Lakshman's Rekha- An OS- updates on pg 3 & 4

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

if i met anyone who can write mythological fictions without twisting any fact its you..plz plz write some , update kumarsamvabam and shiv-parvati romance on dkdm forum
lakshman else than hanuman was my most favourite character of Ramayana
i wish you could write on my most fav character of Mahabharata too
Karna , Avimanyu , Aswathama

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

pz write an OS on Laksman-Urmila punarmilan too..i have imagined that scene several times

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sia221

@sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow.. read the whole thing at one go...so nicely written...Varaali !!

Short tempered Laxman.. and talkative Urmila...😆 Love them both...!!

Thanks for sharing this story.. truly enjoyed it...!! 😊

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Varaali 🤗..It had been a long long wait..but m not complaining coz we got more than expected a bunch of updates that too back to back!!WHOA !!TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH IT⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
WOW!!Loved how he was so concerned about the pain he was to give to her but ends up being completely bawled over by her charms and the hug as well as the wonderful pledge of her was beautifully penned down.The transition of the daughter of king Janak to the wife of a raghuvanshi was gentle,subtle and seamless👏👏👏Loved it!!The pure soul ,stuck to her words ,never coming on his way never asking anything in return,instead she embraced all his ideals ,all that he believed and all that he commanded her.SUCH UNADULTERATED PLEASURE OF HAVING A COMPANION LIKE URMILA. EXCELLENT VARAALI !!I am still n awe BEST WAS THE PART WHERE SHE ASKS HIM NOT TO FORGET HIS WIFE IF HE HAPPENS TO ENCOUNTER SUCH LURING WOMEN IN FOREST😆😆😆LOL and Lakshman did oblidge her request with the promise to bring back souvenirs for her 😆😆😆😆😆LOL THAT WAS CUTE👏👏👏👏When is the next update m already greedy now😛😛😛

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EXOL

@EXOL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

thanks varaali for so many updates..

my fav part is where urmila says " do u remember that maid..it was me" ..ROFL ...wat a crackling humor...lakshman ji dint even notice..kya hoga lakhan ji ka...😆

what I loved is how tightly woven is the actual ramayan in ur OS..mind blowing...

my second fav part : where u explain that reason why rama is taking him along..oh God...never thought it that way before

and loved the last scene..very touching...

waiting for next update..

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Vanadhirayarservai

@vanadhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nice updates akka thanks for posting the links .

your urmilla is so funny 😆

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varaali

@varaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Thank you Sia, nneil and manzilmukul. I am really glad you've enjoyed it.

I should have thanked you all earlier, but I was busy completing my other OS - Kumara Sambhavam in the DkDM forum. In case anyone is interested the link is here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/devon-ke-dev-mahadev/3187670/kumara-sambhavam-completed-updates-on-pg-13

This is about the marriage of Shiva and Parvati and the birth of Kartikeya.

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Varaali, another great bond so beautifully written. I have never heard so much of Lakshman-Urmila bond until I started watching Ramayan. Anyways Neil was the ultimate reason why I watched it and of course he is awesome as Lakshman.

The trademark of your work is the witty dialogues that you pen. It never fails to crack me. My favorite was Lakshman-Urmila's conversation during their first night, it had anxiety, humor, sarcasm, anger and divinely love. I could literally imagine his expression as Urmila expressed her observation. There have been many praise about Lakshman taking exile along with Lord Ram & Sita but very few have known how Urmila lived during the 14 years when Lakshman was on exile.

You even managed a light humor during the most melodramatic moment, loved how he gave her permission to carry her heart out after his return and how she symbolically told him not to forget her.

Thank you for writing about this beautiful and subtle couple and their bond... I truly enjoyed it.

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