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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: divya1122

WoW. .!!!!!

ur a wonderful writer. .!!!!
40th chap was so teraffic... ...!!!!
couldnt stop laughing... ...!!!!!

41st chapter is so emotional...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...nd the kiss.. ...OMG...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...from where do u get such nice ideas... ..????
totally in love with ur FF..

now coming to the teaser...
WHAT THE.......🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 😡 🤢 🤢 🤢..???????
if u want to hire someone for killing that stupid shruthi ill do it for FREE..😆😆😆 😆😆😆...!!!!
she's so annoying... ..!!!!
hope khushi believe's in arnav.. ..!!!!

ur truly a versatile writer... ...u know how to display each nd every emotion...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...!!!!!





WoW. .!!!!!
ur a wonderful writer. .!!!!

THANK YOU ! ☺️

40th chap was so teraffic... .


i'm glad! 😳😳

couldnt stop laughing... ...!!!!!



wah! kya hasi hai...🤣.

41st chapter is so emotional...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...nd the kiss.. ...OMG...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...from
where do u get such nice ideas... ..????
LOL! don't make me blush so much...

totally in love with ur FF..

awww i'm honored! 😉😆

now coming to the teaser...
WHAT THE.......🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 😡 🤢 🤢 🤢..???????

😵

if u want to hire someone for killing that stupid shruthi ill do it for FREE..😆😆😆 😆😆😆...!!!!

wow there are so many volunteers !!! 😲😲 i don't need to do ANYTHING! thanks a lot hun! 😳😳
she's so annoying... ..!!!!

LOL! naak mein se dhua nikal rahi hai😲😲😲 dhua chale dhua chale... janu na janu na janunaaa sakhi, jiya jale na tale... or something like that eh?🤣
hope khushi believe's in arnav.. ..!!!!

HOPEFULLY!
ur truly a versatile writer... ...u know how to display each nd every emotion...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...!!!!!


awww! your comment made my day and night😳😳😳thank you sooo much! 🤗
Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved for the update!

update in umm i don't know when... but soon🤣
Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika


Shruti's bro..the much awaited, the much talked-about character..Ab aa bhi jao..Aarti ki Thaali leke khadi hun kabse..😒

aye hayeee pooja ki thali
ispe bhi crush hai kya teri 😳😆😆


I know his gonna be evil, n that's d reason m so impatient u see :P

🥱🥱🥱


Jalebis in Switzerland..Has that happened ever before or our KKGSR has created some sort of history here ?!

no no! KKGSR has created the history 😳

See I guessed it before-handed..that Shruti is a huge follower of Mamiji..After pimple wala face-pack, she is now following her make-up tips also.."More the make-up..the more Bootiphul u look!" 😳

areh wah! itna achha dimaaag😲😲😲 itni jaldi samaj gaya ki yeh mamiji ka follower hai? WAH KYA BAAT HAI...lekin yeh baat meri dimag mein kyun nahi ayi 😕

🤣

Aww..the whole audience heard that n got to see a little glimpse of d epic love story of Raizada couples!

hihihihihi yes!




Not only 'Pooja ki Thaali'..I have crush on everything related with IPK 😳
n mere dimaag ki taarif karte karte main kabhi thak ti bhi nahi u see 😛.. n about the "Lekin yeh baat meri dimaag mein kyun nahi ayi"..Hmm well become my follower, my shisya Mushfi..sab seekh jayegi dhire dhire 😎
Edited by Rafaheli - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

OKAY! SO... i'm ON VACATION FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE! please don\t expect any long updates... this is all i could make 😳

@cherrybloom1, the answer to 'why i starve after i reply to the comments' is that the TEASER comments were too scary as well... and i get hungry when i'm scared, you see🤣

@mahima i'll reply to your comment soon... 😳


oh and yes! ALL THE THANKS TO @cherrybloom1 and @MahimaMV that i'm updating on my Eid vacation🥱


WANT PMs? BUDDY ME!

Part 42:

Shruti stomped on the floor in anger. Her heels broke and she was left with no choice but sit on a chair.

As the crowd broke Khushi started searching for her purse.

Arnav: what's wrong?

Khushi|: Arnav, I think I forgot my purse iin my room. I'll get it.

Arnav: no you stay here, I'll get it

Khushi nodded and sat with shruti.

Shruti saw Arnav going to his room and nudged Ria

Shruti: Do it after few minutes, when I gesture.

Ria nodded.

Shruti: SHIT! I lost my keys for my room. Dammit! The manager of this hotel is nowehere to be found! What should I do?

Khushi: what happened shrutiji?

Shruti: khushi, I need to go to my room and check something on the internet as it's very important. But i lost my keys!

Khushi: OH!

Shruti: umm khushi, is it ok if I use Arnav's laptop? It's really urgent.

Khushi: oh umm' yes I guess. Let's go.

Shruti: no you don't need to come. It's a quick work and I'll be done in 5 minutes. you don't need to bother. Just give me the keys.

Khushi: Are you sure?

Shruti: yes!

Khushi: here.

After some time, Ria spilled drinks on Khushi and she headed towards her room change.

Shruti enetered the room without Arnav's knowledge. She went and stood behind Arnav and pulled her towards her. and they both fell on the bed with arnav on top of shruti. Arnav didn't have time to realize t what's going on.

As khushi entered the room, the view infront of her ripped her heart.

Khushi whispered: Arnavji!

Before Arnav could react to what just happened, he noticed khushi at the door and his eyes widened. He pushed shruti from him. He was dumbstruck at what just happened. The worst thoughts were coming in his mind, no words were coming out of his mouth and he felt as if he is the most helpless persons in the world at this moment.

Arnav: kh- khu-shi. khushi I

Shruti smirked. Finally the climax! Finally her plan has been successful. Finally the barrier is created between Arnav and khushi. FINALLY she's getting what she wants.

Khushi was already in tears and dumbstruck. She didn't know what to say. She slowly walked into the room not breaking the eye-contact with Arnav Arnav and stood between shruti and him.

you're welcome for this long update! 🤣

PMs LATER!


Love

Mushfika

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Bas ab yahi bolne ko mann kar raha hai..Seriously..WHAT THE ?! 😲 What was this..?! 😡
It didnt make any sense.."No Update" was 100 times better than this "Micro-Mini Update"! 😵
The soul reason why I told u to take your Timewa n update..It ended up exactly where the teaser did..
Sweetheart I know that Shruti is your all time fav character of this FF & you have a Girl-Crush on her.. Par Mushfi..If u commit the same thing next time..I will also follow ur pathway n comment "Thanks for the PM, continue soon" 😈 Hope u'll be okay with it 😳😳

Edited by Rafaheli - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R


unres...



Tell me... What was this?!!!!!!!!!
We bugged n stalked to giv an update to know what will khushi's reaction... Bt u just ended like that!!!!!! 😡😡😡

If u giv next update also like this, I'm gonna kill u before Ananya will kill That stupid oaf Shruthi



Edited by MahimaMV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika



You!!!!

ME???😃 what me??😳😳 i'm too cool ain't i?😎

what the hell is this?

a teaser what else?🥱🥱

that stupid shruti!

i know right? 😕 she's intolerable... i agree with you Ananya!

im going to kill her!

AWESOME! i was anyways finding a way to kick her out. but since you wanna volunteer, i don't need to scratch my head and think... go ahead! 😆😆 oh wait.. thanks hun! 😳🤣

u cant do this!

why not?😳

please
im going to stalk u now!

well you see, i don't have any problem 😆😆

update soon!!!!!!!!

trying my best ma'am!


dont act too smart alright!
u better throw shruti out soon!
and i was wondering where the family suddenly disappeared?
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Posted: 12 years ago
res!
unres!

i knew u were going to do something like this!
i had warned u, hadnt i?
i had told u not to end here, yet u did!
ugh, what the hell?
i hope khushi doesnt misunderstand him!
pleasee!
im coming back to stalk u very soon!
beware!
Edited by cherrybloom1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Reserved for the update!


update in umm i don't know when... I"M STARVING at this momentwa... let me have some food nalayko!

but soon updating 🤣


how the hell do u always end up starving aftr replying to everyones comments?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1



how the hell do u always end up starving aftr replying to everyones comments?😕



🤣😆... Good question... Answer her nw...:D

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