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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Natasha.
Superb update, Rey imagining Taani was so cute
Rey watching his princess dance and the way he was staring at her omg that was romantic
Taani laughing so hard that she literally crying was awesome.
Aww everyone was so overwhelmed on seeing Taani so happy after ages...
Hope nothing serious wrong with our little princess.
U did an incredible job as always, I love the entire update

Thanks dear
N yeah hope so too :)
Awe thanks once again dear for loving the update

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi
once again congo on becoming IF-DAZZLER

awesome update
and rey imagining abt taani den he teaching her
wow n the pic of madhuri dixit😃
loved this update
but again a suspense
will be waiting for the nest update
thanx for the pm
update soon

Thanks once again dear ;)
U like madhuri dixit too :)
Thanks dear
N yeah suspense iis k bina maza nahi ata ;)
Will try to update soon and
U r welcome dear :)

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan
Brilliant update, TaSha...
That was really a hilarious + cute chapter..
Awww...Rey was so lost in his imagination...
And loved the way he was adoring her in his imagination also..
So cute..
And then the way he was adoring her while she was dancing..
And he could even feel her getting uncomfortable...
Loved the way he tried to shoo away her discomfort...
And then the next moment he himself got uncomfortable..
That too when Taani was observing him,,lol..
Liked the way he corrected her by saying not teaching, instead helping her..
And then Taani did not even stop him when he went close to her..
Instead she felt good..
Awww...
And the next moment was so damn hilarious..
Poor rey was so embarrassed..
hahahhahahahahahahaha!!! I still cant stop laughing..
And Taani was also laughing her heart out..
Loved the way he was staring at her..
And then everyone got emotional..
But what happened to Navika???
I hope she is fine...
LOVED the Update, TaSha..
Plz. Continue soon..

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH A LAMBU COMMENT 😃
Hmmm taani ko admire karay bina koi rah sakta hai kya 😳
Sure Rey k touch se koi Bura maan sakta hai ☺️
Well to know what happened to nanhi stay tuned ;)
Thanks for loving the update
Will try to update soon :)

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: taarey1fan
awesome update...
but the end is confusing...
plzzz update soon... cant wait...
thnk u for the pm...😊😊

Thanks dear
Will try to update soon
N u r welcome :)

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kriti094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

firstly a big sorry for commenting so late

it was a superb , fabulous n amazing updt

omg rey helping taani learn routines was nyc

but taani's laughter was mind blowing

loved d whole updt

but d end is really scary

I hope nanhi is fyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: kriti094

firstly a big sorry for commenting so late
it was a superb , fabulous n amazing updt
omg rey helping taani learn routines was nyc
but taani's laughter was mind blowing
loved d whole updt
but d end is really scary
I hope nanhi is fyn

Thank you so much dear
I m glad u liked taarey scene :)
And don't worry she is fine :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Part 12

They all comes out of RH and starts to look for nanhi but nanhi was nowhere to find. They all can hear her shout and cry but where she was no one knows. They look here and there almost everywhere. Suddenly Rey yells "stop it guys". Listening to him everyone stops walking, talking/yelling and panicking. Taani was about to say something to Rey but Rey signals her to stop and she stops. Rey closes his eyes and concentrates while other looks at him with confuse expressions. Rey opens his eyes and runs to his left and other follows him and soon nanhi's voice got louder and louder as they were getting close to the place where she was.
Finally they reach the closed door and swayam says "store room? It's door doesn't work properly. Oh crap nanhi is in here stuck cause of the damn door." "Chavanni? Spider-Man and everyone is here. Stop crying dear" Rey tries to talk to nanhi while trying to figure out a way to open the door. A scared nanhi replies "Spider-Man please chavanni ko yahan se nikalo yahan bohot andhera hai chavanni ko darr lag raha hai". Rey takes a deep breathe and slowly says to swayam "time to break the door". Swayam asks quickly "how? She is by the door she can get hurt. " "she will not [rey says this to swayam and then talks to nanhi] chavanni Spider-Man na movies ki tarah darwaza tor karna apni chavanni ko bachaey gay". He pauses to see her response and cute little nanhi gets excited and while clapping says "wow sachi Spider-Man?" Rey smiles and others too and then Rey says "chavanni Spider-Man darwaza tor rahay hain so ap side mein ho jao darwazay se dur (away)." With the thought of going away from the door nanhi again gets scared and says "no no yahaan bohot andhera nanhi Kahin nahi jaey gi."
Everyone who was calm listening to nanhi's excitement were now again in panic mode. Taani couldn't take it anymore and she starts crying. Rey couldn't see her like that he was confused what to do suddenly he goes to her and ask her "what she loves to do or play?" Taani get confused and thinks for a sec and says "Simon says her all time favorite game". "Bingo!" Rey says and everyone again looks at him with confused expression and he ignores them and goes to the door again. "Hey chavanni! Forget all that lets play something how about Simon say?" Rey says trying to show his excitement and hide his nervousness. "Ummm" all could hear cute nanhi thinking. "Well whose gonna start?" Rey asks while signaling all not to say anything. "Me me me" nanhi says and jumps in excitement. "As u say chavanni" Rey smiles at all and nanhi says "Simon says clap your hands all". Everyone smiles and claps their hands. Rey signals swayam to continue "well now mamo's turn" swayam says and continues "Simon says jump." And everyone jumps. Rey signals Sharon and Sharon says "my turn. I says turn around." No one turns around and nanhi in excitements asks from inside "who turned?who turned"? Before taani could say that no one did Rey says "taani taani chavanni your mom is out." Saying this Rey whispers 'sorry' and nanhi says in disappointment "what mama? Awe don't worry mama your daughter will gonna win this game for you." Everyone had a proud smile after listening to nanhi. "Now my turn (Rey says and crosses his fingers) Simon says turn around and take 10 steps. "
No one moved but instead listened carefully to nanhi's reaction. Little girl unaware of the trick does what was said and in excitement says "done. Now whose turn is it?" All take a breathe of relief and on a count of three Rey breaks the door. With the sudden door breaking sound nanhi gets scared and screams and closes her eyes tightly while keeping her both hands on her ears. Rey went and hug her tight before anyone else could do anything. Taani was shocked to see the care of Rey for nanhi and somewhere inside her she was happy too. Nanhi opens her eyes and sees everyone there and hugs back Spider-Man. After breaking the hug Rey wipes her tears and asks "ap theek ho chavanni?" Nanhi nodes in a 'yes'. Now that was it all started interrogating poor girl. Swayam started "tum store room mein kya kar rahi thi?" Sharon: "haan beta ap yahaan akelay?" Taani: "zaroor hide and seek khel rahi ho gi and yahaan a kar chup gai hai" Bari maa: "lag jati toh aise masti nahi kr tay" nanhi was cutely pouting at every question and was getting angry as no one was letting her say anything. She looked at her Spider-Man and signaled for help. Seeing her like this Rey before anyone could say anything lifted nanhi in his arm and takes her out of the store room leaving everyone shocked.
"So tell me chavanni. Why were you there all alone?" Rey asked while sitting on sofa and making nanhi sit on his lap. All comes out of the store room still shocked and now staring at Rey. "Spider-Man woh na nanhi ko dice chahiye thay par uncle ney nikal kar nahi diya aur kaha wait karo [cutely pouting] but nanhi wanted to do herself like mama. Mama saray kaam khud krti hai n nanhi wanna b like mama [smiling proudly at her mom] but store room". Remembering the darkness she gets scared again and started crying. Rey quickly wipes her tears and says "you can't be like your mom ever." Everyone was like 'what the?' and nanhi cutely yet angrily pouts and asks "why not?"
Rey replies "well your mom is strong and never cries like a baby unlike you who cries even at the thought of darkness." She slips down from his lap and says while keeping both her hands on her hips "I am like my mama strong and inde...in...d.." "Independent" taani completes and comes and hugs her daughter proudly. "Mama nanhi loves you a lot" nanhi says while hugging her back. "Love u too beta" taani smiles, breaks then hug and kisses her both cheeks. She again looks at Rey angrily and says "I am like mama see I m not crying like a baby" saying this she gives a big smile proving that she isn't crying. All smiles at her cuteness and Rey acts like he is finally giving in and says "ok baba you win and I loose. You are like your mom strong and independent. Happy now?" Seeing this nanhi claps in excitement as she won from Rey and Rey seeing her cute actions moves his hand on her chin slowly. To Rey's surprise Nanhi also moves her small hand on his chin. Rey smiles at her and extend his hand to ask for hi5 Nanhi quickly gives him hi5. She gets excited as she always wanted to something like this but she never understood those gestures big people do when they meet each other.

-- this gif is to elaborate the actions Spider-Man and chavanni just did and the credits goes to lil bro [karan_taarey] --

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Soon they all settles down and gets busy in their stuffs. Rey also changes his clothes as he had his extra clothes at swayam's place. It was dinner time everyone was staring at nanhi and nanhi was lost in her own thoughts. Usually she gets excited on dinner table as she loves to see everyone eating together as she never witnessed that before. They all knew she was still shaken up cause of the storeroom incident and to cheer her up again Rey does the honors. "Taani if I keep eating your oily food like this I am gonna get fat" Rey says while rubbing his flat tummy. Before taani or swayam can defend taani's cooking nanhi angrily says "what? Mama is the world's best cook. She makes healthy food." Rey looks in his plate and than at swayam and says "right if I keep eating like this than I will b like swayam." Saying this he winks at swayam and swayam understands him and continues while showing fake anger "wait tu kehna kya chahta hai?" Poor taani gets scared and Sharon smiles as she is well aware of their nautankis. On the other hand nanhi was enjoying a lot as par Rey's plan she opens her mouth wide open and keeps her one palm on it and says "mamu Spider-Man ney ap ko mota kaha". "Chup kar nanhi" taani tries to stop her but she didnt listen and swayam continues "tunay aisa kaha?" Rey says with full careless tone "haan kaha toh?" Swayam folds his shirts sleeves and says "abhi bata ta hoon kon mota hai ruk?" Saying this swayam starts running behind Rey and Rey runs for his life. While taani is scared to death, Sharon is smiling and nanhi is laughing out loud. She was enjoying a lot, she was laughing clapping and shouting for both every now and then. Finally Rey and swayam comes back to their chairs while panting for breath says "khana do bohot bhook lagi hai."
They both started eating like hungry people. Spilling food around and eating with both hands. Nanhi smiles at them and she also starts eating like them as she was hungry too. Reyam both pauses and looks at her and gives thumbs up to each other and continues eating. Than only Sharon finds out the main reason behind their Nautanki and taani understands that it was all fake and was trying to make nanhi happy and eat food. She had tears in her eyes and she couldn't take it anymore. So she leaves the place no one notices but Rey had seen the tears in her eyes and thinks its better that she goes as nanhi just got normal and seeing her mama cry she will get upset too. "Guys I am done now me going outside for some fresh air" saying this Rey goes out as taani went outside the house too.
He looks for her and finally finds her sitting at the bench in the garden. He walks up to her and sees her silently crying. He felt like his heart was crying. His eyes got wet seeing her crying. He sits beside her and keeps his hand on her shoulder. She looks at him helplessly and hugs him tightly. She didn't know why but she was ok to cry in front of him. She cried her heart out hugging him tightly. He also circled his arms around her protectively making her feel secure in his arms. He was crying to silently as he was unable to do anything for her. It was easy to fool little nanhi but he couldn't do the same with her.

Tu mera thikana, mera aashiyana
Dhale shaam jab bhi, mere paas aa na
Hai baahon mein rehna kabhi abb naa jana
Hoon mehfooz inmey, bura hai zamana
Bas saaye mein jaana, sang hoon tere
Bas sare gham mein jaana, sang hoon tere
Har ek mausam me jaana, sang hoon tere
Ab itne imtehaa bhi naa le mere
Aa aa aa aa... Sang Hoon Tere
Aa aa aa aa... Sang Hoon Tere

She finally breaks the hug and feels awkward. Taani says "I am sorry I don't know what happened to me. I didn't mean to." Rey wanted to lighten her mood so he started his Nautanki again "what? Naaahhhiii" taani was shocked to see Rey like this. Rey continues "meri shirt ki band baja kar sorry bol diya aur kaha I didn't meant too. (He fakely wipes his tears and holds his wet shirt and says to it) oh my poor shirt I am so sorry I sacrificed you for a stranger. I thought she was a friend but I guess not." He says this and makes a sad pout. Taani smiles and says "awe I m sorry I didn't know you consider me your friend. I m so happy to know that". Rey smiles at her happily and asks like a kid "you do?" Taani giggles at his actions and says "yes I do". They both smile and Rey says "taani on a serious note please don't cry ever again. You look horrible while crying. (He takes his tongue out to tease her and she opens her mouth wide and Rey continues) pata hai mein kitna darr Gaya tha tumhari rotlo shakal dekh kr (he pouts and continues but this time seriously) aur waise b nanhi ko pata chala toh woh b sad ho jaey gi."
"Spider-Man is right. Nanhi doesn't like to see mama crying" nanhi voice come from behind them. They turn around and sees nanhi, Swaron and virika standing. Nanhi comes and hugs taani while Rey stands up from his place seeing all behind them. "Sowwy bacha mama ainda nahi roey gi as she is strong nanhi's strong mama" saying this taani smiles and nanhi gives peck on her cheeks. "Its time for sleep now" taani says to nanhi. Nanhi quickly walks up to rey and moves her hand on Rey's chin. Rey smiles at her and moves his hand on her chin and they give each other hi5. Then taani lifts nanhi up and they say bye to all and they go. Now Rey, swaron and virika were left. All were staring at poor Rey he gets scared thinking they are upset as taani was hugging him specially swayam. Swayam walks up to him with a serious expression while Rey tries to find words "hmmm... Woh ... Ummm...actua..." Before Rey could complete swayam hugged him tight and started crying like a baby. Rey was startled and even Sharon was shocked she knew he wasn't angry at Rey but she didnt expected that either. On the other virika were normal as they know this side of swayam as a caring and loving brother. Rey hugs him back and says "dude you ok?" Swayam while crying says "thank you thank you so much dude. You did not only took care of nanhi but what you did for taani was...was..." Rey didnt let him complete and says "dude chill they are close to you and now mine too... I mean as friends. So chill and stop spoiling my poor shirt." Swayam broke the hug in shock and Rey smirked. "Dude tu toh Gaya ab" saying this again Rey runs for his life and swayam runs after him. They ran in the entire garden like two year olds. While virika and Sharon laughed at them. Soon Rey and Sharon left for their homes and virika went to their bedroom. Swayam first went to check on taani and nanhi he sees them sleeping every night since taani came and kisses their foreheads and after that he also went to bed to meet his siren in his dreams with a cute majnu smile on his face.

THE END [\B]

[B] AUTHOR'S NOTE

Guys in last update I didn't intend to hurt anyone's feelings. I love Rey/Amar ❤️ and I wasn't making his fun at all. In this update as well, I called swayam fat. But we all know he is so silm and hot 😳. So no harm intended.
About the gif guys as said early only chavanni and Spider-Man bond is taken from na bole tum na Maine kuch kaha and nothing else. So don't assume that the story ahead is similar to that show as its not.
Again avoid one-liners and COMMENT BIG 😳
Also those who are interested can check my reply to their comments.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

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GAAAH!!!!!!
omfg! this update ❤️
loved it !!
The way nanhi was stuck in the store room haww :o
simon says! lol i hate that game -_-
I slapped myself cause bhai told me that "simon says slap urself" 😭
Poor cheeks 😭
anywho..
loved when Rey took nanhi out of that place!!
And the about not crying and being independent!! YAY
And than the nautaunki!! LOLOLOLOLOL
They are so awesome :')
And haww Taani cried while hugging rey ❤️
so cute they are ❤️ . ❤️
Goshh!!!!!!!!
Hes nataunki again!!
Pooor shirt 😆
"Yes I do"
Lol I felt like she was saying I do for marriage 🤣
Hopefully that comes soon 😳
And haww nanhi kabab mein haddi lol
But in a good way tho...
and than gaah too much ands..
ANYWHO!
Swayam cried 😲
Out of care :')
Just loved the entire update soo much ❤️

Sanaya~

Edited by .-.SaNaYa.-. - 12 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Awww this update is so cute although it was a bit emotional it give a pleasant feeling of caring and love.
Spider man knows exactly how to save our cutie
The game was a awesome idea, I love how excited princess gets to play the game and when she said I wi win the game for mama wow that was a proud happy moment for me.
Rey is truly a blessing in Taani and princess lives and way he handle very situation was just incredible
Taani scared of seeing Reyam going at each other was hilarious poor girl lol
Wow if am not wrong I think this is Taarey first hug wow and wow I love the way Rey comfort his Taani. Now I can't wait for Taani to realize that she has feelings for Rey.
Impeccable update TaSha I love it to the core