farz bohot acche se nibhaunga.


Ram – am proud of you Rishabh, aaj babuji zinda hote toh bohot khush hote


Rishabh – bhai aaj jo kuch bhi main hoon woh sirf aap ke liye aur mere pariwaar ke liye hoon, aap nahi hote mere saath toh……………………


Ram – ek baat yaad rakhna Rishabh, jo apne pariwaar ka ehmiyaat janta hain woh duniya me kisi bhi cheez se larr sakta hain, mera strength toh tum sab hi ho, tum logon ke bina mera toh kuch bhi nahi hain.


Both the brothers got emotional and hugged each other, while Priya smiled looking at them, both dadi and Krishnaji got emotional.


Dadi – oye tum log apna yeh emotional atyachar band karo aur meri baat suno.


Hearing dadi all laughed out.


Dadi – maine socha hain ki Rishabh ki shaadi bhi Lalaji ki kothi se hi hogi


Rishabh – par daadi iski kya zaarorat hain, I mean…………………….


Dadi – oye khotiya, tu chhup kar, yeh Kapoor khandan ki bte ki shaadi hain, Golu, tu intezaam kar


Ram – waise idea bura nahin hain, chhoti aur meri shaadi huyi thi wahi se toh tera kaise na ho, aur waise bhi bade din ho gaye haveli me gaye huye, dadi aap fikr mat karo, main arrangements kar dunga.


Krishnaji – waise beeji baat toh aap sahi keh rahe ho par Saumya ke parents ka bhi toh ray chahiye na, unki bhi toh beti ki shaadi hain, unka bhi toh armaan hain kuch


Dadi – main unn logon se baat karungi.


Krishnaji – beeji main soch rahi thi ke iss baar Roshan aur Sohan ko bhi bulate hain, peechli baar nahi bula paye aur phir yeh Kapoor khandan ki iss generation ki last bte ki shaadi hain, achha lagega, sab milke manayenge, aur waise bhi bohot achha laga tha sab se milkar Amritsar me, sab ne bohot dhyan rakhha, bohot khatirdaari bhi ki, toh kyun na unn logon ko bhi


Dadi – yeh bohot badiya rahega, kyun Priya puttar tu sab arrange kar payegi na, unn sab ki zimmedari teri hogi


Priya – dadi aap bilkul chhinta mat kijiye, main sab samhal lungi waise agar mujhe kisi ki madad chahiye hogi toh Neha aur Natasha toh hain hi, hum sab samhal lenge


Dadi – yeh hui na baat, toh phir Golu tu aaj hi Amritsar me khabar kar de aur keh dena shaadi se pehele hi aa jaye


Ram – dadi main aaj hi Roshan se baat karta hoon


Rishabh was watching his family's happiness and was praying and thanking God for this happiness.


Ram was in his room when Priya entered in the room, she was still having the pain but she wasn't paying attention to it, but after climbing the stairs, it starts again. She entered in the room very lazily, Ram watched her as she slouch on the couch.


Ram – Priya tum theek toh ho?


Priya opened her eyes and gave a faded smile to him and said yes.


Ram – dekh ke nahi lag raha hain, tabiyat toh theek hain?


Priya – haan woh bas, thoda sa………………….


Ram hurriedly came to her and said, main janta tha kuch hua hain, kya hua hain bolo


Priya – kuch nahin Mr. Kapoor, thoda sa dard ho raha hain, theek ho jayega


Ram now got tensed and took her hands and make her sit on the bed and asked, kahan dard ho raha hain? tehro main doctor ko phone karta hoon, saying this he took out his mobile and was about to dial when Priya said,


Priya – please doctor ki zaarorat nahi hain, thodi der aram kar leti hoon, theek ho jayega


Ram – arre tum mujhe bata kyun nahi rahi ho puri baat?


Priya lowered her eyes and very softly said, woh Mr. Kapoor baat yeh hain ki………….ki


Ram – bolo Priya


Priya – mujhe vaginal passage me dard ho raha hain, she said in one breath and keep looking down.


Ram ko thoda waqt laga samajh ne me,


Ram – am so sorry Priya, tumhe itna dard ho raha aur woh bhi mere wajah se, am really sorry


Priya – plz Mr. Kapoor, aap sorry mat boliye, kisi kisi ko yeh pain hota hain…………….


Ram – phir bhi Priya, I should have been more cautious and protective.


Yeh baat sunn ke Priya ne Ram ko tightly hug kiya, Ram itne caring hain, yeh toh Priya janti thi lekin aaj uski yeh baatein prove bhi kar diya. Ram gently caressed her hair and said, kal humlog doctor ke paas jayenge, waise bhi tumhara check up ka waqt ho gaya hain, so no more bahana, ok, chalo ab thodi der aram karlo, saying this he made her lie down. Priya was still holding his hands, she closed her eyes and Ram stared at her lovingly.



I seriously hope that you all liked reading this part, I wanted to portray the insecurity and loneliness of Ram from this update, and how Priya became pillar of strength for him, she wanted to make him happy and content and will always be there as a friend and guide, the love making scene was also because to make Ram realize that Priya is with him. I hope you all understood what I was trying to convey through this part. If you all like this part then do hit the "LIKE" button and please leave your valuable comments, will wait for that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Suoerb part...
Liked every emotion in ur update...
Ram ka akelapan...
Priya is always by his side...
Ram and rishab's bond...true brothers...
Rishab is so good...

Haw...daadi...emotional atyachaar...

Ram wants to call doctor fr the pain???? 😆

contn soon...
Edited by chillpc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb 👏👏
So Raya sharing their pain & love each other.. nice going..👏⭐️⭐️
Thanks for pm'
continiue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
erywell so natural scenes nd loved loved it❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was fantastic their is so much understanding between raya loved it continue soon
waiting for the next part and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome👏
very beautiful raya scenes😳 and golu ram call doc for the pain😉

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