Tere mere sapney.Uptd pg 30 PM update

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi, i ve read a lot of ff ever since ive become a member, so i decided to start one of my own.

Characters:

Prem:He was known as Yudi before but he is now Prem

Mukti:She hates Yudi/Prem becuz of what he and Sharad did to her,well she's not sure if she hates him or likes him now

Prerna:Same person except she isnt that close to Anu.Loves her husband a lot.

Bajaj:Same person loves his wife a lot.

Anu:Same person but isnt that close to Prerna

Sam:Nothing going wrong between Anu n her.they both luv each other a lot.

Sneha:She hates Sharad because of what he did to Mukti,she has forgivin Prem

Kasak:I dont no much abt her.Bajaj and Prerna's daughter

Please tell me if i should continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Arre write teh story...I'm sure everyone will it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzz continue soon i love reading pm fan fics
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yh where prerna loves Bajju I will definately read............. MY DREAM COME TRUE
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay first part

Prem woke up with freezing cold water being dumped on him...
Prem:SNEHAAA N KASAK IM GOING TO KILL BOTH OF U!!!!!!
and he chased both his sisters down into the kitchen dripping wet...
Prerna:Oh my god prem!please put on a shirt!!

Prem:Mother India!First let me get ure not so innocent daughters then ill put on a shirt.

Bajaj:Prem!Go up and put on a shirt,Kasak Sneha help ure mom with breakfast.

Sneha,KAsak,Prem:Aww fine!

Then mukti enetered
Namaste Choti Maa!Namaste Sir

Sneha,Kasak:Hi mukti

Mukti:Hi guyz..

Sneha:Mukti tum aaj college jarahi ho?

Mukti:haan can u drop me off?

sneha:sure

Then PRem came downstairs he stopeed dead in his tracks when he saw Mukti and Mukti looks at him in anger.....

Mukti just ignored him as he sat down on the table

Prerna noticed that both of them were uncomfortable being in the same room....

Prerna:Mukti beta tumhey college kiliyeh der nahiin horihai?

Mukti:Oh haan chal Sneha!!

That evening:

Prerna enters her room and goes to her dressing table when Bajaj hugs her from behind

Prerna:Aap kya karahai hain?

Bajaj:Main tumhey gale lagara hoon koi problem hai kya?

Prerna:Nahiin lekin mujhe pehle kaam karne den phir aap jitna hug karnachatey hai karlen.

Bajaj:Kya prerna!tum bohauti unromantic hogaye ho!

Prerna:aapko sharam aani chahiyeh.Nana baney key din ageyhain aur aap ehsi baat karahai hain!

Bajaj:Lekin sharam nahiin arahi hain kya karogi?

Prerna looks at him when someone knocks at the door

Prerna laughs and bajaj lets go of her and silently curses the person who disturbed them as he went to go change.

Scene changes to Mukti

she thinking i cant stop thinking abt him even after what he did to me...whats wrong with me??

Prem is thinking:

I hate her,and she hates me and we both ignore each other,but even though i h8 her i still cant stop thinking abt her.....why???

ill update tomorrow

Edited by Sara_K95 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update! 👏
cont soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update..cant wait 4 u to update!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Update Soon.Mein intezar karoon ghi!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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another pm fanfic? sweeeeet! great start, plz continue! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww so many replies

okay heres part 2:


Next morning:
Prem woke up early so that he doesnt have to get wet with FREEZING cold water, so he wakes up kasak and both of them get EXTRA LARGE bucktes water.the water was already freezin cold but they put 5 HUGE CHUNKS of ice in each of them to make it even colder...
Sneha dripping wet with freezing cold water ran in to Prerna and Rb's room and started screaming..

Bajaj:Sneha? Why are u wet-wait Prem right?

Sneha:NOT JUST PREM BUT KASAK AS WELL WHERE R BOTH OF THEM I WONT LEAVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!

Prem,kasak:HAHAHAHAHAHAHA 😆

SNeha:GRRRRRRR 😡

and this is prem afterwards:

Kasak:Sneha im sorry but it was so much fun,lets do it to him tomorrow k?and ill tell u what he did!and we will put more than that...

Sneha:Acha chal,mujhe bohaut bhook lagri hai.

Kasak:Ek minute,kaprey to change karley,ure all wet!

Sneha:Oh yeah i forgot...eh i dont care lets jst have breakfast..

kasak:okay mom made aloo key parathey

Sneha:Yes!!

Downstairs:

Prerna:Sneha??what happened to u?why r u all wet?

SNeha:Mumma,aap prem sey poochein he did all this with lil baby kasak

Kasak:HEy im not a baby!!

sneha:but ure the baby of the family...right mumma?

Prerna:Sneha kasak ko tang matt karo..aur change karo phir naashta karlena!

Sneha:But...but im fine!!!

Prerna:But ure still wet

Prem enters.....

Prem:Hello big sis,thank u for beating me up this morning it was such a nice way to say Good Morning Prem!

Prerna:What?Why dont i know any of these things?

Sneha:mom dont complain,ure not the one who is getting woken up every morning with freezing cold water..

Prerna:Okay fine,ab nashta karley.

Bajaj enters:

Prerna:Aap late hogaye

Bajaj:haan maloom hai,lekin mai dher sey bhi jasakta hoon na?
and he hugs Prerna from behind

Sneha,Kasak,Prem:EXCUSE ME PPL R HERE!!!!

Bajaj suddenly realising they were there let go of Prerna and started acting as though nothing happened...

Prem asks suddenly:Mother India,what does it mean if u cant stop thinking abt someone?

Everyone stop what hey r doing and jst stare at Prem...
Prerna is shocked she is like as still as a statue and Sneha has her mouth open..😆
Prem:Okay..lemme rephrase that,could u ever stop thinking about Daddy Cool before u got married?

Prerna:What?...Prem r u feeling okay?
she feels his forehead..

Prem:Mother India im fine....but

Sneha:Prem...seriously u sure u dont have a fever or something?

Kasak:Guyz,i think Prem ko sach mein prem hogaya hai!!😆
Sneha:Haan mujhe bhi yehii lagra hai,kyun prem kaun hai?

Prem:Koi nahiin

Sneha:Suuuure.....batao na Prem..

Prem:Fine its this girl i met at skewl

Sneha:Whatever,then all the kids left the kitchen....

Bajaj then grabs Prerna and says:the kids are gone Prerna...
Prerna blushes and says:aap office kiliye dher hogaye!

Bajaj:Main aaj office nahiin jaraha hoon,

Prerna:kyun?

Bajaj:bas ehsahi,
and he starts kissing her neck,Prerna stops him saying:
Aap office jahi yeh!

Bajaj thinks:Aww man,something is going to happen tonight for sure....

Scene changes to Mukti:

Proff.:Miss.Deshmuk,can u tell me what are the basics of Physics?

Mukti:What,uhhhh no Sir. sorry

Proff.:No wonder u almost failed ure Physics exam..what were u thinking abt anyways?

Mukti thinking:Prem Bajaj....

Bye

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